I’ve heard some authors talk about how they are inspired to write their stories.
They say their characters talk to them. They have whole conversations with those characters, interviewing them about their name, background, problems and motives.
They also share stories of times these characters high-jacked the story, taking it in an entirely different direction than the author planned. Sometimes that works out, and other times the authors have had to cut uncooperative characters to get their story back on track.
I think that all sounds awesome.
But it’s never happened to me.
I’ve also talked to authors who see pictures in their heads. Their stories unfold in their brains like a movie on the screen.
That’s also very cool.
But it’s never happened to me either.
So where do I get my inspiration?
Ideas for my picture books usually come one of two ways:
1. Snippets of words.
My two upcoming rhyming picture books started when I was busy at my day job and some words popped into my head.
For SHARING THE BREAD: AN OLD-FASHIONED THANKSGIVING STORY (coming in 2015 from Schwartz & Wade), the words I heard were “Mama be a cooking pot, cooking pot.” That was it. I think my initial reaction was “What?”
For WHEREVER YOU GO (coming in 2015 from Little, Brown) I heard “Over a hill, under a bridge, deep in a dale, high on a ridge.” And I had a very similar reaction. “What am I supposed to do with this?”
In both cases, I wrote the words down and emailed them to myself at home where they sat for quite a while. Then, I started playing with them. And working. Because the rest of the books did NOT just pop into my head.
I had no idea SHARING THE BREAD was going to end up as a Thanksgiving story—and it didn’t become that until a late revision. And, I had no idea WHEREVER YOU GO would end up being a story about how the choices we make determine our destination.
But those lines got me writing, which was inspiration enough. And I’ll always be grateful for whatever made them dance through my head.
2. Admiration.
Sometimes, I read a picture book I just adore. One that makes me stare in awe and wish I could produce something even remotely close to its perfection.
And often, I’ll try to do just that. I’m not trying to copy the book I love. But I am trying to capture some part of its essence in another form. THE QUICKEST KID IN CLARKSVILLE (coming from Chronicle) came about after I read Jacqui Robbins’ and Matt Phelan’s THE NEW GIRL… AND ME.
The final books are nothing alike. Jacqui and Matt’s is a modern-day story about a new girl at school who owns an iguana. Mine is set in 1960 and features two girls who idolize Olympic sprinter Wilma Rudolph. But I was inspired by the way Jacqui captured friendship in her book and wanted to see if I could do something similar.
And WHEREVER YOU GO’s style was inspired by the lyricism of Mary Lyn Ray’s and Marla Frazee’s so-wonderful-I-can’t-even-stand-it picture book, STARS.
When I fall in love with a picture book, I’ll spend a lot of time reading and re-reading it. First for fun, then for structure, then for language and plot and pacing and page turns. I may even buy an extra copy to write on. All this soaks into my head and helps my future picture books be better.
It’s kind of like golfers studying a professional’s swing by playing the video in freeze frames and slow motion so they can see every last movement.
I also have to mention my current picture book SOPHIE’S SQUASH (Schwartz & Wade, 2013). It was inspired by a few extremely cute things my daughter did. Then, I added a bunch of stuff that never happened to turn a cute moment into a fully realized story.
Both my methods of inspiration have one thing in common. There’s something that I hear or see that captivates me enough where I want to put in the work to come up with something wonderful of my own.
But I’m going to keep listening for my characters, just in case they decide to get chatty.
Pat started out as a newspaper reporter and wrote about everything from dartball and deer-hunting to diets and decoupage. Then, she joined an insurance company and edited its newsletter and magazine.
Now, she writes insurance information by day and children’s books by night. Her newest release is SOPHIE’S SQUASH, illustrated by Anne Wilsdorf.
Pat has one wonderful husband, two delightful daughters and two pampered cats. She doesn’t watch much TV, but she does love “Glee” and “Chopped.”
You can learn more about Pat by visiting her website at PatZietlowMiller.com or following her on Twitter at @PatZMiller.
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November 7, 2013 at 9:03 am
Suzanne Lieurance
Thanks for sharing. I love learning how other authors get their ideas.
November 7, 2013 at 9:03 am
Cindy Cornwall
I love the idea of buying an extra copy of a book to write in (though my library background cringes a bit at the thought!). And I enjoy hearing how writers come to their ideas. For some it’s visual, some auditory, or just random things popping into their heads. Normally, I don’t get the random phrase as Pat mentioned, but I did recently and it’s the same reaction: “What am I going to do with that?”. Thanks for your insight, Pat.
November 7, 2013 at 9:07 am
Lynn A. Davidson
This is an enjoyable walk through your creative process. I like how you draw from the essence of other stories to build something new. I’m often stirred by books I adore, too.
What I never thought of doing was buying a second copy of a book you like so you can write in it. That’s a marvellous idea, and shows me another depth of dipping into one’s creative juices to allow them to expand.
I can relate to what you said about a few words coming to you which you are left to work with on your own. That happens to me, and sometimes once I have that little bit on paper the rest tumbles out.
Amazing … this writing adventure!
Thanks for a great post. 🙂
November 7, 2013 at 9:07 am
Dee Almond
I, too, have strange little rhymes that pop into my head from time to time. It’s good to know I’m not alone. It’s also good to hear how someone else turns those little rhymes into accomplishments. I’m inspired!
November 7, 2013 at 9:08 am
Christy Mihaly
What a great post, thanks for sharing your tales of when, where, and how inspiration may strike! But as you also say, the hard work really makes the story happen. I just checked out Sophie’s Squash online — it looks awesome! Can’t wait to read that one (whether or not I buy an extra to mark it up!).
November 7, 2013 at 9:09 am
lindamartinandersen
A few words coming to you and your recognition that they had potential made it all happen.
November 7, 2013 at 9:09 am
Jacqueline Adams
That’s a great illustration about golfers studying a video in slow motion. And I really liked SOPHIE”S SQUASH, so I’m glad to hear a little about how the idea developed!
November 7, 2013 at 9:10 am
Alexa Kaufhold
Fantastic post and some great strategies to take away, Pat. We were the first patrons to check out Sophie from our library! My favorite part was, “We always hoped she’d like vegetables.” Lovely story and can’t wait to see more.
November 7, 2013 at 9:11 am
Jenn DesAutels
I loved the New Girl…and Me also. I look forward to writing a similar article (on some unknown future date), about how your encouragement and real-life experience with writing inspired me to create stories as well. Thank you so much for sharing them and brava for your upcoming publications! =)
November 7, 2013 at 9:13 am
creationsbymit
This is not the first blog I have seen Sophie’s Squash mentioned! Congratulations! It looks adorable!!! I also am inspired by children’s books I admire. The style of the illustrations usually differs greatly from mine, but I think that is part of the appeal. I liked reading that you are inspired in the same way!
November 7, 2013 at 9:13 am
Courtenay Schurman
I love the idea of looking at a favorite book I love and trying to figure out exactly why, the essence of what makes it work for me, and working that into a current idea. On the flip side, looking at one I DO NOT love and trying to analyze it for why someone published it — could be equally valuable! Thanks!
November 7, 2013 at 9:15 am
emazza1217
Thank you for sharing and for your use of ethnic characters and not straight up vanilla. I hope to do that in my books by showcasing the many skin tones of Puerto Rico. (my ethnic heritage)
November 7, 2013 at 9:18 am
Cathy Ballou Mealey
I’m a HUGE fan of Sophie’s Squash.
Think of you every time I go grocery shopping!!
November 7, 2013 at 9:20 am
heatherj
Thanks for the post! I often get phrases or sentences that pop into my head too.
November 7, 2013 at 9:21 am
Melanie Ellsworth
Pat, my four-year-old daughter and I love SOPHIE’S SQUASH – thank you for writing that beautiful (and funny) book! Bits of words or titles that pop into my head are my main source of writing inspiration too. I’m grateful for the reminder to find and use mentor texts to help me improve my own writing; I think I’ll start with SOPHIE’S SQUASH!
November 7, 2013 at 9:22 am
patrickguindon
What a great post. Pat has a soothing flow to her writing. Who knew that reading a blog post would make me feel more in control of my own ideas? (I didn’t! They usually make me feel wild with non-diagnosed ADHD)
November 7, 2013 at 9:23 am
Carla Burke
Awesome interview!
November 7, 2013 at 9:25 am
lindaschueler
I need to study texts I admire too more often. Thanks for the reminder.
November 7, 2013 at 9:25 am
Cathy C. Hall
I often start with a phrase that gets stuck in my head–and I wonder about those folks who hear the voices of their characters. I mean, maybe they’re just hearing voices. 🙂
November 7, 2013 at 9:26 am
Donna L. Sadd
Great post, Pat. I recently read an author’s post where she said it was okay to ‘piggy back’ a story idea off a book that one liked. That idea didn’t sit with me at all. Sometimes a story will hit me over the head and I try to do what you say here, and put my finger on the story’s essence instead.
November 7, 2013 at 9:27 am
mona861
“snippets of words”-love it! Write them as they pop!
Thanks for another interesting interview.
November 7, 2013 at 9:28 am
Pam Brunskill (@PamBrunskill)
So refreshing to hear another writer who really has to WORK hard to get their stories out! Congrats on SOPHIE’S SQUASH and your upcoming books. Thanks for sharing about your process!
November 7, 2013 at 9:29 am
Wendy Greenley
Will hug the butternut squash tonight before I take a knife to it! (is that creepy?)
November 7, 2013 at 5:10 pm
SevenAcreSky
Yes Wendy…especially to a shivering squash.
November 7, 2013 at 9:32 am
Therese Nagi
Pat enjoyed reading how you emailed “snippets of words” to yourself. You showed us how you use your inspiration. Like you certain picture books I love and reread them many times. Have never thought of buying two and using one to write in the margins.
November 7, 2013 at 9:32 am
katmaz2012
Last night I had just put Sophie’s Squash on my list to look for in the library and this morning I learned more about the author! Thank you so much for the inspiration.
November 7, 2013 at 9:34 am
C.L. Murphy
Your books are inspiring and so is your process!
November 7, 2013 at 9:36 am
Lori Dubbin
I also hear strange word arrangements that pop into my head and I have the same reaction, “What do I do with that?” I write them down and hope I can take them somewhere exciting. I really love your golf swing analogy and have been reading and re-reading many picture books at the library (and also the ones I have at home) in order to see the story structure and get a better idea of good pacing and page turning. Thanks for your insight and for confirming this is a helpful exercise. Congratulations on “Sophie’s Squash!”
November 7, 2013 at 9:39 am
rlkurstedt
Lovely, Thanks for sharing. Sophie’s Squash is wonderful.
November 7, 2013 at 9:42 am
Jill Siegel
Interesting tips. Thank you!
November 7, 2013 at 9:43 am
Susan Cabael
Read for:
1. Fun
2. Structure
3. Language
4. Plot
5. Pacing
6. Page turns
I’ve got lots of studying to do, the best kind of research I can imagine 🙂
November 7, 2013 at 9:44 am
Anne Bielby
Inspiration comes in whispers and not the same for every one! Thanks for the reminder.
November 7, 2013 at 9:45 am
fashionistaphilly.tumblr.org
Can I just say Pat you are spot on!!!! Finding a picture book you love is soooo important, but studying it carefully, breaking down the construction and pacing is also just as important. Thank you SOOOOOOOO much for this post. It is a great awakening of the giant….
November 7, 2013 at 9:46 am
Stacy S. Jensen
We loved reading Sophie and I enjoyed this post on your process. Thanks for sharing. I look forward to your future books.
November 7, 2013 at 9:50 am
Andria
Loved hearing about your process and Sophie’s Squash is simply wonderful!
November 7, 2013 at 9:50 am
kirsticall
Thanks for the fantastic post. I’m going to have to read Sophie’s Squash! I have a five year old Sophie at home who will love it!
November 7, 2013 at 9:52 am
Catherine Johnson
❤ Stars I too get most of my ideas from phrases and great books. On the right path then, thanks!
November 7, 2013 at 10:01 am
Sue Poduska
Thanks, Pat. Even those of us who talk to our characters end up with some reticent characters. Love your approach!
November 7, 2013 at 10:01 am
Laura Renauld
Thanks for the inspiration. Sophie’s Squash is now on my library list!
November 7, 2013 at 10:06 am
Tatiana Escallon
Yes, ideas everywhere, we just need to find them, inspiring, thanks!
November 7, 2013 at 10:07 am
Deirdre Sheridan Englehart
Pat, I think I am more like you… I can relate. I love the idea aobut studying books!!
November 7, 2013 at 10:09 am
City Sights for Kids
I use my phone’s voice memo app to record phrases, rhymes, and ideas as they occur to me while driving. I also handwrite the text of books that really stand out to me so I can explore the author’s structure, language, plot and pacing. I often pick up on elements that escaped me during the reading. Thanks for the inspiring post Pat!
November 7, 2013 at 10:10 am
Sandie Sing
What an interesting process. Fun, structure,language and plot, pacing and page turns. Wow! I grateful for your wonderful share with us. Thanks for the amazing tips!
November 7, 2013 at 10:11 am
Joanne Roberts
Your favorite books are some of my favorite books. I am sure Sharing the Bread and Wherever you go will be added to that list, but how am I to wait until 2015???!!
Thanks for the reminder that all these PiBo snippets can be useful someday.
November 7, 2013 at 10:12 am
Laura Lowman Murray
Pat, thank you for such a wonderful post! I loved your specific references to the PBs you loved. Some I have seen and others I will have to check out. I do the same thing, and have been trying to figure out how to capture the essence and feeling from one of my favorites called “Fox and the Fall Leaves.” This time of year always brings me back to this sweet story. And it’s always great to know that each writer goes about getting ideas and nurturing them in different ways – and that’s OKAY :).
November 7, 2013 at 10:12 am
Heather Hatch
Thank you. My husbans also sees “movie scenes”. Me, more like you. Just wordplay snippets that have to be built into something. Also appreciate the tips that pop up in this comment community!
November 7, 2013 at 10:15 am
Sandie Sing
Oops, my IPad deleted “am” between I and grateful.
November 7, 2013 at 10:15 am
cherylsec
I found this post so helpful and inspiring. Thank you for sharing!
November 7, 2013 at 10:18 am
Nancy Churnin
Pat, thanks for this great post. We had a post earlier that told us to “Look.” I think it’s great that you’re reminding us to “Listen.” I also enjoy hearing about your admiration for the work of other writers and how much you learn from them. We all have so much to learn from each other. Thanks for sharing your inspiration and knowledge.
November 7, 2013 at 10:19 am
Tracy Molitors
I love the golf swing analogy for analyzing favorite books. I’m going to go dig some out now!
November 7, 2013 at 10:19 am
storyfairy
I tend to get more inspiration from children’s books I don’t like (or at least think could be better), but I’d like to try rereading books I like a bunch of times like you do. That might give me inspiration, too.
November 7, 2013 at 10:20 am
Marty McCormick
Bless you, gal! It’s as though you were speaking directly to me and my experience. Will keep working on those snippets of words that come to me out of the blue, and definitely spend more time rereading the PBs that I feel are (YES!) “so-wonderful-I-can’t-even-stand-it.” Best advice yet. You’ve gained a fan, and a reader.
November 7, 2013 at 10:20 am
svaisnoras
Your post is wonderful. I feel the same way when I read pictures books that knock my socks off. You have written those kind of books…congratulations and thanks for the inspiration.
November 7, 2013 at 10:20 am
Theanna
Thank you for the insight and inspiration. I love seeing how others find their muse. It’s amazing how a simple phrase can inspire us. Also, great PB references. Thanks again!
November 7, 2013 at 10:22 am
Vikk Simmons
I’m with you when it comes to those movies in the mind. Never happens. I have had one character talk to me loud enough that he could dictate the opening, though. Love the word snippets. Great post.
November 7, 2013 at 10:24 am
Sheri Roloff
My characters never talk to me either! I really liked your take on inspiration. Thanks for sharing!
November 7, 2013 at 10:25 am
Lori Alexander
Thanks for sharing your process, Pat. My kids and I love Sophie’s Squash!
November 7, 2013 at 10:29 am
Kristin Gray
Lovely post, Pat. Thanks so much! You know I’m crazy about Sophie’s Squash. Looking forward to your new titles, too. Congratulations.
November 7, 2013 at 10:33 am
Juliana Lee
Tara, you’ve done a great job choosing authors to feature in your daily posts. Thanks so much. I especially enjoyed today’s article by Pat.
November 7, 2013 at 10:34 am
Roberta Rivera Illustrations
Great interview and thank you, Pat for sharing. Look forward to your new book. 🙂
November 7, 2013 at 10:37 am
Tracey M. Cox
LOVE this post too! I will hear a strange saying or name and think… “What?” and a-googling I will go.
November 7, 2013 at 10:39 am
Sandy Perlic
Thanks for this post! I also work mainly with snippets of words or ideas until they grow into full-fledged stories. Sophie’s Squash is a great, tender book. I’ll be on the lookout for your future books.
November 7, 2013 at 10:39 am
Beverly Snedecor
This is a great list of things to do… I love that you study books you love. Thank you!
November 7, 2013 at 10:39 am
kathalsey
“Snippets of words” is the way I work, too. I am glad to hear a writer admit that characters don’t speak or magically appear and steer the story! Makes me feel better. Thanks for sharing your process.
November 7, 2013 at 10:44 am
Jewel Sample
While reading your mind evoking post I thought about how writers have written stories spinning off of what I call “hole” adventure stories like Alice in Wonderland and The Very Hungary Caterpillar by Eric Carle…books written about a mouse going through holes and the hole was through the page, which makes for a great page turner and extends the readers learning. Using one universally common theme or natural phenomena like animals digging holes makes for a great adventure…thank you.
November 7, 2013 at 10:50 am
theitaliancob
Funnily enough it happened to me before I read this post, I got an idea from reading a picture book today.
November 7, 2013 at 10:52 am
jenswan90
Awesome post! Very inspirational
November 7, 2013 at 10:55 am
Pat Zietlow Miller
Thanks for all your comments everyone! I really appreciate them. And, thanks to Tara for inviting me to paricipate.
November 7, 2013 at 10:56 am
julie rowan zoch
Write ON a book? Ahhh! Okay, now I’m over it! Love your tips, Pat!
November 7, 2013 at 10:56 am
Juliet Clare Bell
Thank you! This is very similar to the way I come up with ideas. Less romantic than the being spoken to, but fun nonetheless. Clare.
November 7, 2013 at 11:02 am
mikiiki
This is a terrific post. I find it really helpful to read how you are inspired and how you study your favorite pic bks to develop your own. I also appreciate the book recommendations. I need to get to some library stacks and bookstores in the near future!
November 7, 2013 at 11:05 am
Patricia A Miller
Thanks for sharing how you come up with your ideas, Pat. I, too, enjoy taking apart a beloved picture book to see the structure, pacing, wording, etc. Happy writing!
November 7, 2013 at 11:05 am
miki
Thanks for sharing your inspired work/study method and for some more books for me to look up. I really need to get to some library stacks and bookstores soon!
November 7, 2013 at 11:12 am
Ashley Bankhead
Fantastic post. Thank you for sharing. You gave such useful information and advice.
November 7, 2013 at 11:22 am
danielledufayet
love this post. I can so relate. And I love Sophie’s Squash. Wishing you continued success!
November 7, 2013 at 11:29 am
Heather Gale
I love how you read for pure enjoyment, then deconstruct the book! That alone takes sheer willpower!! I tried it and half-way through realize I’m back to reading the story for pleasure.
November 7, 2013 at 11:31 am
Ellen Mott
I like your idea of reading and re-reading picture books for structure, page turns, and etc. In April, I had a quick look at a proof of “Sophie’s Squash” during the SCBWI conference, and bought a copy as soon as it came out. It reminds me of my son who carried a walnut around for a few months, when he was little.
I enjoyed your presentation last spring, and was glad to visit with you briefly. Madison is my home town and I have many friends still living in the area.
Thank you for sharing where you find inspirations, on today’s blog.
Happy writing.
November 7, 2013 at 11:36 am
Pat Zietlow Miller
Thanks, Ellen! I had a lot of fun at the Iowa SCBWI. And your story about your son and the walnut is amazing. I’ve heard from parents whose kids fell in love with carrots, apples, bananas, watermelons, pumpkins, squash and garlic. Amazing!
November 7, 2013 at 11:35 am
Debbie Austin
Thanks for your post, Pat! It’s always fun and inspiring to learn how other authors get their ideas. (My characters don’t talk to me either.) I’m off to find Sophie’s Squash!
November 7, 2013 at 11:39 am
Patrick Waldron
Thank you, Pat
November 7, 2013 at 11:42 am
Amy Smith
So much good stuff in this, Pat. I never thought about writing in picture books. I do it with other books though – makes sense. Read a similar tip once to type out the words of my favorite stories. I’ve tried this and it helps me. I adore Sophie’s Squash.
November 7, 2013 at 11:43 am
Lynn Ann Carol
This just show there are many ways to do one thing. I just love SOPHIE’S SQUASH and the illustrations are delightful. The story is perfect and told through the eyes of a child perfectly.
Thanks,
Lynn
November 7, 2013 at 11:49 am
Carleen Tjader
I am excited to be part of this activity.
And getting your blog!
Carleen Tjader
November 7, 2013 at 11:56 am
jheitman22
This is truly inspiring to me, as I also hear words or phrases and jot them down. Who knows how (or if) they will come to life? Thanks!
November 7, 2013 at 11:56 am
dzipeto
Hi Pat,
Thanks for your great advice and sharing your process. I am looking forward to reading at your books for inspiration and admiration. Can’t wait to see The Quickest Kid on Clarksville. (I loved Stars, too)
Diana Zipeto
November 7, 2013 at 11:57 am
Margaret Greanias
I loves reading about how your stories come about. Thanks for sharing. Also, what a great idea to buy two copies of a book so you can write on one!
November 7, 2013 at 12:03 pm
viviankirkfield
Hello Pat! Congratulations on your book successes! You’ve shared some great tips here…I especially appreciate the suggestion that we purchase an extra copy of books that we LOVE so that we can make notes as to structure, language, plot, pacing and page turns…reading your post here was like taking a mini-workshop course.:)
November 7, 2013 at 12:05 pm
Kathy Moncrief
Thanks so much for your insight into your process. I don’t hear voices either. Mostly, I get a phrase or a funny rhyme, or play on words that I can’t get out of my head. I’ve gotta go read Stars now….
November 7, 2013 at 12:05 pm
Janet Halfmann
Great post, Pat. Love your insight about how to capture some of the essence of a favorite story. Love Sophie’s squash. Bought copies for my grandchildren and a 98-year-old friend, named Bernice, just like the squash!
November 7, 2013 at 12:34 pm
Pat Zietlow Miller
Thanks, Janet! I just love than a real-life Bernice will be getting the book.
November 7, 2013 at 12:13 pm
klmcmorranmaus
Thank you for sharing. I see movies in my head, but my characters haven’t started talking to me yet.
November 7, 2013 at 12:18 pm
Laurie Young
Thanks so much for this inspirational blog… awesome!!!!
November 7, 2013 at 12:21 pm
Janie Reinart
Thank you Pat for the post! Did you ever hear this definition before?
Writer’s Block–when your imaginary friends stop talking to you 🙂 Hope
yours get chatty!
November 7, 2013 at 12:22 pm
maria gianferrari
Thanks for the inspiring post, Pat. I loved Sophie’s Squash, and look forward to reading (and analyzing) your forthcoming books.
Listening for the whispers of words today…
November 7, 2013 at 12:32 pm
danacarey1
Thanks, Pat, for so many great suggestions on filing away all those “little” ideas for future use and developing them. Congrats on all the upcoming books!
November 7, 2013 at 12:39 pm
Dorothy Wiese
Thank you for your many suggestions. I look forward to reading Sophie’s Squash.
November 7, 2013 at 12:45 pm
Kirsten Carlson (@kirstencarlson)
I love the idea of buying another book of one that you love and writing in it. That thrills the 5 year old in me : )
November 7, 2013 at 12:58 pm
Dawnyelle Moore
For Christmas and my next 100 birthdays I will ask for gift cards for book stores a plenty, so that I can buy all of these wonderful books mentioned during our month of Pictures and Words, Ideas and More!
Thank you for such a realistic post!
November 7, 2013 at 5:09 pm
SevenAcreSky
I like your idea Dawnyelle!
November 7, 2013 at 1:01 pm
Annette Simon
Pat, Sophie’s Squash was a recent staff pick in ‘my’ lovely little indie. Thank you for sharing it – and this post!
November 7, 2013 at 1:40 pm
Pat Zietlow Miller
Thank you, Annette! Being a staff pick is always an awesome thing!
November 7, 2013 at 1:04 pm
Sherry Walz
Thanks, Pat. It’s always fun to hear how other people get inspired to write. Congratulations on all of your upcoming books. You must be doing something right, even if you haven’t yet heard your characters talking.
November 7, 2013 at 1:05 pm
Robyn Campbell
Thank you so much, Pat. What a wonderful post! Excellent tips that I will swirl around inside my head for a long time to come. I thoroughly enjoyed this. I cannot wait to read Sophie’s Squash. Congrads on all your successes! 🙂
November 7, 2013 at 1:11 pm
kpbock
This is a great post, thank you! As a teacher, I always tell my kids to use mentor texts as a way to help them with their writing. But, I don’t always take the time to do it myself. I love when I find a really excellent picture book and it inspires me to “be just like them.”
November 7, 2013 at 1:17 pm
Melanie Vickers
Pat, how refreshing to hear someone with your writing accomplishments talk about the nitty gritty of writing without being struck by a bolt of full book.
November 7, 2013 at 1:30 pm
tpierce
Thank you, Pat. I seem to come up with story ideas in similar ways to you. Sometimes it takes a long time for a book I admire to brew in my head before I find a new way to express what I admire about it, but it does happen!
November 7, 2013 at 1:32 pm
Susan Nicholas
Thanks for letting us in on where your inspiration comes from.
November 7, 2013 at 1:32 pm
Valarie Giogas
Thank you! I’m glad I’m not the only one. I often wonder what it’s like to have characters talk to me and virtually write their own story.
November 7, 2013 at 1:35 pm
Pat Haapaniemi
Great post, Pat! Your tips are really helpful. So glad I’m not the only one who doesn’t have characters talking to them!
November 7, 2013 at 1:42 pm
Anne Bromley
Thank you, Pat. SOPHIE’S SQUASH is a book I have admired and copied for the same reasons you have copied others. Great tips and good reminders that inspiration comes in different packages.
November 7, 2013 at 1:56 pm
Pam Jones
Inspiration comes in the most unexpected places! Thank you. 😀
November 7, 2013 at 1:57 pm
Eileen
Love it. Thanks for sharing.
November 7, 2013 at 2:03 pm
Ann Birnie
Ann Birnie – Thanks Pat! I am one of those authors who sees pictures in their head. Unfortunately, sometimes the screen goes blank! Thanks for some new ideas. Ann
November 7, 2013 at 2:05 pm
Kelly Ramsdell Fineman
Pat’s SOPHIE’S SQUASH is one that I want to read and re-read and emulate. And I’m so glad to hear that Pat works in ways similar to mine – I keep hoping for those amazing characters and images, too, but so far, it’s always a snippet of text. Go figure.
November 7, 2013 at 2:06 pm
Daniela Weil (@Daniela_Weil)
lovely words. they mean a lot to me. i also don’t hear the talk or see images… good to hear about how process works for different people.
thanks! daniela
November 7, 2013 at 2:13 pm
Carol Nelson
Thanks for the reminder to really study the picture books we love. I always get caught up in the story and language and need to go back to look at structure and page turns.
November 7, 2013 at 2:31 pm
Penny Parker Klostermann
I love Sophie’s Squash, Pat! I’ve loved it from the moment I got a sneak preview-hee hee! I study it for structure,language,plot, pacing and page turns. I’m currently working on a friendship story and would love to capture part of the essence and specialness of Sophie’s Squash! Thanks for sharing your process! I’m looking forward to your future books 🙂
November 7, 2013 at 2:48 pm
MichelleLynn
I am so thankful you said you write in books! I recently purchased a beautiful non-fiction, adult book for research and inspiration for a children’s book I am working on. I am scrawling notes all over the thing, but felt a bit guilty doing so. The book is becoming a treasured artifact of this journey, however, and will someday sit on the shelf beside the book it inspired.
November 7, 2013 at 2:55 pm
Malena Fuentes
Passion. Honesty. And so much work behind a book.
November 7, 2013 at 3:07 pm
Julie Grasso
i enjoyed your post very much Pat. Thanks for lending us your time and wisdom.
November 7, 2013 at 3:17 pm
Kaye Baillie
Thanks for that lovely post, Pat. I can relate to lots of what you said and I also study favourite authors and their works. Sometimes if the books are on audio I put the disk in the car and listen to it whenever I’m driving. Hopefully the good style of the author will sink in!
November 7, 2013 at 3:21 pm
Pia Garneau
Somtimes phrases get stuck in my head too and wonder where is this going to take me. Thanks for sharing your process. I must hunt down your books.
November 7, 2013 at 3:21 pm
teresamis
…structure, pacing, plot, language, and page turns…I love this strategy for the read, read, read emphasized in being a good writer. Thanks, Pat.
November 7, 2013 at 3:35 pm
deborah freedman
Love this, Pat. Also, your book! Can’t wait to read those upcoming.
November 7, 2013 at 3:42 pm
Alicia van Thiel
Congrats on Sophie’s Squash! “I hear or see that captivates me enough where I want to put in the work to come up with something wonderful of my own” Like this!
November 7, 2013 at 3:42 pm
nicole snitselaar
You hear voices ! Must be fun ! 🙂
November 7, 2013 at 4:09 pm
belindambrock
I was reading your wonderful post and then came to the part about your having written “Sophie’s Squash.” Such a coincidence—i was browsing in my local bookstore yesterday, came across that book and really liked it; in fact, i kept thinking about it.
Congrats!
November 7, 2013 at 4:11 pm
Genevieve Petrillo
Snippets are always helpful little things. I’ve occasionally had a snippet or two turn into something with potential. Nice. BTW – I read Sophie’s Squash a couple of weeks ago. Adorable! Congratulations on that and your upcoming projects.
November 7, 2013 at 4:29 pm
Eleanor Rubin
Fascinating to hear the phrases that came to you randomly and which you turned into stories. Thank you!
November 7, 2013 at 4:33 pm
Laurie L. Young
I love, “Sophie’s Squash”! I also study and read my fav picture books over and over to try and capture the same kind of magic. So glad to read that you do it too!
November 7, 2013 at 5:04 pm
Patricia Holloway
I really like your personal way of writing, it shows you pay attention to what is going on around you. Nice post.
November 7, 2013 at 5:17 pm
SevenAcreSky
Pat, I certainly operate on the word snippets method more frequently than any other. Sometimes ideas from surroundings, or events. Rarely from voices. Thanks for your enlightening post, and can’t wait to find Sophie’s Squash! – Damon Dean
November 7, 2013 at 5:31 pm
Melanie Moschella
Pat, your books look beautiful! I am going to read Sophie’s Squash this weekend
November 7, 2013 at 5:49 pm
Matthew C. Winner
Pat, thanks for your honesty! So many authors talking about being “hit” by a great idea and then rushing to write it down. Great to hear your story and how the words find you!
November 7, 2013 at 6:02 pm
Diana Murray
Love your stories of inspiration!
November 7, 2013 at 6:07 pm
Barbara Messinger
Thanks for sharing, Pat! I’m looking forward to reading Sophie’s Squash.
November 7, 2013 at 6:46 pm
cindy johnson
Thanks for the “inspiring” post, Pat! I especially appreciate your breakdown of how you study the picture books you love.
November 7, 2013 at 6:54 pm
dee win
thanks for your ideas- i’m going to focus on inspiration!
November 7, 2013 at 7:03 pm
Gaye Kick
I really appreciated your input today. Thanks!
November 7, 2013 at 7:05 pm
Christine M. Irvin
Great ideas! Thanks for sharing.
November 7, 2013 at 7:46 pm
Evie Hjartarson
Great post, I love that your so open about your writing.Your post is really appreciated.
November 7, 2013 at 7:58 pm
saputnam
Great post! Thank you for sharing your insights! It’s always nice to learn how, and where, other authors come up with their story ideas.
November 7, 2013 at 8:08 pm
MSackman
Love the idea of emailing yourself. I write little notes to myself that I either lose or find weeks later when I have forgotten the point!
November 7, 2013 at 8:17 pm
Tina Cho
Congratulations on all your new book contracts! Thanks for sharing how you got your ideas!
November 7, 2013 at 8:41 pm
writeknit
Inspiration and perspiration – keys to a great picture book 🙂
November 7, 2013 at 8:55 pm
Rick Starkey
It’s great to hear something said that sparks an idea. I have a few from things I thought I heard someone say.
November 7, 2013 at 9:24 pm
Stella Jane Stauffer
I absolutely love your post.
Showing what you really enjoy made your post even more enjoyable.
I happen to be a lucky one in that I took a class with Marla Frazee when she taught at Pasadena Art Center, in California.
And, I can tell, you would both get along well. You sound as special as she is. I look forward to reading your picture books.
The graphics for the “New Girl” book is beautiful.
I am a new fan of yours and look forward to plugging into your website.
November 7, 2013 at 9:25 pm
Shannon Abercrombie
Love, love, love this post. Its a great snippet into how your work begins…which is so totally different then my starting point that it taught me something and has encouraged me to try it your way. Very cool.
November 7, 2013 at 9:35 pm
kathydoherty1
Pat, your work is amazing! Thanks for this inspiring post.
November 7, 2013 at 9:58 pm
Sue Heavenrich
Those words that sound like half-baked ideas… they just need to have a bit of honey added, and some warmth, and then kneaded and let set awhile till they turn into a real story. Which is why I write bits of ideas or words… you never know what something might turn out to be. Thanks for a great post.
November 7, 2013 at 10:00 pm
Yvonne Cynthia Mes (@YvonneCMes)
What a lovely insight into the different ways inspirations hits and how they are transformed into stories. Thank you!
November 7, 2013 at 10:09 pm
Teresa Daffern
After listening to friends discussing their writing and where they find inspiration, I too have wondered if I will ever hear characters talk to me! For now, I mainly listen to my children when they are playing. They are full of great ideas! Thanks for your post – it was very encouraging!
-Teresa Daffern
November 7, 2013 at 10:19 pm
Karen Mae Zoccoli
I find it so interesting how different inspiration can be from one person to the next. Nice to see there’s not a one size fits all …. I enjoyed this post!
November 7, 2013 at 10:28 pm
Laura Purdie Salas
Love your snippets. And I do the same thing with picture books I love–you’re right–final project is nothing alike (thank goodness), but starting with a love for another book is never a bad place to start:>)
November 7, 2013 at 11:06 pm
Cindy
LOVED this post. It makes me realize that we all have our own unique processes and whatever works is okay. I love the fact that you get inspiration from other PBs and are able to take them in a whole new direction. I’m often afraid that, in doing so, I am committing a crime or something. LOL Thanks for the inspiration.
November 7, 2013 at 11:20 pm
Stephanie Shaw
I am going to print out this wonderful post. The next time someone asks me how I get my ideas for stories, I will hand it to them. My process is exactly the same. But, Pat explains it so well! thank you!
November 7, 2013 at 11:22 pm
Naana
Thanks Pat for this post. Very inspirational. I have been stuck on a phrase for a week and I’m working at developing a picture book from it.
November 7, 2013 at 11:24 pm
Holly
Thanks for your ‘story!’ I can relate to the way you stories come to you. Early morning is my time for sing-song snippets to come along. (My family thinks I’m a bit nutty on those mornings!)
November 7, 2013 at 11:33 pm
Cecilia Clark
thank you for sharing your ideas and inspirations
November 7, 2013 at 11:38 pm
Lacey Gunter
Wouldn’t it be interesting if you could get one author’s characters to start interacting with another author’s characters. Just imagine.
Fun post.
November 7, 2013 at 11:52 pm
angiekarcher
I love hearing how Pat gains inspiration…my ears and eyes are wide open! Come and get me!
November 8, 2013 at 1:06 am
amievc
Thanks for reminding us that inspiration comes in many forms!
November 8, 2013 at 3:04 am
rjtraxel
I also like to re-read my favourite books until I have them memorized.
November 8, 2013 at 6:57 am
Jennifer Neher
Thank you for sharing your creativity! Great idea, to study other picture books closely and glean inspiration from them!!
November 8, 2013 at 7:36 am
RaChelle Lisiecki
So happy to be in the Wisconsin SCBWI chapter with you, Pat. You’re an inspiration and “Sophie’s Squash” is on my shelf with other treasured favorites.
November 8, 2013 at 7:57 am
msmo1958
Great ideas Pat! Good to know that all author’s process can be different and what works for you is always best
November 8, 2013 at 8:05 am
brenda a. harris
Enjoyed reading about how you’re inspired. Every post has inspired me to write my next draft. This one is quite memorable. 🙂
November 8, 2013 at 8:10 am
Quinn Cole
Great reminder to learn from others and not try to go it alone all the time. Thanks!
November 8, 2013 at 8:19 am
Gail Kamer
Thanks. I feel more normal now 🙂
November 8, 2013 at 8:30 am
RadSheri
Thanks ideas don’t come to me in verse and studying my favorite books is a good idea for structure, too.
November 8, 2013 at 9:09 am
Marcy P.
I really enjoy hearing where people get your inspiration… and I especially love that your process is not the same as everyone else’s 🙂 Or my own. I want to take from this the idea of jotting down that strange thought and working on it later, playing with it, creating. I also love the permission you give to LOVE another’s picture book and try to capture some essence of it. Thank you!
November 8, 2013 at 9:28 am
littledbl
Congrats on your new books! Sophie’s Squash is awesome!
November 8, 2013 at 9:51 am
Beverly Snedecor
Thank you Pat, this is wonderful encouragement!
November 8, 2013 at 9:56 am
Kathy Cornell Berman
Thanks for sharing your creative process Pat. Lately I have been searching for the same thing. Appreciating the pure essence of a story is what an author hopes for and another writer’s goal. Not an easy task. I love Sophie’s Squash! You have captured the essence of friendship in that story.
November 8, 2013 at 10:00 am
marciecolleen
Thank you, Pat, for allowing us a peek into your process. And congrats on the upcoming books!
November 8, 2013 at 10:44 am
Prairie Garden Girl
Snippets of words! I can so relate to that idea of inspiration. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. ~Suzy Leopold
November 8, 2013 at 11:22 am
Jessica
It is interesting how just a group of words can turn into an entire story…
November 8, 2013 at 11:27 am
wendymyersart
That’s a nice post. While I am one who has the images roll out in my head, or characters in full form come dancing into my brain or waking me up at night to come play, I do so LOVE to pour over my favorite picture books for inspiration. Hearing you say you tried to capture the essence of one is very helpful and I am writing down titles of some of my favs (and rereading, of course) and jotting down some ideas immediately afterwards. Thank you!
November 8, 2013 at 12:13 pm
Betsy Devany
Great post! I am such a fan of SOPHIE’S SQUASH. The text to illustration was a match made in picture book Heaven. Can’t wait to enjoy your upcoming books!
November 8, 2013 at 12:57 pm
Jenn Bower
I find that I get similarly inspired. Typically it is a title that I can’t get out of my head. Congratulations on all your great success.
November 8, 2013 at 2:06 pm
Beth MacKinney
I like snippets of words, too. That’s my favorite!
November 8, 2013 at 5:30 pm
jdrury002
I have also never had conversations or interviews with characters in my head (and have always been a bit jealous of writer’s who get to experience that) but I absolutely identify with getting snippets of words or rhymes that pop into my head and I have no idea what to do with. Thanks for this post!
November 8, 2013 at 7:43 pm
Elizabeth McBride
Thank you Pat! You make me feel better that I don’t hear voices (not sure if I really want to) or know complete plot lines that come seeping through my pillow upon waking. But I do have snippets of lines that catch my attention or spring into it from an image or an idea, and then things go from there. I will also study other books I like. Sometimes diagram the text and line breaks, color coding patterns. It all helps and it is certainly worth the study. Thank you for your tremendous post! You are inspiring! So many good new things coming for you!! Congratulations and many thanks,
Elizabeth McBride
November 8, 2013 at 8:33 pm
thiskidreviewsbooks
Well said, Ms. Miller! 😀
November 8, 2013 at 9:45 pm
Jenny Blum
What wonderful warmth comes through from your words. Your piece also seems confidence building. I will keep trying!
November 8, 2013 at 9:50 pm
erin
This is a wonderful post! Thanks for the inspiration!
November 8, 2013 at 10:00 pm
Lori Mozdzierz
Thanks for the share of how your inspiration hits!
November 8, 2013 at 11:36 pm
helenajuhasz
Snippets of words: happened to me last night while my daughter got up for the umpteenth time. She, a toddler, babbled something in her sleep, and now it’s a book tittle for today’s PB idea!
November 9, 2013 at 12:12 am
Leslee Anne Hewson
It’s always interesting to see how other writers are inspired. I also do not ‘see’ my characters. Apparently about 30% of people can’t close there eyes and visualise something. I definitely can’t. I close my eyes and all I see is darkness. But ideas come into my head, usually in quiet moments or I see something in the natural world that triggers my imagination. Thank you for your tips.
November 9, 2013 at 12:16 am
Leslee Anne Hewson
I also like Elizabeth McBride’s tips on studying other books. I’ll definitely be trying that too! Thanks to you both.
November 9, 2013 at 12:50 am
Dani Duck
I don’t think I’ve ever had any of my characters speak to me either. At least not for picture books. Somewhat for YA book that I’ve never written. Hrm maybe we’re both just a bit hard of hearing as far as imaginary voices go.
November 9, 2013 at 2:50 am
Ann Martin
So glad that someone else has words that just come into their head. It happens to me, sometimes when I’m just between sleeping and waking and I’m so grateful that when I do wake up fully, the words are still there.
November 9, 2013 at 7:26 am
Andrea
I love the way studying other picture books leads you to your own stories and ideas. I’m going to start using other books as writing mentors more often.
November 9, 2013 at 10:39 am
Donna Black
Thank you, Pat. This is my favorite inspiration post. And I am also inspired that you have a day job!
November 9, 2013 at 2:33 pm
Joanne Sher
So encouraged that I’m not the only one who doesn’t chat with her characters.and I love hearing more ways to spark my imagination!
November 9, 2013 at 7:00 pm
Jennifer Judd
You had me by the end of your intro. Thank you thank you thank you. I love it that there are many roads up the mountain (of inspiration)!
November 9, 2013 at 11:14 pm
Carrie Brown
Thanks, Pat! I keep telling myself that I need to get back to the bookstore! I love your idea of buying an extra copy to write in! How unique! I look forward to reading your books.
November 9, 2013 at 11:33 pm
vinvogel
Congrats on the new book!
November 10, 2013 at 8:25 am
Janet Smart
congratulations on all your picture books! I think we all are inspired by something that really happened, like with Sophie’s Squash, we just have to be willing to make changes to what really happened to make it interesting and publishable.
November 10, 2013 at 11:04 am
heather sisson
Such beautiful picture books! I love hearing the different ways that writers/illustrators come up with their ideas. its fun to try all methods :}
November 10, 2013 at 9:18 pm
megmillerwrites
Your books and the books that inspired you sound wonderful! Must get!! How true that everyone’s stories come about differently. 🙂
November 11, 2013 at 12:37 am
lje1
Thanks for sharing your process. Studying books you love is a great way to get inspiration. I never thought of buying two books and using one for study.
November 11, 2013 at 11:10 am
angelapenadahle
I’m so glad I’m not the only one who gets ideas w/ snippets of words and sentences or by admiring the way another author has written a book, or by the admiration of different elements from different books . I have also gotten ideas as “stories [that] unfold in [my brain] like a movie on the screen.” Other times it is just a title that sparks an idea. Thanks for sharing!
November 11, 2013 at 12:34 pm
Linda
It was love-at-first-read with Stars. Thank you for sharing your insights. All of these great ideas are so hopeful.
November 11, 2013 at 1:55 pm
laurimeyers
I get just snippets most of the time too, though I’ve heard other writers who get fully realized ideas with beginning-middle-end during PiBo. I love your experience showing the beauty of the snippet is all the places it can go.
November 12, 2013 at 11:26 am
Dana Atnip
Thank you for sharing your story of how you get your inspirations. I have always been a daydreamer which may seem to be a hindrance in some areas of life but it’s great for getting ideas for PBs! I like your process of “listening for your characters”, that’s very helpful! 🙂
November 12, 2013 at 5:04 pm
Kathryn Ault Noble
Thank you for sharing your process. Snipets of words are a good idea, if I can remember what they inspired when I read them later!
November 13, 2013 at 10:38 pm
MichelleLynn
I have always been surprised to see how characters come to mean so much to me. A small idea in my head grows until it is almost tangible. I know this character, her likes and dislikes, her dreams and struggles. Getting the reader to care half as much as I do is the trick.
November 14, 2013 at 12:45 am
Amelia Shearer
Catching up on many missed piboidmo days after sick kid central this past week, and so encouraged by your post. Authors are much like the children we write for – inspired by different things, processing the world at times verbally, at times visually, at times by the rhythms and sounds around us … I love that this medium is a grey area where there are so many unique ways to not only find ideas, but also a wide range of ways to present the final product!
November 16, 2013 at 7:57 am
The Ink Pond
I am glad I’m not the only one! Sometimes I wake up at night with a few words in my head that feel like a picture book idea and I get up and write them down.
Thank you for sharing your process.
~Tia Svardahl
November 19, 2013 at 11:15 am
Tonya
So glad to read others have characters who keep silent. My inspiration comes same way as yours.
November 20, 2013 at 9:16 pm
Priya Gopal
Thanks for telling us your process
November 23, 2013 at 7:43 am
Joanna
Thanks for sharing your process. I love your books, Pat.
November 24, 2013 at 4:53 pm
Debbie Faith Mickelson
I love that there are so many ways to be inspired and create great ideas.
November 25, 2013 at 6:50 pm
carolmunrojww
Are you kidding me? You worked as a newsletter editor in insurance (so did I) and STILL you were able to tap that place where you could write something as phenomenal as Sophie’s Squash? 😉 That book is in the top 20 of the PBs I’ve read this year (nearly 500 so far). LOVED it. Truly LOVED it.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Seems something is talking to you to give you ideas, and rather than seeing movies, you seem to hear a radio. lol The results of your work to expand on your ideas gives us great motivation to do our own work. Thanks.
November 26, 2013 at 3:50 pm
jennifer rumberger
I’m glad to hear I’m not the only one who doesn’t hear voices! My characters don’t tend to talk to me either.
November 29, 2013 at 4:51 pm
Tracey Jackson
Thanks for sharing. I love ‘Snippets of words’ as a source of ideas too….and I’m also going to have to wait for my characters to start talking to me.
December 1, 2013 at 1:35 pm
blanchebaxter
Thank you for sharing this with us. ‘Snippets of words’ and ‘admiration’ are great sources of ideas.
December 2, 2013 at 11:35 pm
Laurie J. Edwards
Studying books we admire is a great way to improve our craft.