with author Charlotte Offsay
Hi Tara! Thank you for having me on your blog today and for hosting the cover reveal of my upcoming picture book HOW TO RETURN A MONSTER!
Charlotte, please tell us about the book!
If your grown-ups bring home a small monster, er, baby, don’t panic. Just send it back!
HOW TO RETURN A MONSTER is a humorous how to story about a child who can’t believe it when her parents bring home a fussy, stinky, parent-stealing monster. She hatches a plan to send it back to where it came from… and along the way, she learns that maybe siblings aren’t so bad after all.
Do you have a fun behind-the-scenes story about creating the book that you’d like to share?
I tend to get my story ideas from the things in my life that are taking up the most room in my heart. When I first began writing what would eventually become HOW TO RETURN A MONSTER, I was consumed with second-time mom guilt about no longer being able to give my daughter the same amount of attention. She was just starting pre-school and I felt terrible separating from her for the first time and spending that time with her baby brother.
I had also heard countless stories from friends of how older siblings were reacting to having a new baby at home. I heard everything from ignoring to harming, and while it was clear these children loved their new siblings, one overarching theme prevailed—it was a hard adjustment for the older sibling to no longer be the sole focus of their parents’ attention.
My worries about my daughter made their way to the written page and I began writing a story about an older sibling feeling replaced by a new baby. I first wrote a traditional narrative arc story about a train feeling replaced by a shiny new train, but the story felt too much like a sad twist on Toy Story.
I wanted to capture and normalize the emotions around feeling replaced, but I also wanted to write a fun and entertaining story that kids would be able to connect to in a positive way. After one long brainstorming (venting) session with my husband, I realized that in order for the story to work it needed humor. I kept re-envisioning characters and story structure and eventually arrived at a humorous how-to story about a child who tries to return her sibling in the mail. This is the manuscript that is being illustrated by the talented Rea Zhai and will be published this September by Beaming Books.
How did you find your publisher?
I first connected with Beaming Books during #PBPITCH on Twitter.
I was querying at the time and had just been asked for more work by my now agent, the wonderful Nicole Geiger at Full Circle Literary. I signed with Nicole and we accepted the offer from Beaming Books!
Any words of advice for aspiring PB authors?
Don’t be scared to take the core concept/heart of your manuscript and start over. Play with structure, try an entirely different narrator, change the setting – you may just discover the key to unlocking that stubborn work-in-progress! Happy writing!
Blog readers, Beaming Books is giving away a copy of HOW TO RETURN A MONSTER when it’s released! Just leave one comment to enter.
A random winner will be selected.
Good luck!

Credit: NataliaL Photography
CHARLOTTE OFFSAY was born in England, grew up in Boston, and currently lives in Los Angeles with her husband and two small children. Through her work, Charlotte hopes to make children laugh, to inspire curiosity, and to create a magical world her readers can lose themselves in time and time again. She is the author of, The Big Beach Cleanup, (Albert Whitman 2021). How to Return a Monster is publishing this September from Beaming Books, followed by A Grandma’s Magic, publishing in March 2022 from Doubleday Books for Young Readers.
Learn more about Charlotte’s work at charlotteoffsay.com and follow her on Twitter at @COffsay and on Instagram at @picturebookrecommendations.
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June 1, 2021 at 1:36 pm
Becky Scharnhorst
This looks like such a fun story, Charlotte! I can easily see this becoming a go-to book for soon-to-be big brothers and sisters.
June 1, 2021 at 1:46 pm
Kim A Larson
I smiled instantly when I saw the cover! This looks like a great book! Congratulations, Charlotte!
June 1, 2021 at 1:54 pm
aliciaminor
For the win, this story will surely capture every family. We need funny books to read at this time in our crazy world. Congrats and wishing you more books to come to make us laugh. God bless.
June 1, 2021 at 1:57 pm
Linda Mitchell
oh, my gosh….the cutest idea! And, so true in my house. Each usurped eldest didn’t want to share mom. Love this.
June 1, 2021 at 2:00 pm
Debbi G
All parents with 2 or more children can relate to this. I look forward to reading it and sharing it with my grandchild.
June 1, 2021 at 2:08 pm
Joyce Uglow
Congratulations on your second “baby”! Here’s to a zillion sales.
June 1, 2021 at 2:11 pm
Brenda Huante
This sounds like so much fun! I can’t wait to read it!
June 1, 2021 at 2:12 pm
Natasha Garnett
Charlotte- I loved your The Big Beach Cleanup. Congratulations on upcoming How to Return a Monster. This (serious) theme will resonate with children and parents alike, especially as you present it with humor!
June 1, 2021 at 2:14 pm
Claire A. B. Freeland
This book looks fabulous! I can’t wait to read it. Congratulations!!
June 1, 2021 at 2:18 pm
Teresa Rodrigues
Congrats, Charlotte! This sounds like a great book! 🙂
June 1, 2021 at 2:19 pm
Sylvia Mary Grech
Congrats! Your book sounds lovely. Thanks for sharing.
June 1, 2021 at 2:22 pm
andreesantini
Oh wow, “How to Return a Monster” sounds like fun and should be a hit! I remember when I brought my second baby home, all was well for 2 weeks, then one day, my oldest walked to the apartment door and said, “Time to bring Jimmy back to the hospital.” This would have been the perfect book to have.
June 1, 2021 at 2:22 pm
Sue Heavenrich
What a fun way to embrace the topic! I love your twitter pitch – so to-the-point.
June 1, 2021 at 2:25 pm
Gabi Snyder
This looks super cute! Congrats, Charlotte and Rhea!
June 1, 2021 at 2:39 pm
judyrubin13
Thank you, Charlotte, for sharing your picture book process. What a great idea, and I love the cover design.
June 1, 2021 at 2:40 pm
kathydoherty1
Mercy! Is this adorable!
June 1, 2021 at 2:48 pm
Debra Shumaker
Congrats! This sounds awesome! And sooo happy to see another PBPitch success story!!!!!
June 1, 2021 at 2:53 pm
Sherri Jones Rivers
Boy, will that story resonate with lots of happy readers. Good for you on how you worked through your idea until you came upon the humor aspecty–always a winner.
June 1, 2021 at 2:54 pm
rnewman504
Congrats, Charlotte! I LOVE this book.
June 1, 2021 at 2:56 pm
Bethanny Parker
I love your #PBpitch. It sounds like a great story.
June 1, 2021 at 3:03 pm
Terri A Michels
A read for everyone in the family!
June 1, 2021 at 3:03 pm
TerriMichels
A read for everyone in the family!
June 1, 2021 at 3:06 pm
Stephanie Wildman
Congratulations Charlotte. This book will make a great big brother/big sister gift. Can’t wait.
June 1, 2021 at 3:06 pm
kskeesling
Charlotte, I love your title and story of how this book came to be! Thanks for the words of advice too and great interview Tara!
June 1, 2021 at 3:07 pm
Aly Kenna
Great advice Charlotte. Good luck on your new book. It sounds like a winner. I am looking forward to reading it.
June 1, 2021 at 3:11 pm
Stephanie Gibeault
Congratulations on your second book! It sounds hilarious. And thanks for the fabulous advice about starting over with a manuscript.
June 1, 2021 at 3:16 pm
mlyablonaolcom
Love the idea of trying lots of changes to get unstuck, and can’t wait to read your book!
June 1, 2021 at 3:45 pm
rosecappelli
Looking forward to reading this, Charlotte! Congratulations.
June 1, 2021 at 3:53 pm
Karan Greene
This sounds like a fun read!! Congratulations!
June 1, 2021 at 4:01 pm
Jilanne Hoffmann
Congrats! Fun cover and what sounds like a fun read!
June 1, 2021 at 4:22 pm
chardixon47
Congratulations Charlotte! Thank you for sharing your process to expand your story and find the humor to delight. I look forward to reading your story 🙂
June 1, 2021 at 4:23 pm
katiemillsgiorgio
How fun! Thanks for sharing!
June 1, 2021 at 4:37 pm
Kassy Keppol
Thank you for sharing.
June 1, 2021 at 4:54 pm
Stacy S. Jensen
This looks like a fun one! Congratulations on this book.
June 1, 2021 at 5:41 pm
candicemarleyconner
Love the cover, Charlotte! Congrats! Humor and heart for the picture book win! And your work has those qualities in abundance!
June 1, 2021 at 5:47 pm
tinamcho
Congrats! Cute premise!
June 1, 2021 at 5:51 pm
Sheri Radovich
Reading this came me a “why didn’t I think of this” moment. Thanks for your post today and spinning different ways to change things up. I can’t wait to tackle two new story ideas.
June 1, 2021 at 6:43 pm
Michele Rietz
Congratulations! (I just read your 12 x 12 author spotlight, so hooray for more Charlotte news! 🙂
This book will be appreciated by SO many 2nd time parents! So happy for your success and thanks for the tip about switching up our works in progress! Apparently good things happen when you do! 🙂
June 1, 2021 at 7:15 pm
Diane O'Neill
This book sounds wonderful–I can’t wait to read it!
June 1, 2021 at 7:16 pm
brennajeanneret
As soon as I saw the title I got excited to read this book! I went straight to my library’s website but couldn’t find it. I am so excited you are offering the opportunity to win a copy 🙂
June 1, 2021 at 7:17 pm
Lynn Becker
Congratulations on what looks to be a completely fun and relatable picture book!
June 1, 2021 at 8:35 pm
Shauntrell Leaks
Ha ha, too cute! Congrats 😊
June 1, 2021 at 8:41 pm
roberta abussi
This is super cute! Congratulations!
June 1, 2021 at 9:34 pm
kathydoherty1
Such an adorable book!
June 1, 2021 at 9:39 pm
Angie
That’s fabulous news! LOL What a fun topic! Congrats!
June 1, 2021 at 9:44 pm
Kathy Crable
This looks super cute!
June 1, 2021 at 9:51 pm
Eileen Mayo
This book looks adorable. I can’t wait to read it- congratulations!!
June 1, 2021 at 9:55 pm
marty
Congrats, Charlotte. I love the ‘how to’ structure and can’t wait to read the ending!
June 1, 2021 at 10:40 pm
pecrosby
I’ve written a similar story from a totally different POV. Kudos to you and blessings!
June 1, 2021 at 11:00 pm
seschipper
Charlotte, Can’t wait to read this book! It may just solve the dilemma of bringing home that new monster oops I mean baby!!! Thanks
Tara, for another great interview! 🙂
June 2, 2021 at 7:17 am
Tanya Konerman
What a fun twist on a common subject! Can’t wait to read it!
June 2, 2021 at 8:02 am
Abby Wooldridge
I loved reading about your journey, Charlotte! Congratulations on your new book! 🙂
June 2, 2021 at 8:03 am
Carrie Mateja
Thanks for the chance! My students would love to read this.
June 2, 2021 at 8:33 am
believableshe83
Oh my gosh… Darling cover!
June 2, 2021 at 9:08 am
JC
As soon as i saw the cover it brought a smile to my face. Its such a real issue that kids go through, so cute that you brought some humor to if. I cant wait to read it. Congrats!
June 2, 2021 at 9:47 am
tpierce
Congratulations, Charlotte! I’m so happy to see another book from you!
June 2, 2021 at 9:48 am
Jessica Pilarski
So fun! Clever take on a timeless topic.
June 2, 2021 at 11:12 am
Darcee A. Freier
I love that the monster is the new baby. Congrats!
June 2, 2021 at 12:13 pm
Margaret Gerhardstein
I really enjoyed reading the “behind-the-scenes” steps that led to your story’s creation.
June 2, 2021 at 2:05 pm
Janet Johnson
Love hearing your process to uncovering the story. It’s not always a straight path, is it?
June 2, 2021 at 2:37 pm
Judy Bryan
Such a fun concept and I LOVE the cover! Congratulations, Charlotte!!
June 2, 2021 at 4:34 pm
Laura Renauld
Congratulations, Charlotte! Love your twist on the new baby/sibling theme. Can’t wait to read it!
June 2, 2021 at 4:46 pm
Lisa Riddiough
Congratulations, Charlotte!! This book sounds like a winner. I love the how to format!!
June 2, 2021 at 4:47 pm
janetfrencksheets
We’ve all wanted to return a family member at some point! This looks like a fun book.
June 2, 2021 at 5:21 pm
Bea Brown
Congratulations! Your book sounds like a fun read.
Thanks for the advice. Off to look at my WIP in light of your suggestions.
June 2, 2021 at 6:59 pm
boardmancamera
Congratulations! What a great story–thank you for writing it!
June 2, 2021 at 8:01 pm
svaisnoras
Looks like such a fun book. Congratulations!
June 2, 2021 at 8:24 pm
nicolesalterbraun
Love this! As an older child who bit my brother when he was brought home…(and then was bit back by my mom) I never did it again! LOL BTW, we’re friends now.
June 2, 2021 at 9:21 pm
yangmommy
Love your pitch, Charlotte! Such a relatable theme to tots! Wishing you all the best in Sept!
June 3, 2021 at 1:33 am
Suzanne Lewis
Really helpful process sharing on how to create a picture book that has heart and humor. Congratulations, Charlotte!
June 3, 2021 at 8:33 am
Julie Kurtz
Sounds like a great book and addresses an issue many families face in an amusing way! Can’t wait to read it!
June 3, 2021 at 11:06 am
chaunceyelephant
Important concept. Love your path to developing a humorous way to tell the story.
June 3, 2021 at 7:07 pm
Jennifer Blanck
What a fun-looking book! And great story behind the story and its journey.
June 4, 2021 at 3:34 pm
Ashley Bankhead
Looks like a fun book! Thanks for sharing the behind the scenes.
June 4, 2021 at 7:27 pm
YauMei Chiang
Congratulations Charlotte. It’s so important to get the heart of the story and humor helps too!
June 5, 2021 at 11:02 am
Lori Menning
What a fun cover and story idea! Can’t wait to read!
June 6, 2021 at 1:39 am
Linda
This looks funny and the cover is adorable.
June 6, 2021 at 1:24 pm
RebeccaTheWriter
So adorable! Congrats!
Rebecca Gardyn Levington
June 7, 2021 at 9:18 am
mjchawk
Such a beautiful book that will be fun (and educational) for all kids and their parents and Grands but especially for those living near the ocean or visit it often. Thank you for giving us this keeper.
June 7, 2021 at 10:24 am
evelynchristensen
Congratulations! Sounds like a really cute story.
June 7, 2021 at 11:20 am
JoLynne Ricker Whalen
This looks like a great book Charlotte, and your pitch is fantastic!
June 7, 2021 at 6:09 pm
Stephen S. Martin
Love the Pitch. Looking forward to reading.
June 8, 2021 at 2:29 pm
Sarah Meade
This book looks adorable! Thanks for sharing your pitch and story. Congratulations, Charlotte!
June 30, 2021 at 4:09 am
betlw
What a cute and creative idea for a story about a sibling reacting to a new baby coming on his/her turf and stealing all of Mom and Dad’s attention. I’ll bet my son felt something like this when we brought his sister home. Kids will identify with this story and find it funny. Just watch out though as one of these little story “readers” might just try the idea. Great post!