It’s almost Halloween!
And you know what that means, right?

On Halloween night, the Great Pumpkin will rise out of his pumpkin patch and fly through the air with his bag of toys for all the children! (This is according to Linus, and I’m afraid I can’t vouch for him. Lucy either. You can’t trust those Van Pelts. Just ask Charlie Brown and his football.)
Simon Spotlight has released a lap board book edition of everyone’s favorite Halloween special. I’m “sincerely” thrilled by this big, sturdy book full of nostalgic scenes.
There’s Snoopy fighting the Red Baron, Charlie Brown and his rocks, and smitten Sally blindly following her pumpkin patch Romeo.
This got me to thinking—what’s NOT in this Peanuts classic?
THE PARENTS.
Think about it: the Peanuts Gang always arranges escapades themselves. They produce Christmas plays, serve Thanksgiving meals (with a little help from Snoopy & Woodstock), and generally carry on without adult interference. When there is an adult nearby, we never see them; we only hear a fuzzy WAH-WAH-WAH-WAAAAH from a trombone-like ghost.
As a child, I wanted the same autonomy as Charlie Brown and his friends. I didn’t want to be told what to do. I didn’t want help from an adult. I wanted to create kid-only hijinks. And my brother and I did—unbeknownst to our parents, we hosted a casino and an auction in our basement and profited $18, which was a lot of money in 1979!
But I digress.
I took Schulz’s NO ADULTS ALLOWED format to heart when I became a picture book writer. With rare exception, parents don’t appear in my stories. They’re not necessary. The fun is all kid-led and kid-approved.
In THE MONSTORE, Zach keeps buying monster after monster to spook his little sister Gracie, but never does a parent interject with “that’s a bad idea”. In YOUR FIRST DAY OF CIRCUS SCHOOL, an older brother leads his younger brother through the ups and downs of unusual academia, but never does a parent step in to catch the sibling’s fall from great heights.
When I do picture book critiques, I’ve noticed that some writers bring parents into their stories as a voice of reason. Typically with these lines, I hear the writer themself trying to refocus their character’s attention. I interpret this device as an “I’m not sure what to do here” move. My advice is thus: take out the parent and try another method. Introduce an action that makes the characters realize (or not) their mistakes. Make their world adult-free.
My philosophy stems from the fact that children are constantly being told what to do—by their parents, their teachers, and other adults of authority. A picture book should be an escape from the real world. Another adult admonishment is unwelcome. Let the kids roam free! Let chaos ensue.
And let them figure it all out! You’ll find that those kiddos are pretty darn smart.
Many thanks to Simon Spotlight for supplying a copy of IT’S THE GREAT PUMPKIN, CHARLIE BROWN to a lucky blog reader (US).ย
Just leave a comment below to enter and a random winner will be selected in November.
Good luck!

















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October 25, 2023 at 1:08 pm
Teresa Traver/Anne Rollins
I think you are right that part of the appeal of the Peanuts series was the lack of adults. And I like how the film versions captured that by having the adults murmuring nonsense syllables rather than words. Moving to an older age range, I suspect that one of the reasons why the boarding school setting remains popular in middle grade is that it provides a plausible reason for children to be away from their parents for most of the book.
October 25, 2023 at 1:13 pm
Stephanie Wildman
Best advice I got from my teacher Maxine Rose Schur: โ if you can take an adult out of a kids book, do it!โ Thanks Tara for sharing your insights.
October 25, 2023 at 1:17 pm
supermario6
NO PARENTS ALLOWED!
October 25, 2023 at 1:17 pm
cmochowski
The Great Pumpkin! This post brought me back to my childhood. I still quote this show, most especially, “I got a rock.” Thank you for the post and for doing a giveaway.
October 25, 2023 at 1:18 pm
Jane Heitman Healy
Tara, you are so right! The Peanuts kids learn by doing and by making their own mistakes. Thanks for the opportunity to win this book!
October 25, 2023 at 1:18 pm
JenFW
Yep, kid characters need to solve their own problems. This is when they learn how to do it. Kids who don’t learn to solve their own problems become adults who . . . er . . . hmmm.
October 25, 2023 at 1:18 pm
1marth1
Good suggestions! We loved the Peanuts gang growing up, and still do. Thank you!
October 25, 2023 at 1:21 pm
Leenie
This one of my favorites
October 25, 2023 at 1:21 pm
Laura Wippell
This is such a good reminder for us to write from the child’s perspective! Thanks Tara
October 25, 2023 at 1:22 pm
Debbie Meyer
I think Charles Schultz was a genius! (Although I wish his characters had been nicer to good olโ Charlie Brown!!) Always and forever a fan of Peanuts.
October 25, 2023 at 1:25 pm
Judy Y
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October 25, 2023 at 1:27 pm
Cathy Lentes
Unpacking peanutsโฆthatโs hilarious as a title. But getting rid of the parents and that voice of reason is perfectly packaged advice. Thanks, Tara!
October 25, 2023 at 1:27 pm
Leah Marks
Love your comments. Inspiring kids to use their imaginations flexes their ‘smart’ muscles. So important to nurture young independent thinkers through reading books and play.
October 25, 2023 at 1:30 pm
Alison McGauley
Ha! So true about the Peanuts parents. That’s a great point, Tara.
Thanks!
October 25, 2023 at 1:35 pm
susandrewwrites
Love this. Take the adult out!
October 25, 2023 at 1:40 pm
micheleprestininzi
I love this, Tara. It’s a good reminder to nix the parents.
October 25, 2023 at 1:44 pm
William David Curtis
Huge Charles Schultz fan, own The Complete Peanuts. Lucky not to have had helicopter parents. Rode NYC subways alone (yes, a different time), had my own apt key, and read “banned” books. Grew up independent and writing picture books! Thanks, Tara.
October 25, 2023 at 1:46 pm
Jilanne Hoffmann
Yes! our parents were never around to give us advice on what to do, LOL. We had to figure things out for ourselves.
October 25, 2023 at 1:48 pm
Laura Bower
Love this post and love the peanuts! I still hear the WAH-WAH-WAH every now and again. ๐ Kids wanting a parent-free world is very clear to me when I take my middle schooler to the mall ๐
October 25, 2023 at 1:49 pm
Joyce Uglow
We played outside until the streetlights came on. It was super exciting to be out after dark for Trick-or-Treating, even though my older siblings ran a lot faster than I could run. ๐ Thanks for the fun books.
October 25, 2023 at 1:50 pm
Sarah Rebecca Hovorka
I agree. There should always be plenty of books that are just escapes.
October 25, 2023 at 1:52 pm
Laura Barens
I truly love the Peanuts series and this tidbit will help me immensely in my writing. Thank you ๐
October 25, 2023 at 1:54 pm
crbwriter
Thank you for pointing out what a dampener adults can be in a kid’s world! In the real world, guardrails are good. In stories, kids can teach themselves.
October 25, 2023 at 1:54 pm
Carol Gwin Nelson
This is great advice! I was also allowed to ride my bike in the woods at the end of our road. I loved the feeling of racing through the woods with no one there to say SLOW DOWN!
October 25, 2023 at 2:00 pm
Heather Skinner
Great advice to share! If I had a penny for every time I have heard an agent, publisher, teacher, and critique partner say this, I’d be rich! When it comes to hearing this tip, the earlier, the better!
October 25, 2023 at 2:02 pm
yepearson
I still find it hard to leave adults out completely. Good challenge for me.
October 25, 2023 at 2:06 pm
stevejankousky
Youโve gotten me to think of the Peanuts characters as latchkey kids!
October 25, 2023 at 2:07 pm
Kim A Larson
Good reminder, thanks! Fun example.
October 25, 2023 at 2:18 pm
Kristin Kolp
Oh I love this! We’ve watched It’s The Great Pumpkin several times already this year. I never thought too much about it, but I suppose the absence of adults/parents in those cartoons and shows are part of their appeal. It’s a kid-led world! I like the idea of rolling this over into our picture book creations. Thanks for sharing!
October 25, 2023 at 2:28 pm
Bethanny Parker
Yes, let the kids work out their problems themselves. Make them the heroes of their own stories.
October 25, 2023 at 2:30 pm
McCourt Thomas
I read an article once by Ann Patchett about how Snoopy influenced her writing career. Such great ideas for all genres of writers. Thanks for sharing that insight.
October 25, 2023 at 2:39 pm
Kassy Keppol
Thank you for the trip down memory lane.
October 25, 2023 at 2:48 pm
Karen
Thanks for the reminder of adult free picture books!
October 25, 2023 at 3:11 pm
Laura
All these years later and I still believe๐
October 25, 2023 at 3:18 pm
margaretsmn
What great advice! Because I’m a grandparent, the grandparent has the words of wisdom. I wonder what you think about grandparents. Maybe the same rule should be true.
October 25, 2023 at 3:47 pm
Tara Lazar
Unless the story is specifically about a grandparent teaching a grandchild a skill, then yes, if a grandparent finds their way in as a “voice of reason”, you should show them the door!
October 25, 2023 at 3:47 pm
Claire A. B. Freeland
Great reminder! Unless the book is targeting a parent – child relationship, no pesky adults.
October 25, 2023 at 4:07 pm
Gayle C. Krause
Perfect book for the season and an old favorite on TV. Would love to win a copy for my niece.
October 25, 2023 at 4:42 pm
Stephanie Jones
I love a good family culture and use parents as foils sometimes, but when friends or siblings can do just as well, I agree! Love-Love-Love PEANUTS!
October 25, 2023 at 4:46 pm
Stephanie Jones
I love to show a family culture and think the Jane a place in some stories. And I use parents as foils sometimes, but its sibling or friend works just as well, I agree-let the parents go! And, of course, I Love-Love-Love PEANUTS!!
October 25, 2023 at 4:49 pm
stephaniemstories
The Peanuts gang is the best! Such a great cast of characters that everyone can relate to.
October 25, 2023 at 5:08 pm
marty bellis
What a great post! I loved Charlie Brown and the gang. And I’m working on a revision right now, where I’m putting your advice to the test, Tara. Taking out the parent! Thanks for the timely suggestion.
October 25, 2023 at 5:57 pm
melissataylorimaginationsoup
YES! Kids need agency!
October 25, 2023 at 6:14 pm
kathydoherty1
Great comments, Tara…get rid of the parents. Charlie Brown and his gang always make me smile.
October 25, 2023 at 6:43 pm
caron levis
Who needs the groan-ups! Fun read as always.
October 26, 2023 at 5:44 am
kvavala
I love this! Who needs the groan-ups? So funny
October 25, 2023 at 6:50 pm
Trine Grillo
Those kids were extremely smart, indeed.
October 25, 2023 at 7:14 pm
Lisa Riddiough
This is such great advice. I accept the challenge to remove the adults from my PB manuscripts.
October 25, 2023 at 7:30 pm
Evelyn B
This is excellent advice ! Thank you!!
October 25, 2023 at 7:43 pm
lynnbmaccom
What fun–love the board book and love the tie-in to our writing!
October 25, 2023 at 7:55 pm
writeremmcbride
When presenting picture books to kids I repeatedly saw how they loved to be the wise ones, advising the kids in the story regarding the best actions to be taken. Letting them test their logic through interacting with stories provides great (safe!) practice!
October 25, 2023 at 8:10 pm
Allison Green
Youโre totally rightโwhen I throw an adult in there it is me trying to put in reason because I donโt know what else to do. Thanks for helping me see that!
October 25, 2023 at 9:35 pm
Sylvia Mary Grech
Great post, Tara!
October 25, 2023 at 11:01 pm
Elayne
So many great insights in this post, Tara! (And I love the wordplay in the title, too!)
October 25, 2023 at 11:12 pm
millerritam
Have always loved Peanuts! Thanks, Tara!
October 25, 2023 at 11:12 pm
millerritam
Have always loved Peanuts! Thanks, Tara!
October 25, 2023 at 11:38 pm
seschipper
The Peanuts Gang is timeless! Charles Schultz , genius!
Thanks, Tara, for sharing your words of wisdom! ๐โค๏ธ
October 26, 2023 at 12:49 am
Karan Greene
Love the Peanuts…and love this advice!
October 26, 2023 at 2:53 am
Suzanne Lewis
“Let chaos ensue. And let them figure it all out!” Right on!!
October 26, 2023 at 3:15 am
Jan Suhr
I also love leaving adults out of my stories. Theyโre just not needed. Kids are pretty inventive and can figure out most things by themselves. And so much humor can evolve from watching them.
October 26, 2023 at 5:42 am
kvavala
Big fan of Charlie Brown and Yes Schultz had it right in his writing, because thatโs what parents sound like to a kid wha wha wha! Same oleโ same oleโ totally agree with this philosophy!
October 31, 2023 at 12:38 pm
Tom Barrett
Ha ha! Never thought of the adults in CB like that, but you’re right!
October 26, 2023 at 6:36 am
Mark Ceilley
This is a good reminder to leave the parents out of our stories. They are not needed. Thank you for this Halloween post!
October 26, 2023 at 7:43 am
amyhouts
Great advice/great example, Tara! Thanks for pointing it out. I have great memories of watching this on TV.
October 26, 2023 at 8:34 am
Wendy Greenley
I’m all about the chaos =) Hope to see you this weekend at Rutgers!
October 26, 2023 at 9:16 am
jamarisinclair
I think that is a good maxim for writing a picture book, now that I think of it. I’ll have to revise my stories now.
October 26, 2023 at 10:00 am
eyejohneye
Love this, Tara. “The kids are alright” in making their own imaginative worlds.
October 26, 2023 at 11:48 am
Angie
Oh, this is a perfect example of kids only in picture books! Thanks for sharing. ๐
October 26, 2023 at 7:50 pm
Christine Gentile
Thanks for the great tip Tara.
October 27, 2023 at 4:49 pm
Danielle Hammelef
This is my favorite movie to watch at Halloween time. I have read books in which the parents or other adults take charge and or solve the problem when the kids can and should find their own answers.
October 29, 2023 at 2:55 pm
chaunceyelephant
Love this thought – going to do some rewriting! Thanks
October 29, 2023 at 5:33 pm
Penny Parker Klostermann
Good grief, this is an awesome post. I loved watching It’s the Great Pumpkin, Charlie Brown. Now a board book! So fun!
October 30, 2023 at 9:28 am
Kristal Kelly
Wow, I don’t know that I ever really thought about how much the Peanuts crew did without adults getting in the way. I use “good grief” quite often to express my dismay and even dressed up as Lucy one year. The Peanuts will always hold a special place in my heart and I love sharing this franchise with my kiddos.
October 30, 2023 at 6:56 pm
ponder2write
Thank you for the reminder to leave the adult out of it! It is wonderful to digress! Wonderful ideas are created often when going off in another tangent.
October 30, 2023 at 7:49 pm
Stephen S. Martin
Children Rule! and are not hindered by reality.
October 30, 2023 at 7:50 pm
Stephen S. Martin
Children Rule! and are not hindered by reality
October 30, 2023 at 8:22 pm
Annie Lynn/AnnieBirdd Music, LLC
I enjoyed this blog post. I don’t put parents in my songs, but because I also have to include concepts (often SEL), I guess I do play the part of the parent, in a way. I always try to go for a cool older sister vibe. I would like to experiment and approach songwriting in way that provides examples or a short story to teach the lesson rather than advise or admonish, even softly with music. My husband is the story writer. This perspective has been eye-opening and I thank you. Hoping everyone stays well and creative. Peace, Annieโ๏ธ๐๐ต๐จ๐
October 31, 2023 at 8:52 am
triciacandy
Thanks for the great reminder!
November 1, 2023 at 2:41 pm
Dolores Floyd
I love this blog about, Charles Schultz, Peanuts, and, “It’s the Great Pumpkin Charlie Brown. These stories never get old and are wonderful to read over and over again. I agree that children don’t want parents to tell them what to do. Children want to roam, enjoy chaos, and in the end,
they are empowered when they figure everything out.
November 1, 2023 at 2:43 pm
Sally Hoch
Good reminder! I’m working on a story that involves a parent… might need to take her out and see where the story goes! (Also, I love the Great Pumpkin!!! Sweet Linus has so much faith, and little snappy Sally is so bummed to be so disappointed.)
November 1, 2023 at 10:12 pm
Liz Lazar
Yes! I recently wrote a story about a summer camp that was not landing right. With the help of my amazing CPs, I realized I had to remove the adults! It was such a better story after I did that. I canโt believe I never realized the best PBs donโt have parents guiding the kids! Wah wah wah!
November 1, 2023 at 10:13 pm
Cindy S
Gotta love Peanuts!
November 2, 2023 at 3:12 am
Natalie Lynn Tanner
Charles Schulz was a GENIUS! After all these years the Peanuts gang is still making us laugh—and teaching us! As THE WORLD’S #1 FAN, I HAVE TO have a DAILY dose of Peanuts to get me through my day! THANK YOU, Tara, for bringing this “WAH WAH WAH” realization to our attention so we can apply it to our own writing. PS: I am TRULY IMPRESSED by the HIJINKS of you and your brother! A CASINO AND AUCTION!!!???!!! SERIOUSLY!!!???!!! BRILLIANT!!! Snoopy and the rest of the gang would be PROUD!
November 2, 2023 at 1:04 pm
Kristi Mahoney
This is great advice! No parents allowed ๐
November 11, 2023 at 1:55 pm
tinamcho
Great advice, Tara. I love this. Thank you!