by Tammi Sauer
When writing picture books, I like to challenge myself to try new things. With TRUCK, TRUCK, GOOSE!, for example, I wanted to tell a real deal story for the younger crowd that incorporated a wide variety of trucks and as few words as possible. I also loved the idea of framing a story using the familiar kids’ game “Duck, Duck, Goose.”
Three things in particular helped me to create this 45-word story about a silly goose who, unbeknownst to him, creates—then fixes!—a terrific truck traffic jam. Those three things were mentor texts, art notes, and flexibility.
- Mentor Texts:
I studied the books RAIN! and NO DOGS ALLOWED! by Linda Ashman. Linda is a master at creating books with limited text. She even shared the manuscripts for these books on her website, lindaashman.com.
One thing I learned from Linda’s examples was that it was helpful to paginate my limited-text story. Not only did paginating my story allow me to better visualize each spread, but it pushed me to establish the necessary pacing of the story and provide compelling page turns as well.
- Art Notes:
In TRUCK, TRUCK, GOOSE!, the pictures convey the bulk of the storytelling. Many spreads contain only one word. Three spreads are wordless. But here’s the thing. Each spread in this 40-page book is necessary for the story to build to a climax and an eventual resolution. This means Zoe Waring, the oh-so-awesome illustrator, had to present a truckload of information in her art.
Typically, I only include a few art notes in my manuscripts. This was not the case withTRUCK, TRUCK, GOOSE! In my notes, I had to share what was not readily obvious in the text…which was A LOT.
These are the original opening spreads for TRUCK, TRUCK, GOOSE! (The art notes are presented in brackets. The text is presented in boldface type.):
End Pages
[A roundabout is filled with bustling traffic. Its central island is a lovely area.]
Title Page
[Goose is packing a big picnic lunch for himself. A map shows his intended destination is the center of a roundabout. It looks like the perfect spot for a picnic.]
4-5
[At roundabout.]
Truck . . . [pickup truck]
6-7
Truck . . . [dump truck]
Truck . . . [mixing truck]
8-9
GOOSE!
[Goose interrupts the flow of things to get to the center of the roundabout. He’s holding a picnic blanket, umbrella, goose crossing sign, etc. He has so much stuff he can’t carry it all at once.]
- Flexibility:
After Zoe completed the first couple of rounds of sketches, it was obvious that some things weren’t quite working. Jill Davis, the editor, Rachel Zegar, the art director, Zoe, and I did lots of brainstorming to make this seemingly simple story less complicated.
One suggestion I made, for example, was to set up the story a bit more specifically in the very beginning. Now, before we even see the first truck, we see Goose holding a to-do list.
This is the new text addition:
PICNIC TO-DO LIST:
Choose picnic spot.
Pack a big lunch.
Take everything I need.
Not only does this addition clearly let us know what Goose’s goal is from the start, but we know a little bit about his personality right away, too. He’s a guy who tends to go a little overboard. The art shows that he packs everything from bananas to a swim floatie to a giant red piano for his picnic that takes place just a few feet from his house.
TRUCK, TRUCK, GOOSE! sold in a two-book deal to HarperCollins. Goose and company return for more mayhem next summer in the companion book, GO FISH!
Tammi Sauer is a full time children’s book author who presents at schools and conferences across the nation. She has sold 29 picture books to major publishing houses including Disney*Hyperion, HarperCollins, Houghton Mifflin Harcourt, Penguin Random House, Simon & Schuster, and Sterling. Tammi and her family live in Edmond, Oklahoma, with one dog, two geckos, and a tank full of random fish. She wants you to know that no geese were harmed in the making of this book. Visit herr at tammisauer.com.
Tammi is giving away a copy of TRUCK, TRUCK, GOOSE! to one lucky duck commenter.
Leave a comment below to enter. A random winner will be selected in about two weeks.
Good duck! (Err, LUCK!)
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August 17, 2017 at 10:53 am
danielledufayet
I already read this fabulous book! Great title, concept, story and adorable illustrations. Love the red glasses. Congrats on another winner!
August 17, 2017 at 5:43 pm
tammisauer
Thanks so much, Danielle! I hope EVERYONE feels the same way. 🙂
August 17, 2017 at 10:54 am
Melanie Ellsworth
What a great story idea, Tammi! And it’s always interesting to see how authors use art notes. Looking forward to reading Truck, Truck, Goose!
August 17, 2017 at 5:43 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Melanie!
August 17, 2017 at 10:57 am
Anita
Congrats, looks so fun!
August 17, 2017 at 5:43 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Anita!
August 17, 2017 at 10:58 am
Jen Bagan
Love your explanation of how this book came to be! Thanks for sharing – looks adorable!
August 17, 2017 at 5:43 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Jen!
August 17, 2017 at 10:59 am
Claire W Bobrow
This is such a clever concept! I really appreciated Tammi’s explanantion of how she constructed a story with few words, but more art notes (without going overboard on the notes). Very instructive! The book looks awesome. Congrats!
August 17, 2017 at 5:44 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Claire!
August 17, 2017 at 11:00 am
fspoesy
Great info on the use of artist notes in the real world. Also, I’ve already bookmarked Linda Ashman’s website. It sounds like a great resource. Thanks!
August 17, 2017 at 5:44 pm
tammisauer
Thanks! You will LOVE Linda’s site. 🙂
August 17, 2017 at 11:04 am
Sylvia Mary Grech
Congrats on the book Tammi! Looks like a fun read!
August 17, 2017 at 5:44 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Sylvia!
August 17, 2017 at 11:05 am
Barbara Senenman
Fabulous and timely. I was wondering how to write a manuscript with a few words when you’re not the artist, but you know the story is mostly in the art. TRUCK, TRUCK GOOSE SOUNDS cute. Can’t wait to read it.
August 17, 2017 at 5:45 pm
tammisauer
Yay! Best of luck with your ms. 🙂
August 17, 2017 at 11:07 am
Viviane Elbee
That looks like such an awesome book – I can’t wait to read it! Than you Tammi Sauer for sharing your process!
August 17, 2017 at 5:45 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Viviane!
August 17, 2017 at 11:08 am
Claire Lordon (@ClaireLordon)
Loved hearing about the process for this book. Congratulations!
August 17, 2017 at 5:45 pm
tammisauer
Thanks so much, Claire!
August 17, 2017 at 11:11 am
linda staszak
This book sounds wonderful–can’t wait to get my hands on it. Thanks for sharing the creative process!
August 17, 2017 at 5:46 pm
tammisauer
Yay! Thanks, Linda. 🙂
August 17, 2017 at 11:14 am
katrinamoorebooks
Thanks for sharing your process with this one, Tammi! I’m always curious about the behind the scenes. You’re an inspiration 🙂
August 17, 2017 at 5:47 pm
tammisauer
Glad this was of some help to you!
August 17, 2017 at 11:17 am
Penny
Thanks so much for sharing your process with us. I know my boys would have loved this at that age.
August 17, 2017 at 5:47 pm
tammisauer
Yay! I can’t wait for some little kiddos to connect with this book.
August 17, 2017 at 5:49 pm
tammisauer
I can’t wait for some kiddos to connect with this book!
August 17, 2017 at 11:20 am
Wendi Silvano
It’s always so helpful to see how different books come together. Thanks for sharing!
August 17, 2017 at 5:53 pm
tammisauer
Glad to help!
August 17, 2017 at 11:27 am
Katelyn Thomas
What a great description of the writing process for a book with very few words!
August 17, 2017 at 5:53 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Katelyn!
August 17, 2017 at 11:30 am
Sue Fritz
Thank you for sharing your manuscript pages. It was interesting to see how your book came together.
August 17, 2017 at 5:54 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Sue!
August 17, 2017 at 11:33 am
Valarie giogas
I love the behind the scenes glimpse into book creation. Can’t wait to get my hands on this one.
August 17, 2017 at 5:54 pm
tammisauer
Yay! I hope you love it. 🙂
August 17, 2017 at 11:39 am
Lindsay Robinson
Thanks for the insight on the creative process that resulted in such a fun book!
August 17, 2017 at 5:54 pm
tammisauer
🙂
August 17, 2017 at 11:40 am
Lori Alexander
Love this concept! Thanks for a peek into the process. Congrats!
August 17, 2017 at 5:55 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Lori!
August 17, 2017 at 11:44 am
carole calladine
Brilliant! Duck, Duck, Goose becomes Truck, Truck, Goose.
August 17, 2017 at 5:55 pm
tammisauer
Yes. 🙂
August 17, 2017 at 11:45 am
shirley301
What a great idea. Thanks for sharing your process.
August 17, 2017 at 5:55 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Shirley!
August 17, 2017 at 11:46 am
Heather
Thank you for sharing how your formatted this book, Tammi. You are always full of good advice for writers.
August 17, 2017 at 5:56 pm
tammisauer
Oh, good! I’m glad you think so. 🙂
August 17, 2017 at 11:53 am
Beth Newhall
What a comical idea! Although the rule of thumb is to minimize illustrator notes, it’s helpful to see an example of the very effective exception.
August 17, 2017 at 5:56 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Beth!
August 17, 2017 at 11:53 am
caroliverson
Great info. Lots of food for thought. Thanks.
August 17, 2017 at 5:56 pm
tammisauer
You’re welcome. 🙂
August 17, 2017 at 11:56 am
expressdog
Thanks for sharing your process, Tammi! I love your books. And thanks to Tara for showcasing this creative & fun book! I can’t wait to get a copy for my little boys.
August 17, 2017 at 5:57 pm
tammisauer
Yay! I hope your little guys love it!
August 17, 2017 at 12:00 pm
Wendy
This looks like another adorable book! Congratulations, Tammi. Thanks for sharing the news, Tara. 🙂
August 17, 2017 at 5:57 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Wendy!
August 17, 2017 at 12:02 pm
Sherri Rivers
Well, I never. Oh, how clever! This book sounds utterly awesome.
August 17, 2017 at 5:57 pm
tammisauer
I like how you think, Sherri! 🙂
August 17, 2017 at 12:04 pm
Sue Heavenrich
What fun! Always helpful to hear about an author’s process. Thanks for sharing, Tammi.
August 17, 2017 at 5:58 pm
tammisauer
You’re welcome, Sue!
August 17, 2017 at 12:20 pm
Michelle Andersen
I love this idea. And I really appreciate reading how this story developed. Thanks for sharing.
August 17, 2017 at 5:58 pm
tammisauer
You’re welcome, Michelle!
August 17, 2017 at 12:25 pm
C.L. Murphy
Your books are always so fun, Tammi! I am in awe of just how clever you are. 😀
August 17, 2017 at 5:58 pm
tammisauer
I’m so glad you enjoy my books!
August 17, 2017 at 12:32 pm
Donna Gwinnell Lambo-Weidner
What FUN! Thanks for sharing your process. You are always extremely inspiring.
August 17, 2017 at 5:59 pm
tammisauer
I’m glad. Yay!
August 17, 2017 at 12:33 pm
Poupette Smith
Simple and cute concept and always very helpful to read about an author’s process. (Love Linda Ashman’s Nuts and Bolts, too.)
August 17, 2017 at 5:59 pm
tammisauer
Best. Picture. Book. Writing. Resource. Ever.
August 17, 2017 at 12:37 pm
Judy Sobanski
Love your books, Tammi. This one looks so fun! Thanks for sharing your process in writing a ms with minimal text. Very helpful!
August 17, 2017 at 6:00 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Judy!
August 17, 2017 at 12:39 pm
Deb Lund (@deblund)
Clever, clever… Thank you for sharing your process!
August 17, 2017 at 6:00 pm
tammisauer
You’re welcome, Deb. 🙂
August 17, 2017 at 12:48 pm
Barbara Lowell
Tara, thank you for the post. Tammi is such a giving person. She is always ready to share what she has learned about writing. And that’s a lot!
August 17, 2017 at 6:00 pm
tammisauer
You are the nicest, Barbara Lowell. 🙂
August 17, 2017 at 12:51 pm
Sheila Wipperman
Clever, cute and fun idea! A must read! Thanks for sharing!
August 17, 2017 at 6:01 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Sheila!
August 17, 2017 at 12:53 pm
LaurenKerstein
Wow! It was so helpful to see your first few page spreads and subsequent revisions! Thank you!
August 17, 2017 at 6:01 pm
tammisauer
You’re welcome, Lauren!
August 17, 2017 at 12:57 pm
Donna L Martin
Congrats Tammi for another winning story! Can’t wait to read it and thank you Tara for always having your thumb on the pulse of the latest picture book news…
Donna L Martin
August 17, 2017 at 6:01 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Donna!
August 17, 2017 at 1:08 pm
Cathy Biggerstaff
This book sounds delightful, Tammi. I hope I’m the lucky goose who wins.
August 17, 2017 at 6:01 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Cathy!
August 17, 2017 at 1:09 pm
rbkrackeler
love reading about process-thanks tammi!
August 17, 2017 at 6:02 pm
tammisauer
You’re welcome!
August 17, 2017 at 1:17 pm
Sandy
What a delightful and original story!
August 17, 2017 at 6:02 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Sandy!
August 17, 2017 at 1:21 pm
Gloria
Fabuous idea and I’m so glad to know that you can write a short text story with art notes and not have to be both author and illustrator.
August 17, 2017 at 6:04 pm
tammisauer
Sudipta Bardhan-Quallen and David LaRochelle have also written short text pbs. Check them out!
August 17, 2017 at 1:32 pm
Jane Hawkins
Tammi, Another cute book to look at and to read. Thank you for telling us your process. Very helpful.
August 17, 2017 at 1:38 pm
Lindsay Lombar Leslie
Creative concept!
August 17, 2017 at 6:04 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Lindsay!
August 17, 2017 at 1:42 pm
Kelly Rice Schmitt
This is such a clever idea, yet again, from Tammi Sauer. You never cease to amaze me with your ability to twist the familiar into something fun and new. Thank you for sharing your process. This is very insightful.
August 17, 2017 at 6:05 pm
tammisauer
Thanks so much, Kelly!
August 17, 2017 at 1:47 pm
Kidlit Tidbits (@KidlitTidbits)
I’m all excited now thinking about what Go Fish! will be like!
August 17, 2017 at 6:05 pm
tammisauer
Ha! I think it comes out next May. 🙂
August 17, 2017 at 6:18 pm
expressdog
Hi Tara,
I need your help. When I left a comment on your Tammi Sauer post about Truck Truck Goose, I Inadvertently clicked to receive all the comments in email. Can you remove that for me? My inbox is inundated with all the comments, & I can’t catch up.
Thanks so much! Genetta Adair (WordPress username of expressdog)
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August 17, 2017 at 2:14 pm
Kim MacPherson
Wow! Thanks for sharing these great thoughts– love to see the revision process at work! Can’t wait to read this one!
August 17, 2017 at 6:05 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Kim!
August 17, 2017 at 2:15 pm
Gregory E Bray
My son loves, Caring For Your Lion. This looks like another winner. Thanks for the great post.
August 17, 2017 at 6:06 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Gregory!
August 17, 2017 at 2:15 pm
Danielle Hammelef
I’m trying to study as many picture books as possible before trying to write my idea. I enjoyed reading about your process and how you limited the word count. I hope to study your books as well. Thank you so much for sharing!
August 17, 2017 at 6:06 pm
tammisauer
Happy reading!
August 17, 2017 at 2:15 pm
Lisa Ventrella
Amazing that you can tell a whole story in only 45 words!
August 17, 2017 at 6:06 pm
tammisauer
It was such a fun challenge! When I sold the book, there were only 29 words. 🙂
August 17, 2017 at 2:22 pm
Megan Walvoord
How cool! Can’t wait to buy for my littles! It’s neat to see such an accomplished author try something new to them.
August 17, 2017 at 6:07 pm
tammisauer
Yay! I’d love to see a pic of your kids with the book! 🙂
August 17, 2017 at 2:26 pm
Virginia Law Manning
This looks adorable! I can’t wait to read it! Could be a cute companion book to read with MAKE WAY FOR DUCKLINGS! or DUCK, DUCK, MOOSE!
August 17, 2017 at 6:08 pm
tammisauer
Yes! 🙂
August 17, 2017 at 2:27 pm
J.D. Silverwood
Thank you, Tammi, for all your excellent, selfless, advice. I love these inside looks comparing a manuscript to the finished book.
August 17, 2017 at 6:08 pm
tammisauer
You’re very welcome. 🙂
August 17, 2017 at 2:35 pm
Judy Cooper
One word for this book…..brilliant!
August 17, 2017 at 6:09 pm
tammisauer
I like how you think!
August 17, 2017 at 2:41 pm
Kathy Doherty
Thanks, Tammi, for being such an inspiration! I love Goose already!
August 17, 2017 at 6:09 pm
tammisauer
Yay!
August 17, 2017 at 2:51 pm
Laura Purdie Salas
Tammi, I always love the behind the scenes peeks into your books. Thanks for sharing!
August 17, 2017 at 6:09 pm
tammisauer
You’re welcome, Laura!
August 17, 2017 at 3:05 pm
Angel
This post came along at the right time. I had an idea for a picture book with a low word count and I had no idea how to get my ideas across. Can’t wait to read the book!
August 17, 2017 at 6:10 pm
tammisauer
Ooh! Yes, studying other books really helped me in writing mine. Good luck!
August 17, 2017 at 3:40 pm
Nora L'Heureux
This was so helpful to hear how you conveyed your intentions about a mostly illustrated book to all involved in the process. I would also like to learn how a writer/illustrator introduces a book like this at a conference or to an agent. Sounds like a great book. Can’t wait to read and view it!
August 17, 2017 at 6:10 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Nora!
August 17, 2017 at 3:41 pm
aliciaminor
It’s a real challenge to come up with a few words in picture books-the lesser, the better. Another breakthrough for you in the world of picture books. Congrats and I wish you more books to come.
August 17, 2017 at 6:11 pm
tammisauer
Thanks so much, Alicia!
August 17, 2017 at 3:51 pm
Prairie Garden Girl
What a bright, colorful and delightful book. Thank you, Tammi for sharing your research, mentor texts, and process.
~Suzy Leopold
August 17, 2017 at 6:11 pm
tammisauer
You’re welcome, Suzy!
August 17, 2017 at 3:53 pm
Rosie Russell
How cute! Thanks for sharing your sweet story! Congratulations on your book Tammi Sauer and Zoey Waring!
Rosie
August 17, 2017 at 6:11 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Rosie!
August 17, 2017 at 3:57 pm
debmeyercreative
Pick. Pick. Deb! 😄 Adorable book as usual, Tammi!!
August 17, 2017 at 6:12 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Deb!
August 17, 2017 at 4:06 pm
candicewolff
Tammi Sauer is just plain awesome sauce. I’ve used some of her books as mentor texts for my stories as well! It’s helpful to see how revisions can continue even after getting a manuscript accepted because the text and art have to tell two different halves of a whole. Thank you for sharing more about your creative process, Tammi! I love learning from you!
August 17, 2017 at 6:12 pm
tammisauer
You’re welcome, Candice!
August 17, 2017 at 4:09 pm
Meghan Burch
Another great one from Tammi! Thanks for sharing.
August 17, 2017 at 6:13 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Meghan. 🙂
August 17, 2017 at 4:43 pm
betlw
What a delightful idea and with such cute pictures. Congrats on its publication!
August 17, 2017 at 6:13 pm
tammisauer
Thank you! 🙂
August 17, 2017 at 5:13 pm
Christine
So fun and thank you for sharing your process!
August 17, 2017 at 6:13 pm
tammisauer
You’re welcome, Christine!
August 17, 2017 at 6:12 pm
Sharon
A true sign of combined talent. An author that uses so few words must have an awesome illustrator and Tammi, you found that in Zoey. Congratulations to you both.
August 17, 2017 at 6:13 pm
tammisauer
I sure did! Thank you. 🙂
August 17, 2017 at 7:29 pm
Kerry Aradhya
Looks like such a fun book. And always great to see some of the process. Congratulations!!
August 20, 2017 at 8:34 am
tammisauer
Thanks, Kerry!
August 17, 2017 at 7:45 pm
Elaine Kiely Kearns
Thanks so much for sharing your process with us, Tammi. You truly are a superstar.
August 17, 2017 at 7:46 pm
Elaine Kiely Kearns
It would be wrong to write PICK ME! PICK ME! PICK ME! right? I thought so. 😀
August 20, 2017 at 8:35 am
tammisauer
Nah. 🙂
August 17, 2017 at 9:07 pm
Marty Bellis
Love this post! So interesting to see your process. Thanks and congrats on a great new PB.
August 20, 2017 at 8:35 am
tammisauer
Thanks, Marty!
August 17, 2017 at 9:08 pm
Brenda Maier
Another brilliant book from your bottomless creative brain. I love that you try new things, Tammi!
August 20, 2017 at 8:35 am
tammisauer
Thanks, Brenda! I’m looking forward to YOUR book with Zoe. 🙂
August 17, 2017 at 9:17 pm
karinlarson
Terrific post, Tammi. Thank you! It is great to read about the teamwork involved and how it all played out in your book.
August 20, 2017 at 8:36 am
tammisauer
Thanks, Karin!
August 17, 2017 at 9:37 pm
seschipper
Thank, thank, you!!! Great post!
August 20, 2017 at 8:36 am
tammisauer
Thanks. 🙂
August 17, 2017 at 9:43 pm
Jennifer Rumberger
Thanks for sharing an inside look, Tammi! Always so helpful! 🙂
August 20, 2017 at 8:36 am
tammisauer
Thanks, Jennifer!
August 17, 2017 at 10:21 pm
michelle gajda
My students would love a copy of this book to add to our classroom library! Thanks for the opportunity!
August 20, 2017 at 8:37 am
tammisauer
You’re welcome. 🙂
August 17, 2017 at 11:14 pm
Sheri Dillard
Thanks for sharing, Tammi! I always learn a lot from your posts!
August 20, 2017 at 8:37 am
tammisauer
Thanks, Sheri!
August 17, 2017 at 11:26 pm
Juliana Lee
Truck Truck Goose is already on my holds list… now I’ve added Go Fish to my long growing list!
August 20, 2017 at 8:37 am
tammisauer
Woo! 🙂
August 18, 2017 at 12:33 am
Leah Leonard
What a fun story!
August 20, 2017 at 8:38 am
tammisauer
Thanks, Leah!
August 18, 2017 at 1:55 am
Myrna Foster
Thanks for sharing how your story came together! I can’t wait to read it.
August 20, 2017 at 8:38 am
tammisauer
Thanks, Myrna!
August 18, 2017 at 5:29 am
Melanie Keller
Wonderful story. Can’t wait to read both!!
August 20, 2017 at 8:38 am
tammisauer
Thanks, Melanie!
August 18, 2017 at 9:46 am
Angie
This book looks so adorable! Thank you for walking us through your process. Love the details!
August 20, 2017 at 8:38 am
tammisauer
Thanks, Angie!
August 18, 2017 at 10:36 am
Darcee Freier
Thanks for giving us some of the inside story! Excited to see the book(s, both them)! Congrats to you!
August 20, 2017 at 8:39 am
tammisauer
Thanks, Darcee!
August 18, 2017 at 11:16 am
Judy Bryan
Loved getting a peek inside your process, Tammi. Congratulations to both you and Zoe!!!
August 20, 2017 at 8:39 am
tammisauer
Thanks, Judy! 🙂
August 18, 2017 at 11:25 am
Angela De Groot
Perfect timing for this post! Thanks, Tammi, for sharing your process. I’m busy revising my low worded PB and this is so helpful. I’ll be consulting your and Linda Ashman’s books as mentor texts. And I’ve requested that my library acquire a copy of Trucks, trucks, goose.
August 20, 2017 at 8:39 am
tammisauer
Thanks, Angela! Best of luck with your ms. 🙂
August 18, 2017 at 12:35 pm
sarita f
Love the playful title and the peek into the process of getting thi book made. Congratulations.
August 20, 2017 at 8:40 am
tammisauer
Thanks, Sarita!
August 18, 2017 at 12:43 pm
David McMullin
Thanks for sharing your process. So helpful.
August 20, 2017 at 8:40 am
tammisauer
You’re welcome!
August 18, 2017 at 12:52 pm
Angela Verges
Love this title. Thanks for sharing your process.
August 20, 2017 at 8:40 am
tammisauer
You’re welcome, Angela. 🙂
August 18, 2017 at 1:46 pm
R.J. Koehn
Thank you for sharing how this book was put together. I love it when published authors give us a peak at what the process is like. Also, I look forward to adding this to our Tammi Sauer shelf.
August 20, 2017 at 8:41 am
tammisauer
Thanks, R.J.! I love the idea of a Tammi Sauer shelf. Ha!
August 18, 2017 at 2:00 pm
Alice Fulgione
Thanks for sharing your process. I’m a big fan of your books and can’t wait to read both!
August 20, 2017 at 8:41 am
tammisauer
Thanks, Alice!
August 18, 2017 at 4:02 pm
Ryan Roberts
What a cute idea- love it!
August 20, 2017 at 8:41 am
tammisauer
Thanks, Ryan!
August 18, 2017 at 4:03 pm
Kathy O'Neill
I love the play on the children’s game words! And it sounds over-the- top funny with such an over-the-top character!
August 20, 2017 at 8:42 am
tammisauer
Thanks, Kathy!
August 18, 2017 at 5:26 pm
Beth Anderson
Thank you! It’s always interesting to see how author’s deal with a limited text’s illustrations.
August 20, 2017 at 8:42 am
tammisauer
You’re welcome!
August 18, 2017 at 6:56 pm
Dorothy Wiese
This is an adorable book (words and illustrations). What a great idea! Congratulations! Thanks for sharing.
August 20, 2017 at 8:42 am
tammisauer
Thanks, Dorothy!
August 18, 2017 at 8:11 pm
Gabriele
What a fun book! Thanks for all these wonderful insights: the process of research and creation, the appropriate use of art notes, the editorial/collaboration process. So helpful and inspiring!
August 20, 2017 at 8:43 am
tammisauer
Thanks, Gabriele!
August 19, 2017 at 12:38 am
tinamcho
This is awesome, Tammi! I love the you’re always trying new formats/structures for your pbs!
August 20, 2017 at 8:43 am
tammisauer
Thanks, Tina!
August 19, 2017 at 1:08 am
Keila Dawson
So creative. Can’t wait to read it. Congrats Tammi.
August 20, 2017 at 8:43 am
tammisauer
Thanks, Keila!
August 19, 2017 at 11:29 am
Lynne Marie
More fun coming our way! Can’t wait. Best, Lynne Marie
August 20, 2017 at 8:43 am
tammisauer
Thanks, Lynne Marie!
August 19, 2017 at 5:05 pm
angkunkel
What an adorable concept for a picture book! And thanks for breaking down how you used illo notes to help with a spare text, and your revisions. Illustration notes are always a hot topic, and it’s helpful to hear one person’s approach with a specific manuscript!
August 20, 2017 at 8:44 am
tammisauer
Thank you!
August 19, 2017 at 8:22 pm
Della Ferreri
Looking forward to your new book, Tammi!
Della
August 20, 2017 at 8:44 am
tammisauer
Thanks, Della!
August 19, 2017 at 9:46 pm
Rani Iyer
Thanks, Tammi. I was curious to know if you considered including some animal sounds. Great book!
August 20, 2017 at 8:45 am
tammisauer
I didn’t include them in this book.
August 20, 2017 at 9:58 am
Kelly
Thank you for generously sharing your illustration notes. So helpful!
August 23, 2017 at 1:37 pm
tammisauer
You’re welcome!
August 20, 2017 at 12:35 pm
Christine Pinto
Thanks so much, Tami for sharing how to do art notes. And for the link to Linda Ashman – what a fantastic resource. Thanks for the help with something I’ve been struggling with!
August 23, 2017 at 1:37 pm
tammisauer
You’re very welcome, Christine!
August 20, 2017 at 9:05 pm
Johna Nicole Rossetti
This seems like such a fun book. And, wow, amazing talent to write it in such few words. Cannot wait to read it to my little truck lover!
August 23, 2017 at 1:38 pm
tammisauer
Yay! Thanks, Johna. 🙂
August 21, 2017 at 9:42 am
Kerry Ariail
We love Tammi’s books! Can’t wait to read this one. Thanks for a great post.
August 23, 2017 at 1:38 pm
tammisauer
Thank you, Kerry!
August 21, 2017 at 10:15 am
Amanda Sincavage
What a great post! Thanks for sharing your process Tammi. And the illustrations have so much energy and life in them! Can’t wait to read this one!
August 23, 2017 at 1:38 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Amanda!
August 21, 2017 at 2:09 pm
Jilanne Hoffmann
This book looks quite entertaining, not unlike one of my son’s favorite books, “10 Minutes Till Bedtime.” I admire stories that can be told well in so few words. It’s quite interesting to see how the illustrator is involved in creating the story, and how you—as author— needed to make adjustments along the way. Thanks for sharing your process!
August 23, 2017 at 1:39 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Jilanne!
August 22, 2017 at 11:26 am
Christie Wild
What an awesome concept. I love it!!!!!!
August 23, 2017 at 1:39 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Christie!
August 22, 2017 at 1:19 pm
Carole Swain Stedronsky
Thanks for sharing your process! So creative and so much fun! I appreciated seeing the illustration notes.
August 23, 2017 at 1:39 pm
tammisauer
You’re welcome, Carole. 🙂
August 23, 2017 at 12:09 am
Carol Gordon Ekster
So awesome to see your process. Good luck with this title!
August 23, 2017 at 1:40 pm
tammisauer
Thanks, Carol! 🙂
August 24, 2017 at 8:48 am
Nadine Gamble
Thanks for sharing your manuscript with art notes. It’s great to be able to see how to format them and know that they are ok as long as they are telling a part of the story. My copy is ready to be picked up at the library and looking forward to seeing the whole book. The illustrations are adorable and can’t wait to look through all the details that have been added by Zoe.
August 25, 2017 at 1:44 pm
laura516
Love this clever story idea paired with a fun game reference! Huge fan, Tammi 🙂 Congrats!
August 25, 2017 at 2:24 pm
claireannette1
I can’t wait to read and share Truck, Truck, Goose!
August 27, 2017 at 4:04 pm
Anupama B
I was looking for information on visual blogging for children and came to know so many nuances in this page….extremely interesting stuff, thank you
August 28, 2017 at 5:02 pm
Michelle O'Hara Levin
Such a helpful post. Thanks for the specific examples of how you did the art notes. Can’t wait to read this one and get it in my school’s library!
August 29, 2017 at 5:49 am
Littleville
Wonderful concept –can’t wait to get my hands on it. Nice illustrations.Good job! Visit http://littleville.co.in/ for interesting learning activities for kids.
August 29, 2017 at 5:46 pm
Darshana
I’ve always loved your posts, you always pack it with good writing advice. Look forward to reading this post again once I get a hold of the book. Congrats!
August 30, 2017 at 11:27 am
Lily LaMotte
Thanks for your post. I had wondered how to do a near wordless book and yet convey the story. I’m saving your post for reference.
August 31, 2017 at 2:36 pm
sallymatheny
Loved this post, very helpful.
August 23, 2018 at 11:12 am
jessica shaw
Great advice for writing PBs with low word counts. Seeing the art notes is especially helpful. Tammi knows her stuff, love her books!