***blows into hankie***
Yes, I’m emotional because the 5th annual PiBoIdMo has come to a close. It’s been an incredibly satisfying few months for me—from organizing guest bloggers, to reading their sage advice, to receiving thankful emails from you, the participants. I am grateful for your feedback. Knowing that the kidlit writing community has benefitted from this challenge is my greatest reward. It means there are many more fabulous picture books on their way, into the eager hands of children.
As a newbie kidlit writer, I had to discover much of the information you’ve learned here on my own. There were few picture book blogs when I began my journey seven years ago, and most of the craft knowledge I gained was from SCBWI events. I would take copious notes then dash home to transcribe them with lightning fast fingers. Doing so helped the information soak into my brain. Then I decided to slap my notes on a blog for others to benefit. After all, not everyone is able to attend SCBWI events.
To this day, the most popular post on my blog remains the one I created when I learned about picture book construction from an editor—the difference between a self-ended picture book and one with colored ends—and how you do not have 32 pages to tell a tale in a 32-page picture book. No one had ever bothered to explain this to me before, and I had never seen it diagrammed. That post from February 2009—almost five years ago—gets the majority of this blog’s traffic, even during PiBoIdMo!
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But I’m also emotional because—hey—picture books crave emotion. A story is truly defined as an emotional journey. The character in the beginning of your story is not who she is at the end. She has grown. Changed. EVOLVED.
Your picture book should contain a universal emotional truth to which a child can identify. The reader must empathize with your character. They must know how your character feels. They must become invested in the emotional journey.
Let’s examine some emotions in popular picture books:
The premise:
Emily’s favorite toy Stanley gets bunny-napped by mean old Queen Gloriana.
The emotional truth:
Children understand the love and joy a cherished toy brings. And they understand the misery of that kind of loss.
Other lost-toy tales:
KNUFFLE BUNNY & KNUFFLE BUNNY TOO by Mo Willems
EXTRA YARN by Mac Barnett & Jon Klassen
I LOST MY BEAR by Jules Feiffer
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The premise:
Ruby is the new girl in school and she just wants to be noticed. But she goes about it the wrong way—by copying everything Angela wears, says and does.
The emotional truth:
Children feel trepidation surrounding new situations. Being young, their lives are full of “new”. Many books deal with this issue, from welcoming a new baby into the family (be careful, this topic is overdone), to being the new kid in school. Other emotional themes in these books are loneliness, fitting in, and being yourself.
Other making-friends/new kid tales:
LISSY’S FRIENDS by Grace Lin
YOU WILL BE MY FRIEND! by Peter Brown
NEVILLE by Norton Juster and G. Brian Karas
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The premise:
Everything was always quiet on Earmuffle Avenue, that is, until the Louds moved in. The quiet neighbors became quite upset. They asked the Louds to tone it down, but once silence descended, the neighbors realized they missed the boisterous family.
The emotional truth:
Children must constantly adjust to a variety of people, ideas and perspectives around them. And they have to assert themselves and grow into their own little personalities. They understand how “different” some people can be. They understand how they can sometimes be the “different” one. Books like THE LOUDS demonstrate how it’s OK to be whom you are, and that it’s possible to appreciate people who are different from you. And the book does this without being preachy. In fact, it’s mighty good, rowdy fun.
Other being-different/being-yourself tales:
CALVIN CAN’T FLY by Jennifer Berne & Keith Bendis
COWBOY CAMP by Tammi Sauer & Mike Reed
CHRYSANTHEMUM by Kevin Henkes
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The premise:
Zack is tired of his pesky little sister overtaking his bedroom. So he buys monsters to scare Gracie away. But the monsters don’t do their jobs. In the end, however, the siblings learn to appreciate each another and to cooperate.
The emotional truth:
Many children have siblings and they understand the contentious nature of that relationship. They can relate to a sibling either being pesky, or being shunned and teased by an older sibling. So they can understand Zack’s eagerness to spook Gracie and Gracie’s desire to be around her brother. And they also know that sometimes a sibling can be the best playmate ever.
Other sibling tales:
THE CHICKEN OF THE FAMILY by Mary Amato & Delphine Durand
SCRIBBLE by Deborah Freedman
DAFFODIL by Emily Jenkins & Tomek Bogacki
These stories aren’t just about a toy rabbit, a classroom, loud neighbors or kooky monsters. There is an emotional layer woven into each tale. The child reading the story can empathize with the characters because they have felt similar emotions. Sure, they may never have been visited by the Queen’s footmen or crawled into a trap-door monster store—those are the fantastical elements of the stories. But these elements are grounded in reality by EMOTION.
Other emotions in picture books:
- Fear/Worry
- Anger
- Confusion
- Disappointment/Loss
- Sadness
- Embarrassment
- Impatience
- Nervousness/Anticipation
- Loneliness
- Excitement
- Thankfulness/Appreciation
- Pride
- Love
- Happiness
And there’s more. This is by no means an exhaustive list!
Your assignment, should you choose to accept it, is to identify the emotion in random picture books. Go to the library, pull some off the shelf and read. What emotions are in the tale? How easily can a child relate to these emotions?
And don’t forget a box of tissues. Some books are so lovey-dovey, I can’t help but choke up.
***blows into hankie***
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Here’s a request from me—if you have enjoyed PiBoIdMo 2013 and reading this blog, I ask for your nomination for “The Top 10 Blogs for Writers” over at Write to Done. Please note the nomination will not count without the link to my site (taralazar.com) and a comment regarding why you are nominating it. And of course, feel free to nominate someone else’s deserving blog instead of this one. Only one nomination counts, so make it count!
Also, signed and personalized copies of THE MONSTORE are available for holiday purchase directly from The Bookworm in Bernardsville, NJ. Just give them a call at 908-766-4599 and I’ll run over there to sign your copy. (Don’t worry, it’s not far. And besides, who doesn’t love spending time at a bookstore?)
Thanks again for participating in PiBoIdMo 2013! It’s your enthusiasm that makes this such a worthwhile event. Prize selections will begin this week! Good luck to all!
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December 9, 2013 at 12:13 pm
Beth Stilborn
Wonderful post, Tara, to end an amazing month-plus. Thank you once again for all you do.
December 9, 2013 at 12:15 pm
Sylvia Liu
Thank you so much, Tara, for running another great PiBoIdMo. I am one of those people who first found your blog because of the dummy layout post, and this is my second year of doing PiBoIdMo seriously.
December 9, 2013 at 12:16 pm
Mary A Livingston
It went by so fast!
December 9, 2013 at 12:18 pm
Pia Garneau
Thank you Tara for hosting this challenge. Please know that all your efforts are greatly appreciated. You’ve impacted a lot of people and that’s something to be proud of.
December 9, 2013 at 12:18 pm
marylouisealucurto
Thank You Tara for Another Wonderful PiBoIdMo Event! and All of the Very Valuable Information Posted!!!
December 9, 2013 at 12:20 pm
MichelleLynn
Thank you, Tara!
It was a delightful, informative, fun, difficult, challenging, inspiring, confirming, hopeful, sleepless, exhausting, exhilarating, crazy, hair-pulling, amazing, stupendous, educational, “I’m almost ready to give up”, “I’m ready to take on the world”, finger blister inducing month.
I can’t wait for next November. Until then, xo.
-Michelle Lynn Senters
December 9, 2013 at 12:22 pm
Tara Lazar
Thatsalottaemotion. LOL
December 9, 2013 at 12:21 pm
nicole snitselaar
A big big Thank you Tara !! (I’ve already nominated you!)
You gave me a wonderful month of November !
I think I will look forward to next November ! 😉 (hoping you will go on!)
I have been writing so much more that I have a sore hand that needs to rest now ! (I can’t even cut a slice of bread ! 😉 )
Now I hope you are going to have a lovely quiet christmas and a very happy new year !!
Un grand GRAND MERCI !
December 9, 2013 at 12:22 pm
shiela fuller
Dear Tara: i have to tell you that it was your picture book layout diagram post that brought me to PiBoIdMo and so much more. Thank you, running over to that site to vote for you because if it wasn’t for you, I’d probably still be doing it all wrong. LOL
December 9, 2013 at 12:22 pm
Buffy Silverman
Thanks for a wonderful month–so glad to have participated!
December 9, 2013 at 12:23 pm
LovableLobo
Delightful way to end an inspiring PiBoIdMo! Words can’t express my appreciation so……as one of the greats once said “Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened.” ~Dr. Seuss : D
December 9, 2013 at 12:26 pm
Tara Lazar
Oh, I love that quote!
December 9, 2013 at 4:06 pm
LovableLobo
It always makes me feel better about sad stuff.
December 9, 2013 at 12:24 pm
Sophia Mallonée (@SophiaMallonee)
Love the post! Thanks for organizing such a wonderful, creative and fun event, Tara!
December 9, 2013 at 12:27 pm
jheitman22
Tara, Tara, Tara, leave it to you to post the best post and save it for last. Thanks for the challenge and for unselfishly sharing what you have learned along the way. You’re right; the book dummy layout is so valuable! I look forward to seeing yours and other participants’ names on books in bookstores in the next few years–right next to mine, of course! 😉
December 9, 2013 at 12:29 pm
Sharon k mayhew
Tara, you have once again given us amazing inspiration and knowledge. Thank you for all the hard work you and your guests have done to make us better writers.
December 9, 2013 at 12:29 pm
Meg Miller
Wonderful wrap up to a wonderful month! Thanks for the fun and inspiration Tara!!!
December 9, 2013 at 12:33 pm
Courtenay Schurman
Fabulous and informative. Just reread Monstore yesterday. PiBoIdMo and NaNoWriMo made November one of my most favorite months this year. Well done. Enjoyed it.
December 9, 2013 at 12:38 pm
Sandie Sing
Tara, you have empowered many of us with this amazing project. The grand finale was just as powerful as the beginning,, middle, and the end, of the line of great writers and illustrators’ personal shares with us. Thank you ever so much for organizing PiBoIdMo 2013. After Christmas, I will reflect with my ideas. Meanwhile, Tara,—-get some rest!
December 9, 2013 at 12:39 pm
Elizabeth Rose Stanton
It’s been great, Tara!! Thank you!!!
December 9, 2013 at 12:43 pm
Wendy Greenley
Tara, I’m glad you don’t write posts like this every day or I’d be writing all weepy stories that no one would want to read! The information is great, but knowing it’s THE END just sent me hunting for the tissues.
December 9, 2013 at 12:44 pm
Anne Bielby
Keep doing what you do!
December 9, 2013 at 12:50 pm
Sandy Perlic
Thank you, Tara, for helping other writers become informed and inspired. This is my first year of PiBoIdMo, and I’m truly amazed at how much more I’m capable of than I thought. Some of my ideas are good. Make that really good! I appreciate all you’ve done to make this happen!
December 9, 2013 at 12:52 pm
Michelle @ Fitztopia
Thank you so much, Tara! This was my first PiIdBoMo… I have been so inspired & absorbed so much information, I feel rejuvenated as I am finishing up my final exams and projects this week! Usually it’s the other way around! LOL! My Christmas present to myself is beginning the year with all of my new ideas. 😉 Have a wonderful holiday with your family & you have my vote!
December 9, 2013 at 12:53 pm
lindaschueler
Thank you for a great month and a fantastic challenge. And you even give us another challenge on the last post!
December 9, 2013 at 12:56 pm
Susan Nicholas
Great information for us even in your last blog. Thanks for doing what you do.
December 9, 2013 at 1:00 pm
Debbie Austin
Thank you, Tara, for all you do! The information you share all year round and the wonderful guest posts you arrange for November make your blog a cut above the rest. Thank you for your dedication to all of your fellow Picture Book writers.
December 9, 2013 at 1:02 pm
Jewel Sample
I remember those early days and how I struggled to be a better writer. The internet writer support helped me to keep going. I haven’t been able, due to health reasons, to always actively participate. This year was so much fun. It helped me to remember how much I really love to write for children. Thank you so much Tara for the brain stretching, eye opening, humorous, entertaining, inspirational and encouraging picture book idea month! Many blessings upon you.
December 9, 2013 at 1:03 pm
Joanne Sher
Thank you thank you THANK YOU, Tara! This has been an amazing time .for me. You can’t possibly know how much I appreciate it. Have learned so VERY much! Blessings to you! (and I already voted in that poll thing – for a different blog before I found yours – or you’d most DEFINITELY have mine!
December 9, 2013 at 1:04 pm
creationsbymit
Another great post, & a fitting finale to a month+ of sound advice. Thank you, Tara.
Michele Katz/Creations By Mit
December 9, 2013 at 1:05 pm
Andria
T–talented
A- awesomely inspiring
R- Readers reason to rejoice
A- advocate for PB writers
May the the inspiration and energy from PiBoIdMo last all year long.Thanks so very much for all your hard work!
December 9, 2013 at 1:06 pm
Jennifer Rumberger
Thanks again, Tara, for all your hard work for the kidlit community! I do love your graphic of a picture book! I found it on your blog a couple of years ago and refer to it still. I hope you have some time now for a much needed! 🙂
December 9, 2013 at 1:08 pm
saputnam
Tara, thank you for another wonderful PiBoIdMo! I’ve enjoyed every minute of it and can’t wait for November to roll around again.
December 9, 2013 at 1:10 pm
renajtraxel
Thanks for everything Tara. This is my second year and it’s been great!
December 9, 2013 at 1:11 pm
mellin4333
Thank You, Tara, for all your hard work on our behalf! You’re the BEST!!! I hope you win Best Writing Blog… I nominated you! 🙂
December 9, 2013 at 1:28 pm
Keith Frawley
You got my vote!
December 9, 2013 at 1:30 pm
Robyn Campbell
OUTSTANDING post!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You work so hard to help us. Nominating you pal. Thank you, thank you, thank you!! SMOOCHES.
December 9, 2013 at 1:31 pm
Dawn Young
Tara, you are a blessing! You have shared so freely, your time, your knowledge, your contacts, resources, etc…I can’t even begin to thank you. You will always be on the mind and in the heart of this particular PiBoIdMo participant. If I could hug you I would! Thanks!
December 9, 2013 at 1:33 pm
kpbock
This has been a fantastic month full of writing! I couldn’t have made myself buckle down and get this amount of work done without this challenge. Thank you!
December 9, 2013 at 1:37 pm
Donna L Martin
Hi Tara!
I quite literally would not be where I am today if not for PiBoIdMo three years ago. I had been writing on my own and somehow stumbled across your blog and this challenge…and 98 PB ideas later, the rest as they say is history…;~)
Thanks for all you do for this writing community!
Take care,
Donna L Martin
December 9, 2013 at 1:37 pm
Jacqueline Adams
Thanks, Tara! I can’t imagine how much time and work goes into organizing PiBoIdMo. Here’s hoping you win the Best Blogs for Writers–you sure deserve it.
December 9, 2013 at 1:38 pm
Kathy Doherty
Tara, you are one special person AND author! I’ve enjoyed the ride tremendously. Thank you.
December 9, 2013 at 1:39 pm
Holly Bliss
Thank you so much for today’s advice and for hosting PiBoIdMo. So, what comes next? I know I saw something somewhere that was akin to NaNoEdMo…
December 9, 2013 at 1:46 pm
miki
Many thanks for the graphic, for the sample books that cover various emotions, for the alert to Out of Print (wish I had LESS of my Christmas shopping done!), and again for the excellent roster throughout November, Tara.
December 9, 2013 at 1:47 pm
Eileen
Thanks Tara!
December 9, 2013 at 1:51 pm
Nancy Armo
LOVED all the posts! Each one had a takeaway that helped. BRAVO to all the guests bloggers. A special thank you to you Tara. The challenge to find the emotion in our books is the best takeaway advice of all.
December 9, 2013 at 1:53 pm
Alicia Schwab
Nice post, thanks again for all the great work hosting PiBoIdMo and interesting tidbits! I’m growing. 🙂
December 9, 2013 at 2:01 pm
Dawnyelle
I will continue to get emotional over the end of these awesome posts!
December 9, 2013 at 2:04 pm
Kim Pfennigwerth (@kpfenni)
Can’t wait to read The Rabbit Belongs to Emily and The LOUDS move in! Thanks Tara!!
December 9, 2013 at 2:05 pm
teresa m.i. schaefer (@TMISchaefer)
Pooped. Is pooped an emotion? I can’t imagine that you aren’t feeling it! What a great month — the work that had to go into it was amazing. While finding thirty ideas felt a big enough challenge — you, Tara Lazar are a rock star or a Picture book star. 🙂 What an enormous project — pre-, actual, and post- PiBo and truly very helpful. You have my vote. I hope one day I can meet you in person. Thanks so much. Teresa
December 9, 2013 at 2:06 pm
Johnell
Tara, you must be psychic. I needed that self-ended PB layout. I was just trying to go through some notes to find that info out and voila! Seriously, if you need a side career, tea leaves may be in your future. I have thoroughly loved this experience. Thank you!
December 9, 2013 at 2:11 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
This is an incredible post, Tara. I feel like this is why some stories feel “light” or not totally satisfying at the end – because they somehow have missed connecting to that emotional core, that universal truth that we all identify and connect with. This point is my favorite thing to talk about with students when I do school visits – the themes and how we can all identify with these feelings and needs. Themes of acceptance and belonging seem to run through my stories, and I feel very strongly that every child deserves to have that acceptance in their life. I love how you broke it down into examples as well!
I have thoroughly enjoyed participating this year and will make a trip over to Top Ten Blogs for Writers… :).
December 9, 2013 at 2:11 pm
kamikinard
Very well said, Tara. I love the reminder to include emotions in even our shortest works. And thank you, thank you, thank you,for a wonderful and inspiring month!
December 9, 2013 at 2:13 pm
Lori Alexander
Thanks for all you do behind the scenes, Tara. PiBoIdMo is a truly awesome event! I just nominated your blog 🙂
December 9, 2013 at 2:16 pm
Kathy Cornell Berman
Thanks for a great post. This is what it is all about–making that important emotional connection that stands the test of time. Once again it has been a fabulous picture book month. Thanks for all you have done. I have really appreciated all that I have learned from you.
December 9, 2013 at 2:20 pm
Karen Mae Zoccoli
Thanks for this very informative post and for everything you do and put into this I am so appreciative!
December 9, 2013 at 2:26 pm
Maria Gianferrari
Thanks for all of your hard work, Tara! This is the perfect ending to PiBoIdMo–emotion is the heart, and soul of the picture book!
December 9, 2013 at 2:41 pm
taracreel
I went an nominated you…of course you more than deserve it! Thanks again for all you do!
December 9, 2013 at 2:46 pm
Jill Siegel
Thank you Tara! What an inspiring post! I feel that a focus on emotion is so important in picture books and art in general… 🙂
December 9, 2013 at 3:06 pm
danacarey1
You fooled me! I thought this was going to be a tear-jerker of a post but I’m glad it wasn’t. Much better like this– great PB examples.
Thanks for all you do, Tara. I had a great time this November thanks to you and your hard work!
December 9, 2013 at 3:10 pm
Janie Reinart
Tara, you rock! Thank you for all the great information!
Best of all it was a wonderful time hanging out and meeting
fabulous PB writers!
December 9, 2013 at 3:15 pm
Ashley Bankhead
Thank you for creating this challenge. I cannot thank you enough. I enjoyed all of the posts, quotes and advice. Your blog is very helpful and very much needed for picture book authors. I also nominated you for the top ten blogs for writers. Thanks again.
December 9, 2013 at 3:19 pm
Kjersten Hayes
A lovely post and three cheers to all of your hard work, Tara! Thank you so much for all that you do for your fellow writers.
December 9, 2013 at 3:32 pm
erin
Thank you so much, Tara, for all your hard work and for creating such a wonderful environment for writers.
December 9, 2013 at 3:32 pm
Robb Michael G
To say thank you for PiBoIdMo isn’t saying enough. This has turned out to be one of the best things I’ve ever done. Now, you follow it up with this wonderful post. Looking at the progression of PiBoIdMo since it began I can already see that next year is going to be a doozy (which means more than fantastic).
December 9, 2013 at 3:38 pm
angiekarcherAngie Karcher
You are an inspiration to us all and I appreciate your motivation and your friendship! Thanks SO much for blazing the Picture Book Blogging trail for us searching for our way to the promised land of publication! I’d follow you anywhere! Hugs and Fist Bumps! Now rest and relax! = )
December 9, 2013 at 3:39 pm
kathalsey
THANK YOU, TARA! I’ve already voted for your blog! May the odds be ever in your favor! This past month has been wonderful due to you! Blessings in all life has to offer! Hugs, Kathy
December 9, 2013 at 4:05 pm
Cindy
Love this, Tara. I am going to look over my PiBoIdMo list and pick apart the emotions. Sounds like fun! I know, I’m weird. LOL
December 9, 2013 at 4:31 pm
Tara Lazar
As weird as the rest of us! You’re a fine, upstanding member of this club.
December 9, 2013 at 4:08 pm
Jenn DesAutels
Yes ma’am!
Thank you Tara!!
-Jenn.
December 9, 2013 at 4:16 pm
Linda E.H.
Uhhh….call me an idiot. Until you pointed it out right now, I hadn’t realized that the standard 32-page picture book is not 32 pages of story. I’m going to go hide now. 😉
December 9, 2013 at 4:30 pm
Tara Lazar
Don’t hide, Linda! Rejoice in the new knowledge! Things rapidly changed for me once I understood picture book construction and writing with the format in mind.
December 9, 2013 at 4:39 pm
Jenifer Heidorn
Checking in at piboidmo every day was like having a summer pass to an amusement park for my inner child. Thanks, Tara!
December 9, 2013 at 4:50 pm
Kathryn Ault Noble
Passing along new information down to the last paragraph! Tara, your hard work and dedication to the craft of picture books, and helping others to understand, definitely puts you in the top of my favorite blogs, especially the ones I take time to read sentence by sentence, instead of just look at the pictures. 😉 You’ve got my vote. Thanks again, Kathryn Ault Noble
December 9, 2013 at 4:58 pm
Doreen E. Lepore
Thank you, Tara, for another inspiring PiBoIdMo!
December 9, 2013 at 5:03 pm
Linda Gammon
Thanks so much, Tara, for a wonderfully challenging month. And you’re right. Picture books do need emotional truth, and at their core, they need heart. Your posts, and all of your guests’ posts, attest to that. Thanks again.
December 9, 2013 at 5:07 pm
teresarobeson
Waaah…I’m crying not only because this year’s PiBo is over, but also because I never got to fully participate, being out of the country and messing up my sign-up. But I look forward to next year’s event with extra excitement since not getting something makes your heart grow fonder (I swear that’s the correct expression). 🙂
Thank you, Tara, for organizing this marvelous event!
December 9, 2013 at 5:14 pm
intheirownwrite
Thanks for the self-ended picture book lay-out. I’d worked out something similar for myself but I was working on the basis of 15 rather than 12 actual story spreads. I also appreciated the clarification on using emotions in picture books. Well said, Tara, and a major thank you for organising PiBoIdMo. It’s the first time I’ve taken part and the calendar of blog posts was excellent. You’ve got my vote!
December 9, 2013 at 5:25 pm
Catherine Johnson
Thanks so much for another great PiBoIdMo Tara. I hope you win the best blog, you deserve it. Thank you!
December 9, 2013 at 5:31 pm
Suzy Leopold
Please pass the box of tissues. I need one to. Thank you, Tara, for encouraging me to be the best I can be with picture book ideas and creative writings and illustrations, along with the many tips and suggestions from guest writers, authors and illustrators. You deserve the best along with a gigantic a hug. ~Suzy Leopold
December 9, 2013 at 5:47 pm
Stephanie Shaw
I think PiBoIdMo now officially marks The Season of Giving. Each blog has brought me a very special gift. Today I will re-read my manuscripts for that element of emotion you so beautifully described. Thank you, Tara.
December 9, 2013 at 5:49 pm
Lori Dubbin
Tara, thank you for your devotion to children’s picture book writing and children’s picture book writers, and thank you for all the organization and creativity you put into your blog and PiBoIdMo. That’s why you deserve to become the top #1 blog and you have my vote. Thanks for your post today, and instead of calling it the end, I prefer to call it a new beginning because you have helped take me out of a fog and into clearer skies and smoother sailing with my writing. That’s what PiBoIdMo has done for me, and even though I know I have miles to go, I couldn’t have come up with my 30+ ideas without you and an inspirational November.
December 9, 2013 at 5:49 pm
Jennifer Voigt Kaplan
sniff— thanks for a great month!
December 9, 2013 at 5:54 pm
Russ Cox
Thanks for a great month of picture books and ideas!
December 9, 2013 at 6:01 pm
Jessica
Thank you for the wonderful post and of course for PiBoIdMo! I know that I will continue to create stories. But, I am already jazzed at the idea of PiBoIdMo 2014. 🙂
December 9, 2013 at 6:14 pm
Laurie L. Young
Tara, you continue to help and inspire and encourage. Thank you so much for bringing us all along with you!
December 9, 2013 at 6:16 pm
Cindy Schumerth
Thank you Tara for all you hard work in putting this together. I honestly think your last post is one of the best. It pulls a lot of things together.
Thanks. Cindy
December 9, 2013 at 6:30 pm
viviankirkfield
Tara, I know it is hard to believe, but I had not seen that much-viewed post about picture books…so I am grateful you spotlighted it and included the ‘dummy’ spread.
This was a fitting ending post to an incredible PiBoIdMo – thank you so much not only for all the picture books you have inspired – 30 days of ideas x 650+ writers, but also for helping to open the floodgates of creativity in all of us.:)
December 9, 2013 at 6:30 pm
Pam Brunskill (@PamBrunskill)
Thanks, Tara! Great example books. 🙂
December 9, 2013 at 7:00 pm
Donna L. Sadd
This was my first PiBoIdMo, and I don’t know how to thank you, Tara. Well, I eagerly nominated your blog, but honestly I cannot thank you enough. What a wonderful experience! I’m sitting with a book full of ideas, and I don’t know where to start! I printed out so many of the daily posts that I can’t see my office walls, and learned oodles. I’ll be rooting for the huge success of THE MONSTORE as well as all your future stories. :0)
December 9, 2013 at 7:18 pm
Julie
Fantastic post Tara! I love this exercise and can’t wait to try it out. I had a great PiBoIdMo this year and I’m grateful to you for helping me “fill the idea bank.” *blows into hankie*
December 9, 2013 at 7:19 pm
Lori Mozdzierz
Thank you, Tara for another wonderful November in PiBoIdMo-land!!
December 9, 2013 at 7:28 pm
Kaye Baillie
Done! Thanks Tara for everything. And it doesn’t end here. Stories to be written and books to examine. Hope you are feeling better.
December 9, 2013 at 7:29 pm
Juliana Lee
Hi Tara. I’ve had an usually busy day and just now got to my computer. But I do want to thank you for providing this forum of writers and writer-like others to work together. This is a fantastic community, and I talk about you constantly to anyone who will listen. Thank you so much for the encouragement and support. I’m just a sprout hoping that someday, I can take my place among the mighty oaks!
December 9, 2013 at 7:39 pm
tpierce
Thank you again, Tara. Last year, when I discovered your post about picture book structure I started referring my writing students to it. It’s a FABULOUS explanation! Thanks for your unending generosity :-).
December 9, 2013 at 7:47 pm
Myrna Foster
Thank you, Tara!
December 9, 2013 at 7:48 pm
Pat Haapaniemi
Thanks for everything you do for all of us, Tara!
December 9, 2013 at 7:51 pm
Laura Purdie Salas
Thanks, Tara–I’m off to nominate you! Another great year of PiBoIdMo! P.S. I heard Katie Davis saying it Pie-Bo (long o)-Id-Mow on her podcast. Is that how you say it? I’ve always said Pih-Bo (long o)-Id-Mow and am curious!
December 9, 2013 at 8:05 pm
Evie Hjartarson
Tara, my first PiBoldMo and certainly not my last. I’ve learned so much. Thanks.
December 9, 2013 at 8:21 pm
Penny Parker Klostermann
Now I have to go get my hankie! What an awesome post! Thanks for connecting with us emotionally as you reminded us to have that emotional connection in our manuscripts.
Tara…This is the first challenge I did when I started writing a few years ago. This is my third one and I refer back to the posts all the time for inspiration. From your blog, I discovered Susanna Leonard Hill’s blog and so many others and now feel a part of this incredible community! I’m forever thankful that you share so much with us.
I nominated your blog already!!!
December 9, 2013 at 8:50 pm
tinamcho
Thanks for reminding us about the emotions found in pbs. That’s one reason I’m drawn to them. Hooray for my 3rd PiBoIdmo. I LOVE all the posts and will miss that. Thanks so much for all your time and effort!
December 9, 2013 at 8:54 pm
thiskidreviewsbooks
Well said. You got me emotional now. *sniff sniff* *blows nose on nearby sleeve* 😉
December 9, 2013 at 9:00 pm
danielledufayet
Thank you for reminding us what picture books are all about and that a good one has a strong heart! Thank you for all your support and hard work in helping us.This has been such a great experience! xoxo
December 9, 2013 at 9:07 pm
Helen Ross
Thanks for another wonderful PiBoldMo month. It has been very inspirational. Yes, no one tells you that you actually don’t have 32 pages for your text and illos. Ho hum! We all learn as we go. So thanks for sharing information about picture books.
December 9, 2013 at 9:13 pm
Helen Ross
Reblogged this on Helen Ross writes and commented:
As we wave a goodbye to another inspirational PiBoldMo month, thought I’d pass on this very informative post from Tara Lazar (founder of PiBoldMo) about picture books. Whether you are a picture book writer newbie or not, it is worth reading.
December 9, 2013 at 9:30 pm
Stacy Couch
Thanks, Tara, for giving all of us kidlit lovers a home this November (and December)! I got my first web intro to kidlit at PiBoIdMo–my first insights into not only the craft, but the creative people behind it. Now I’m still learning, still meeting talented people. You make that all possible, so must once again say, THANKS, TARA!
December 9, 2013 at 9:50 pm
Lynn A. Davidson
Tara, you have good reason to be emotional about the closing of PiBoIdMo 2013. After all your effort of pulling it together, all your planning and organizing and everything involved in doing this for us … it has been top-notch excellent! So much great information and personality and encouragement from your guests has touched many lives. When new picture books hit the shelves, having found their small beginnings here, countless more lives will be touched. Wow! Thanks to you and PiBoIdMo!
May I add to your lost-toy tales list by mentioning a book I came across in a bookstore a few years ago and immediately loved! It stirred emotion in me that drew me back to purchase the book. (Proof of what you told us about emotion in our writing.) It is a sweet story called Emma Bean and was written by Jean Van Leeuwen with stunning illustrations by Juan Wijngaard.
For me to say “thank you, Tara” is hardly enough, but one day I hope to have a book published because of all this. Then I will say THANK YOU, TARA and you will know how grateful I am. 🙂 Blessings to you. (And, of course, I voted for you!)
December 10, 2013 at 10:18 am
Tara Lazar
Thank you! I will put Emma Bean on my to-read list.
December 9, 2013 at 10:04 pm
Yvonne Mes
You have done an amazing job pulling everything together and having it run so smoothly. Thank you enabling me to be part of such a vibrant and supporting community of children’s writers and illustrators and for the many ideas that are waiting to be turned into stories.
December 9, 2013 at 10:05 pm
Deb Dudley
Thanks SO much, Tara! My critique partners LOVED my first sub from one of the #PiBoIdMo gems. 🙂
Loved #PiBoIdMo & look forward to participating again next year.
You deserve to win the top spot on that blog list! I enjoyed nominated you!
December 9, 2013 at 10:26 pm
John Cooper
thank you for doing this whole pibo thingy! I think it was through googling picture book layout templates that I came across your site to begin with. Keep it up!
December 9, 2013 at 10:27 pm
rlkurstedt
You’re awesome.
December 9, 2013 at 11:30 pm
Rosi Hollinbeck
This is another helpful post. Thanks for it and all the other great info I’ve received here in the last several weeks.
December 9, 2013 at 11:40 pm
lje1
Great job once again, Tara!
December 9, 2013 at 11:46 pm
Cathy C. Hall
Oh, Tara, your PB layout took me back to the SCBWI conference I attended–and also learned the A-B-C’s of layout. I was pretty shocked, but glad to get schooled. 🙂 I’ve already nominated you and your blog–not just because of PiBoIdMo, but for your willingness-to-go-the-extra-mile commitment for ALL writers, no matter where they are in their journey. As always, it was a delightful ride–thank you!
December 10, 2013 at 12:53 am
Cecilia Clark
dang I used two boxes of tissues already. Thanks Tara, you did an awesome job and I am sad to be seeing the end of this, my first, PiBoIdMo but I will be back next year. I have learned so much from all the guests and links that you provided, thank you, thank you. I already nominated your blog at least a week ago. Good luck.
December 10, 2013 at 5:48 am
mona861
Wow, Tara! What a fantastic way to close out 2013 PiBoIdMo. An emotional post from you! It prompted me to grab a napkin from the table-no, not at a secluded coffee shop, my own- and write the premise for my latest PB project. Finding and emphasizing the emotion, shows the heart of my story. Thank you for this tool.Thank you for a month plus. Shines a brighter light on picture books.
December 10, 2013 at 7:14 am
DianeKHower
Thank you Tara for all you do for all of us! You are an amazing children’s author, writer, champion of writers, …just a great all around human Being!
December 10, 2013 at 7:38 am
RaChelle Lisiecki
My vote is cast! Thank you, again, Tara. I’ve been able to read so many more outstanding titles from the library thanks to your suggestions and those of the guest bloggers. I now have my own special shelf at the library so they can keep track of all the great books that I put on hold! Cheers!
December 10, 2013 at 9:48 am
Lauri Meyers
Thank you so much for the great month! I love how you summarized the emotional core of these books.
December 10, 2013 at 10:06 am
Theanna
Thanks for another great post. It is the perfect way to bring this to a close. This has been a great learning experience and I’ve learned so much. I will be sure to vote for you as well. Wishing you all the best!
December 10, 2013 at 12:27 pm
Tracey M. Cox
THANK YOU TARA!
Breaking out the hanky here too!
WHAT. A. MONTH!
December 10, 2013 at 12:37 pm
heather sisson
This entire blog has been so incredibly helpful for me. Not only do i feel inspired but like i belong in a very supportive community that makes my ambitions feel possible. :}
December 10, 2013 at 12:38 pm
SevenAcreSky
Tara, what a great PiBpIdMo this has been. You cannot imagine what your giving has meant to this writer. Thanks forever.
December 10, 2013 at 1:13 pm
fashionistaphilly.tumblr.com
Tara I hope you win! You deserve to be recognized for all that you do on this amazing blog, it is a HUGE resource to all writers aspiring to write for children. Thank you so much for another awesome posting!!!
December 10, 2013 at 1:30 pm
Pam Jones
Thank you for putting together this post. This is awesome information that is hard to come by and I’m one of those who have a hard time being able to make it to those SCBWI events. Also, I know this takes a lot of effort on your part to put together these challenges, and many will benefit from everything you offer here. Great advice, awesome reference and enjoyable prizes, inside info from those that are in the industry. I appreciate that you took time out of your life to do this for others. A whole heart thank you! You rock, girl!! -Pam
December 10, 2013 at 3:31 pm
Quinn Cole
December is nearly half way through and I have not yet gotten a tree, wrapped and shipped gifts across the country or written and mailed cards. However, I am happy with 33 (plus 1 I found in my purse on a scrap of paper) ideas in my second PiBoIdMo year. Thank you! And now the self-ended picture book layout, too. Double thank you!
December 10, 2013 at 3:38 pm
aliciaminor
Another month has gone by leaving us all tons of ideas to work on. One day, one way or another, those ideas will have characters, plots, dialogues, points of views, conflicts etc. and one day making it to the bookshelves and when that happens we all can say, “And God smiled at me” and for this, you got my vote. More power!
December 10, 2013 at 3:39 pm
Angela Padron
Thank you Tara for another great year of your blog – lots of inspiration and great information. And thanks for reposting the page layout – it’s always good to refresh my memory.
December 11, 2013 at 12:22 am
julie rowan zoch
Thanks for a good time, Tara – sorry, couldn’t help myself! But…t was very good for me. Okay, I’m leaving!
December 11, 2013 at 1:11 am
Teresa Daffern
Thank you Tara. What a labour of love this must be for you. This was my first time participating and I learned a great deal from the amazing array of guest bloggers. I took something valuable away with me from each and every post.
December 11, 2013 at 7:40 am
Alicia van Thiel
Great posts! Thank you Tara!
December 12, 2013 at 3:48 pm
Tracy Molitors
Tara, thanks so much for all the time and effort you have put into helping total strangers with the bewildering world of children’s book publishing. You are amazing!