by Carrie Finison
If you’ve studied story structure, you’re familiar with the classic narrative arc: main character has a problem or wants something, makes several attempts to solve her problem, learns a little something along the way, and finally uses that learning to resolve her problem or get what she wants. Growth and change in the main character is key to many of these stories.
BUT…what if that thing your character wants, or that problem she’s trying to solve, is in direct opposition to an innate character trait—something she CANNOT CHANGE about herself?
What if your character has fabulous hair, but feels uncomfortable when people touch it?
Don’t Touch My Hair by Sharee Miller
What if your character is a bear, but would rather be a bunny? Or is a frog, but would rather be…anything else?
Bunnybear by Andrea J. Loney, illustrated by Carmen Saldaña
I Don’t Want to Be a Frog by Dev Petty, illustrated by Mike Boldt
What if your character is big and mean and grouchy, but is continually followed around by small, adorable creatures?
Big Mean Mike by Michelle Knudsen, illustrated by Scott Magoon
Mother Bruce by Ryan T. Higgins
What if your character needs her personal space, but has waaaay too many siblings?
Charlotte the Scientist is Squished by Camille Andros, illustrated by Brianne Farley
What if a group of carnivores tries to go vegetarian?
Carnivores by Aaron Reynolds, illustrated by Dan Santat
What if your character is a very loud rooster who lives in a very quiet town?
The Rooster Who Would Not Be Quiet by Carmen Agra Deedy, illustrated by Eugene Yelchin
What if your character is so huggable that everyone wants to give him a squeeze, but he’s not the hugging kind? That’s how the idea for my upcoming picture book DON’T HUG DOUG, illustrated by Daniel Wiseman, came to me.
I knew this was a common problem—we all know kids who have gone through a no-hugs phase, kids who avoid hugs due to sensory issues, and conversely, kids (and—ahem!—adults) who are overenthusiastic huggers. What if, I thought, a kid who doesn’t like hugs is just so puppy-dog-eyes adorable that EVERYONE wants to hug him? Instant conflict!
These books are often about personal boundaries, identity, or personality. They’re humorous and can be fun to read but—writer beware—they can be difficult to write, as I quickly found with my hugging story. Why? Because as I stated at the start of this post, problems that are in opposition to an innate character trait usually cannot be resolved (or at least, can’t be happily resolved) the “old fashioned way”—by the main character changing. Something else has gotta give. Find these books and study their endings to see how the authors handled this dilemma.
In the meantime, have fun making your characters miserable!
Carrie Finison began her literary career at the age of seven with an idea, a box of markers, and her father’s typewriter. She has been writing off and on ever since, though she has (somewhat regretfully) traded in the typewriter for a laptop. Her first picture book, DOZENS OF DOUGHNUTS, was published in July, 2020. Her second book, DON’T HUG DOUG, illustrated by Daniel Wiseman, will hit the shelves this month, on January 26 and has earned a starred review from Kirkus. She lives outside Boston with her husband, son, daughter, and two cats who permit her to write in their cozy attic office. For updates, subscribe to her newsletter, check out her website, or follow on Twitter @CarrieFinison, Facebook, or Instagram @carriefinison.
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January 11, 2021 at 8:06 am
Poppy Wrote P
Can’t wait to read Don’t Hug Doug!
January 11, 2021 at 8:11 am
Tara Cerven
I have been wondering about writing a story that doesn’t have a traditional arc. I’ll definitely be checking out these books. Thank you!!
January 11, 2021 at 8:21 am
Cristina Raymer
Thank you for your insights in developing stories like this! I actually have one in the process and will be using your suggested books to help me perfect it.
My daughter LOVES Dozens of Doughnuts and we can’t wait to read Don’t Hug Doug!
Thank you!!
January 11, 2021 at 8:12 am
Julia
Hi Carrie, what a great way to come up with a story idea! Thanks!!
January 11, 2021 at 8:14 am
amydunjey
Looking forward to trying to come up with some ideas like these!
January 11, 2021 at 8:15 am
lizricewrites
Thanks for your insights about making the character feel miserable
January 11, 2021 at 8:17 am
Hannah
Great advice, thank you so much! I love this way of creating conflict in a story.
January 11, 2021 at 8:18 am
michelemeleen
I can see how these would be very difficult to resolve. Can’t wait to check out the endings if the few recommendations that I haven’t read. Thanks for the insights!
January 11, 2021 at 8:18 am
Meli Glickman
I love these examples about how picture book structures can push the boundaries and result in amazing outcomes. Thanks for sharing!
January 11, 2021 at 8:18 am
kiwijenny
Make your characters miserable..I had one that got so mad at me for hurtling her through space for 7 days…I couldn’t figure out what to do with her…her skin got pruney her eyes watered. …mmm back to the drawing board. But this is something new . Good luck with Don’t Hug Doug
January 11, 2021 at 8:19 am
jodieparachini
Thanks Carrie! Definitely a few new books to add to my reading list…. (especially Don’t Hug Doug!)
January 11, 2021 at 8:19 am
steveheron
Thank you for the ‘What if’s?’- the question that is one of the best weapons in a picture book creator’s arsenal.
January 11, 2021 at 8:20 am
Jamie Bills
Thanks for this advice Carrie! I love Dozens of Doughnuts and can’t wait for Don’t Hug Doug. 🙂
January 11, 2021 at 8:22 am
Cathy L. Murphy
Virtual hugs to you for this fun and inspiring post, Carrie! Can’t wait to see how you handle Doug’s dilemma.
January 11, 2021 at 8:22 am
Andrew Hacket
I love stories like these. You are absolutely right that they are fun to read aloud and kids love them.
January 11, 2021 at 8:23 am
pathaap
What a great way to change up a character. I love this idea. Thanks, Carrie!
January 11, 2021 at 8:24 am
Writer on the run
Thank you Carrrie for reminding us of the question “What if?” I’m adding these books to my reading list. Time to think outside the box.
January 11, 2021 at 8:25 am
Andrea Mack
Sooooo excited for your new book! In the meantime, I’m going to try this opposite personality idea. What a fun way to generate stories!
January 11, 2021 at 8:27 am
Linda Schueler
Congratulations on your upcoming book! Can’t wait to read it.
January 11, 2021 at 8:28 am
Shelley Isaacson
This is a perfect time to be thinking about opposite personalities and resistance! Congratulations on your pending book birthday!
January 11, 2021 at 8:30 am
acottykid
Thank you for sharing.
January 11, 2021 at 8:32 am
jjarson1
Thanks for your post!
January 11, 2021 at 8:33 am
Jeanette Stampone
I really love stories which make you think outside the box and see things in a different way. I will be interested to read the endings of these books!
January 11, 2021 at 8:34 am
Kate Woodle
I’m a non hugger myself. I come from a non-hugging family – we just didn’t do a lot of hugging. I can’t wait to read your book!
January 11, 2021 at 8:35 am
Lisa Freund
This is going to be fun to think about. Thanks, Carrie!
January 11, 2021 at 8:39 am
Mark Bentz
Hi Carrie, Thank you for this very informative post.
Looking forward to reading your new book.
Congratulations.
January 11, 2021 at 8:39 am
jill
YAY! 3 cheers for the rejection of character arc! I’m so tired of the having to make my characters bend to the conflict. Some of my characters don’t want to. Maybe it’s my stubbornness. Maybe it’s because real life isn’t always a process of self-discovery. And if it is, maybe that self-discovery is “I don’t want to or feel the need to change.” Acceptance and teaching fresh perspective are the themes I’m seeing in some of my newest brainstorming. I love your perspective and “permission” to have a character feel confident in who they are. Thanks so much, Carrie!
January 11, 2021 at 8:42 am
Sara Ackerman
I just put a bunch of books on hold at the library-thank for the suggestions 🙂 … I’m currently revising a manuscript where I just don’t want the main character to have to change this one particular thing about herself…and do it in a way that makes her remain sympathetic. And I’m REALLY looking forward of adding DON’T HUG DOUG to my classroom library.
January 11, 2021 at 8:43 am
Catherine Brewer
This is so inspiring! Thank you Carrie!
January 11, 2021 at 8:45 am
Sarah Stuart
Thank you for this post! I’m looking forward to reading your picture book later this month.
January 11, 2021 at 8:47 am
Laura Purdie Salas
Ooh, I have a pb ms that’s making the rounds that has a main character who doesn’t change (because the trait in question is an innate thing). Can’t wait to read DON’T HUG DOUG!
January 11, 2021 at 8:48 am
pecrosby
I have heard if Dizens of Doughnuts and is in my list for good reads! Can’t wait for Don’t Hug Doug. I have a daughter who would understand this dilemna though as an adult she has moved past it.
January 11, 2021 at 8:49 am
Jane Heitman Healy
Wow, Carrie, this is a whole new category of conflict, and you’ve given some great examples! Thanks for another way to look at conflict, and much continued success to you!
January 11, 2021 at 8:50 am
Maria
I can’t wait to buy “Don’t Hug Doug” for a friend who describes himself as a “touch-me-not”! Thanks for the great post.
January 11, 2021 at 8:50 am
Emily Chibwana
This was EXACTLY the post I needed to read tonight. I was really stuck on how to resolve my ending, and after reading this, I think perhaps not resolving it is better. THANK YOU!
January 11, 2021 at 8:50 am
mooseeggproductions
Thanks for the useful info!
January 11, 2021 at 8:51 am
Betsy
Thank you Carrie!! I love these books! Looking forward to reading yours!! Thanks for the tips!
January 11, 2021 at 8:52 am
Mackinzie Rekers
DON’T HUG DOUG looks so great! I can’t wait to read it to my hug averse children!
January 11, 2021 at 8:52 am
Cynthia Way
This is a fabulous post. I love all the examples and the advice to see how this conflict was resolved.
January 11, 2021 at 8:53 am
Alice Fulgione
Can’t wait to read, “Don’t Hug Doug!” Thanks for this great & informative post!
January 11, 2021 at 8:53 am
Amy Houts
Sounds like fun! Thanks!
January 11, 2021 at 8:55 am
Robin Brett Wechsler
Thank you, Carrie, for sharing your different thinking/approach to your new book. I’m excited to read it. (And I love DOZENS OF DOUGHNUTS.)
January 11, 2021 at 8:55 am
Nancy Colle
Smashing! Lots of food for thought here. Very helpful. Thank you for such an inspiring post.
January 11, 2021 at 8:58 am
Deborah Agranat Sullivan
Great assignment, Carrie! Always helpful to tinker with traditional writing models..thanks for sharing. And congrats on Don’t Hug Doug!
January 11, 2021 at 8:59 am
Laura Bower
Hi Carrie! Love the idea of not following the traditional arc! Thanks for the great examples! Dozens of Donuts is a favorite in my house and can’t wait for Don’t Hug Doug!
January 11, 2021 at 8:59 am
saintamovin
Thank you Carrie 😊
January 11, 2021 at 9:00 am
naturewalkwithgod
Now I must read a bunch of picture books to learn the answer to the problem solving conundrum. LOL! Thank you for sharing with us, Carrie! –Kim
January 11, 2021 at 9:01 am
readmybook2002
Thank you for pointing out “misdirections” in story ideas. Love it.
January 11, 2021 at 9:02 am
EllenB
Quite the challenge! Love the premise. Good luck with your new book.
Look forward to hugging it.
Ellen
January 11, 2021 at 9:03 am
Suzana zur Nedden
Interesting questions to be anwsered here… Than k you for the Inspirations! 😉
January 11, 2021 at 9:03 am
Elizabeth Masterman
I’m familiar with story structure, but hadn’t thought about this alternative take. Thanks for the heads up!
January 11, 2021 at 9:06 am
Zoraida Rivera
Carrie, what a great list of books to read! Thanks for giving me light on these types of stories. I have two ideas like these. Being struggling for a while. Hope reading helps me find the way. Have a great year.
January 11, 2021 at 9:06 am
Kathi Morrison-Taylor
Thanks for this helpful collection of examples. It’s so fun to see these titles together.
January 11, 2021 at 9:07 am
faygie1
I read Charlotte the Scientist Is Squished just the other day and thought it was adorable, but I hadn’t considered that the story doesn’t mean the traditional arc. Now, I’m eager to read Don’t Hug Doug, because I want to see how you handle it and solve Doug’s problem.
January 11, 2021 at 9:07 am
stiefelchana
Socially distant hugs for this terrific post, Carrie! Thank you! Congrats on your books!
January 11, 2021 at 9:07 am
catherine owen
Now there’s a whole bunch more books I need to read because I need to find out how they end!!!
January 11, 2021 at 9:09 am
Melissa H. Mwai
Thanks for this book list of non traditional arcs. I’ve not run across one about character traits this way. Also LOVE the covert are on Don’t Hug Doug by Daniel Wiseman
January 11, 2021 at 9:11 am
maureenegan
Looking forward to hugging the book—not Doug!
January 11, 2021 at 9:11 am
jilltatara
Thank you for this post! Can’t wait to read Don’t Hug Doug!
January 11, 2021 at 9:11 am
thecrowsmap
Congratulations on your books! Thanks for these tips and great mentor texts.
Gail Hartman
January 11, 2021 at 9:13 am
Little Al
What an Ah-ha this morning, thank you. Running toward my idea bank because I am sure a few of my ideas are going go from stuck to story! YESSSSSS.
January 11, 2021 at 9:15 am
Rebecca Gardyn Levington
What a great round-up of titles, Carrie! Thank you for popping in and sharing some of your process. 🙂
January 11, 2021 at 9:19 am
Jany Campana
Thank you Carrie, your words have inspired me to keep reaching for new ideas!
January 11, 2021 at 9:19 am
chaunceyelephant
You chose a challenging direction and made it work. Congrats!
January 11, 2021 at 9:22 am
Leslie Tayloe
Funny. Thank you!
January 11, 2021 at 9:22 am
calliebdean
I’ve been thinking a lot about that cardinal rule of PB writing—the main character must solve their own problem—and wondering about the influences that various internal and external factors can play in that process. This adds another dimension to that tension!
January 11, 2021 at 9:24 am
meganu
So excited for “Don’t Hug Doug!”
January 11, 2021 at 9:24 am
tasha woodson
yay! thank you for the reminder there’s not only one way to write a story. looking forward to son hug Doug!
January 11, 2021 at 9:26 am
Genevieve Petrillo
Blerg. This is one of the toughest things for Mom to do – make her characters struggle. It seems they never struggle enough! That said, she NEVER has any trouble making ME suffer. Don’t lick the floor. Get off the bed. It’s not dinner time yet. Put on your snow boots. Let me brush your teeth. UGH!
Love and licks,
Cupcake
January 11, 2021 at 9:28 am
Jay
Congratulations on your new book and thank you for sharing the challenge that helped make it.
January 11, 2021 at 9:31 am
Janet Smart
You’ve given me something to think about. Thanks for the post and sharing those books with us. Congratulations and good luck on your new book!
January 11, 2021 at 9:31 am
regm55
I enjoyed hearing about the latest books and the formula that picture books have taken. I look forward to reading about Doug since it is most relevant now with social distancing. Best of luck.
January 11, 2021 at 9:33 am
tdjw
Omg “don’t touch my hair” and “mother Bruce” are two of my favorites. Especially since I always have to tell people not to touch my hair or not to ask to touch my hair. Mother Bruce is adorable because it teaches boys and girls that dads can be nurturing too
January 11, 2021 at 9:34 am
Kathryn Cunningham
So relevant! Thanks for the wise words!
January 11, 2021 at 9:34 am
Sarah SarahH
This Carrie! This just solved a problem that I’ve had with a story from a few years ago. I’m so excited!
January 11, 2021 at 9:36 am
Lynn Baldwin
Looking forward to reading your new book, Carrie.
January 11, 2021 at 9:36 am
Megan Litwin
Thanks for your post, Carrie. I love having great examples of books to look at with a certain lens. Looking forward to meeting Doug, and congrats on all your success! 🙂
January 11, 2021 at 9:36 am
sareenmclay
Thank you, it is great to read about stories that don’t always follow the ‘traditional’ pattern – I’ve added these to my tbr list and am looking forward to reading ‘Don’t Hug Doug’. Congratulations!
January 11, 2021 at 9:37 am
mlflannigan
Thank you Carrie!
January 11, 2021 at 9:37 am
Jennifer Blanck
Thanks for sharing mentor texts on this different structure, and best wishes to you and your book. It sounds like a great story!
January 11, 2021 at 9:37 am
CKLange
Thank you so much! My brain literally went poof with all the ideas that flooded onto my paper with the two words you shared. “What If”
January 11, 2021 at 9:38 am
pbbeckyk
This is exactly what I needed to read today, as several of my works in progress follow similar formulas, and yes (!), they are not easy to resolve with a tidy, neat bow on top. But, when I feel like I might just be pulling it off? Magic! Thanks for providing extra motivation today.
January 11, 2021 at 9:39 am
Lisa (Elisabeth) Aikins
Love this!! Thank you for sharing, Carrie…and for including mentor text examples. Looking forward to trying it!
January 11, 2021 at 9:40 am
Jennifer Weisse
Such an interesting concept. I think this will be fun and challenging to play around with. Thank you for the great idea and for all the book suggestions. Congratulations on your upcoming book…it sounds great!
January 11, 2021 at 9:41 am
Suz Halko
Thank you for these titles—and congrats on Don’t Hug Doug!
January 11, 2021 at 9:44 am
silentkdesign
Thank you for giving us your perspective! This is such a fun challenge to try and think of conflict in a new and different way! Congrats on Don’t Hug Doug – I will most definitely need to look that up!
January 11, 2021 at 9:46 am
Jessica Coupé
Thanks for the book recommendations and idea!
January 11, 2021 at 9:47 am
Colleen Owen Murphy
Thanks Carrie! I am going to study those books to learn how the respective problems were solved and then see what I can do with this approach!
January 11, 2021 at 9:49 am
deirdreprischmann
Really fun post – Don’t Hug Doug reminded me of my picture book No Hugs! (2019, Amicus Ink), which is a great way to discuss boundaries with younger kids.
January 11, 2021 at 9:49 am
TerriMichels
But I am a hugger and having withdrawal. I just have to try harder. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and talents.
January 11, 2021 at 9:51 am
Cortney Benvenuto
Great post! Thanks for the inspiration!
January 11, 2021 at 9:53 am
beckylevine
Wonder post–thank you!
January 11, 2021 at 9:54 am
Joyce Uglow
Yes! endings… going against the grain… thinking outside the box… All of these make writing inherently more intriguing and decidedly more difficult to do well. Thank you for this grouping of books to study.
January 11, 2021 at 9:55 am
Laura
Excellent and really funny reframe!
January 11, 2021 at 9:56 am
Kimberly Hutmacher
What a great direction to go with a story. Love these examples.
January 11, 2021 at 9:56 am
Jessica Hinrichs
Thank you for this! I’m currently writing a PB in this vein, so this blog was just what I needed today. 😃
January 11, 2021 at 9:56 am
talararuth
Great post! Gave me lots of ideas to try to untangle!
Thanks!
January 11, 2021 at 9:57 am
Kimberly Hutmacher
Love this take on picture books and the examples you’ve given.
January 11, 2021 at 9:57 am
pollyrenner
Ooooh! A challenge! Thank you, Carrie, for offering a different perspective when writing! And for offering so many mentor texts to learn it:>
January 11, 2021 at 9:58 am
Susan Drew
Can’t wait to read “Don’t Hug Doug”. I may even have to get it for my husband, he also doesn’t like to be hugged.
January 11, 2021 at 9:58 am
Lisa Clewner
Can’t wait to read your new book!
January 11, 2021 at 9:58 am
Nancy Ramsey
Thanks for your insights and inspiration!
January 11, 2021 at 9:59 am
Melisa Wrex
I do like rules and patterns as a way to help me if I’m stuck, but trying to make everything fit in that same mold doesn’t work. Thank you for the guest blog today!
January 11, 2021 at 9:59 am
Alicia Curley
Carrie – you are so right! I have a WIP with a miserable character and it’s so challenging to find the right strings to pull and the satisfying not-too-preachy ending! As someone who is not a big hugger, I appreciate your upcoming take on the topic and look forward to reading!
January 11, 2021 at 9:59 am
Sarah Hetu-Radny
This was a great post thank you so much Carrie! I’m going to try to think up some characters to make miserable today! I always look forward to your posts!
January 11, 2021 at 10:01 am
Bennett Dixon
Thanks Carrie–I have a manuscript with a conflict of this structure and it needs a more satisfying resolution, so the titles you referenced will be the next ones I check out!
January 11, 2021 at 10:02 am
Susan Claus
Thank you for a fresh take on story structure! It’s one of those hard-and-fast-rules-that-writers-must-always-follow. Until they don’t, and make something wonderful.
January 11, 2021 at 10:02 am
JoanLongstaff
I love books that challenge the usual narrative arc. Thank you for pointing me towards a few books that I’ve not come across before that explore this. Can’t wait to have a go! Bring on the misery!
January 11, 2021 at 10:03 am
rosecappelli
Thanks for the great suggestions! Looking forward to reading your new book, Carrie.
January 11, 2021 at 10:05 am
Cinzia V.
Thanks Carrie – I love your comments on story structure and your examples. Great perspective!
January 11, 2021 at 10:06 am
jms5880
Thank you for sharing.
January 11, 2021 at 10:10 am
Mrs. Vandivier
I like the idea of looking at a character from a different perspective. Great post. Thanks for teaching us that there are so many ways to think about a character….
January 11, 2021 at 10:11 am
Erin Gallagher
Thanks for this post! I’ve had this issue with MSs before and look forward to reading some of these that I haven’t before!
January 11, 2021 at 10:11 am
kathalsey
Carrie, I want to hug you and Doug! Such fun. And yes, I can see how they can be hard to write. Congrats on your newest PB.
January 11, 2021 at 10:12 am
Karin Larson
Great post, thanks! Congratulations on DON’T HUG DOUG. It sounds wonderful, and I look forward to reading it.
January 11, 2021 at 10:12 am
Tanya Konerman
Very interesting look at these kinds of picture books. I’ve read most of them, but need to go back and study the endings as you mention!
January 11, 2021 at 10:15 am
Cathy Ballou Mealey
What a terrific list of books to consult.
Congrats on DON’T HUG DOUG Carrie!
January 11, 2021 at 10:17 am
bgonsar
Lol – I love a miserable character. Thanks for the post, Carrie, and congrats on Don’t Hug Doug!
January 11, 2021 at 10:18 am
Kathy Crable
Loved this! Can’t wait to read Don’t Hug Doug!
January 11, 2021 at 10:19 am
Manju Beth Howard (@ManjuBeth)
Thanks, Carrie! I’ve had a similar discussion with critique partners. Rather than the MC changing, the MC through his or her actions creates change in a secondary character(s).
January 11, 2021 at 10:20 am
Rebster
I must love making my characters miserable, as your post inspired three ideas! Thanks, Carrie! 🙂
January 11, 2021 at 10:21 am
Michele Ziemke
Can’t wait to read Don’t Hug Doug! I’m already making a list of ideas! ❤️
January 11, 2021 at 10:21 am
Janie Reinart
Carrie,
Great way to shake up a story! Your new book sounds fabulous!
Thank you for the post.❤️
January 11, 2021 at 10:24 am
marynadoughty
Thank you for all of the picture book recommendations, Carrie!
-Maryna Doughty
January 11, 2021 at 10:24 am
Kim Nolan
I love those types of stories. I’m looking forward to reading DON’T HUG DOUG.
January 11, 2021 at 10:28 am
Jennifer Skene
These books look great, Thanks!
January 11, 2021 at 10:29 am
Kim Bell Gatto
So funny. Good idea to just start by writing down titles? I love these books and titles and your Don’t touch my hair could definitely be written about my son. Brilliant. Thanks for the post. Inspiring!
January 11, 2021 at 10:29 am
Rathi
Thanks for the tips. Can’t wait to read your new book.
January 11, 2021 at 10:33 am
Christine Fleming McIsaac
Thanks for pointing out this plot possibility. And providing so many great examples. I have an idea and look forward to revisiting these books as I work on it. Congrats on your books. I look forward to reading them.
January 11, 2021 at 10:34 am
Kim
I love this. Having three children with different personalities has just given me a few ideas! ☺️
January 11, 2021 at 10:36 am
Cheryl Johnson
Thanks for sharing! I loved Don’t Hug Doug and highly recommend it to others.
January 11, 2021 at 10:37 am
Audrey Day-Williams,
Carrie! I’m so excited for DON’T HUG DOUG! I just requested it from my library, but of course, look forward to getting it at your book launch! Very timely info about the non-traditional arc and making your characters uncomforable. I also love, love, love, DOZENS of DOUGHNUTS!
January 11, 2021 at 10:38 am
Cathy McDonnell
Thanks Carrie, I really enjoyed your post and look forward to doing further reading and especially looking at the endings.
January 11, 2021 at 10:39 am
Lori Himmel
I’m so excited to read Don’t Hug Doug! I’m an enthusiastic hugger but don’t always want one. 🙂
January 11, 2021 at 10:39 am
Jessica Swaim
Thanks, Carrie. Good stuff. Don’t Hug Doug looks fun.
January 11, 2021 at 10:40 am
lanearnold
Delightful to ponder!
January 11, 2021 at 10:41 am
Sallye O'Rourke
DOZENS OF DOUGHNUTS is adorable! Can’t wait to read DON’T HUG DUG.
January 11, 2021 at 10:41 am
Suzanne Lewis
Perfect timing! I have three of these innate character conflict stories in the works! And they are challenging! Doing some outside-the-box thinking for heartfelt character revelations.Thank you, Carrie!
January 11, 2021 at 10:41 am
kswemba
Wow, thank you for all of these great book examples, Carrie! I do love miserable characters! I’m excited to read your story and see how Doug handles the story’s conflict!
January 11, 2021 at 10:43 am
Jen
Such an interesting idea! I’m headed to the library to see how these authors dealt with this! Great exercise for my 2021 goal of focusing on craft! Thank you!
January 11, 2021 at 10:43 am
Carole Shelton
Thank you Carrie – great info!
January 11, 2021 at 10:43 am
Amy Cory
This is so helpful, Carrie! I can’t wait to read DON’T HUG DOUG!
January 11, 2021 at 10:43 am
Jen MacGregor
Thanks for this post! Love to see a focus on these unique types of stories.
January 11, 2021 at 10:44 am
Susan
What a great exercise. Thank you!
January 11, 2021 at 10:44 am
Christina Dendy Gaspar
I’ve read most of these and look forward to reading yours, but you’re right! I need to go back and pay more attention to how the arc advances and resolves. Thank you for a great post!
January 11, 2021 at 10:45 am
Angie
Oh, that’s a great way to look at conflict. Thanks, Carrie! Congrats on Doug. 🙂
January 11, 2021 at 10:46 am
Kaye Wright
Now you have me thinking about one of my ideas. I was stuck, but now maybe not. Thank you!
January 11, 2021 at 10:46 am
Sarah A Tobias
Great post. I just had a flood of ideas regarding a wip that has been gnawing at me for months.
I am amazed at how other author’s experiences and process can trigger memories, emotions, and potential direction for a story.
January 11, 2021 at 10:48 am
Sarah Ryan
perfect advice for the story I’m working on today!
January 11, 2021 at 10:49 am
Jasmine Smith
I just went and reserved all these titles at the library! You’re right it is hard to resolve this kind of story–I have a WIP with a similar issue and can’t quite figure out how to resolve it…yet.
January 11, 2021 at 10:49 am
Sharon Coffey
The books you listed are great! Children need to see that characters in stories have unusual dislikes or habits just like they do. Love that!
January 11, 2021 at 10:49 am
Kirsti Call
Great post, Carrie! And great mentor texts!
January 11, 2021 at 10:52 am
Julie Maria Harris
Such a great idea prompt! Thank you!
January 11, 2021 at 10:52 am
Leah Moser
Great advice! Thank you for the post.
January 11, 2021 at 10:53 am
Deborah Williams
Congrats on your Dynamic success with Donuts and Doug!
January 11, 2021 at 10:55 am
crdram12
Thanks for these mentor texts! All of my WIPs have this type of character, so this is extremely helpful. Thanks!
January 11, 2021 at 10:56 am
JillDanaBooks
Thanks for such a thought-provoking post! 🙂 Jill Dana
January 11, 2021 at 10:57 am
Gregory E Bray
Great post. Thank you.
January 11, 2021 at 11:00 am
Nancy Furstinger
What a hoot! I can’t wait to play with this exercise:-)
January 11, 2021 at 11:00 am
mommamoocow
Thank yo for that insight.
January 11, 2021 at 11:00 am
Christine @ Goodjelly
“. . . have fun making your characters miserable!” Love it. ❤ Thanks for the great post.
January 11, 2021 at 11:01 am
Susan Cabael
Fantastic mentor text list for making characters miserable. Thanks to your post, I came up with the most ideas in a day so far this Storystorm!
January 11, 2021 at 11:02 am
Carole Calladine
These are all favorite books, but I never put them together the way you did. Thank you, thank you for this post and this grouping of mentor texts.
January 11, 2021 at 11:03 am
Aixa Perez-Prado
Love all those examples and gave me a new idea! Thank you!
January 11, 2021 at 11:03 am
Keren Dibbens-Wyatt
Thank you. That’s helpful.
January 11, 2021 at 11:04 am
Mary Ann Cortez
Thanks for this post! I have a character who doesn’t change but it the end his ‘flaw’ becomes helpful. I think the books you mentioned here can be great mentor texts.
January 11, 2021 at 11:04 am
Jo Martin
Thanks Carrie! Intrigued to look at how these all end, and to read Don’t Hug Doug.
January 11, 2021 at 11:05 am
ryanrobertsauthor
Thanks for this prompt! And yes… now I will have to read/reread all of these to see how they each handled that.
January 11, 2021 at 11:09 am
Carole Calladine
These books are some of my favorites but I’ve never identified “making them miserable” as a grouping. Thank you for this wonderful, fun post.
January 11, 2021 at 11:09 am
Jill Friestad-Tate
The change in focus also helps add to the humor and connectivity. Great point about challenges in resolving the unresolvable at the end! Thank you.
January 11, 2021 at 11:10 am
marty
What a post, Carrie! It comes as no surprise to you that I love your work. Your Belmont Books launch of DOZENS OF DONUTS with Brianne Farley in attendance was wonderful on so many levels. Now I can hardly wait to read DON’T HUG DOUG! I’m looking forward to reading more picture books by you. Thank you for the crash course in narrative arc nuts and bolts as well as the mentor text list. You’re the best!
Thanks, Tara, for bringing so much craft to Storystorm with your phenomenal blogpost guests!
January 11, 2021 at 11:13 am
Renée Neubauer
Great post! I look forward to reading Don’t Hug Doug and seeing how you ended it. 😉
January 11, 2021 at 11:13 am
nataliecohn0258natalie
Carrie this was great about characters who don’t change and are miserable or different. I love the picture book mentor texts I need to read them all.
January 11, 2021 at 11:14 am
Louann Brown
Just the motivation I needed. I think I’m good with characters and voice, but my plots fall short. I’m revising now. I needed this post. thanks!
January 11, 2021 at 11:16 am
Rona Shirdan
Interesting post. It really made me think!
January 11, 2021 at 11:19 am
Maria Altizer
These are fun ideas to think about. Congratulations on your upcoming book. It sounds like a perfect book for a classroom library.
January 11, 2021 at 11:20 am
Christina Shawn
Oooh! This has really got me thinking! Thank you! Also, I have 3 children. 2 love hugs and 1 doesn’t so I will definitely have to read this book.
January 11, 2021 at 11:22 am
Krista Maxwell
Thanks for the new perspective! I need to read a few of these books still. I am not a hugger, so I can relate to Doug. Can’t wait to read it!
January 11, 2021 at 11:23 am
Bethanny Parker
Thanks for helping think about different ways to end our stories.
January 11, 2021 at 11:24 am
Joan Swanson
I loved “I Don’t Want to be a Frog”, and “Mother Bruce”! Thank you for your post.
January 11, 2021 at 11:24 am
seschipper
Thanks so much for another great post! I’ve had both “hugging dilemmas” in our 1st grade classroom…the constant hugger and the please do not hug me !!!
Looking forward to reading “Don’t Hug Doug”! 🙂
January 11, 2021 at 11:25 am
chersugarlee
Great post thank you!
January 11, 2021 at 11:26 am
Shirley Timberlake Fadden
Love this, Carrie. Your DOZENS of DOUGHNUTS is an adorable read and this cover has me sold. Can’t wait to read DON’T HUG DOUG!
January 11, 2021 at 11:27 am
judyrubin13
Thank you, Carrie, for your suggestions to make our characters miserable and give a new twist to our stories.
January 11, 2021 at 11:30 am
nrompella
This is a very good point about books the child can’t solve themselves. Thanks for sharing.
January 11, 2021 at 11:33 am
tinamcho
Love this post & your story! Congrats, Carrie!
January 11, 2021 at 11:35 am
Annie War
These types of stories sound atypical and I am interested in hearing about their methodology in developing the story arc.
January 11, 2021 at 11:37 am
Maria Powell
So excited to read DON’T HUG DOUG. What a great message!
January 11, 2021 at 11:38 am
bevbaird
Got a chuckle from all the miserable, fun characters. Such great advice and list of mentor tests. Thanks Carrie
January 11, 2021 at 11:39 am
Colleen Muske
Thanks for all the ideas about story development. I loved the frog book
January 11, 2021 at 11:39 am
Tracy Hora
Your new book sounds adorable! I will be studying how these authors ended their books. Thanks for the list!
January 11, 2021 at 11:41 am
Michele Helsel
Good point. Problems can’t always be solved in the typical writerly sense.
January 11, 2021 at 11:41 am
ejessmurray
Thanks, Carrie! Great challenge!
January 11, 2021 at 11:42 am
amanookian2014
Looking forward to studying the recommended books and learning more about this style of writing.
January 11, 2021 at 11:43 am
Angela De Groot
Mentor texts – yay! Great post. Thanks.
January 11, 2021 at 11:44 am
streetlynn
Thanks so much for these examples and for pointing out the challenges of this approach. Lynn Street
January 11, 2021 at 11:45 am
teresawebauthorcom
Thanks for the suggestions and congrats on your upcoming book!
January 11, 2021 at 11:48 am
Candace Spizzirri
Thanks, Carrie! Love the mentor texts. Congratulations on Dozens of Doughnuts! It’s adorable!
January 11, 2021 at 11:49 am
aliciaminor
What a way to come up with stories. ” What if” ideas really have results.
It’s a challenge to think and find more what if’s. Happy new year.
January 11, 2021 at 11:53 am
Erika Suckow
This same idea holds true for writers who want to write PB about social, racial, and political justice. Thanks for the advice. Erika
January 11, 2021 at 11:53 am
Lindsey Hobson
Sounds like a cute story! I’ve never really been a hugger (except with my daughter) so I totally get where Doug is coming from!
January 11, 2021 at 11:54 am
Joni Nemeth
Great books on this list.
January 11, 2021 at 11:55 am
Laurie Bouck
I love this idea. I’ve never tried this but definitely will! Thanks so much for your post!
January 11, 2021 at 11:55 am
suumac
Refreshing twist to keep our story ideation ticking along – thank you!
January 11, 2021 at 11:55 am
Sheri Dillard
Thanks for the great post and mentor text suggestions! And congrats on your upcoming book! 🙂
January 11, 2021 at 11:57 am
Earl @ The Chronicles Of A Children's Book Writer
I love seeing the good reliable “What if…?” being used to generate ideas!
January 11, 2021 at 11:57 am
Jessica Dunnagan
Thanks for giving us a new way to think about picture book problems that aren’t easily resolved. I love to write about characters that are struggling with embracing who they are.
January 11, 2021 at 11:58 am
Darcee A. Freier
Congrats on your new book, Carrie! Can’t wait to read it and see how you resolve Doug’s dilemma.
January 11, 2021 at 11:59 am
wfedan
Thank you! This post is getting my imagination gears going! 🙂 Thanks for all the book examples!
January 11, 2021 at 12:01 pm
lavern15
I’d love to hear how your book ends. I know quite a few people who don’t love hugs :-). Thanks for the tips Carrie!
January 11, 2021 at 12:03 pm
Ciara N M Greenwalt
BRB, need to go out every single one of these books on hold at the library.
January 11, 2021 at 12:04 pm
Lauren Hidalgo
Now that is a fresh perspective! 😀 Love it.
January 11, 2021 at 12:04 pm
Ann Harrell
Loved this post! It has given me much food for thought!
January 11, 2021 at 12:05 pm
mariearden
Exactly! Characters who don’t change but remain, oh so human. I was really drawn to Mac Barnett’s Rules of the House because his two siblings don’t change who they are, but move closer to toleration and acceptance of each other, which I believe to be more realistic. So thank-you for these titles to explore on this theme. I’m looking forward to reading your new book too.
January 11, 2021 at 12:06 pm
Krista Harrington
Carrie, thank you for these wonderful examples. I love writing stories like these!
January 11, 2021 at 12:10 pm
Nichole Bowers
Interesting idea and insight! Writing about a character whose wants or problem solving tactics is in direct opposition to an innate character trait is a whole new concept for me. This gives me alot to think about. Looking forward to reading your new book!
Thank you for sharing!
January 11, 2021 at 12:11 pm
Belen Medina Cabot
Great post. Excited to get writing today!
January 11, 2021 at 12:14 pm
Cassie Bentley
You nailed it with clarity. A character can’t change, but changing their location, situation or getting understanding from others goes a long way.
I have two stuck stories. I now have ideas on how to fix them. Plus another idea from Storystorm last year that I couldn’t figure out how to develop.
Thank you. I cannot wait for your new book. Congratulations.
January 11, 2021 at 12:14 pm
Sheri
Or what if your character has an ambivalent approach to something – some days wants privacy and peace, and other days longs for company and interaction? This makes for an internal conflict and confusing messages being sent out to others…
January 11, 2021 at 12:19 pm
Jessica Potts
I love stories like these!
January 11, 2021 at 12:20 pm
Blair Ortman
Thank you for compiling this list. I’m looking forward to the analysis!
January 11, 2021 at 12:20 pm
matthewlasley
I think that these stories still follow the traditional arc, just in an untraditional way. The character still makes attempts to “fix” the problem, but it isn’t in a “creative” way. In Mother Bruce, Bruce finally accepts the responsibility thrust on him. He doesn’t “change” but at the same time, he does change. At the beginning, it was all about him, at the end it is about the geese. He makes a choice.
I do agree though, that when you have something that can not be overcome, the change is not outward (I ran the race and won) to inward (I hate running, but I’ll do it for a good cause).
January 11, 2021 at 12:21 pm
Stephanie Gibeault
Thank you, Carrie! That was such an inspiring post. I love several of the books you mentioned, and I’d never thought of them like that before. Now I’m thinking of new ways to approach my characters’ problems.
January 11, 2021 at 12:22 pm
melissamiles1
Lots of great food for thought here! Thank you!
January 11, 2021 at 12:23 pm
Karen
Hi Carrie. I have one or two manuscripts that have this dilemma. Thank you for the examples to study. I’m going to revisit my stories with fresh eyes and see how the endings hold up or if I need to revise them.
January 11, 2021 at 12:24 pm
annette schottenfeld
Carrie, brilliant post that drives home a new way of approaching a story. You’ve got me thinking! 🙂
January 11, 2021 at 12:25 pm
Anita Banks
My To Be Read pile is growing!!!! Thank you!
January 11, 2021 at 12:26 pm
kskeesling
I love the theme of making the characters miserable, seems like so much fun to write! Thanks for the book list too-can’t wait to read all of them.
January 11, 2021 at 12:29 pm
danielledufayet
Such great recommendations! Thanks for this unique post and congrats!
January 11, 2021 at 12:31 pm
Roberta Gibson
Thanks for the reminder that not all stories have to fit into a standard template. Looking forward to “getting my hands” on DON’T HUG DOUG (couldn’t resist).
January 11, 2021 at 12:31 pm
Andrea Denish
Ooh, now I have to go and see how these books end. Thanks for the inspiration.
January 11, 2021 at 12:33 pm
vijikc
Thank you for giving a list of books that I need to check out!
January 11, 2021 at 12:34 pm
YauMei Chiang
Dear Carrie, you’re so correct that often the story cannot easily resolve a conflict such as an innate character trait. Thank you for the examples you provide for study. Congratulations on your books; I look forward to reading them.
January 11, 2021 at 12:34 pm
georgeandjohanna
The books I brainstorm often don’t fit into the traditional story arch. Thank you for the encouragement and the mentor text suggestions.
January 11, 2021 at 12:35 pm
Kathy Mazurowski
Those a a few of my favorite titles. Thanks for the reminder, I am going to go back and reread for endings
January 11, 2021 at 12:35 pm
R.G. Spaulding
Carrie, I love your books, Dozens of Donuts and Don’t Hug Doug. Thank you for the post about the personal conflicts of the MC. It is already giving me a lot of new ideas.
January 11, 2021 at 12:38 pm
Kassy Keppol
Thank you
January 11, 2021 at 12:41 pm
Becky Shillington
What a great way to introduce conflict into your story, Carrie! And I love the topic. Congratulations on your new book! 🙂
January 11, 2021 at 12:42 pm
Bonnie Auslander
Loved your Dozens of Doughnuts–gave it a starred review! And this is a very helpful blog entry–great way to think about establishing conflict.
January 11, 2021 at 12:42 pm
Nadia Salomon
Love this concept Carrie. Thank you for the book recs with the theme mentioned. Congrats on your new book!
January 11, 2021 at 12:43 pm
mariemessinger
And how empowering for kids!
January 11, 2021 at 12:44 pm
Heather Rowley
What a great way to look at writing a book! Thanks so much for sharing!
January 11, 2021 at 12:45 pm
Lisa Riddiough
Carrie, I am so looking forward to this book. It is such a real problem. I get uncomfortable when I see older relatives go in for a forced hug. Thank you for highlighting these other books as well.
January 11, 2021 at 12:45 pm
marty
Thanks for giving us some mentor texts to illustrate this type of story.
January 11, 2021 at 12:47 pm
betlw
Carrie, I can’t wait tor read your book to find out what happens. I have a grandson who was like that when he was little. I don’t like to be hugged by people I don’t know or hardly know myself. I’d like to find out how this was resolved. Great subject to tackle.
January 11, 2021 at 12:48 pm
Cindy S
Thanks for your post.
January 11, 2021 at 12:48 pm
dinahodara
Carrie, this seems like a great book. I regularly have conversations with my kids about hugging and boundries…so I’m curious to see how you tackled it! We also talk about donuts a lot here at my house…but that’s a whole other conversation. 😉
January 11, 2021 at 12:49 pm
Brenda Flowers
Carrie, what a wonderful list of books to investigate…especially studying their endings. I am looking forward to reading your books, too. Books, like yours, are wonderful for parents, teachers, librarians, and counselors to read aloud to children to spark conversations fueling compassion and empathy.
January 11, 2021 at 12:49 pm
JEN Garrett
So, many great books! I have a few manuscripts about something having to give (outside the character), and now I have a whole list of books to show me how to make it work!
Thanks for the inspiration!
January 11, 2021 at 12:49 pm
Sheri Radovich
Thanks Carrie, I’ve read most of these books but didn’t study how the ending was reached and I need to go back and see them again. I am glad our library is open for this to happen. Thanks for showing us ways to reach a different conclusion in classic picture books.
January 11, 2021 at 12:50 pm
Fern Glazer
Thank you, Carrie, for this insightful post–and for writing Don’t Hug Doug. As a big hugger who is also aware that adults, especially, need to respect kids and ask for consent before giving them a squeeze, this title really speaks to me–and a lot of kids I know. I’ve been playing around with a few stories around gender identity and belonging and your post is so helpful.
January 11, 2021 at 12:52 pm
Alicia Shawn Gagnon
Perfect blog about our imperfect traits. Inspired to see how the PB writers tackled their conundrums. Cheers!
(Also, love your tag line “PB with humor & heart”.)
January 11, 2021 at 12:53 pm
Ashley Congdon (@AshleySierra06)
My MC in my current WIP has this problem. Thanks for the tips.
January 11, 2021 at 12:53 pm
writeknit
I need to get Don’t Hug Doug for my cousin who hates hugs as well. Loved today’s post and the ideas it created in my head.
January 11, 2021 at 12:55 pm
yepearson
Looking forward to reading your book.
January 11, 2021 at 12:55 pm
Ashley Bray
Love it.
More cow bell!
January 11, 2021 at 12:56 pm
JoLynne Ricker Whalen
Thank you for sharing your ideas. Don’t Hug Doug sounds like a great story!
January 11, 2021 at 1:02 pm
Patricia Alcaro
Love this post! It helped me to see a missing arc component needed to improve one of my manuscripts. Thank you!
January 11, 2021 at 1:03 pm
Ed Biggs
A few titles to reread, and new ones to check out. You helped me realize more concretely why I was enjoying these titles but uncertain of the reason…. Thanks…
January 11, 2021 at 1:04 pm
Susan
Thanks, Carrie, for your insights. I love a challenge. Hope that Doug will give you a hug.
January 11, 2021 at 1:06 pm
Pamela Harrison
These are great examples these amazing mentor texts. Don’t Hug Doug is a wonderful example in how to show children to respect others boundaries..
January 11, 2021 at 1:08 pm
healthycaregiver
Wonderful post. Love it!
January 11, 2021 at 1:08 pm
Erin Bylund
Such fun books! Thanks for the examples.
January 11, 2021 at 1:08 pm
YauMei Chiang
This is amazing; the blog post, the comments make so much sense about writing stories that feel real. Thank you, Carrie Finison. Tara Lazar and commenters.
January 11, 2021 at 1:09 pm
Susan Wroble
“Something else has got to give.” Love that — so true and so hard. Thanks for this great post. The examples were really valuable.
January 11, 2021 at 1:10 pm
Gail Atherley
I appreciate that the innate conflict is addressed with humor but is treated respectfully. Kids need more books like this to help them sort through their own idiosyncrasies with self love. Thank you for highlighting this format.
January 11, 2021 at 1:16 pm
Tricia Thatcher
I love ideas like these! I’ll be looking for these books. Thank you!!
January 11, 2021 at 1:19 pm
Virginia Law Manning
It sounds like a challenge! I’ll be checking out these books again to see how the authors resolved the dilemma! Thank you for the post!
January 11, 2021 at 1:19 pm
Cindy Jeklin
Don’t Hug Doug sounds like a very fun book – looking forward to reading it! Thanks for the great alternatives for writing a story!
January 11, 2021 at 1:24 pm
Teresa Daffern
I love picture books that don’t follow the usual patterns. Life is often about compromise – not every problem has a neat solution. Thanks also, Carrie, for the list of great titles for stories with characters who can’t necessarily change! Can’t wait to read Don’t Hug Doug, as I have a similar character in my own family.
January 11, 2021 at 1:33 pm
karammitchell
Thank you, Carrie!! HA! I have no boundaries, so I will have to use others as inspiration!
January 11, 2021 at 1:38 pm
sherry fellores
Love these kinds of stories that aren’t the traditional arc we normally see! Great examples!
January 11, 2021 at 1:39 pm
vgraboski61gmailcom
I love your Dozens of Donuts book! Thanks for the post! Great plan for creating story ideas. After all, haven’t all of us been expected or wanted to be different than who we are at some time in our lives?
January 11, 2021 at 1:40 pm
Aundra Tomlins
Oh, how upset my characters will be with you! My job is to now make their lives miserable… miserable to grow but, as a middle school teacher, a) this comes naturally to me b) I know just how much “characters” like being pushed to grow! HAHAHA love this thanks.
January 11, 2021 at 1:40 pm
Lori Shapiro
Thank you, Carrie, for your in depth discussion and book suggestions too! You’ve really got me thinking now! And I’m going to look at those books and wait for Doug as well!,
January 11, 2021 at 1:43 pm
tracivw
Thanks for the fresh perspective on story structure and for the great research titles to dive into.
January 11, 2021 at 1:53 pm
Kimberly Marcus
Thanks for a great post and all of the book recommendations. Really appreciate it!!
January 11, 2021 at 1:53 pm
clairebobrow
First off, congrats on your book, Carrie – I can’t wait to read it! Second, thank you for the timely reminder to study the endings of these types of stories. Kudos to the creators for finding elegant and satisfying solutions!
January 11, 2021 at 1:54 pm
Jennifer Rathe
I’m very excited to read Don’t Hug Doug. Good advice. Thanks
January 11, 2021 at 1:54 pm
aidantalkin
Absolutely adore the structure and complexes in resolving stories where the conflict is internal, and the change is often in the mc’s perspective. The challenge: keeping the resolution earned, and the tale fun!
January 11, 2021 at 1:57 pm
teacherwriteracker
These are great examples to study and an excellent push to creating a character. Thanks!
January 11, 2021 at 1:58 pm
Celeste Bocchicchio-Chaudhri
I generally disapprove of making people miserable, but in the name of creativity I will try! Watch out characters here I come
January 11, 2021 at 1:58 pm
Carrie Tillotson
Carrie, you have piqued my curiosity about these books’ endings. I will be checking them out, and can’t wait to read DON’T HUG DOUG!
January 11, 2021 at 1:58 pm
Cathy Lentes
I always like books, and advice, that make me look at things in a new way. Great title suggestions! Thanks, Carrie.
January 11, 2021 at 2:04 pm
claireflewis
Love this idea of coming at characterisation from a different angle. Great list of titles to read too! Thank you!
January 11, 2021 at 2:05 pm
Deb Buschman (@DebBuschman)
Thanks for the great examples and advice. Thanks Carrie!
January 11, 2021 at 2:10 pm
Kimiko Wadriski
These types of books are ones that I love to read. They are refreshing and unexpected. Definitely adding some of these titles to my next haul.
January 11, 2021 at 2:12 pm
kathychalas
What a great post, Carrie! Thank you for encouraging a different way of creating a character and developing a story. I loved DOZENS OF DOUGHNUTS and look forward to reading DON’T HUG DOUG! 💕
January 11, 2021 at 2:13 pm
kirstenbockblog
Love the examples and I can’t wait to read about Doug!
January 11, 2021 at 2:15 pm
Mia Geiger
Great post, Carrie! Thank you for this post and best wishes with your newest book!
January 11, 2021 at 2:16 pm
amomnextdoor
I love mentor text study lists. Thanks for this one. Looking forward to Don’t Hug Doug!
January 11, 2021 at 2:18 pm
Robin Bailey
Loved this post and the wheels started turning right away. I look forward to checking out this stack of books from the library and studying the endings. Thanks Carrie! I look forward to your new book as a mom and teacher I know it’s a needed topic.
January 11, 2021 at 2:19 pm
Lynne Marie
LOVE THIS POST in so many ways! We just read MOTHER BRUCE and two of the Sequels in Rate Your Story’s Tinker and Talk Book Chat last night! So timely. Thanks for sharing, Carrie and Tara!
January 11, 2021 at 2:21 pm
claireannette1
Thank you for sharing this list and how other authors have written about boundaries. I’m looking forward to reading and sharing “Don’t Hug Doug.”
January 11, 2021 at 2:21 pm
Wendy
Looking forward to your next book, Carrie! (and realizing I have a story like this that needs a teeny- okay not so teeny– revision)
January 11, 2021 at 2:22 pm
Meg
This is a great concept and something that is really important to understand!
January 11, 2021 at 2:24 pm
Beatrice Brown
Your post has encouraged me to give this a try. Thanks for the list of books that address this arc.
January 11, 2021 at 2:24 pm
Lori Dubbin
Sometimes an idea lands in your lap,
But crafting an ending isn’t a snap…
I learn a lot from your posts, your characters, and your books, Carrie!
January 11, 2021 at 2:24 pm
Elyse Trevers
What a wonderful idea-using the character’s own personality trait to launch the story. I’m going to enjoy playing with this
Thanks
January 11, 2021 at 2:27 pm
Joanne Roberts
I’ve got quite a few of these ideas in old notebooks and the endings always felt trite. I look forward to revisiting them with a fresh eye. Generally I’ve noticed that with these types of books I either love ’em or hate ’em. Thanks to your post, I finally figured out why. THANK YOU!
January 11, 2021 at 2:29 pm
romontanaro
Thank you Tara! And thank you Carrie. Some of my favorites in your list here and some new ones to study. Already inspired. Congratulations to you and all the best. Rosanna
January 11, 2021 at 2:30 pm
Jilanne Hoffmann
Opposing forces, sometimes internal, the ultimate dilemma, the ultimate plot generator. But sometimes that’s pretty darn tricky, as you say. I am so looking forward to reading Don’t Hug Doug!
January 11, 2021 at 2:33 pm
Kathiann Weatherbee (@WeatherbeeBooks)
Your books look great! Thanks so much for giving a different perspective for a story arc. I’ll have to think about this!
January 11, 2021 at 2:36 pm
Eileen Mayo
Thanks for the great post Carrie! I can’t wait to read Don’t Hug Doug. Congratulations on the new book.
January 11, 2021 at 2:44 pm
Adam Blackman
I really can’t wait to read this book.
January 11, 2021 at 2:44 pm
cpellettiere
Fantastic ideas for sparking creativity! Will look forward to reading Don’t Hug Doug. (I can relate as the Mom of a kid who doesn’t like hugs from anyone but me!)
January 11, 2021 at 2:48 pm
jensubra
Love this idea, Carrie! Thanks for offering a variety of books as examples, too–that always helps!
January 11, 2021 at 2:49 pm
mrsmouthy
Thanks, Carrie! I’ve definitely gotten stuck on a few picture book ideas where my main character can’t/shouldn’t change. I’ll have to open up one of those manuscripts today and see if we can’t get them a good ending anyway.
January 11, 2021 at 2:51 pm
Susan Eyerman
Really good article on arc. I have some reading to do. Thank you.
January 11, 2021 at 2:57 pm
Heather Stigall
It’s nice to know that others find writing this kind of story is difficult. I’ve got one I’m still working on. Maybe studying your suggestions will help. I’ve read almost all of them, but never studied them in quite this way. Thanks for the tip & congrats on DON’T HUG DOUG. I can’t wait to read it!
January 11, 2021 at 2:58 pm
Monica A. Harris
Haha! The title of this post caught me immediately and dragged me in. I LOVE characters who are different — thinkers outside of the box — don’t want to conform so Carrie nailed it! Now….for today, I’m going to think of a character and make her miserable!
January 11, 2021 at 2:59 pm
Karen Hunt
Really good input for that writing problem…been there
Thanks!
January 11, 2021 at 3:00 pm
katiemillsgiorgio
Great suggestions…thanks for sharing!
January 11, 2021 at 3:02 pm
Lisa Billa
Thanks, I’m going to make a “what if?” list. Great examples to study! I look forward to reading Don’t Hug Doug.
January 11, 2021 at 3:04 pm
mona861
Wow! What an interesting post, thanks! And thanks for all the book suggestions to read and study. Love this.
January 11, 2021 at 3:08 pm
Debra Bartsch
Carrie Finison, thank you for writing this article to the not -so- typical story structure , and how to keep encouraged while doing it. Out side the lines, outside the box, there is room for everyone!
BTW my grands love your Dozens of Doughnuts book, and so do I!
January 11, 2021 at 3:10 pm
Dee Knabb
Carrie, what a terrific way to have instant conflict. Thanks for reminding us of another fabulous way to build a story.
January 11, 2021 at 3:14 pm
Heather Elizabeth
Lots to thinks about, thank you!
January 11, 2021 at 3:14 pm
Sue
What great ideas! Thank you for sharing!
January 11, 2021 at 3:16 pm
Charlotte Offsay
Thank you so much for sharing, love this twist on the traditional story structure and am excited to review your recommended list!
January 11, 2021 at 3:17 pm
Marilyn Wolpin
Carrie, this came at just the right moment. I am currently working on a story where the main character is trying – very hard – to change an innate character trait and she fails miserably but comes to realize who and what she is joyously at the end. I am looking forward to reading Don’t Hug Doug and all the other mentor books you mention. Thanks for this.
January 11, 2021 at 3:20 pm
Claire Freeland
Thank you for the book recommendations. Looking forward to studying them and then writing about perfectly miserable characters.
January 11, 2021 at 3:20 pm
Sue Heavenrich
What a great list of books! and what a conundrum. Definitely going to be re-reading a few of these to help me out of a pickle.
January 11, 2021 at 3:23 pm
Bonnie Kelso
Congrats on “Don’t Hug Doug.” Oh, I need this book for my son. Looking forward to reading it with him. Also, I’m inspired to make my characters as miserable as possible. Thank you.
January 11, 2021 at 3:23 pm
Jill Lambert (@LJillLambert)
Terrific post, Carrie! I have several stories that have this dilemma and have been stumped trying to make them fit the traditional arc. I will definitely check out the books you listed. Thank you!
January 11, 2021 at 3:27 pm
authoraileenstewart
Great thoughts, thanks for sharing!
January 11, 2021 at 3:27 pm
boardmancamera
Thanks for all the suggestions and great idea-boosters!
January 11, 2021 at 3:28 pm
Marla Yablon
Thanks for giving me a great list of books to read! And a new approach to a character I’m working on.
January 11, 2021 at 3:30 pm
Johnell DeWitt
Thank you for breaking the “mold” on how PBs should be written. We need more of that. Best of luck on the next one.
January 11, 2021 at 3:33 pm
Lauren Barbieri
Love the “something else has gotta give!” Thank you for the post, and looking forward to reading Don’t Hug Doug.
January 11, 2021 at 3:35 pm
Jan Milusich
I’ve written down the list of books, off to the library to check them and their characters out.
January 11, 2021 at 3:35 pm
Gabi Snyder
I love all of these fantastic mentor texts! And I look forward to making my characters miserable! 🙂
January 11, 2021 at 3:39 pm
Thelia Hutchinson
Hello Carrie,
Thank you. I actually have a story I am working on with the concept of the main character wanting to change. I hope I can finish it. Thanks for the inspiration.
January 11, 2021 at 3:42 pm
tabithasimswrites
I love non-traditional story arcs. It’s refreshing to break out of the box sometimes!
January 11, 2021 at 3:44 pm
heathercmorris
Carrie! I love the idea of making your MC “miserable” – can’t wait to check all these books out.
January 11, 2021 at 3:44 pm
cindyjohnson2013
Wow! what a great list of mentor texts! I can hardly wait to read Don’t Hug Doug!
January 11, 2021 at 3:47 pm
jbbower
Thanks for a great post Carrie! I never thought about things that would make my characters miserable. How clever!
January 11, 2021 at 3:48 pm
Aimee Isaac
Great reading list, Carrie! Thank you!
January 11, 2021 at 3:50 pm
Beth Holladay
Thanks for the great advice, Carrie. I’ve already thought of two ideas just now:))
January 11, 2021 at 3:56 pm
Cynthia Mochowski
Characters being miserable – always a good topic. But the idea of an innate personality trait – so interesting. It’s very important for kids to know their feelings matter and that there is nothing “wrong” with them for not going along with family or societal expectations. Plus kids being miserable usually have good reason to be! Adults, we sometimes just don’t get it.
January 11, 2021 at 3:56 pm
syorkeviney
I love your “What if……” because life is always full of “what ifs” and how we solve our “what ifs” shapes our journeys… Thank you for reminding me of this and I will use it in my approach to writing now!
January 11, 2021 at 3:58 pm
Laura De La Cruz
Thanks for the inspiration, Carrie! Great post!
January 11, 2021 at 3:58 pm
Tanja Bauerle
What great examples! Thank you for a wonderful post. T
January 11, 2021 at 4:00 pm
rosihollinbeck
That is a terrific reading list. It’s nice to find published books that have found the way to break a cardinal rule of children’s writing. Thanks for the post.
January 11, 2021 at 4:11 pm
Rebecca Arent-Draper
Thank you, Carrie! I can’t wait till “Don’t Hug Doug” comes out in a few weeks! ❤️ It!
January 11, 2021 at 4:16 pm
Pat Tiffany Inks
Excellent article. Your titles are ferocious and fun. What a wonderful challenge!
January 11, 2021 at 4:17 pm
Patricia Tiffany Morris
Excellent article. Your titles are ferocious and fun. What a wonderful challenge!
January 11, 2021 at 4:22 pm
susaninez0905
Thank you for sharing this perspective. I love the idea of switching it around, and might not have considered it before this post! 🙂
January 11, 2021 at 4:22 pm
Amanda Malek-Ahmadi
I saw on Twitter about your Don’t Hug Doug book. We look forward to owning it. Our second son is not a hugger. Congrats on your two picture books!
January 11, 2021 at 4:26 pm
Christine Pinto
So true! Many picture books are about characters finding and holding on to what is essential about themselves across others’ objections. I’m looking forward to looking at these books and pondering this question. Thanks for giving me homework!
January 11, 2021 at 4:27 pm
Aimee Larke
Thank you for all of these wonderful examples. Great reminder that stories don’t have to fit a certain mold. Can’t wait for Doug!
January 11, 2021 at 4:29 pm
Patti Ranson
Thank you for the list of books, allowing us to study characters with traits in direct opposition to a character trait 🙂 It’s a BIG help! Looking forward to Don’t Hug Doug!
January 11, 2021 at 4:37 pm
Doreen Tango Hampton
Such fun PB topics. Thanks for sharing.
January 11, 2021 at 4:37 pm
Tonnye Fletcher
That is a fabulous list of books! I look forward to reading DON’T HUG DOUG! Thanks for this lovely and inspirational post. (Sings in her head, “Big wheels keep on turning. . . .” as the ideas turn round and round. . .)
January 11, 2021 at 4:55 pm
Sarah Skolfield
Great list of books to check out. Thanks!
January 11, 2021 at 4:55 pm
lisakhan9
Thank you Carrie! Absolutely loved reading every word. Can’t wait to hear more from you. Very best wishes x Lisa
January 11, 2021 at 4:58 pm
rgstones
Can’t wait to read your books!
January 11, 2021 at 4:59 pm
Hank Dallago
An interesting way to view the traditional way of writing PB’s and turn in it on its head! Thank you Carrie for your insight. You’ve got my gears going for early tomorrow morning ideas and I’m not a morning person!
January 11, 2021 at 5:00 pm
Linda A. Bozzo
Love this list of books. Looking forward to studying each resolution.
January 11, 2021 at 5:01 pm
authordebradaugherty
Congratulations, Carrie, and your new book. This post raised questions for me. I love the “What if,” and “Something’s got to give,” thoughts. Thanks for posting!
January 11, 2021 at 5:01 pm
Midge Ballou Smith
Thank you, Carrie! Great post!
January 11, 2021 at 5:02 pm
debobrienbookscom
Great topic, Carrie. Now I need to read how Doug solved his problem.
January 11, 2021 at 5:03 pm
Carmela Martino
I’ve been struggling for years with the ending for a picture book where the character doesn’t change/grow. I can’t wait to read and study Don’t Hug Doug and the other books you mention. Thanks so much!
January 11, 2021 at 5:08 pm
Kristen Tipman
Thanks for your post! It got me thinking! 🙂
January 11, 2021 at 5:09 pm
Sandy Perlic
It can be so fun to write outside of the normal picture book structure–particularly if you have a very interesting character. Thanks for all the examples you’ve given–I’d forgotten just how many ways successful PBs work outside of the norm. And love the idea for Doug’s book–I wish you the best with it!
January 11, 2021 at 5:10 pm
Pamela Brunskill
Love this post, Carrie! I’ve been wanting to read DON’T HUG DOUG since you first posted the announcement. Thanks for sharing the backstory, and congrats on all your book sales!
January 11, 2021 at 5:11 pm
Harshita Jerath
Thank you for a thought-provoking blog. I’ll re-read some of these books to understand how the author solves the problem.
January 11, 2021 at 5:11 pm
Heather Gallagher
Can’t wait to look up all these books! Thanks Carrie!
January 11, 2021 at 5:13 pm
Judy Sobanski
Great post, Carrie! Thank you for sharing some book titles. It’s always helpful to have mentor books to study. I’m looking forward to finding out how Doug resolves his problem!
January 11, 2021 at 5:15 pm
Brandy Dixon
A nice out-of-the-box thinking strategy!
January 11, 2021 at 5:16 pm
LeeAnn Rizzuti
Great book recommendations, Carrie–you mentioned a couple I haven’t read yet. Looking forward to remedying that.
January 11, 2021 at 5:16 pm
Poupette
Thanks for the list of mentor texts and I can’t wait to learn
from yours, too. Would you handle character dilemma endings differently for physical traits (say, Bunny Bear) than for character ones (say, Don’t Hug Doug)?
January 11, 2021 at 5:17 pm
Arlene Schenker
I think it would be fun to write about a miserable MC. Thanks, Carrie. Looking forward to reading DON’T HUG DOUG!
January 11, 2021 at 5:21 pm
Caren
I’ve got these books on my list now. I’d love to write a book with “trait” conflict.
January 11, 2021 at 5:24 pm
Shannon Fossett
Great book recommendations! I’ve added a few to my “must read” list!
January 11, 2021 at 5:30 pm
NC Karuzis
Great ideas and a great book list to check out. Thank you.
January 11, 2021 at 5:32 pm
Dawn M.
Great information about writing for characters with innate traits. Thanks for sharing!
January 11, 2021 at 5:37 pm
Bhandi
I feel like I need to give my characters MORE of a traditional story arc sometimes haha. I love “Mother Bruce” and “I Don’t Want to be a Frog” !!
January 11, 2021 at 5:37 pm
Stephanie Wildman
Love your examples and can’t wait to meet Doug. Now who can I make miserable? Thank you for the post.
January 11, 2021 at 5:42 pm
Janet Sheets
Thanks for the reading list! There are a few on there I haven’t read, and I’m sure they’ll be helpful.
January 11, 2021 at 5:43 pm
Cathy Ogren
Great post, Carrie! Thanks for sharing your ideas and mentor texts!
January 11, 2021 at 5:44 pm
Lisa Johnston Hancock
My daughter has sensory issues and (come to think of it) she does not really like hugging. I have never thought of this until now. Thank you for sharing and I will definitely pick up your book!
January 11, 2021 at 5:46 pm
Shannon Hitchcock (@ShanonHitchcock)
What an interesting dilemma. Love your title!
January 11, 2021 at 5:47 pm
storiesbythesea
Can’t wait to read Don’t Hug Doug with my son who also prefers to be the hugger, not the huggee. Thank you for sharing the challenges with characters like Doug.
January 11, 2021 at 5:47 pm
Janice Woods
Fantastic post, Carrie! Thanks so much for sharing.
January 11, 2021 at 5:48 pm
jenwritespbs
That’s a great way to generate ideas… the wheels are already turning when I thought I was temporarily stuck. Thanks for all the examples and congratulations on your book!
January 11, 2021 at 5:49 pm
paulabpuckett
Thanks for your suggestions. Now, which one of my characters might I make really miserable! 🙂
January 11, 2021 at 5:49 pm
Janice Woods
Great post, Carrie! Thanks so much for sharing!
January 11, 2021 at 5:51 pm
Marci Whitehurst
Great examples, Carrie!! Such truth here! Thanks for sharing & congrats on your new book!
January 11, 2021 at 5:53 pm
Mary Jo Wagner
Thanks for the mentor texts!
January 11, 2021 at 5:59 pm
Debbi G
Thank you for your inspiration and book recommendations. Congrats on your new book.
January 11, 2021 at 6:09 pm
Mary Warth
Thank you for the great examples!
January 11, 2021 at 6:10 pm
savannahpalma
Thank you for sharing. Can’t wait to read the new book- my older daughter is not a hugger.
January 11, 2021 at 6:17 pm
jacquelineflesher
Loved your first book. My oldest is a non-hugger. Bet he’d find your book en pointe. Mentor texts lists are invaluable. Thanks for putting this one together and sharing it.
January 11, 2021 at 6:26 pm
karynellis
Thanks for this invitation to shift perspectives on what character development can be. PS, I love the book list. Can’t wait to dig in!
January 11, 2021 at 6:28 pm
mjmeyer06
Thank you Carrie. I have years of experience working with young children with sensory sensitivities and many of my stories come from my experience. Looking forward to reading…Don’t Hug Doug!
January 11, 2021 at 6:29 pm
Lori Sheroan
I definitely will give this a try-misery imminent!
January 11, 2021 at 6:30 pm
Kristi Bartholomew
Great share! Congrats on Don’t hug Doug! I have several friends who can empathize. Would love to win a PB critique! 🙂
January 11, 2021 at 6:36 pm
Stephen S. Martin
What if today IS the day !
January 11, 2021 at 6:38 pm
chardixon47
Can’t wait for DON’T HUG DOUG 🙂 Love DOZENS OF DOUGHNUTS! Thank you Carrie for the examples and tip to have fun with making a character miserable 🙂 Congrats!
January 11, 2021 at 6:46 pm
Linda KulpTrout
DON’T HUG DOUG sounds perfect for my grandson. Thank you for the great list of mentor texts!
January 11, 2021 at 6:51 pm
dedra davis
Just requested all these great titles! Thank you and congrats on this adorable book!
January 11, 2021 at 6:54 pm
mariamd542
I’m looking forward to studying Don’t Hug Doug. One of my shelved manuscripts has a similar problem and I think I know what the pivotal scene and ending is, but I haven’t quite found a structure that I like, or even really scenes that feel exactly right for the character. And The Rooster who would not be Quiet is one of my alltime favorites!
January 11, 2021 at 6:57 pm
lisanevada
Interesting twist–what if everyone other than the main character is the problem? That’s a fun viewpoint to tackle! thanks for the fresh perspective. And congrats on Doug–I can’t wait to see how he deals with all those “problem people”)
January 11, 2021 at 7:03 pm
muskoshe
Love where this could go. Had never looked at it this way and really enjoyed your thoughts and examples. Thank you for the info.
January 11, 2021 at 7:06 pm
Kaye Baillie
These are really fun examples, Carrie and congratulations on both your books!
January 11, 2021 at 7:08 pm
viviankirkfield
I love posts that give concrete examples, Carrie! Thank you for sharing so many picture book titles. I have so much trouble giving my characters problems…I guess that’s why I usually write about real people…that way I don’t have to think of anything – the real people already have problems. 🙂
And I’m totally excited for DON’T HUG DOUG!!!! It’s such a fabulous story!
January 11, 2021 at 7:15 pm
Jeannie Santucci
Great insight, Carrie. Thanks for sharing!
PS Just curious…do your cats let you hug them?😂
January 11, 2021 at 7:25 pm
cravevsworld
Love this celebration of feisty, independent protagonists. Thank you for sharing!
January 11, 2021 at 7:25 pm
heidikyates
Thank you for sharing the great tip, Carrie. I look forward to reading DON’T HUG DUG.
January 11, 2021 at 7:26 pm
susanzonca
Thank you for so many mentor text examples! Congratulations…but no hug…on your new book!
January 11, 2021 at 7:33 pm
Janelle Harper
I love stories that break the traditional rules. Can’t wait to request these books from my library to study
January 11, 2021 at 7:34 pm
Tina Hoggatt (@tinahoggatt)
“Something else has gotta give.” Words of the day. What a great post, and terrific reference books. Thanks!
January 11, 2021 at 7:36 pm
rindabeach
What susanzonca said perfectly! So many mentor texts, thank you! And thank you for the note about upping the tension and making your characters miserable. I put at the beginning of each new chapter of my middle grade – give the MC hell. I’m glad to find a like mind!
January 11, 2021 at 7:38 pm
Jennifer Phillips
Great examples. Love creating miserable characters with a good cause. Thanks for the advice!
January 11, 2021 at 7:39 pm
sylazabor
Thanks for the post, Carrie!
January 11, 2021 at 7:42 pm
jenfierjasinski
Thanks, Carrie. I’ve read most of these books but not studied their resolutions. I look forward to the challenge and reading DON’T HUG DOUG!
January 11, 2021 at 7:44 pm
Sara Trofa
Thanks for your tips, Carrie!
January 11, 2021 at 7:46 pm
Jacqueline Adams
What a fun cliffhanger! I’m looking up these books right now.
January 11, 2021 at 7:46 pm
Sophia Evans
Ooh! Love the idea of making my characters miserable 😊 thanks
January 11, 2021 at 7:51 pm
mbhmaine
Thanks so much for the many mentor texts and for sharing this interesting way to stir up some story ideas! Great post!
January 11, 2021 at 7:53 pm
annmdk
Don’t bug Doug is such a great title!
January 11, 2021 at 7:54 pm
annmdk
Don’t hug Doug is such a great title!
January 11, 2021 at 7:56 pm
Matt Forrest Esenwine
Congrats on the new book, Carrie! And thanks for the advice – I’m going to go make a dinosaur really annoyed. 😉
January 11, 2021 at 8:01 pm
Joy Pitcairn
Thanks for the suggestions! Looking forward to learning from these!
January 11, 2021 at 8:01 pm
Kris H
I love your idea about the adorable kid that doesn’t want hugs. I have one kiddo like that.
January 11, 2021 at 8:06 pm
brontebrown2
Think like a kid… what did I not like as a kid? Growups repeating the same baby story over and over and over….to embarrass you and for them to laugh. Time to write a few ideas down.
January 11, 2021 at 8:09 pm
Stacey Byer
This was very inspiring! Thank you Carrie!
January 11, 2021 at 8:12 pm
Mel H.
I love this advice – not all “problems” require us to change. One of my ideas fits this model, and it all started in my backyard. I will have to read some of your suggestions to see how the authors handled their resolutions. Thank you!
January 11, 2021 at 8:14 pm
Aimee Haburjak
Love these book examples. Can’t wait to read more of them. Thanks for the post!
January 11, 2021 at 8:14 pm
Melissa Savis
This is so great! Thank you for sharing!
January 11, 2021 at 8:19 pm
Michelle Cusolito
Poor Doug! I look forward to finding out the resolution!
January 11, 2021 at 8:21 pm
Melissa Trempe is querying (@melissa_trempe)
I love the books you chose to share! Some are my favorites and the ones I’m not familiar with are going right on my list of books to take out from the library! Thank you for sharing your thoughts and I love your book Dozens of Doughnuts!
January 11, 2021 at 8:24 pm
Carol Gwin Nelson
Thanks for the great examples-many of which are on my favorites list. I’m looking forward to buying “Don’t Hug Doug.’ I know a little one who would appreciate it.
January 11, 2021 at 8:26 pm
ofmariaantonia
Yes, we must make our characters miserable! But by the end of the book, we get to help them out with some sort of solution… Even if it’s just to accept who we are.
January 11, 2021 at 8:26 pm
Katie Williams
You’ve hit on a topic/problem that I’ve struggled with a lot in writing picture books! I can’t wait to check out these books and see how authors have successfully navigated the imperfect MC 😊
January 11, 2021 at 8:27 pm
Brittney
This post is amazing! A reminder to enjoy being outside the box. Thank you!
January 11, 2021 at 8:30 pm
Lindsay Fletcher
I love these outside-the-box books. Not all kids fit into a mould and there should be more stories for them.
January 11, 2021 at 8:45 pm
Diane Kress Hower
Thanks for your wonderful post. I have loved and not hugged a lot of dougs in my career. Can’t wait to read your book!
January 11, 2021 at 8:53 pm
Deborah W. Trotter
Thanks for your insights. And congratulations on your most recent book!
January 11, 2021 at 9:09 pm
Sensitive and Extraordinary Kids
I’ve already placed all these books on hold and also learned that your book is on order (in Singapore)! Can’t wait to read it! Thank you so much for this.
January 11, 2021 at 9:10 pm
Stephanie Lau
I appreciated that you gave two examples of the same pitch, for a couple of these. It’s a great reminder of how execution of the same idea can be super different.
January 11, 2021 at 9:13 pm
Jenny Boyd
Great approach! And seeing it along with some examples helped generate more ideas. Looking forward to checking out your new book.
January 11, 2021 at 9:16 pm
Jessica Fries-Gaither
All the examples were so helpful! I primarily write nonfiction, so I can’t always just make up a problem — but I’m keeping an eye out for stories and topics that embrace this conflict!
January 11, 2021 at 9:18 pm
Kellie
What a wonderful post Carrie, thank you. Lots of ideas flowing (I have many personal boundaries!!) Can’t wait to get my hands on ‘Don’t Hug Doug’.
January 11, 2021 at 9:19 pm
Kay
I find it hard to make my characters miserable
January 11, 2021 at 9:21 pm
donnacangelosi
Fun post, Carrie! Looking forward to reading Don’t Hug Doug!
January 11, 2021 at 9:22 pm
doreenrobinson
I love the examples you used to make your point clear. It must be very challenging to write these stories so kudos to you and other authors that have tapped into this type of subject matter.
January 11, 2021 at 9:22 pm
Buffy Silverman
Great post, Carrie–I’m eager to read Don’t Hug Doug!
January 11, 2021 at 9:26 pm
htaylorwrites
Thank you for all of these great examples and for sharing your insights on the fundamental nature of these kinds of stories.
January 11, 2021 at 9:28 pm
gmv246
Really great examples!
January 11, 2021 at 9:28 pm
John McGranaghan
Great post! Love your approach and humor. Can’t wait to read your upcoming books.
January 11, 2021 at 9:31 pm
Patricia J Holloway
Thank you for giving us these great examples. Congratulations on your books. I love Dozens of Doughnuts, gave it as a Christmas gift to a great nephew.
January 11, 2021 at 9:46 pm
roberta abussi
Thank you so much for this post! I love how you decided to end it: “have fun making your characters miserable!” This is an…unexpected twist!!
I focus so much on how should my MC solve the problem? What obstacles should it overcome? that I didn’t even think about making it miserable and have fun with it!
January 11, 2021 at 9:46 pm
nicolesalterbraun
Interesting. I’ve read most of the mentioned books but now I need to go back and review and look at how they handled the conflict to those situations that are challenging d/t the MC’s personality. Thank you
January 11, 2021 at 9:46 pm
Marlena Leach
Your post is so timely. Today, I was trying to figure out the best story structure for my manuscript revision. It doesn’t fit the three times try structure. It’s more accumulative. So, thank you for the examples!
January 11, 2021 at 9:50 pm
Rebekah Lowell
Hi Carrie,
Thanks for sharing these creative strategies! Congrats on DON’T HUG DOUG! Happy writing! Rebekah
January 11, 2021 at 9:53 pm
EmmieRWerner
Thank you ❤️ Makes me think about my characters.
January 11, 2021 at 9:54 pm
Carol Gordon Ekster
Love the premise of making your characters miserable. Such fun! Can’t wait to read DON’T HUG DOUG!
January 11, 2021 at 9:54 pm
Mary Beth Rice
This is an interesting strategy and am looking forward to trying it in my writing. Thanks, Carrie!
January 11, 2021 at 9:56 pm
DaNeil Olson
Fabulous post – thank you!
January 11, 2021 at 9:56 pm
carolynleillustrations
I love this twist. The books you mentioned are some of my favorite books, now I know why. They don’t fit a mold. Looking forward to reading DON’t HUG DOUG!
January 11, 2021 at 10:02 pm
marianariosr
What a creative approach to generate new story ideas. I am intrigued and eager to try this out. Thanks for sharing so many examples and your own book. This post has been really helpful to think outside my box.
January 11, 2021 at 10:04 pm
Aly Kenna
Thank you Carrie for sharing a fresh perspective. Humorous picture books are hard to write but so rewarding to pull off. Looking forward to reading Don’t Hug Doug!
January 11, 2021 at 10:06 pm
JC
Thank you for your advice!
January 11, 2021 at 10:08 pm
Sara Fajardo
Great advice! Thank you!
January 11, 2021 at 10:12 pm
angiecal76
You’ve given us lots to ponder. Thanks for sharing your insights, Carrie. Can’t wait to read both of your books!
January 11, 2021 at 10:19 pm
Garnett Natasha
You’ve got me thinking! Thanks, Carrie. Looking forward to reading Don’t Hug Doug. Congratulations!
January 11, 2021 at 10:21 pm
Amy Fae
Thank you for sharing, Carrie! So many good examples to explore!
January 11, 2021 at 10:22 pm
Rozana Rajkumari
Conflict straight away, thanks for that angle! Love it!
January 11, 2021 at 10:27 pm
Diana Murray
Very interesting! My maid of honor began her speech by recalling how when we met in college, she went to give me a hug, and I thought she was reaching for something behind me. I was definitely not a hugger! Anyway, can’t wait to read Don’t Hug Doug!
January 11, 2021 at 10:38 pm
Peggy Dobbs
What a great selection of picture books to understand this story structure! I look forward to reading Don’t Hug Doug. Congratulations!
January 11, 2021 at 10:40 pm
Jessica Stremer
Love the encouragement to try something different.
January 11, 2021 at 10:41 pm
Amy Newbold
Dozens of Doughnuts is such a fun book! I can’t wait to see Don’t Hug Doug. Thanks for this insightful post. Thanks for a list of more books to study!
January 11, 2021 at 10:42 pm
jeanjames926
I like the idea of changing up the narrative arc. Thanks for a great post. I already pre-ordered Don’t Hug Doug. Can’t wait to read it.
January 11, 2021 at 10:45 pm
bookthreader
Great post! I like this perspective on writing PBs!
Moni.
January 11, 2021 at 10:45 pm
Alison
Thanks for the great post, Carrie! These books look amazing, can’t wait to check them out!!
January 11, 2021 at 10:52 pm
Mary Ann Blair
Thanks for the book suggestions! Congrats on your PB successes!
January 11, 2021 at 10:53 pm
Cathleen Collins
I love a non traditional story arc! I requested Dozens of Doughnuts from our library and look forward to Don’t Hug Dug.
January 11, 2021 at 10:58 pm
Megan M.
I love BUNNYBEAR! I bought it for my nephew and Andrea signed it.
January 11, 2021 at 11:01 pm
sharonkdal
Well this was an ah-ha moment for me! Thank you so much. And thank you for the terrific list of mentor texts, including Don’t Hug Doug!
January 11, 2021 at 11:11 pm
bonnie fireUrchin ~ pb illustration & writing
Great reminder that we can’t always change our character to solve the problem. I have a pb I’m subbing right now where the MC has no way to change the trait they have that scares others, so the others had to come around to warming up to her for other reasons… and the very trait they feared was needed to solve a problem and bring them all together. So the MC still had some agency in solving the problem without changing the trait.
I hope an agent will agree with my approach. Thanks for the mentor texts broken down like this for checking on my other WIP and ideas. I can’t wait to read DON’T HUG DOUG! I’ve known many kids in that situation… so why didn’t I think of that book? I hope many more find the support for self-empowerment while having fun reading it!
January 11, 2021 at 11:15 pm
Brinton Culp
Fun to make your characters miserable once in a while. Thanks for all the book suggestions, and I look forward to reading about Doug! (I adore LouAnn 🙂
January 11, 2021 at 11:24 pm
tinefg
Thank you Cartie for the change of perspective, thank you for inspiring me to take a new look at an old manuscript!
January 11, 2021 at 11:36 pm
Renner Writes (@barbararenner)
Thank you for suggesting books to read when writing about characters with traits that can’t be changed. Such a unique idea – it will be fun to read these books. I just had an idea!
January 11, 2021 at 11:38 pm
Lori Gibson
Never thought of a stoey like this. Thanks for the info!
January 11, 2021 at 11:38 pm
David McMullin
Thank you, Carrie. I love these examples. A great way to start a book.
January 11, 2021 at 11:39 pm
Natalie Lynn Tanner
CARRIE: THANK YOU for helping us realize the array of WONDERFUL potential stories by thinking outside the box! I have noticed an underlying theme to many of the posts for this year’s StoryStorm: following a specific set of writing/publishing “rules” aren’t necessary. We need to do what’s best for us, our readers–and our characters! It’s true that the characters in the books you listed might not have “THE PERFECT” fix or ending they’re hoping for, but this provides a valuable and MUCH NEEDED lesson for our characters and readers–and we as writers, TOO. THANK YOU!!! As someone who isn’t that crazy about hug fests, I look forward to reading “DON’T Hug Bob!”!
January 11, 2021 at 11:48 pm
Susan Schade
Thank you! This may just be the answer to a revision that I have been struggling with. Congratulations on your books and thank you for the post!
January 11, 2021 at 11:48 pm
Michele Rietz
Thanks Carrie. I haven’t even considered this idea, but I like it! 🙂
Congrats on your upcoming book! Can’t wait to read it.
January 12, 2021 at 12:03 am
Becky Ross Michael
Such a fun concept, Carrie!
January 12, 2021 at 12:04 am
Megan Whitaker
I bet Doug has lots of company these days! I watch movies and TV and think, “ARGH! They are too close!” When I came back from being an exchange student in Brazil, I was very much a kiss on two cheeks person! I’d forgot our boundaries here in the States! Can’t wait to read this book to kids next year (hopefully!)
January 12, 2021 at 12:06 am
Alicia Meyers
Thanks for sharing Carrie, this is a great idea!!
January 12, 2021 at 12:07 am
Cassy Polimeni
Yes! So many more possibilities than you first think. Don’t Hug Doug sounds so cute and so needed! 👏🏻
January 12, 2021 at 12:08 am
susanfilkins
You make me want to read all of your books! Thank you!
January 12, 2021 at 12:11 am
katieschon
Yay, Carrie! Can’t wait to read Don’t Hug Doug!
January 12, 2021 at 12:27 am
Judith Snyder
Your ideas suggest a very interesting and creative way to develop a story concept. This should be a fun day of story storming.
January 12, 2021 at 12:30 am
Trine Grillo
My “hug” story quickly became one I had to rewrite because of how COVID-19 has changed our huggings!
January 12, 2021 at 12:58 am
Sarah Meade
Great post with helpful examples. Looking forward to reading Don’t Hug Doug. Thanks, Carrie!
January 12, 2021 at 1:18 am
Loralee Petersen
I have pre-ordered Don’t Hug Doug for the library where I work. To Hug or Not to Hug can be dilemma. I am looking forward to reading the book. Thanks for the post with so many great examples.
January 12, 2021 at 1:28 am
Kelly Nott
Thanks for sharing your perspective. 🙂
January 12, 2021 at 1:30 am
Shaunda Wenger
Hmmm love this Challenging idea! Thank you for a fantastic post and list of books for me to request from my library for study! Don’t Hug Doug sounds adorable! Probably much to Doug’s dismay from your description 😉 I’m so excited to read it. Congratulations !🎈
January 12, 2021 at 1:33 am
dazzlengsy
Thank you for these examples! What an amazing common thread. Such a simple formula that could lead to so so much. 🙂
January 12, 2021 at 1:38 am
wyszguy
Intriguing concept! Thank you!
January 12, 2021 at 1:42 am
Brenda Grant Lower
Make your characters miserable! Such a great idea! Gave me several ideas just while reading this! Thanks!
January 12, 2021 at 2:04 am
authorlaurablog
Can’t wait to read Don’t Hug Doug!
January 12, 2021 at 3:00 am
ruthwilson48
This is really helpful, practical advice and something I wasn’t even aware of. Thanks, Carrie!
January 12, 2021 at 3:20 am
Shar
I love this way of looking at a picture book – by creating a character with direct opposition that’s not about them changing. I’m excited to explore this idea more – thank you, Carrie! And congrats on your upcoming book release!
January 12, 2021 at 3:21 am
Marcia Berneger
I love the books you included!! Thanks so much for sharing them!
January 12, 2021 at 4:31 am
Genevieve Gorback
I love Dozens of Donuts! And I can’t wait for Don’t Hug Doug!! Bravo! Thanks for this post!
January 12, 2021 at 4:56 am
Rachel S. Hobbs Gunn
Thank you!
January 12, 2021 at 5:19 am
Maria Marshall
Great post Carrie! I love the survey of mentor texts, Mother Bruce is an all time favorite! I can’t wait to dive into it with this particular lens. What a great way to spur ideas – putting two unchangeable things into conflict. Thanks!
January 12, 2021 at 5:40 am
kiralee strong
Great spin on picture books. Thanks for the ideas ❤️
January 12, 2021 at 6:17 am
Jodie Scoullar
How interesting when this is really brought to your attention! Thanks for the list of books and Don’t Hug Doug sounds like a fantastic book. A great book for parents too I would think because it’s so easy to say things like ‘Go and give so-and-so a hug’ and push it when the kid clearly doesn’t want to as if they’re being rude. Awesome concept.
January 12, 2021 at 6:27 am
Debi Boccanfuso
I know those kids who don’t like hugs! Can be brutal! Thanks for the great insight and list of books to study! Thank you!
Debi
January 12, 2021 at 6:43 am
Marzieh Abbas
Aww i love this Carrie! thanks for this- i hadn’t thought of them this way- great comps and I can’t wait to read more about Doug
January 12, 2021 at 7:13 am
srkckass
Congratulations on your books. I like the idea of making characters miserable (not that I want people miserable in real life) – characters need to experience some growth so it makes sense.
January 12, 2021 at 7:36 am
Nadine Poper
I will be checking out these books. Thank you for the reminders!
January 12, 2021 at 7:47 am
Freda Lewkowicz
I WILL BE READING ALL THESE BOOKS ASAP. Thank you for the different perspective.
January 12, 2021 at 9:05 am
jjsewell416
Thanks for this different perspective on main characters and their conflicts. You have me intrigued to see how most of them do resolve their “problem”. Heading to the library today!
January 12, 2021 at 9:24 am
Penny Merritt
It’s easy to forget the many ways for character growth. Thanks for the reminder!
January 12, 2021 at 9:31 am
Kelly Darke
Wow Carrie, this is great. I love how you gave us all these examples and then inspired us to read and find out how they wrapped up stories for ourselves.
January 12, 2021 at 9:40 am
Deborah Foster
I love your book Dozens of Doughnuts. It just arrived at our library!
January 12, 2021 at 9:46 am
Katie L. Carroll
I love this approach on character and conflict.
January 12, 2021 at 9:51 am
paulajbecker
I hadn’t thought about a grouping these books that way as well as that perspective! Thank you for the insight!
January 12, 2021 at 10:01 am
kmajor2013
I love the title, Don’t Hug Doug! I’ve got to buy this book! Thanks for this insightful post, Carrie.
January 12, 2021 at 10:03 am
allyenz
Thank you Carrie! Such a concise and insightful way to frame this twist on the classic narrative arc. I will definitely be checking out all of the books mentioned and learn how they handled the dilemma. Don’t Hug Doug looks super fun!
January 12, 2021 at 10:15 am
Susan Jobsky
I think I have written this kind of book. My character, a dog named Scout, simply recalls his life with the one person in the world he loves the most. He waits for her to pick him. He learns to live in a people house, and how to make his girl feel special. She makes him feel special too. He finally has to say goodbye, and it’s hard, but he has prepared another to be her special friend and protector. Scout lives on in one special memory.
It does not fit the story arc, and I’m afraid to make it fit will ruin the the story. I think I’ll just keep it. But I’ll try writing another, different story.
January 12, 2021 at 10:18 am
Cedar Pruitt
I love this! I’ll make some characters miserable today! And, I also live outside Boston with my husband, son, daughter and…just one cat. But four chickens! Thanks for the great post!
January 12, 2021 at 10:35 am
Marsha Weiner
more acceptance than therapy… winning!
thank you
marsha
January 12, 2021 at 10:36 am
Emily Bertholf
Congratulations on DON”T HUG DOUG. I really enjoyed LouAnn’s character in DOZENS OF DONUTS and can’t wait to read what you have in store for Doug. This post has the wheels in my brain churning and giving new life to a couple of ideas I passed on before. Thank you!
January 12, 2021 at 10:46 am
Ashley Karges
Thank you, Carrie! Congratulatoins on your books. Looking forward to reading all of these you’ve mentioned.
January 12, 2021 at 10:49 am
LenoraBiemans (@BiemansLenora)
Thank you for those wonderful examples. I love Dozens of Doughnuts and I can’t wait to read Don’t Hug Doug. Congratulations!
January 12, 2021 at 11:05 am
Debra Katz
Great post. I have read some of the examples, but will check out the rest.
January 12, 2021 at 11:07 am
Penelope McNally
Thank you for great idea – I can’t wait to make some characters miserable today 🙂
I adore Dozens of Doughnuts and look forward to reading Don’t Hug Doug. Congratulations! Thanks for the post!
January 12, 2021 at 11:09 am
Adriana Bergstrom
What an interesting challenge! I’m gonna check out those examples of MC vs. innate inmutable characteristic and see how they figure it out.
January 12, 2021 at 11:23 am
triciacandy
These are great suggestions! Thank you!
January 12, 2021 at 11:26 am
Elizabeth Saba
Thanks Carrie – love Dozens of Doughnuts and look forward to Don’t Hug Doug.
January 12, 2021 at 11:27 am
curryelizabeth
Great examples. Congratulations on your upcoming book and thanks for the post!
January 12, 2021 at 11:38 am
M.M. Baker
With a rise in kids who have sensitivities and allergies, acknowledging that it’s ok to say no to something (whether it’s a hug or a glass of milk) seems like an affirming choice.
January 12, 2021 at 11:40 am
shellshock7
Thank you!
January 12, 2021 at 11:49 am
Daryl Gottier
What great examples! Thanks! And I loved Dozens of Doughnuts, in book and pastry form!
January 12, 2021 at 11:55 am
Amy H
Thank you for writing this book! As a teacher it is important to teach kids that it’s okay to say no that they don’t want to receive or give a hug!
January 12, 2021 at 11:56 am
Keeping the Me in Mommy
What great story examples for mentor texts! I know most but I’m definitely checking out the ones I’ve missed!
January 12, 2021 at 11:56 am
Keeping the Me in Mommy
What great story examples for mentor texts! I know most but I’m definitely checking out the ones I’ve missed!
January 12, 2021 at 12:09 pm
writersideup
Carrie, you gave PERFect examples of this type conflict and I’m SO curious how you solved Doug’s UNhuggable problem! Thank you 😀
January 12, 2021 at 12:13 pm
Lydia Loeber
Thank you for your excellent post and reminding us to look beyond the characters and work with things they want to change but can’t
January 12, 2021 at 12:25 pm
Melanie Ellsworth
Thanks for the book list to study, Carrie! Can’t wait to read yours! I’m always interested in books where the MC doesn’t have to do all the growing. I’ll scan my idea list and see which characters I can make miserable!
January 12, 2021 at 12:26 pm
Lucretia S.
Thank you for a great post and helpful mentor texts, Carrie. I’ve been working through a ms with a similar type of conflict. I’m going to give it another go with fresh ideas and eyes after reading this.
January 12, 2021 at 12:36 pm
writeremmcbride
Carrie, I can’t wait to read “Don’t Hug Doug!” There are so many children who want the protection of their own space and dislike public settings for that reason. Your ideas and suggestions are wonderful! I immediately requested each mentor text from our wonderful library in town and am ready to go do the curbside pickup this afternoon! Thank you so much!
January 12, 2021 at 12:42 pm
Judy Palermo
Can’t wait to read ALL of these books!
January 12, 2021 at 12:44 pm
Hollie Wolverton
I tend to write these types of stories and appreciate the mentor text suggestions. Don’t Hug Doug looks great! Thanks for the post.
January 12, 2021 at 12:51 pm
Christine Van Zandt, author of A BRIEF HISTORY OF UNDERPANTS
Thanks for the post–and great title. Enjoyed the perspective.
January 12, 2021 at 12:51 pm
Nancy Ferguson
Thank you, Carrie for the mentor texts, advice and ideas about boundaries.
January 12, 2021 at 12:58 pm
Babs Ostapina
Oh, Carrie, Carrie… you gave me a perfectly delightfully miserable idea! Thank you. And kudos on your book debuts!
January 12, 2021 at 1:01 pm
bonzerb
Thanks Carrie, great titles to look up! And congrats on the new book!
January 12, 2021 at 1:02 pm
andynarwhal
I remember hearing about DON’T HUG DOUG at last year’s summer SCBWI conference. Such a great idea for a book!
January 12, 2021 at 1:04 pm
Marcie Mahuta
What a great direction to suggest & with so many great examples. Thank you!
January 12, 2021 at 1:05 pm
Melissa Stoller
Hi Carrie – thanks for a great post! I love your approach! I will try to make some characters miserable today! Can’t wait to read your upcoming PB.
January 12, 2021 at 1:42 pm
Sharon Lillie
I love the idea of making our characters miserable.
January 12, 2021 at 1:42 pm
Dawn Prochovnic
This was a super helpful post for me. What a great reminder: Make your characters miserable. Lots of ideas are flowing after this one!
January 12, 2021 at 1:49 pm
mginsberg10
Thanks for all these great examples;I’ll have to print this out! Micki
January 12, 2021 at 2:13 pm
pjaegly
Looking forward to reading your books, especially Don’t Hug Doug.
January 12, 2021 at 2:20 pm
katiefischerwrites
What a fun list of books! I really appreciate your advice on non-traditional story arcs.
January 12, 2021 at 2:29 pm
Elizabeth Duncan
Thanks for the reading list… I can’t wait to make some characters miserable.
January 12, 2021 at 2:32 pm
Jolene Ballard Gutiérrez
Brilliant, Carrie! Thanks for encouraging us to make our characters miserable!!
January 12, 2021 at 2:34 pm
Lydia Lukidis
HI Carrie! You’re on fire lately :). I love the notion of making your characters miserable, and a lot of humor can grow from that…
January 12, 2021 at 2:35 pm
jenlinville2021
Can’t wait to find out what happens to Doug!
January 12, 2021 at 2:41 pm
jessica shaw
Looking forward to Don’t Hug Doug. Congrats, Carrie!
January 12, 2021 at 2:47 pm
kidlitgail
Carrie, I can’t wait to read DON’T HUG DOUG! And my sweet guide dog, Pippi, allows me to write at the computer whild she gets cozy on my feet under the desk!
January 12, 2021 at 2:50 pm
Dan Marvin
Your new book sounds so good and I loved the list of books you used for examples. I’ve read some, but not most of them. Thanks for the post!
January 12, 2021 at 3:26 pm
Jose Cruz
Serendipitous timing strikes again. The subject of your post has coincided with an old MS I’m looking to revise next month. The conflict stems from the fact that other characters need to change in order for the protagonist to thrive. But that can only come about through their agency and action. Looks like it’ll be a challenge for the both of us!
January 12, 2021 at 3:33 pm
Pam Jones-Nill
The character conflicts can present some funny story plots. Thanks!!
January 12, 2021 at 3:35 pm
Lynn Alpert
Thank you so much for this post! I’m currently thinking about changing the outcome in my latest WIP so the protagonist DOESN’T get what she wants – and need all the help I can get.
January 12, 2021 at 3:42 pm
Sue (Susan Uhlig) (@susanuhlig)
Good post!
January 12, 2021 at 3:53 pm
Amy Grover
Thank you for sharing this perspective, Carrie!
January 12, 2021 at 4:36 pm
Sherri
Great post. I have several characters in several picture books that fit the above criteria. I love the comps. Thanks
January 12, 2021 at 4:51 pm
amyrsinn
Thanks for this post, Carrie! I have a character that has this problem. It is hard to write!
January 12, 2021 at 5:53 pm
Aimee Satterlee
I absolutely love Dozen of Doughnuts! Thanks for your ideas today!
January 12, 2021 at 6:41 pm
EllenB
Love this post – brilliant. And I look forward to seeing the hug book.
January 12, 2021 at 7:30 pm
Summer Quigley
Not necessarily changing the character’s behaviour but instead the world around it. Yes, I need to try this.
January 12, 2021 at 7:35 pm
Carrie Williford (@carrietimes)
I’m looking forward to Don’t Hug Doug, it’s such an important subject!
January 12, 2021 at 7:44 pm
Jennifer Raudenbush
Interesting and thought-provoking blog post. Thanks.
January 12, 2021 at 8:02 pm
Stephanie D Jones
I love this idea – character trait and problem in fundamental conflict – that’s a chewy one!
January 12, 2021 at 8:12 pm
Jennifer
“Don’t Hug Doug” sounds amazing and I know a not-so-huggy person who would love it! Thanks for the challenge to make a character miserable — sounds like a fun but challenging way to kick off a story!
January 12, 2021 at 8:22 pm
Joyce
This sounds adorable, Carrie!
January 12, 2021 at 8:24 pm
Pat Trattles
I love your ideas about asking what if. So many story possibilities spring from those two little words.
January 12, 2021 at 8:49 pm
Celina Kamler
Thank you!
January 12, 2021 at 8:59 pm
Maria Oka
What a wealth of examples! I love it. And Doug DOES look so adorable! I can’t wait to read.
January 12, 2021 at 9:11 pm
TL Fales
My first decent picture book didn’t fit the typical “character tries to solve the problem three times” model. Fortunately I had read enough good PBs to know that it could still work out.
January 12, 2021 at 9:30 pm
jimchaize1
I know this post will help me at some time along my writing journey. I’m glad to see you included one of my PB favorites, “The Rooster Who Would Not Be Quiet”. Thanks, Carrie.
January 12, 2021 at 9:40 pm
Chelle Martin
Thanks for bringing up a new approach to picture books. Can’t wait to read the examples you mentioned.
January 12, 2021 at 9:50 pm
claudine108
Carrie, congratulations! Thank you for the inspiration to give our characters an interesting dimension that will make them relatable!
January 12, 2021 at 9:55 pm
Melissa Warren
I always have enjoyed books that fo no follow the typical story arc. I have read about half of the books you mentioned, I look forward to reading the others.
January 12, 2021 at 10:10 pm
Diane O'Neill
Thanks so much! I can’t wait to read Don’t Hug Doug as well as the other books you mention, as I’d like to try to write about conflict stemming from an innate trait! Thanks so much for the inspiration!
January 12, 2021 at 10:11 pm
laurazarrin
Great ideas! Thank you!
January 12, 2021 at 10:29 pm
Prairie Garden Girl
Thank you, Carrie, for sharing the idea to write a story with a different format than the classic narrative arc.
Suzy Leopold
January 12, 2021 at 10:34 pm
Stacy Couch
Love these books! Got them – and now I’m going to analyze the heck out of them. Thanks!
January 12, 2021 at 10:34 pm
Elizabeth Metz
Thank you for putting some words to these kinds of stories, Carrie! I’m going to keep my eye open for stories where the world adapts to the main character rather than the other way around.
January 12, 2021 at 10:38 pm
horsewriterlady
Thank you for pointing out all these different books that are…different. I love them all! I love Dozens of Doughnuts and I can’t wait to read Don’t Hug Doug. Tough characters make great books. Thanks for your post.
January 12, 2021 at 11:01 pm
topangamaria
What If INDEED. And your book examples are some of my faves.
January 12, 2021 at 11:40 pm
dmcbee
Thank you for inspiring ideas.
January 12, 2021 at 11:51 pm
libbydemmon
Congrats on your book coming out this month!! And thanks for the great list. Miserable characters are so compelling!
January 13, 2021 at 1:00 am
Gaby
Thank you Carrie for sharing with us the picture books by theme (Identity, Acceptance); now a days is a big topic, and the libraries will love your book for sure.
January 13, 2021 at 1:25 am
Jeannette Suhr
I have a new character who is in direct opposition to an innate trait so thank you for this list of books that will help guide me through the resolution and give me insight for a perfect ending. Your post is very timely!
January 13, 2021 at 2:00 am
Ginger Meurer
Excellent point, Carrie! Sometimes you don’t want to and actually shouldn’t change. So what do you do. Excited to see how Doug deals with it. And happy almost book birthday!
January 13, 2021 at 2:33 am
Amanda Lieber
Thank you for you insight, great to be reminded of this essential and tool that can certainly result in hilarious situations and characters.
January 13, 2021 at 3:02 am
Terri Sabol
I love your comment about your two cats permitting you to write. We share a common problem. Haha. Thanks for sharing this great list of books, Carrie!
January 13, 2021 at 7:48 am
Meaghan Br
I am really enjoying reading daily Storystorm posts. So much inspiration, ideas, encouragement and knowledge within each and every post.
January 13, 2021 at 9:30 am
andreesantini
Interesting, I’ll check out all the books you referenced. Thanks for your post.
January 13, 2021 at 10:01 am
Julia A Mills
Now I want to read all of these book!
January 13, 2021 at 10:25 am
Catherine
I really enjoyed reading this post and look forward to checking these books out – I particularly like the look of Big Mean Mike and Mother Bruce :o)
January 13, 2021 at 11:21 am
Amy Leskowski
Great post, Carrie! This is such a great place to start with a character. It makes for some of the best books! I can’t wait to read your book!
January 13, 2021 at 11:37 am
Suzanne Poulter Harris
Love all these What if questions and your visuals. I’m sure I could get a few StoryStorm ideas from this post!
January 13, 2021 at 11:46 am
8catpaws
I applaud your permission to turn the “classic narrative arc” on its head. You don’t have to write a character that fails 3 attempts then succeeds with character growth. A good story can happen another way. A shout-out to creativity!
January 13, 2021 at 11:51 am
kimpfenn
Love this list of books and looking forward to going back and really analyzing each dilemma and resolution.
Congratulations on Don’t Hug Doug!
January 13, 2021 at 12:04 pm
marshaelyn
“Miserable”…is now rooted in my brain. Your fresh approach to the “traditional narrative” is a cold shower of inspiration. Story ideas are blooming. Thank you, Carrie, for being raw honesty and encouragement. Sending you good thoughts for continued success on your journey…
January 13, 2021 at 12:20 pm
paulaobering
Love this take – as these are the kinds of books that appeal to my sensibilities, LOL. Thanks for sharing.
January 13, 2021 at 12:23 pm
brilliantviewpoint
Carrie — GREAT BOOK IDEA — about not touching Doug. I was like that and I still am and I am in my 50s. In fact, I’m thankful to COVID that I don’t have to hug, shake hands and/or kiss people on both cheeks anymore. I look forward to reading your book.
January 13, 2021 at 1:37 pm
Sara Weingartner (@SJWeingartner)
Thanks for the fab post, Carrie! This is a great way to brainstorm — find a strong MC with extreme built-in tension.
January 13, 2021 at 2:51 pm
Laurel Ranveig Abell
Thanks so much! Congrats on DON’T HUG DOUG!
January 13, 2021 at 3:33 pm
Ellie Huynh
This is something that I have thought about, so thanks for the encouragement to revisit my ideas and try to figure out a way to finish them.
January 13, 2021 at 3:41 pm
Beth Elliott
Thanks Carrie, great post in terms of content and lots of example texts. Congratulations on your second book coming out soon! My family really enjoyed Dozens of Doughnuts 🙂
January 13, 2021 at 3:43 pm
Joyce
Problems that maybe shouldn’t be solved by changing, a good focus for more layered problem solving. Congratulations on bringing this concept to fruition!
January 13, 2021 at 3:48 pm
Joannie Duris
Thanks, Carrie. I’m such a fan of PBs that don’t follow the traditional narrative arc, so your post hit a home run for me. I love your concrete list of mentor texts, and will be adding the ones I haven’t already read to my library list. A wonderful dilemma to study! And congratulations on DON’T HUG DOUG!
January 13, 2021 at 4:30 pm
Megan Howe
Thank you! I love the suggestion to study the endings of the books. Great advice! (Heading off to study the endings of all the books I love.)
January 13, 2021 at 4:43 pm
Suzanne Alexander
Your post gave me an idea. Thanks for the inspiration.
January 13, 2021 at 4:59 pm
Tania
FABULOUS!
January 13, 2021 at 5:18 pm
babybluesnowflake
“Because as I stated at the start of this post, problems that are in opposition to an innate character trait usually cannot be resolved (or at least, can’t be happily resolved) the “old fashioned way”—by the main character changing. Something else has gotta give.” WOW! This is something that will keep me preoccupied and busy for a while. Thank you!
January 13, 2021 at 5:39 pm
Kelly Jaques
Thanks Carrie, wonderful post! Can’t wait to read Don’t Hug Doug, such a great concept!
January 13, 2021 at 5:48 pm
sharon lane holm
Thank you. And I have just the little, miserable character to pull this off.
January 13, 2021 at 5:58 pm
FrannyG
Hmm… you got me thinking! Good luck with your new book Carrie, sounds interesting.
January 13, 2021 at 6:26 pm
Christine M Irvin
Who would have thought that making people so miserable could be so much fun?!?
January 13, 2021 at 6:29 pm
Christine M Irvin
Who would have thought it could be so much fun making people miserable?!?
January 13, 2021 at 6:59 pm
Angie Isaacs
I can’t wait to read your book! Angie Isaacs
January 13, 2021 at 7:57 pm
Mark Ceilley
I love all of the covers of the books to help me remember the titles. Your character opposition idea is brilliant! Congratulations on your upcoming book!
January 13, 2021 at 8:06 pm
CindyC
Thanks Carrie. Don’t Hug Doug looks great.
January 13, 2021 at 8:56 pm
Karen Greenwald
Love the cover of your book! Thanks for the different perspective!
January 13, 2021 at 9:18 pm
Amy M. Miller
Carrie,
I love this list of books and am already referring to many of them as mentor texts for one of my manuscripts!! I’m sooooo glad to hear that this kind of story is hard to write. I thought I was losing my marbles going on revision 528!
Good luck with Don’t Hug Doug. It’s a great concept and I can’t wait to read it.❤️
January 13, 2021 at 9:46 pm
Kathy Berman
Thanks Carrie. I just so happen to be in love with all the books you listed. And I’m sure your new book will be just as fun. Miserable characters are the best!
January 13, 2021 at 10:42 pm
Sylvia Mary Grech
Thank you for your post!
January 14, 2021 at 1:04 am
Summer Hinderer
Thanks for this!
January 14, 2021 at 1:34 am
Mary Jane
Sending hugs to you. Thanks for the post! So many interesting characters with problems. I love it.
January 14, 2021 at 6:46 am
tarajpotter
Now that’s got me thinking… Thanks!
January 14, 2021 at 8:50 am
Naana Amissah
Thanks Carrie,, for your post. This gives one a lot to think about in character development.
January 14, 2021 at 10:13 am
Charles Richardson
The Rooster Who Would Not Be Quiet sparked an idea of how to handle the idea of standing out in a crowd. Thanks.
January 14, 2021 at 10:28 am
moviemommie
Thanks for the inspiring list and congrats on the newest book! -jenna feldman
January 14, 2021 at 10:43 am
Helen Lysicatos
Congrats and good luck with your upcoming release. This post definitely got me thinking of some new ideas. Thanks.
January 14, 2021 at 11:24 am
ljh22o
Thank you for suggesting us to question the conventional story arc
January 14, 2021 at 11:34 am
carmelamccainsimmons
Thank you for weaving a plot twist thread through some of my favorite picture books! I can’t wait to read Don’t Hug Doug.
January 14, 2021 at 11:36 am
Ellen Leventhal
I’m running late on Storystorm, but I’m so happy I caught up today. I love all these “flat arc” books, and I can’t wait to read DON’T HUG DOUG. By the way, we love DOZENS OF DOUGHNUTS here. Thanks, Carrie and Tara!
January 14, 2021 at 12:01 pm
heatherbell37
Love the idea of stepping away from the classic narrative arc. Thank you for sharing!
January 14, 2021 at 12:04 pm
ljh22o
This is a much more appealing approach than following the classic narrative arc. It speaks to me.
January 14, 2021 at 1:11 pm
Yehudit Sarah
I’m so intrigued by thinking about a story in this way. Thanks, Carrie. I want to look at the books you recommended and see the endings.
January 14, 2021 at 2:21 pm
CHRISTINE GRAHAM
This was a fun article. Now I’m trying to picture cats having h\offices.
January 14, 2021 at 2:42 pm
Masha Sapron
way to leave us hanging! Brilliant!
January 14, 2021 at 3:07 pm
Dawn Young
💛Carrie, Can’t wait to read Don’t Hug Doug. Thanks for your inspiration.💛
January 14, 2021 at 3:22 pm
Joni Hay Patras
Thanks for sharing this book list! I plan on checking these books out. Love your inspiration for DON’T HUG DOUG. Having worked with children, this is such an important topic that is not always discussed.
January 14, 2021 at 3:44 pm
Linda Hofke
Yes, problems that are in opposition to an innate character trait make for a great story. But I am glad you added the warning at the end. I haven’t tried writing one yet for exactly that reason. They are a bit tricky to tackle. But you’ve done it! Congrats on your book, Don’t Hug Doug. I can’t wait to read it.
January 14, 2021 at 6:27 pm
Kristin Sawyer
Thank you for your informative post and for all the book suggestions! Can’t wait to read them.
January 14, 2021 at 6:37 pm
mandyyokim
Thank you, Carrie. I look forward to reading Don’t Hug Doug!
January 14, 2021 at 10:19 pm
Michelle S. Kennedy (@MichelleSKenned)
Hi Carrie- As a mom of a son with Asperger’s, your post really got me thinking of some new picture book ideas. Thank you for sharing! I am looking forward to reading DON’T HUG DOUG!
January 14, 2021 at 10:25 pm
setwiggs
carrie,
Yes, i have characters who can’t change but somehow have to adapt. I’m interested to see how Doug establishes his boundaries.
Sue
January 14, 2021 at 11:22 pm
kathydoherty1
What a great post on basically “throwing mud” at your main character.
January 15, 2021 at 12:45 am
Karan Greene
I need to read these books! Great advice!
January 15, 2021 at 1:21 am
Katie Schwartz
I can’t wait to check out the books you mentioned, and see how the author deals with the conflict. I think we all might identify with this concept, thank you Carrie, for touching on this topic!
January 15, 2021 at 5:32 am
Amelia Shearer
As a non-hugger myself, I bet Doug is loving social distancing 😉
January 15, 2021 at 8:38 am
dlapmandi
While reading your post the thought kept creeping in about the main character changing or having personal growth. I now must read the the books you highlighted to find the answers. Clever! Thanks for the post.
January 15, 2021 at 9:37 am
kaitlinsikeswrites
Great advice!
January 15, 2021 at 1:35 pm
Laurie Carmody
This works perfectly for a story I’m having trouble with. Thank you for the great book list. I’m looking forward to reading your new release.
January 15, 2021 at 2:23 pm
Louise Aamodt
I like how your post didn’t give away the ending to these books. I’m curious though… off to the library!
January 15, 2021 at 4:21 pm
Alicia Z. Klepeis
Really enjoyed this post — and have added lots of great books to my to-read list! Congrats on your terrific books 🙂
January 15, 2021 at 7:27 pm
ingridboydston
Just put a star by the idea your post invoked, thank you! And it’s literally been staring me in the face…for 19 years!
January 15, 2021 at 7:38 pm
Ave Maria Cross
Hmmm… misery loves company. Great choice of books to read — thanks for sharing.
January 15, 2021 at 10:58 pm
KASteed
Love the title…dont hug doug. Thanks!
January 16, 2021 at 7:57 am
rhumba20
Thank you for this post Carrie! I’m already thinking about some characters:)
Anna Levin
January 16, 2021 at 8:50 am
E D Stewart
Awesome Carrie! Can’t wait to read your books as well as all these other recommendations! 🙂
January 16, 2021 at 9:10 am
yangmommy
Congrats on “Don’t Hug Doug,” Carrie! And I love your ending line here…have fun making your characters miserable…I’ll save this for a cranky day when I need some company, LOL!
January 16, 2021 at 9:50 am
Sherri Jones Rivers
Carrie, so happy for your writing success and that I got to meet you. The books listed are so helpful.
January 16, 2021 at 12:55 pm
laurelneme
Great post, Carrie!
January 16, 2021 at 2:05 pm
Dea Brayden
Love this challenge, Carrie. Am thinking away here. Thanks for the book recs!
January 16, 2021 at 3:33 pm
kirsten218
Thank you for this post! These are great questions, and I have a new angle forming already for one of my characters.
January 16, 2021 at 5:58 pm
Heather Kelso
Great post! Congratulations on your books. I look forward to reading them.
I had just thought of a character that wants to be the opposite of what she was born to be. What timing.
January 16, 2021 at 6:47 pm
ptnozell
I like how you focused on characters with traits they won’t change (or shouldn’t have to change). I’ve read most of the books you highlighted, but I think I need to go back & give them a reread together to think about the situation you highlight. Thanks for a thought-provoking post!
January 16, 2021 at 7:06 pm
Lisa Kingsford
Thanks for sharing a new way to think! It has triggered some ideas 🙂
January 16, 2021 at 7:45 pm
Deek
Challenging spin! Thank you for sharing. Love Doug! But I won’t hug him😁
January 16, 2021 at 8:34 pm
Lauri Meyers
This is a fabulous round up of PBs where the world changes instead of the character !
January 16, 2021 at 9:07 pm
Nicole Loos Miller
Ooh, I feel like this is an approach we don’t talk about very often. Thank you so much for highlighting it!
January 16, 2021 at 9:54 pm
Anne LeBlanc Gr 4/5 teacher 🇨🇦📚❤️✍️🖖😃 (@AnneLeBlanc2)
Such a great idea! I can see my students LOVING making their characters miserable!
January 16, 2021 at 11:54 pm
Meghan Burch
Thanks, Carrie! Can’t wait to dive into these mentor texts!
January 17, 2021 at 9:50 am
Abby Wooldridge
Love your post, Carrie! What great ideas for creating conflict in a story. Thank you for all the mentor text suggestions, and congratulations on your new book! 🙂
January 17, 2021 at 3:14 pm
Joyce
Opposites is such a rich place to start. Thanks.
January 17, 2021 at 5:52 pm
andreajloney
Yaaaaaaay! Thanks for mentioning Bunnybear, Carrie. And what great advice — tough conflicts can lead to awesome and unexpected outcomes. Looking forward to reading Don’t Hug Doug (great title!).
January 17, 2021 at 6:05 pm
Laura W.
Thank you for the post Carrie! Like the challenge and idea of miserable characters!
January 17, 2021 at 7:06 pm
Julie Reich
Great post! Thanks for all the mentor texts–off I go to order them.
January 17, 2021 at 8:24 pm
Melissa Chupp
I can’t wait to read Don’t Hug Doug!
January 17, 2021 at 11:04 pm
Michelle Kashinsky
Thanks so much, very insightful!
January 18, 2021 at 2:27 am
Karen Chun
I like the twist in these characters development even not s typical story structure.
January 18, 2021 at 1:18 pm
Susie Sawyer
Thank you, Carrie! Interesting, how you point out that the MC can’t always change! I like to think outside the box, which is what we’d have to do with those stories.
January 18, 2021 at 2:52 pm
Janet Halfmann
I’ll definitely be looking for the books you suggest to see how they ended!
January 18, 2021 at 3:29 pm
Bettie Boswell
Great examples to check out. I need to be meaner to my characters for sure.
January 18, 2021 at 3:31 pm
Bettie Boswell
Thank you for sharing these great examples. I definitely need to work on being mean to my characters.
January 18, 2021 at 4:18 pm
Val McC
Great to read about PBs that don’t follow the traditional path of MC changes. Thanks for these mentor texts, Carrie!
January 18, 2021 at 5:05 pm
jennyb_writes
Thank you for this book list! I look forward to diving in and seeing what each author did.
January 19, 2021 at 6:51 am
suzannepoulterharris
Love this challenge! Off to make a list.
January 19, 2021 at 3:52 pm
Vera Lisa Smetzer
Love the list of comps here to check out. Opening up my brain to this flow!! Good post for inspiration for new twists!! Thank you!
January 19, 2021 at 4:17 pm
Ellen Pridmore
A very interesting and informative post, Carrie! Thank you!
January 19, 2021 at 6:04 pm
Laura Clement
I am fascinated by Doug! I can’t wait to read your book. My daughter is autistic so we live in a different world here. Love seeing characters that speak more to her life.
January 19, 2021 at 10:38 pm
Meredith Fraser
Thank you for the comps and the great ideas. I have one WIP that deals with this very issue.
January 19, 2021 at 11:58 pm
Katie Brandyberry
Agree that these stories are so hard to write because they can’t “change” and “fix” everything! I love your mentor texts and need to study them. I can’t wait to get my hands on Don’t Touch Doug too – what a great concept!
January 20, 2021 at 1:26 am
kelliejanebyrnes
Great way of approaching stories, thank you! And I can’t wait to read your new book – such a fab idea!
January 20, 2021 at 7:05 am
Misty Morris
Traditional, untraditional. Perhaps a combination of both. Thanks for the book suggestions. And Don’t Hug Doug sounds wonderful.
January 20, 2021 at 2:57 pm
Kelly Conroy
Carrie, I can’t wait to read Don’t Hug Doug! And your assignment is very helpful. I’m looking forward to digging in!
January 21, 2021 at 1:46 am
Carrie Cook @carriecookhere
Thanks for the insightful post!
January 21, 2021 at 2:48 pm
Juliana Motzko
Great advices!!! It’s good to think in a very different way to create stories! Thanks for sharing with us!! 🙂
January 21, 2021 at 2:53 pm
Toni Weeks
Great topic for a picture book! I’ve learned to hug enough (pre-COVID) to be socially acceptable, but it doesn’t come naturally to me, and I’m sure there are kids who feel the same. Thank you for writing this book!
January 21, 2021 at 4:23 pm
Nina Nolan
Thank you for your post! And for reminding us that, sometimes, characters accepting a situation is the way to resolve a story’s “conflict.”
January 22, 2021 at 11:14 am
AlisonMarcotte
I’m so excited to read DON’T HUG DOUG and all these other books and study their endings! Thank you for the inspiring post!
January 22, 2021 at 2:19 pm
Karen Pickrell
Thank you for providing this list of mentor texts. Congratulations on your upcoming book!
January 22, 2021 at 6:44 pm
Judy Bryan
This is a great list of books to study. Thank you, Carrie!
January 22, 2021 at 9:15 pm
Brenda Whitehead (@BrendaW_Prof)
Amazing list of mentor texts, thanks for sharing! Now to go make my characters miserable… 😉
January 23, 2021 at 1:09 pm
erintsiska
Love this idea! I love Dozens of Doughnuts and can’t wait to read Don’t Hug Doug.
January 23, 2021 at 7:27 pm
Dina Ticas
I’m making a note of your suggestion about identifying the “instant conflict”.
January 24, 2021 at 12:07 am
Anna Brooks
Great examples of a different kind of conflict. And it’s already helping with a story I’ve been struggling with. Thank you!!
January 24, 2021 at 10:42 am
Julie Augensen-Rand
Congrats on the new book, and thanks for sharing.
January 24, 2021 at 1:33 pm
iefaber
I LOVE this. Especially for children because they too often are NOT the problem and are NOT told how to handle things that make them uncomfortable or are unchangeable. And I think that’s important for children to learn how to deal with things they cannot change. Life isn’t ALWAYS a problem to be solved. Thank you for this important reminder.
January 24, 2021 at 3:48 pm
treuting
What a great brainstorm & character challenge! Thank you!
January 24, 2021 at 7:18 pm
Debbie Meyer
Thanks for all the suggestions. Congratulations on the new book. I can totally relate to Doug! I feel like it’s the one good thing from the pandemic – no hugs. 😉
January 24, 2021 at 7:45 pm
Marilyn R Garcia
I love my characters, even the cranky ones. It’s difficult to make their lives…difficult, but I will explain to them that you advised it’s for the best.:)
January 25, 2021 at 4:34 am
sylviaichen
ahhh, love this post so much, thank you so much for giving all these inspiring examples!
January 25, 2021 at 10:38 am
Betsy Devany
What a wonderful post! Congratulations on your new book and thanks for the reminder to keep asking those What if? questions.
January 27, 2021 at 7:56 pm
Bill Canterbury
Helpful advice here!
January 27, 2021 at 11:06 pm
McCourt Thomas
I know so many kids who will be grateful for this book!
January 28, 2021 at 12:41 am
Jud Ward
I writhe with my characters when making them miserable but when that perfect resolution presents itself, it’s such a blast. Thanks for the post.
January 28, 2021 at 11:02 pm
Karen L Ledbetter
Thank you for the ideas and examples
January 29, 2021 at 8:35 am
Lisa L Furness
I love these types of stories. I’m looking forward to reading yours too, Carrie!
January 30, 2021 at 10:10 am
Audrey
Haha, I love these types of stories, though I’ve never thought of them in a way as “making characters miserable.” Now I won’t be able to think of it in any other way! Thank you. 🙂
January 30, 2021 at 10:20 am
Kimberly Wilson
Thanks for this perspective, Carrie! Congratulations on your book launch!
January 30, 2021 at 4:41 pm
Susan Niemann
Great tip, thank you!
January 30, 2021 at 4:48 pm
Mary Worley
Can’t wait to read Don’t Hug Doug. Thanks for the list, too. I hadn’t made the connection between all of those titles.
January 30, 2021 at 5:15 pm
Coral Jenrette
I love this take on that aspect of arc!
January 30, 2021 at 6:02 pm
colleenrkosinski
Good advice!
January 30, 2021 at 10:36 pm
kristenrashid
Thanks for all of the examples, Carrie, and for your acknowledgment that the main character’s traits changing is not always possible or the resolution a story needs.
January 30, 2021 at 10:40 pm
Amy Bradshaw
Don’t Hug Doug sounds like a picture book that all kids need! Thank you for sharing your journey with us!
January 31, 2021 at 3:37 pm
Melissa McDaniel
Thank you, Carrie!!! 🙂
February 1, 2021 at 12:26 am
Jennifer Broedel (@JBroedelAuthor)
Making my characters miserable took me soooo long to get used to, when I began my PB journey 4 years ago. I knew it was a great way to up the stakes from the get-go, but it can be hard. Thanks for these great mentor texts!
February 1, 2021 at 11:02 am
kaleegwarjanski
Great examples. Thank you!
February 1, 2021 at 2:10 pm
Jen (aka RandomlyGenerated)
Aww, love Bruce 🙂
February 1, 2021 at 11:01 pm
kmshelley
Great concepts! Thanks so much.
February 2, 2021 at 12:49 pm
Naomi Gruer
Thanks for your post–good reminder to look at “problems” in a new light.
February 4, 2021 at 11:25 am
Kelly Vavala
Great idea making characters feel miserable! Don’t hug Doug sounds great! Thank you for sharing!
February 5, 2021 at 11:32 pm
Lindsay Brayden Ellis
This post led to a really fun brainstorm, thank you!
February 12, 2021 at 12:56 am
Read to Kids
Hi Carrie, Became ill and gave up on Storystorm this year. I’m very late in commending you for sharing some of the problems we have to solve as writers for children. You’ve done well!
February 16, 2021 at 9:07 pm
lorisherritt
Love the selection of books you mentioned! And that not every problem is resolvable…
January 15, 2022 at 7:21 pm
Debbie Meneses
Carrie,
I can relate to the Don’t Hug Doug story theme. As a child, there was a family relative that had body odor most of the time she came to family functions. She expected a hug from everyone in attendance. It wasn’t that I did not like hugging. I did not want to receive body contact with this odorous person because the scent lingered on my clothing for a while. I also did not want to hurt her feelings, so I found myself not hugging anyone to avoid having to hug her. I certainly would not want for anyone to notice that they were being singled out. Maybe the odorous person had a medical reason, but I overheard her stating that her sense of smell did not work. Maybe she could not smell herself. I have always wondered about the sense of smell not working. I will research that to see if there is information to write about. Title: She Smelled Because She Could Not Smell.
January 16, 2022 at 1:55 am
Debbie Meneses
Carrie,
I can relate to the Don’t Hug Doug story theme. As a child, there was a family relative that had body odor most of the time she came to family functions. She expected a hug from everyone in attendance. It wasn’t that I did not like hugging. I did not want to receive body contact with this odorous person because the scent lingered on my clothing for a while. I also did not want to hurt her feelings, so I found myself not hugging anyone to avoid having to hug her. I certainly would not want for anyone to notice that they were being singled out.
I overheard her stating once that her sense of smell did not work. I learned that Anosmia is a real condition with multiple possible causes. I realized that the person could not smell that she smelled and no one would tell her. How unkind of us to not tell her. She might have needed hugs more than the rest of us. So there are reasons beyond culture why hugging is less likely to happen.
Your Don’t Hug Doug story might spark a good conversation with kids about the many reasons why someone might not want to hug, including sensory integration challenges.
January 24, 2022 at 1:17 pm
Lori Mozdzierz
Your make the character miserable comment had me LOL! The examples you listed immediately helped to unblock me re: a few of my characters. Thank you!