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Allow me to be Andy Rooney for a moment.

Imagine me as a white-haired, bulbous, salty old man with a whiny accent.

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I know, it’s hard. But just IMAGINE. (By the way, isn’t “bulbous” a marvelous word? I think we, as writers, should seek its descriptive assistance more often. But sorry, I digress. Back to being Andy…)

“Ya ever wonder why so many children’s books feature THREES? Goldilocks and the THREE Bears? The THREE Little Pigs? Snow White and the SEVEN Dwarfs? No wait…I miscounted…I mean The THREE Billy Goat’s Gruff?”

Yes, there’s something downright appealing about the number THREE. (P.S., I’ve returned to being Tara. Thank goodness ’cause those eyebrows are itchy.)

It’s like two is too little. And four is too many. As Goldi would say, three is “just right”. Three is as satisfying as a warm, comfy little bed. (Until the three bears arrive home, that is.)

According to Wikipedia (yes, I’m quoting Wiki), “things that come in threes are inherently funnier, more satisfying, or more effective than other numbers of things. The reader or audience of this form of text is also more likely to consume information if it is written in groups of threes. From slogans (“Go, fight, win!”) to films, many things are structured in threes.”

The rule of threes is all around us. In photography, the “rule of thirds” dictates that the most visually striking elements of a photograph should align with the intersection of theoretical lines which break the image into thirds lengthwise and widthwise. (Geesh, what a clunker of a sentence.) Hence:

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In interior decorating, objets d’art are often grouped in threes.

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Architecture adheres to this rule as well. Three are more aesthetically pleasing than two or four. Threes help to balance the focal point in a room. Just ask Genevieve.

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There’s the “three schema approach” in software engineering. But don’t ask me to explain. That’s the hubby’s forte.

Even religion espouses threes—the Father, the Son and the Holy Ghost.

“Omne trium perfectum” is a Latin phrase which translates to “everything that comes in threes is perfect”. The world seems to think so. You’ll see the “rule of threes” demonstrated everywhere. Hey, I even sneeze three times in a row.

So in picture books, where do we use this rule?

Descriptive groups of three.

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“The Monstore” by Tara Lazar & James Burks

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Three images upon a page.

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“Boy + Bot” by Ame Dyckman & Dan Yaccarino

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Even three text boxes!

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“Children Make Terrible Pets” by Peter Brown

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And the classic three characters.

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But the most important rule of threes in picture books is three attempts to solve a problem. (Prior to the fourth successful attempt.)

These three attempts invest the reader in your hero’s struggles. Solving the problem in one fell swoop? That doesn’t feel genuine, and the reader won’t care about their journey because it’s over before it’s even begun. There’s no time to empathize with your MC. And with two attempts, the main character has not yet collected enough information to help complete his task. But third time’s the charm! (See that?) It’s when he tries again, fails, hits his lowest point, but then realizes just what he needs to rise again. Three attempts build tension and encourage the reader to turn the page–eagerly! Oooh, what happens NEXT?

Crack open your favorite picture book and you’ll notice threes abound. What did you find?

But now, I’m going to tell you about some different numbers…

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THE MONSTORE author and PiBoIdMo creator Tara Lazar’s “7 ATE 9”, a pun-packed preschool noir mystery, starring a hard-boiled Private “I” and a mysteriously missing number, to Kevin Lewis at Disney-Hyperion, by Ammi-Joan Paquette at Erin Murphy Literary Agency (World).

Hip, hip, hooray!

(That’s three cheers!)

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Stationery by Mooseart on Etsy.

Are you good about saying “thank you”?

Admission: I’m not.

Some people keep desks full of exquisite stationery and sign them with flourishing gratitude. Me, I can’t find a stamp in the junk drawer so I give up before I even start. And my address book? Last seen in 2009, scribbled over by toddler’s crayons. And glitter glue. And strawberry applesauce.

Yeah, despite organizing PiBoIdMo every year, in daily life, I’m highly unorganized. Neatness and order doesn’t compute. I leave dishes in the sink. Piles of unfolded clothes litter the laundry room. A confused conglomeration of bags and boxes accumulate under the stairwell. I’m afraid to know what small animals have taken residence there. (Fodder for my next picture book manuscript?)

Saying “thank you” has always been difficult. When someone offers a compliment, I deflect it with self-deprecating remarks. My goal is to let the person know whatever I did was simple, something they could just have easily accomplished. It feels braggart to accept a compliment. So I don’t take them. The attention feels uncomfortable. Little did I know how rude it was to not respond with “thank you”.

I like to give, not receive. Don’t ask me why. Some psychologist is gonna have a field day with this. But I do have a point, beyond being called in for a head-shrinking session.

I’d like to say “thank you” to YOU for helping me to achieve a rewarding 2013.

  • To all the people who purchased my debut picture book THE MONSTORE, thank you.
  • To those who voted for my book and my blog in various end-of-year superlatives, thank you.
  • To everyone who follows me here or on Facebook and Twitter, thank you.
  • To the participants, authors, illustrators and agents of PiBoIdMo, thank you.
  • To those who have asked me to guest blog, speak or present, thank you.
  • To the authors who wrote all the books I read in 2013, thank you. (Yes, I must thank them—they kept me happily entertained!)

This past year has been a tremendously gratifying one for me, and I would be amiss if I didn’t extend my gratitude.

So THANK YOU.

May your 2014 be productive and successful!

And now, to find that address book…

Yep, I still haven’t mailed out my holiday cards. *sigh*

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Well, this week has been a whirlwind, a whirlygig and a tilt-a-whirl all-in-one.

Stop, Amy, I’m dizzy!!!

After so many of you nominated this blog for Write to Done’s “Top 10 Blogs for Writers” contest, I learned yesterday that it was selected! It cracked the top 10!

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top10blogforwriters2013This blog is a labor of love, it truly is. (I know I’m using a lot of clichés this week, but heck if they aren’t so darn apropos.) I blog because I enjoy it immensely, and hey, even though picture books LOOK simple, we all know they’re complicated. There’s a lot to dish and discuss.

Many of you are visiting for the first time, linking from Write to Done. So now would be a good time for a “Year in Review”, no? Amazingly, the top three posts this year were NOT written this year—they’re oldies but goodies (another cliché, Tara?):

  1. Picture Book Construction: Know Your Layout (Picture Book Dummy)
  2. 500+ Things That Kids Like
  3. Roald Dahl: What Makes a Good Children’s Writer

The top three posts written this year were from PiBoIdMo guest bloggers:

  1. Tammi Sauer Starts with a Title
  2. Zachariah OHora Pimps His Characters
  3. Melissa Guion Bursts the Bubble

And my three favorite posts of 2013?

  1. A Monstrous Book Launch Story in GIFs
  2. What’s Wrong with Writing Message-Driven Picture Books?
  3. Tara Lazar Gets Emotional
  4. Gifts for Writers (In Other Words, Gifts for YOU!)

(Hey, I thought you said THREE? It’s my blog, they’re my rules. Which can be broken. Just like picture book rules.)

Write to Done called this blog “a hub for picture book writers.” It’s true—we’ve created a supportive community here and in our PiBoIdMo Facebook group. (Please join us there. The group is open year-round and delves into all things picture book.)

While composing this “year in review,” I noted that in 2013 I highlighted more authors and illustrators than ever before—and while that’s a good thing, I’d like to circle back to more craft articles in 2014.

However, it always helps to have your input. What do YOU want to see here in 2014? (Besides PiBoIdMo 2014, of course.) Please leave a comment! Your votes got this blog into the Top 10 (thank you!) and your votes for this blog’s content will ensure it continues to be a useful (and FUN) resource.

Many thanks to Mary Jaksch of Write to Done for the honor, and congratulations to the other winners: Writer Unboxed, KM Weiland, Carol Tice, Chuck Wendig, CS Lakin, James Chartrand, Kristen Lamb, Linda Formichelli and Darcy Pattison. Go check them out! Methinks you’ve got a lotta good reading in your future.

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(Hey, you know who that is? Ally Sheedy! I tell this story at school visits: when I was in elementary school I checked “She Was Nice to Mice” out of the library. My librarian, Mrs. Shamus, told me that the author, Alexandra Elizabeth Sheedy, was only 12 years old. I then thought, “If she can do it, then I can, too!” That was my writing epiphany, the first time I recall wanting to become a children’s author.)

Hey look, Jerry won a prize in a box of cereal!

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Well, he’s going to be mighty jealous of you PiBoIdMo’ers—because your prizes sure beat a Honey Comb tattoo. (Your prizes are BIG, yeah-yeah-yeah. They’re not SMALL, no-no-no.)

It’s time for the final prizes of PiBoIdMo, the ones offered by our guest bloggers during the month of November. There’s artwork, signed books and critiques galore!

How were the winners selected? I used Random.org to pick a number that corresponded with the order in which you commented on each prize post. Then I checked the winner’s name against the list of registered participants and those who signed the Winner’s Pledge. The name had to appear in both places. If the person commented twice on any of those three posts, they were disqualified. Winners were eligible for one prize only. If a name was selected twice, they were removed and another number was picked by Random.org.

All winners will be emailed within the next few days. If you do not receive an email from me, first check your spam folder, then contact me directly.

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OK, so let’s start with the PRIZES YOU DID NOT KNOW ABOUT! These are prizes offered by people who did not guest blog but felt compelled to contribute to the event. Thank you Tamson, Suzanne and Alayne!

First, editor Tamson Weston offered a picture book critique for manuscripts under 1000 words. The winner is:
SUZY LEOPOLD

Next, illustrator Suzanne del Rizzo offered a signed, personalized copy of her picture book SKINK ON THE BRINK. It goes to:
BRENNA FRIESNER

Finally, Alayne Kay Christian offered a picture book critique. The lucky one is:
DARYL GOTTIER

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Now let’s move on to the prizes offered by PiBoIdMo guest bloggers.

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Tammi Sauer’s Prize

NUGGET & FANG Prize Pack
JANET HALFMANN

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Greg Pizzoli’s Prize

Hand Screenprinted Cards
AMIE VALORE-CAPLAN

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Ryan Sias’s Prize

Original ZOE & ROBOT Drawing
COURTENAY SCHURMAN

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Michael Garland’s Prizes

Signed Hardcopies of the Following Books:

SANTA KID
SHERRY WALZ

MISS SMITH AND THE INCREDIBLE STORYBOOK
DONNA J. SHEPHERD

MISS SMITH AND THE HAUNTED LIBRARY
TONYA LIPPERT

MISS SMITH READS AGAIN
SUZANNE KAUFMAN

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Todd McQueen’s Prizes

Signed Hardcopy of BE IN CHARGE (Five Winners)
SUE PODUSKA
JANET SMART
LISA CONNORS
JENNIFER VOIGT KAPLAN
ALEXA KAUFHOLD

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Elizabeth Rose Stanton’s Prize

Signed Hardcopy of HENNY (when released)
RICK STARKEY

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The Jenneweins’ Prize

Signed Hardopy of CHICK-O-SAURUS REX and a personalize illustration by Daniel Jennewein
LINDA HOFKE

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Dorina Lazo Gilmore’s Prize

Signed Hardcopy of CORA COOKS PANCIT
JULIE GRASSO

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Melissa Guion’s Prize

BABY PENGUINS EVERYWHERE Prize Pack
ANN BIRNIE

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Pat Miller’s Prizes

Choice of Picture Book with Audio CD
MELINE SCHEIDEL

Picture Book Critique
VIVIAN KIRKFIELD

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Steve Barr’s Prizes

Signed Copy of DRAW CRAZY CREATURES (Two Winners)
DAWN MITCHELL
LAURI MEYERS

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Kelly Light’s Prize

Signed copies of THE QUIRKS and ELVIS AND THE UNDERDOGS
STACY GRAY

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Maria Gianferrari’s Prize

Picture Book Critique
SUE HEAVENRICH

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Wendy’s Martin’s Prize

Signed F&G of RABBIT’S SONG
THIS KID ERIK

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Renee Kurilla’s Prizes

8.5 x 11 Print from her Etsy Shop (Two winners)
CAROLYN ROHRBAUGH
SHIELA FULLER

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Annette Simon’s Prize

ROBOT ZOMBIE FRANKENSTEIN! Prize Pack
GRANT JENKINSON

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Joni Sussman’s Prize

KAR-BEN Books Prize Pack
COREY ROSEN SCHWARTZ

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Kami Kinard’s Prize

Critique of Kidlit Manuscript – 10 Pages
MELANIE ELLSWORTH

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Laurie Keller’s Prize

ARNIE THE DOUGHNUT Prize Pack
MARGARET GREANIAS

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Well, that’s all folks! This officially concludes PiBoIdMo 2013. It’s been a blast! Thank you for your enthusiasm throughout the event, in your comments and your participation in the Facebook group. I could not do it without you—and that’s not cliché, that’s TRUTH.

Please remember to contact me should any of your PiBoIdMo ideas win a contest, an agent or a contract. I love highlighting your success stories!

But for now, write on! Be sure to consider some of these other picture book writing challenges offered throughout the year:

…and, of course, PiBoIdMo 2014! See you next November!

Who shall roll the drums this time?

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Sorry, Anna Kendrick canceled last minute and this is all I could get on short notice.

So there’s more prizes to give away…all the Post-PiBo goodies!

Again, winners were selected with the help of Random.org and double checking and blah-di-blah-di-blah-blah. You know the drill by now.

So let’s go…

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Ame Dyckman’s Prize

TEA PARTY RULES Prize Pack
LORI ALEXANDER

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Stacy McAnulty’s Prizes

Signed hardcopy of DEAR SANTASAURUS
CATHY BIGGERSTAFF

Picture book critique
MARY CROCKETT

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Kristi Valiant’s Prize

Picture book critique
SUZI GUINA

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Corey Rosen Schwartz’s Prize

Signed hardcopy of GOLDI ROCKS AND THE THREE BEARS
ELLEN MOTT

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Weeeeee! Congratulations to the winners! Be on the lookout for an email from me.

That’s all for today, folks. Stay tuned for the rest of the PiBoIdMo prizes!

I’ve already asked Animal for a drum roll twice on this blog, so it’s time to give someone else a chance. Take it away, Mr. Astaire!

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What poise! What grace! What shiny white spats!

So here are the prize winners for those goodies given away during Pre-PiBo in late October.

How were these winners selected? Again, I used Random.org to draw numbers which corresponded to the order in which a person commented on the prize post. Then I checked to ensure that the participant had officially registered AND completed the challenge and had only commented once on each of the three posts. If all checked out, they were named the official winner!

All winners will be receiving an email from me today. Please be on the lookout for it. If you don’t receive it, please contact me.

Without further ado…

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Leeza Hernandez’s Prizes

Signed hardcopy of NEVER PLAY MUSIC RIGHT NEXT TO THE ZOO
TANIA COLE

Skype visit
JULIANA LEE

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Julie Hedlund’s Prizes

GOLD 12×12 Membership for 2014
JANELLE MIKULAS

Signed hardcopy of A TROOP IS A GROUP OF MONKEYS
CAT JONES

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Betsy Devany’s Prizes

Picture book critique #1
PAT HAAPANIEMI

Picture book critique #2
YVONNE MES

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Kayleen West’s Prize

Signed hardcopies of ADOPTIVE FATHER and WITHOUT ME?
DEE ALMOND

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Julie Falatko’s Prize

Picture book critique
LAURA GEHL

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Dianne de Las Casas’s Prize

Signed hardcopy of THE HOUSE THAT SANTA BUILT
SANDY PERLIC

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Congratulations to all the Pre-PiBo winners.

MANY more winners to come so stay tuned!

***UPDATE 12/21/13: I’m thrilled to report that CHALKY has been fully funded! Congratulations to the gentlemen of Little Thunder Co., Jordan Henderson and Kyle Steed.***

Two weeks ago as I was wrapping up PiBoIdMo (and holiday gifts), this little fella arrived in my inbox:

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I immediately connected with the illustration—even though I’m allergic to cats. ***AH-CHOO!***

But just look at him! Fluffy and soft, pawing his way into the sunshine for a day of adventure!

Captivated by the texture of the illustration, the color palette, the dapples of light, and the cat’s expressive body language, I wanted to know more.

I learned that his name is Chalky. CHALKY AND THE NEW SPORTS CAR is a picture book venture by Little Thunder Co., a trio of designers from Belfast. Chalky is a character based on a real cat, with illustrations by the talented Jordan Henderson and original typography by Kyle Steed. They’ve got a Kickstarter campaign that ends in FOUR DAYS and they need your help!

So I sat down with Gabriel, Tim and Michael of Little Thunder Co. to talk about the process of creating CHALKY and the behind-the-scenes challenges of launching a Kickstarter project. Mind you, I was sitting in New Jersey while these guys were in Ireland. And they probably weren’t sitting, they’ve been so busy promoting CHALKY! I imagine them floating around like superheroes, as in their photo…

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Gabriel Muldoon, Tim Potter and Michael McKeever

Gentlemen, this blog often focuses on ideas and inspiration. Your main character, Chalky, was based on a real cat. Whose cat is Chalky and how did this evolve into a story for children?

TIM: Chalky was a stray cat who was found in a friend’s shed circa 2003. I brought him back home where he has resided ever since as our family cat.

Chalky is a fun, friendly and curious cat. He has a particular passion for cars and enjoys sitting on the warm bonnets (hoods) of vehicles that have recently parked in the neighbourhood—and who could blame him given the Irish climate? He also enjoys peering up the exhaust pipe of cars and, being a white cat, he would often return home with a black ring of soot on his face. Big exhaust pipes are his favourite—the more of his face he can press up it, the better. I don’t know what the fascination is, but it gives us a few laughs when he comes home at night with soot on his face.

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My father and author, Stanley Potter, turned his hand to writing short stories and poetry in his retirement and the things Chalky gets up to are a constant source of material for him. He wanted to write these stories for his grandchildren to enjoy and he sent me over this first story “Chalky and the New Sports Car” and I was so impressed with it that I shared it with the rest of the Little Thunder Co. team.

What kind of work does your production company, Little Thunder Co., typically do, and how do you think your experience translates into creating a children’s picture book?

GABRIEL: We’re primarily a digital design studio that creates high-impact digital products for the big screen, small screen and everything in between. This typically includes websites and apps but our main speciality is humanising the user experience by taking the best practices and principles of design to create an organic experience for the user.

Part of what we do involves storytelling, and apps and websites all have an underlying narrative. Some are good and we don’t even notice them, others are bad and stick out like a sore thumb so we look at transition, pacing, language—all important aspects of how a story unfolds over time—and apply these to our work. These storytelling techniques transcend different disciplines and has helped us in the production of our children’s book. We’ve been able to break the story down, identify key scenes and art direct it in a way that is fitting to the audience, the same way we would had it been a website. We’ve learned a lot of new things along the way about picture books that we can also apply to our craft as designers so there is a great cross-over and sharing of knowledge between both practices.

As designers we also understand layout and typography so we’ve been able to apply these to the design of the book. Typography is a really important ingredient for us and we consider it ‘clothing for words’ so we’ve put a huge emphasis on getting this right which has led us to commision typographer Kyle Steed to hand craft every word in the book. We could have picked a font and there are plenty of great ones out there, but we wanted to create the complete children’s picture book experience and we couldn’t achieve it without giving the words their own unique voice.

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So you knew from the beginning that you wanted to take control of this creation and not go the traditional publication route. What led you to Kickstarter? What specific challenges come with launching a Kickstarter campaign?

GABRIEL: Over the past few months there have been a string of successful Kickstarter projects from companies based within a few minutes walk from our office (Brewbot, SeeSense & Patchblocks), so we felt the time was right to give it a go ourselves. Belfast is an exciting place to be right now in regards to design and we have a very supportive community that will get behind your project and support you.

MICHAEL: This is the first Kickstarter project that we have launched and one thing we have learnt is that preparation is first and foremost. There is an enormous amount of content you have to think about and prepare beforehand. The video itself is an important part of your pitch and we were literally filming right up until a few minutes before we needed to go live.

TIM: Once it went live you soon find yourself working around the clock to promote it, responding to questions and comments, thinking of new strategies to help gain pledges, the list is endless. It’s quite the emotional roller coaster as if you don’t make your goal, you don’t get a penny from Kickstarter. It’s all or nothing which adds to the intensity during the funding period.

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What are your goals for CHALKY? How do you hope your audience will react to the story?

GABRIEL: Simply, we hope that the book resonates with the audience through the beautiful illustrations, typography and engaging story to create the sort of book parents will enjoy reading their kids and the book that the kids will ask for their parents to read them.

chalkycoverWhat will be your definition of success for the book?

MICHAEL: I would say success to us would be getting to the stage where we have physical copies of the book that people can own and can live on their bookshelves. Something that kids and parents will enjoy reading.

GABRIEL: Yeah, and just on that point, I think the greatest moment will be able to read our story to my kids and get to experience what it is all about at the end of the day, a book the family can enjoy.

Do you have a goal for the number of books you hope to sell?

TIM: In all honesty we’re doing this project out of passion to create something beautiful and different from what is already out there on the market. As far as sales go, it is hard for us to project this, because this is our first attempt at entering the children’s book market. All we knew starting this was we wanted this book to exist and every sale after that is a bonus, so we’ve no spreadsheet hidden away with projected sales and targets. To us it’s all about the craft of something great.

What about Chalky do you feel is different from what’s already on the market?

I would say we’ve researched the anatomy of great storytelling and what makes something visually compelling and tried to apply these to the production of CHALKY. An example would be the typography. We could have used an existing typeface for the book but for us to create a richer, immersive experience and to compliment the illustrations, we’ve wanted to get the words hand-crafted. We also have gone for a unique illustrative style, that is totally digital but calls on traditional painting techniques to create them.

If successful with this book, what will you do next? A Chalky sequel or other picture books?

GABRIEL: We actually have another four Chalky stories written and ready to go which will introduce new characters and adventures. If this first book is successful, we’ll start to work on the next one and develop Chalky as a brand. The bigger picture is to become an independent publishing house and work with other story writers, designers, typographers and illustrators to create a rich and varied collection of picture books all created to an exceptional standard.

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Thank you so much Gabriel, Tim and Michael, and I wish you much success with CHALKY!

Dear blog readers, ’tis the season of giving. The gentlemen are shy of their Kickstarter goal, so won’t you consider backing them? Remember, when you back them, they give you something back! 

Click below to go to the Kickstarter campaign.

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Plus Gabriel, Tim and Michael would love to hear what you think of CHALKY! Do you have any questions about their creative process or Kickstarter? Please leave them a comment below.

P.S. More PiBoIdMo prizes to come, so stay tuned!

Drum roll,  please!

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(Did I ever mention I’m a huge Muppets fan?)

It’s time to announce our PiBoIdMo 2013 GRAND PRIZE WINNERS!

How were these winners selected? Every participant who signed the PiBoIdMo Winner’s Pledge was assigned a number based upon the order in which they commented. I then used Random.org to generate random numbers. The numbers were checked to their corresponding name, then I ensured that name was on the PiBoIdMo registration post. If the name had been registered, then I double checked to make sure they had not commented on the winner’s pledge multiple times (thus giving them extra chances to win). If all checked out, the winner was verified. (And they all checked out!)

Without further ado, here they are! Please congratulate them!

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DENICE R. GILB

JAN DEYKIN

MARY ROSE

SYLVIA LIU

SUMMER HINDERER

NOEL CSERMAK

DEBBIE ALVAREZ

KATHY DOHERTY

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I will pair each of you with a PiBoIdMo agent and contact you via email.

You will have one week to contact your agent with your FIVE best ideas. I suggest you flesh them out into a paragraph, like an elevator pitch. Something short and snappy. The agent will then provide feedback on which idea(s) may be the best to pursue as manuscripts. The agent may provide short and sweet feedback like a simple “Go for it!” or more lengthy feedback providing suggestions. I don’t know what’s in store for you–but there’s one thing for certain–their feedback will help you determine what to begin writing!

Thank you all for participating this year! I daresay it was the best year ever!

Remember there are PLENTY more prizes to come—everything you saw during the event plus even a few more! Signed books and critiques and art, OH MY! More to come all this week…

***blows into hankie***

Yes, I’m emotional because the 5th annual PiBoIdMo has come to a close. It’s been an incredibly satisfying few months for me—from organizing guest bloggers, to reading their sage advice, to receiving thankful emails from you, the participants. I am grateful for your feedback. Knowing that the kidlit writing community has benefitted from this challenge is my greatest reward. It means there are many more fabulous picture books on their way, into the eager hands of children.

As a newbie kidlit writer, I had to discover much of the information you’ve learned here on my own. There were few picture book blogs when I began my journey seven years ago, and most of the craft knowledge I gained was from SCBWI events. I would take copious notes then dash home to transcribe them with lightning fast fingers. Doing so helped the information soak into my brain. Then I decided to slap my notes on a blog for others to benefit. After all, not everyone is able to attend SCBWI events.

To this day, the most popular post on my blog remains the one I created when I learned about picture book construction from an editor—the difference between a self-ended picture book and one with colored ends—and how you do not have 32 pages to tell a tale in a 32-page picture book. No one had ever bothered to explain this to me before, and I had never seen it diagrammed. That post from February 2009—almost five years ago—gets the majority of this blog’s traffic, even during PiBoIdMo!

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But I’m also emotional because—hey—picture books crave emotion. A story is truly defined as an emotional journey. The character in the beginning of your story is not who she is at the end. She has grown. Changed. EVOLVED.

Your picture book should contain a universal emotional truth to which a child can identify. The reader must empathize with your character. They must know how your character feels. They must become invested in the emotional journey.

Let’s examine some emotions in popular picture books:

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The premise:
Emily’s favorite toy Stanley gets bunny-napped by mean old Queen Gloriana.

The emotional truth:
Children understand the love and joy a cherished toy brings. And they understand the misery of that kind of loss.

Other lost-toy tales:
KNUFFLE BUNNY & KNUFFLE BUNNY TOO by Mo Willems
EXTRA YARN by Mac Barnett & Jon Klassen
I LOST MY BEAR by Jules Feiffer

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The premise:
Ruby is the new girl in school and she just wants to be noticed. But she goes about it the wrong way—by copying everything Angela wears, says and does.

The emotional truth:
Children feel trepidation surrounding new situations. Being young, their lives are full of “new”. Many books deal with this issue, from welcoming a new baby into the family (be careful, this topic is overdone), to being the new kid in school. Other emotional themes in these books are loneliness, fitting in, and being yourself.

Other making-friends/new kid tales:
LISSY’S FRIENDS by Grace Lin
YOU WILL BE MY FRIEND! by Peter Brown
NEVILLE by Norton Juster and G. Brian Karas

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The premise:
Everything was always quiet on Earmuffle Avenue, that is, until the Louds moved in. The quiet neighbors became quite upset. They asked the Louds to tone it down, but once silence descended, the neighbors realized they missed the boisterous family.

The emotional truth:
Children must constantly adjust to a variety of people, ideas and perspectives around them. And they have to assert themselves and grow into their own little personalities. They understand how “different” some people can be. They understand how they can sometimes be the “different” one. Books like THE LOUDS demonstrate how it’s OK to be whom you are, and that it’s possible to appreciate people who are different from you. And the book does this without being preachy. In fact, it’s mighty good, rowdy fun.

Other being-different/being-yourself tales:
CALVIN CAN’T FLY by Jennifer Berne & Keith Bendis
COWBOY CAMP by Tammi Sauer & Mike Reed
CHRYSANTHEMUM by Kevin Henkes

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The premise:
Zack is tired of his pesky little sister overtaking his bedroom. So he buys monsters to scare Gracie away. But the monsters don’t do their jobs. In the end, however, the siblings learn to appreciate each another and to cooperate.

The emotional truth:
Many children have siblings and they understand the contentious nature of that relationship. They can relate to a sibling either being pesky, or being shunned and teased by an older sibling. So they can understand Zack’s eagerness to spook Gracie and Gracie’s desire to be around her brother. And they also know that sometimes a sibling can be the best playmate ever.

Other sibling tales:
THE CHICKEN OF THE FAMILY by Mary Amato & Delphine Durand
SCRIBBLE by Deborah Freedman
DAFFODIL by Emily Jenkins &  Tomek Bogacki

These stories aren’t just about a toy rabbit, a classroom, loud neighbors or kooky monsters. There is an emotional layer woven into each tale. The child reading the story can empathize with the characters because they have felt similar emotions. Sure, they may never have been visited by the Queen’s footmen or crawled into a trap-door monster store—those are the fantastical elements of the stories. But these elements are grounded in reality by EMOTION.

Other emotions in picture books:

  • Fear/Worry
  • Anger
  • Confusion
  • Disappointment/Loss
  • Sadness
  • Embarrassment
  • Impatience
  • Nervousness/Anticipation
  • Loneliness
  • Excitement
  • Thankfulness/Appreciation
  • Pride
  • Love
  • Happiness

And there’s more. This is by no means an exhaustive list!

Your assignment, should you choose to accept it, is to identify the emotion in random picture books. Go to the library, pull some off the shelf and read. What emotions are in the tale? How easily can a child relate to these emotions?

And don’t forget a box of tissues. Some books are so lovey-dovey, I can’t help but choke up.

***blows into hankie***

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Here’s a request from me—if you have enjoyed PiBoIdMo 2013 and reading this blog, I ask for your nomination for “The Top 10 Blogs for Writers” over at Write to Done. Please note the nomination will not count without the link to my site (taralazar.com) and a comment regarding why you are nominating it. And of course, feel free to nominate someone else’s deserving blog instead of this one. Only one nomination counts, so make it count!

Also, signed and personalized copies of THE MONSTORE are available for holiday purchase directly from The Bookworm in Bernardsville, NJ. Just give them a call at 908-766-4599 and I’ll run over there to sign your copy. (Don’t worry, it’s not far. And besides, who doesn’t love spending time at a bookstore?)

Thanks again for participating in PiBoIdMo 2013! It’s your enthusiasm that makes this such a worthwhile event. Prize selections will begin this week! Good luck to all!

Now I know PiBoIdMo participants are awaiting a final post from me, your fearless leader.

Well, that is still to come, once I am feeling better. Perhaps tomorrow? Monday? It shall come soon, never fear, says Fearless Leader.

In the meantime, I have something to make YOU feel better.

Gifts for writers! And by gifts for writers, I mean gifts that you shall immediately place on your wish list. Why? They’re just THAT awesome.

I’ve put together this list of my 10 personal favorites, but I have a more than 100 other literary lovies to tickle your holiday fancy on my Pinterest board Things Writers Like. So hop on your sleigh and slip over there once you’ve perused this pile. (Geesh, enough with the corny alliteration, Tara.)

Let me know which gift is your favorite, and feel free to add to the list in the comments!

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1. Modern Wooden Alphabet Necklace available via SevenSparrowGoods on etsy.com.

Men, don’t leave. I know this first gift is for the ladies. Don’t worry, I have plenty for you. See #2.

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2. Famous Author Action Figures available via ebay.

Ka-pow! Bam! Zonk! NEVERMORE!

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3. USB Typewriter available via uncommongoods.com.

If you miss the satisfying click-clack of an old-fashioned manual typewriter, here’s the perfect solution for you. It remains modern with a USB link to your preferred device–a PC, Mac or iPad.

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4. Notebook Paper bed linens available via modcloth.com.

Can’t find a piece of paper in the middle of the night? Write on your pillow. Yep, this duvet set comes with washable markers. You won’t even get mad at the kids for drawing on them.

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5. Storymatic Game (Kids Version) available via mentalfloss.com.

Maybe you’ve heard of Rory’s Story Cubes or Haikubes or even The Amazing Story Generator. Well, this is a writing prompt game with over 6 million possibilities.

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6. Book Rest Lamp available via mentalfloss.com.

Ah, there’s no place like home. Home for your latest read, that is. The soft glow of the lamp is enough to read by, plus you’ll never lose your page.

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7. AquaNotes available via myaquanotes.com.

No more great ideas down the drain! (And while you’re getting clean, may as well use “Wash Away Writer’s Block” soap.)

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8. The 3Doodler available via the3doodler.com.

OK, so maybe you wouldn’t want to write a novel with this, but wouldn’t it be cool to give your fans your characters or signature in 3D?

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9. Vintage-style custom bookplates available via oiseaux on etsy.com.

Every writer is a reader, and your books are cherished keepsakes. So treat them that way with gorgeous vintage-style bookplates. This shop offers over 100 other vintage styles.

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10. Charlotte’s Web tee available via outofprintclothing.com.

A classic gift. Out of Print Clothing offers tees inspired by your literary favorites, from Goodnight Moon to Call of the Wild, from Charlotte’s Web to The Great Gatsby. You can never have too many books or too many book tees.

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Happy shopping for that special writer in your life!

And remember to stop by my Pinterest board “Things Writers Like” for even more!

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