by Chana Stiefel
Back in February 2020, I was sick in bed with a bad cough. In retrospect, the timing was right for a mysterious early case of Covid, but we’ll never know. In the meantime, I received an email from my awesome agent, Miranda Paul at Erin Murphy Literary, asking if I had a manuscript about an avocado.
In my feverish state, I grabbed a notebook and started brainstorming avocado puns: Holy guacamole. Guac and roll. Avocado had a pit in her stomach.
That last one got me thinking: Was Avocado anxious? And if so, why?
I wrote several drafts about an avocado who wants to make friends with other fruits and veggies. But they all seem to have plans. No wonder Avocado had a pit in her stomach! Garlic, who never minces words, suggests that Avocado is bland. Avocado sheds lots of tears (well, Onion is nearby). But then Avocado pulls herself together and decides to meet up with other bland friends.
“Wanna play?” she asks.
“Sounds nice!” says Rice.
“Yes, please!” say Black-eyed Peas.
“Let’s go!” says Potato.
When the veggies who rejected her want to join the fun, Avocado says, “We might seem bland, but…WE CAN BLEND!”
To top off this work of genius, I included a recipe for guacamole in the backmatter.
THE END?
Nope.
Editor Tamar Mays at HarperCollins liked my writing, but the story? Not so much. Would kids connect to the bland/blend theme? And the marketing team was dead set against eating the protagonist at the end. (I sometimes like to go dark.) Luckily, Tamar was willing to give me another shot!
By then spring had sprung. I brainstormed new settings and situations for my little green character. I thought about my favorite trips to the Farmers’ Market with my critique partner Donna Cangelosi And voila! BRAVO, AVOCADO was born.
This new story is about an avocado at the Farmers’ Market who wants to be Today’s Special. Strolling through the aisles, Avocado asks her veggie friends what makes her stand out. Tomato offers to teach her salsa. Pumpkin proposes funny faces. Garlic suggests she add some zing! Nothing seems to work until—Ding ding!—the bright and shiny Toaster inspires Avocado to “reflect” more deeply. Avocado discovers that she was special all along.
Many of the funny puns remain from the earlier version, but only the ones that serve the story. And the social-emotional themes of developing self-awareness, discovering what’s inside us that makes us special, and uplifting our friends struck a chord. Tamar loved it! And illustrator Anna Sussbauer’s eye-popping colors and vibrant textures bring the story to life. Best of all, no fruits or veggies were harmed in the making of this book.
Presenting the cover of BRAVO, AVOCADO, illustrated by Anna Sussbauer! Coming March 28, 2023 from HarperCollins!
Hungry for a copy? You can win one upon release. Just leave a comment below (avocado recipes welcomed).
A random winner (US only) will be selected when the book becomes available.
Good luck!
Chana Stiefel is the award-winning author of more than 30 punny and poignant books for children. Her nonfiction books include THE TOWER OF LIFE, the true story of Holocaust survivor and historian Yaffa Eliach (a Junior Libary Guild Gold Medal Selection, Scholastic); LET LIBERTY RISE: How America’s Schoolchildren Helped Save the Statue of Liberty (a Bank Street Best Book of the Year, Scholastic, 2021), and ANIMAL ZOMBIES & OTHER REAL-LIFE MONSTERS (a Top 10 YALSA Quick Pick, NatGeoKids). Chana’s funny fictional picture books include MENDEL’S HANUKKAH MESS UP (Kalaniot), MY NAME IS WAKAWAKALOCH (HMH), and DADDY DEPOT (Feiwel & Friends). Follow her @chanastiefel on FB, Twitter, and Instagram. To hear Chana pronounce her name, click here.
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November 4, 2022 at 8:09 am
Valerie Bolling
This sounds like an incredible story — one I’d love to read. I enjoyed hearing about the journey and how the story changed from its initial idea. A fabulous editor can really make a great story even stronger. Brava, Chana and Tamar!
November 4, 2022 at 8:11 am
Andria Rosenbaum
Can’t wait for this delicious book!
It’s sure to satisfy my hunger for yummy, funny, punny reads seasoned with heart.
CONGRATULATIONS, Chana!!
November 4, 2022 at 8:14 am
Kelly D. Roberts
What a fun story!!!!
November 4, 2022 at 8:16 am
lmconnors
This looks wonderful! Congratulations!
November 4, 2022 at 8:18 am
GP Bell
Sounds like a fun story. Thanks for sharing the makings of your book!
November 4, 2022 at 8:20 am
Brenda Huante
What a wonderful idea! I’m looking forward to reading all about Avocado!
November 4, 2022 at 8:23 am
hmmmmm
Hey Chana!
Congrats — the book looks so fun! In case you missed this funny happening in Philly a few weeks ago, google “Avogeddon”. Maybe there’s a seed for a sequel in there… 🙂
November 4, 2022 at 8:24 am
Janet Johnson
I love hearing how a story is born! Thanks so much for sharing, and congrats on the fun cover!
November 4, 2022 at 8:27 am
kurtzmom548513
I loved hearing about the two versions and how the final version came to be. It is a true testament to the power of revision. Can’t wait to read Bravo Avocado!
November 4, 2022 at 8:29 am
Lisa Healy
I can’t wait to spread avocado’s story and toast to its debut!
November 4, 2022 at 8:31 am
Rachelle Burk
What an adorable book! Bravo, Chana!
November 4, 2022 at 8:31 am
Joan Swanson
What a fun book for kids. It not only teaches them they are truly special already, but teaches them what some vegetables are. Great Book!
November 4, 2022 at 8:32 am
readmybook2002
There is a silver lining during the covid period for creativity to come forward. Liked how the different versions played out. One of the few green things I eat that actually tastes good. Congrats!
November 4, 2022 at 8:44 am
supermario6
Bravo!
November 4, 2022 at 8:45 am
maryraebel
My mouth is watering reading about this fun book! And the dark side of me really wishes I could read the first version, too. Thanks for sharing your creative process.
November 4, 2022 at 8:52 am
Susan Cabael
Brilliant word play, Chana! Thanks for sharing the morphing of Avocado’s story.
November 4, 2022 at 8:58 am
Matt Forrest Esenwine
Congratulations, Chana! Great to hear about your new book – sounds like a cute, fun story. (And that’s a PUNderstatement!)
November 4, 2022 at 8:58 am
Nancy Furstinger
Congrats, Chana–love the backstory! Can’t wait to read while eating avocado toast with plenty of delish garlic.
November 4, 2022 at 9:03 am
Karin Larson
Thank you for sharing your terrific story. I look forward to reading Bravo, Avocado. Congratulations!!
November 4, 2022 at 9:04 am
Mark Ceilley
I enjoyed reading about your writing process and your revisions. This looks like a fun book! A wonderful cover too! Congratulations!
November 4, 2022 at 9:21 am
angie9091
Fantastic!
November 4, 2022 at 9:22 am
Karen Chun
I can’t wait to read this. It sounds hilarious!
November 4, 2022 at 9:58 am
JenFW
Congrats, this sounds deliciously clever. I like avocado in salad dressings to make them creamy.
November 4, 2022 at 10:00 am
Angie
This sounds perfect! Can’t wait to read it! (Though I do enjoy dark endings…). Congrats!!!
November 4, 2022 at 10:01 am
Sarah Skolfield
I’m so glad I read this today! I’m working on a first draft. It’s not going well and one of my biggest problems is getting my first idea so stuck in my head that I can’t move away from it. It is so helpful to hear how you went from one draft to a drastically different one. I’d can’t wait to read the book!
November 4, 2022 at 10:16 am
Thelia Hutchinson
This sounds so much fun. I love avocado. Yummy!
November 4, 2022 at 10:18 am
Ellen Leventhal
Thank you for sharing your process, Chana. I can’t wait to read this book! Tara, thanks for shaing.
November 4, 2022 at 10:22 am
Chelle Martin
This was very helpful. Thanks for pointing out what worked and didn’t work for your agent. I thought your first version sounded funny and would be accepted. A lot of us write stories out critique groups love, only to be rejected. We need more info like this to see how we can change our manuscripts for a chance to sell them. Thank you so much! Congratulations and best of luck with your book.
November 4, 2022 at 10:31 am
Claire A. B. Freeland
Ah, so great! I can’t wait to meet Avocado and friends. Congratulations!
November 4, 2022 at 10:42 am
Meredith Fraser
I am in love with the puns, the theme and the cover. Congratulations but I can’t stay… I have a craving to make a salad!!!! 🤗
November 4, 2022 at 10:54 am
Kim A Larson
This books sounds hilarious! I can’t wait to read it. Congratulations, Chana! Love the puns!
November 4, 2022 at 11:54 am
Pamela Harrison
I loved reading about your journey and revision, Chana. Bravo Avocado sounds like a delightful picture book filled with humor and a great theme. Congratulations!
November 4, 2022 at 11:55 am
Mia Geiger
Looks adorable and like a lot of fun! Thanks for sharing this backstory. Congratulations, Chana!
November 4, 2022 at 12:18 pm
Nancy Cummings
It’s so hard to leave great ideas behind in favor of new ones. Your transformation success story is great to hear!
November 4, 2022 at 12:24 pm
allyenz
This was so fun to read and informative on many levels. A great lesson in how even the best-written stories don’t necessarily pass mustard– er muster, until they absolutely shine. Brava, Chana! Wishing you all kinds of success with Bravo, Avocado!
November 4, 2022 at 12:36 pm
Laura Perdew
This sounds hilarious, plus I’m an avocado fan! Looking forward to reading it.
November 4, 2022 at 12:41 pm
Rebecca Gardyn Levington
OMG Chana!!! You told me about this book, but I didn’t know the half of it! This sounds hilarious and AMAZING!!!! Can’t wait to own it!! xoxo
November 4, 2022 at 1:01 pm
Cathy Ballou Mealey
Let’s all be like Toaster! Bravo Chana! Great revision post!
November 4, 2022 at 1:10 pm
ptnozell
Love how you pivoted on the story. Thanks for sharing this recipe for success!
November 4, 2022 at 1:15 pm
danielledufayet
“Bland to blend”- oh how clever! Love the title and story -congrats!
November 4, 2022 at 1:23 pm
orthodoxmom3
Love how the ideas started rolling despite the author being down at the time! Glad you’re recovered and publishing!
November 4, 2022 at 1:24 pm
rindabeach
Bravo Avocado! And Chana too! I love a good back story like yours!
November 4, 2022 at 1:30 pm
Maria Gianferrari
OMG–love that cover! It sounds adorable! Congrats, Chana!
November 4, 2022 at 1:32 pm
JANNA MATTHIES
Hi Chana and Tara. What a fun interview and concept! Who knew avocados could teach us so much? I’d love to win this book. As for a recipe, using avocado, lemon juice, garlic, olive oil and salt with a handful of basil makes a nice dairy-free and super creamy pesto sauce for pasta 🙂
November 4, 2022 at 1:48 pm
lillyarts
i loved your first version so much, but I also loved how you that you persevered and changed it and created a whole new theme… Thanks for sharing!
November 4, 2022 at 1:51 pm
claireannette1
This is so much fun! We’ll definitely be getting this book and gifting it to our friends who grow avocados.
November 4, 2022 at 1:58 pm
chardixon47
Congrats, Chana! Looking forward to reading your new book!
November 4, 2022 at 2:02 pm
Lynn Baldwin
This look adorable and like a great mentor text for one of my WIPs!
November 4, 2022 at 2:07 pm
Becky Scharnhorst
I always love hearing the story behind the story. Thanks for sharing yours!
November 4, 2022 at 2:19 pm
Bethanny Parker
Bravo for you and your new book!
November 4, 2022 at 2:22 pm
Joyce Uglow
I’m your 50th comment on this post, which not at surprising. Who wouldn’t want a punny PB starring an avocado? 😍
November 4, 2022 at 2:36 pm
Danielle Hammelef
This book has such fun word play! I love the message behind the play. I love to make and eat guacamole so a recipe included is awesome.
November 4, 2022 at 3:27 pm
Jessica Milo
This sounds so cute and fun!! Congratulations on your book, I can’t wait to read it!!
November 4, 2022 at 3:37 pm
S. K. Wenger
Congratulations, Chana! This book sounds adorable.
November 4, 2022 at 4:11 pm
Buffy Silverman
You hooked me with the title–sounds wonderful.
November 4, 2022 at 4:13 pm
marty bellis
Thanks for sharing the backstory to your story, Chana! I love hearing how it came about and am so happy Avocado discovered her special qualities. Bravo!
November 4, 2022 at 4:30 pm
seahorsecoffeeelektra79018
Super cute cover! Avocado is adorable, from twinkling eyes to sweet smile. Can’t wait to share the book with my 3 year old grandson.
November 4, 2022 at 4:35 pm
Darshana Khiani
Love this! You are so funny Chana. Bravo!
November 4, 2022 at 4:39 pm
kiwijenny
I would love to avo copy. I teach 4 year olds who eat junk…a green that’s a wonderful nutritional creamy and a book hero as well. Well that takes the cake…or at least cheese cake …I’m sure there’s an avocado version
November 4, 2022 at 4:42 pm
jennifercowanwriter
Bravo Avocado sounds amazing- congrats! I also really liked the lines you posted from the first version, but yeah- prob better to not have her eaten at the end lol! Would’ve been funny though….
I look forward to reading your book!
November 4, 2022 at 4:42 pm
jennifercowanwriter
Bravo Avocado sounds amazing- congrats! I also really liked the lines you posted from the first version, but yeah- prob better to not have her eaten at the end lol! Would’ve been funny though….
I look forward to reading your book!
November 4, 2022 at 5:28 pm
katiemillsgiorgio
Oh this looks so fun! thanks for sharing!
November 4, 2022 at 5:53 pm
Liz Godfrey
Thanks for sharing your story, Chana! Your new book sounds hilarious (I was intrigued that you sometimes “go dark” as I might fall in that subversive category as well). Congratulations!
November 4, 2022 at 10:04 pm
Maria Marshall
Yeah little avocado! I remember this punny journey. It will awesome to see in print! Congrats Chana. Such a cute cover.
November 4, 2022 at 10:13 pm
seschipper
Thanks for sharing your background story, Chana!
Can’t wait to read this punny, funny story! 🙂
November 4, 2022 at 11:06 pm
Elayne
Ah! I love puns, and I love food. Can’t wait to read this one, Chana. Congrats!
November 5, 2022 at 7:35 am
leslieevatayloe
What a great title! Congrats. Best wishes.
November 5, 2022 at 10:06 am
Trish Kreiser
Clever and fun story!! Congratulations!
November 5, 2022 at 10:32 am
tinamcho
Congrats, Chana! I loved reading the backstory.
November 5, 2022 at 11:49 am
Joyce Simon
I love puns!
November 5, 2022 at 4:14 pm
Kaye Baillie
Such a great cover. Love hearing the backstory. Congrats Chana!
November 5, 2022 at 6:47 pm
Darcee A Freier
Congrats, Chana, and Avocado, too. You seem to be a winning pair.
November 5, 2022 at 9:50 pm
Katie Fischer
I love puns, especially food puns. Congrats on your new book, can’t wait to read it when it comes out!
November 5, 2022 at 10:24 pm
Karen Lawler
I was pleased to hear all about the editing process and how the new version came about. Nice job!
November 6, 2022 at 7:39 am
Mary Warth
What a creative story! I enjoyed reading about the development this went through. Congratulations!
November 6, 2022 at 10:29 am
Jennifer Raudenbush
Thanks for sharing your story. This book sounds so fun!
November 6, 2022 at 5:41 pm
Sylvia Mary Grech
Love hearing how your book came about. Mashed avocado on toast is my favorite!
November 6, 2022 at 5:51 pm
Arlene Schenker
looks great, Chana! Good luck with it. I’ll look for it in March.
November 6, 2022 at 8:03 pm
Antoinette Truglio Martin
What a sweet/savory story and writer’s journey.
November 6, 2022 at 11:50 pm
Sandy Perlic
I love punny books, and this one sounds extra special since it has incorporated SEL themes. Bravo, Chana! Can’t wait to read it.
November 7, 2022 at 3:06 pm
Natasha Wing
Avocado deserves its place in the world. (eating one right now)
November 7, 2022 at 5:08 pm
Karan Greene
I love avocados! Mashed in guac or illustrated in books! Congrats!
November 7, 2022 at 6:39 pm
Carol Gordon Ekster
Love your process! Love the title and cover. Mazel tov on this new picture book!
November 8, 2022 at 1:06 am
Jilanne Hoffmann
Love the two different versions, but all I could think at the end was avocado toast!!! How is it possible that the MC doesn’t get eaten in the end???? Inquiring minds want to know!
November 8, 2022 at 10:32 am
Kim Hedzik
Loved reading about how this idea was born and how it morphed into what it is now. Thanks for sharing.
November 9, 2022 at 11:57 am
Natalie Lynn Tanner
CHANA: OH, I’m SO RELIEVED that “no fruits or veggies were harmed in the making of this book”!!! I’m a BIG FAN of your books and CAN’T WAIT to read this one! CONGRATS!
November 10, 2022 at 11:07 am
stephaniemstories
Love a good punny story. And an avocado character is original.
November 10, 2022 at 5:07 pm
Cheryl simon
This sounds hilarious with a great message. I can’t wait to read it!!!
November 11, 2022 at 1:54 pm
H. Abigail Perry
I can’t wait to read this book!
November 11, 2022 at 2:10 pm
Shauntrell Leaks
I would love to add this to my kindergarten classroom library 😃!
November 12, 2022 at 7:14 pm
Janet Frenck Sheets
I want to know why Chana’s agent asked if she had a manuscript about an avocado. Did HarperCollins put out a call for one? That seems oddly specific. More details, please!
November 13, 2022 at 2:07 pm
Lauri Meyers
Chana, you are on fire! Can’t wait to celebrate this avocado:)
November 17, 2022 at 6:08 pm
TonyaAnn Pember
What wonderful inspiration for writers everywhere, there’s a story in the everyday!
December 5, 2022 at 8:01 pm
Nadine Poper
Chana,
I am so glad you didn’t give up on Avocado.
How do you know when two avocados are in love?
Because they’ll avocuddle whenever they av’ a chance.
The cover is adorable!
December 24, 2022 at 11:30 am
Cheryl Simon
This is adorable! Avocado toast and fresh guacamole are regulars in our house!
January 29, 2023 at 3:13 pm
Krys Plate
OMG I’m dying laughing at your post1 I cannot WAIT to read this book to my grandson- he will eat it up! 🙂