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A new critique group member recently presented us with Chapter I of her YA novel—an engaging high school sports saga with a female athlete protagonist. After hearing our comments, she confessed that it wasn’t the first time she’d shared this piece. Workshop members from a local college had very different reactions than the ones we provided. For instance, they did not appreciate her clever metaphors, whereas I felt the work was strongest at those points—humorous, insightful, spoken with a strong and unique character voice.
At home that evening with a cup of tea and time to reflect, I wondered: is there such a thing as too many critiques? After all, not everyone agrees on the merits of published books, so a first draft would certainly elicit a wide range of comments. If a writer is presented with a dozen different viewpoints on the same story, which suggestions should she accept and which should she let slide?
Firstly, writers need to examine how many people point out the same problems. If there is more than one critique member who questions the character’s motive in a particular scene, then it makes sense to consider that section more carefully. But points on which the critique group does not agree, it’s appropriate for the writer to trust her own instincts, either by revising or letting the words remain.
Next, getting to know your critique partners well helps to reveal the most reliable criticisms. There are people whose judgment you will tend to trust, and those who just don’t agree with your direction. There will be those who always insist on line-editing until your prose reads exactly like their own. A group member may have a wildly differing style or not call your genre a specialty. It is important to listen to all criticisms and to understand why they are being voiced, but to address every single one is not productive. Too many cooks may indeed spoil the broth.
There’s no doubt that every manuscript needs to be critiqued. If you’ve completed a first draft and you’re licking the envelope to that agent: stop. You’ve only just begun. Find a critique group and get ready to rewrite.
There are no rules regarding how many times something can be workshopped, but as you become more familiar with the revision process, you’ll soon learn which advice to listen to and which you can ignore. A novel will not be all things to all readers, but it needs to be true to your vision as a writer.
What do you think? Can work be over-critiqued?
Cynthea Liu’s book title contest finalists were just announced! Go check out the winning entries and vote for your favorite.
I like Jade in China best for several reasons:
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It plays on the phrase “Made in China,” where the main character Jade was born.
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Jade is an ancient chinese artifact, fitting in with the character’s subject of study—anthropology and archeology.
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Jade is prized in Chinese culture, giving the adopted character’s name meaning. Parents of adopted children often want to bestow a name that pays hommage to their child’s home country.
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Jade represents beauty, grace and purity in Chinese culture.
I’m biased, though, because that was one of my entries. I suppose a decade of writing press release titles finally paid off.
I’m curious to see what you think. The Orient Success and Girls Just Wanna Have Feng Shui were my two other finalist suggestions. If you think that last one is funny, check out some of the hilarious titles that Cynthea posted for your reading pleasure.
Chuck Sambuchino of The Guide to Literary Agents blogged recently about writing for teenagers and adolescents. He attended a talk given by an agent and an author and shared nine great tips to consider when crafting a novel for middle grade and young adult readers. Check out Chuck’s post here.
Some insights included not starting off a work with a graphic event like a suicide. Hmmm, lesson learned immediately for me. While it might grab the reader’s attention, it may do so in a negative manner, making them put down the book rather than keep reading. I’m gently reminded of agent Nathan Bransford’s warning about too much shock and awe.
Middle-grade and young-adult novelist Cynthea Liu needs your help creating a title for her new book. The stories in this series of books feature young girls who travel abroad to study, get the guy, ace the exam, and return home transformed in some way.
The existing titles are puns of instantly recognizable, common phrases. They typically reveal the country of study, the main character’s name, or the girl’s quest. Here are some examples from the series:
The Sound of Munich
Spain or Shine
Swede Dreams
The Finnish Line
Now and Zen
Westminster Abby
Getting the Boot
Cynthea is giving away one of her famous free critiques to the person who comes up with a title for her tale of an adopted American girl traveling to China, the character’s birth country. Ms. Liu even offers a half-page critique if your suggestion is good enough to pass along to her editor.
To read more about her book and the contest rules, please go to CyntheaLiu.com! The submission deadline is Tuesday, February 19th at 4:00pm (CST).
Nathan Bransford’s first page competition was hotly contested, with a multitude of fine, well-written entries. To demonstrate how difficult it was to narrow down to six finalists, co-judge Holly had initially selected 30 finalists–but only after her third round of review! The judges deserve our thanks. And Heather!Anne! deserves congratulations for being voted the most surprisingly essential first page!
For those who were not selected (and there were 639 of us), I remind you that Nathan Bransford is just one agent. Yes, he has a talented eye, but his is not the only eye. What he passed over this time might have been picked up by another. Finding an agent to represent your work or an editor to publish it is a matter of matching interests. Think of it in no less complicated terms than finding a spouse: you have to sync up on many levels to make the partnership a success.
So to everyone who entered, congratulations for bravely submitting your work. Just because you didn’t get picked this time, don’t let the word “failure” creep into your vocabulary. Keep writing, keep working, keep submitting, keep networking. The successful writer’s most important trait is perseverance. You’ll find your match someday.
To accompany 500+ Things Kids Like, here’s a list of 100+ things that kids don’t consider their favorites. Of course there’s probably some kids out there who drool over asparagus, and those who climb into bed without protest, but in general, this list is filled with things children want to avoid. I hope it helps jump-start your creativity.
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Anchovies
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Arguments
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Asparagus
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Bats (Disclaimer: my seven-year-old loves bats.)
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Bedtime
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Bee Stings
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Being Grounded (Punished)
- Being Picked Last for a Team
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Being Unpopular
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Being Scared
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Being Sick
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Being Teased
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Bleu Cheese
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Braces
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Broccoli
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Brussels Sprouts
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Bullies
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Caviar
- Celery
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Chicken Pox
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Chores
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Cleaning up
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Confessing
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Copycats
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Cooties
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Crushes
- The Dentist
- Detention
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Divorce
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Embarrassing Parents
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Escargot
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Exams/Tests
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Failing
- Feeling Left Out
- A Fever
- The Flu
- Fungus
- Getting Cheeks Pinched
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Giving Up
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Glasses
- Gorgonzola
- Growing Pains
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Gum on Their Shoes
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Haircuts
- Headaches
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Homework
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Hot Pepper
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Lectures
- Lima Beans
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Long Car Rides
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Losing
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Loud Noises
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Making Their Beds
- Measles
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Medicine
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Millipedes
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Monsters
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Mosquito Bites
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Moving
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Nightcrawlers
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Not Knowing Another’s Secret
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Onions
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Paper Cuts
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Parsley
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Pea Soup
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Pop Quizzes
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Posing for Portraits
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Potty Training
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Quiet
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Retainers
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Sharing
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Shopping/Errands
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Shots (Vaccinations)
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Skinned Knees
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Siblings
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Sitting Still
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Smashed Pumpkins
- Speaking in front of the class
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Spinach
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Sticky Hands
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Substitute Teachers
- Sushi
- Talking to Grown-ups
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Tattle Tales
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Teacher’s Pets
- Tickle Torture
- Trying Something New
- Tummy Aches
- Turning Off the TV
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Turtleneck Sweaters
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Unfamiliar Places
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Unusual Foods
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Vice Principals
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Waiting
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Walking
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Washing Their Faces
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Watching the News
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Wearing Bike Helmets/Protective Pads
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Wedgies
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Winter Hats
- Wool Sweaters
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Writing Reports
- Younger Siblings Pestering Them
As if we needed another reason to love Nathan Bransford, the superhero among agents blasted through 645 first-page entries in just four days, selecting a half-dozen finalists. (Holly deserves a giant pat on the back as well.) None are all that surprising because they’re examples of exceptional work. Please go read and vote. Publicize the contest on the Internet, but don’t campaign for a particular entry. Congratulations to the finalists and good luck!















