Charlotte Offsay is celebrating her picture book debut with a cover reveal of THE BIG BEACH CLEANUP, illustrated by Katie Rewse, publishing in March 2021 with Albert Whitman. This book also happens to be a Storystorm Success Story!
THE BIG BEACH CLEANUP is about Cora, a young girl who joins hands with her local community to clean up plastic litter along the seashore and save the local sandcastle competition.
Congratulations on your debut picture book, Charlotte! Do you have a fun story about the making of the book you’d like to share?
THE BIG BEACH CLEANUP was the result of a few Storystorm ideas colliding. (As many of you reading this already know, for the month of January Tara Lazar runs Storystorm, where a number of kidlit creators help the writing community get their creative juices flowing and develop picture book ideas, which many of us then use to fuel our picture book writing for the rest of the year.)
During Storystorm I write down anything and everything that inspires me. My three-year-old son had just begun his superhero phase (which two years later is still going strong—maybe not a phase?) and I wanted him to clean up his toys before school. I attempted to motivate him by pretending we were superheroes who needed to clean up to save the world (whatever works right?!). Unfortunately, he saw right through my plot and responded with “I don’t feel like being a superhero today.” My first thought was “yea, I don’t feel much like a superhero today, either.” This thought stuck with me as I had to jog with the stroller uphill to get him and his five-year-old sister to pre-school on time. I added “I don’t feel like a superhero today” to my Storystorm list.
Later that month on one of our walks back from pre-school (which were always more leisurely that our walks to pre-school), as we paused to inspect whatever flower/leaf/bug my kids had spotted, I casually picked up a piece of trash and tossed it into a nearby garbage can. My kids immediately wanted to know what I was doing. Why was there trash outside? Who had put it there? Why was it important to throw it away? Their inquisitive nature lead to a series of environmental discussions, which resulted in their relentlessly pointing out garbage everywhere we went and “doing our part” eventually made its way onto my list.
Stay with me—this is the final puzzle piece, I promise. As part of my Storystorm process, I also look back to my lists from previous years for ideas that I still wanted to pursue. For a couple of years in a row I had written “how many hands.” This stemmed from my passionate belief that if we can convince enough hands to join together, we can change the world. I hadn’t found a path forward for this idea so I added it to my 2019 list.
These three Storystorm ideas…
- not feeling like a superhero
- doing our part to clean up after ourselves
- and small hands joining together to change the world
…collided and I wrote what will be my debut picture book: THE BIG BEACH CLEANUP.
Tell us more about the story!
THE BIG BEACH CLEANUP is about Cora, a young girl who plans to be a sandcastle-building champion. When the contest is canceled due to litter at the beach, Cora’s plans come to a halt. Cora and her Mama pull on gloves and get to work, but soon Cora realizes it will take more than two pairs of hands to solve a big problem.
THE BIG BEACH CLEANUP introduces young readers to the impact of human trash on the environment. With practical solutions for tackling the plastic problem, this heartfelt story demonstrates that a person doesn’t have to be a superhero to make big change. By joining hands with those around them and doing their part, they can change the world.
A portion of the book’s proceeds will be donated to Heal the Bay.
How did you find your publisher?
THE BIG BEACH CLEANUP is being published by Albert Whitman. I was fortunate to connect with my editor, Christina Pulles, during an Inked Voices workshop. My agent, the wonderful Nicole Geiger at Full Circle Literary then submitted THE BIG BEACH CLEANUP to Christina when it went out on submission last summer.
Do you have any words of advice for aspiring PB authors?
The journey to publication is a rollercoaster—don’t get off the ride before you get your yes!
Charlotte is giving back to the PB community by offering a critique to one lucky blog commenter.
Leave a comment below to enter.
A random winner will be chosen next month.
Good luck!
When Charlotte Offsay isn’t busy building sandcastles with her husband and two small children, she can be found dreaming up and writing picture book manuscripts at home in Los Angeles, California. She passionately believes in the power of small hands joining together to make big change and wrote this book with the hopes of empowering young readers to follow in Cora’s footsteps. Her second picture book HOW TO RETURN A MONSTER is publishing in Fall 2021 with Beaming Books. Read more about Charlotte and her books at charlotteoffsay.com or follow her on Twitter @COffsay and Instagram @picturebookrecommendations. Her debut picture book THE BIG BEACH CLEANUP from Albert Whitman can be pre-ordered at BAM.
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July 30, 2020 at 8:09 am
Jane Heitman Healy
I love hearing how Charlotte synthesized 3 ideas to come up with 1 winning picture book! Congratulations, Charlotte, and thanks, Tara, for featuring her and for founding Storystorm!
July 30, 2020 at 8:09 am
Maria
I loved hearing about all the pieces of the puzzle that had to fit together for this idea to become a story. Congratulations on the new book. It’s the next addition to my “TBR” list!
July 30, 2020 at 8:20 am
Andrea Mack
Congratulations! It’s so great to read about how your ideas came together into a story. You’ve also reminded me to go back and revisit all the ideas I jotted down during Storystorm.
July 30, 2020 at 8:23 am
Kate Woodle
I wish I’d thought of this. I’m a trash pickerupper. I do it in my neighborhood and in all the places I walk my dog. I take garbage bags with me. I get some surprising comments. Once a teenager said thoughtfully, “I bet people are less likely to throw stuff on the ground when a place is clean.” I felt like hugging her!
July 30, 2020 at 8:34 am
kimpfenn
As part of the InkedVoices workshop that Charlotte submitted this manuscript in – I loved this story from the start and can’t wait to buy this for my own shelf! Congratulations, Charlotte and I look forward to pouring over Katie Rewse’s art!
July 30, 2020 at 8:40 am
Beverly Lyle Patt
Love the collision of ideas – great job sticking with it!
July 30, 2020 at 8:41 am
Sarah Meade
I love the story of how this book came to me– what a wonderful collision of ideas! I’m looking forward to reading it. Congratulations, Charlotte! Thanks for the post, Tara!
July 30, 2020 at 8:56 am
Deb Sullivan
Hi Charlotte – LOVE the story behind this book! Looking forward to reading it..thanks for sharing!
July 30, 2020 at 8:59 am
TerriMichels
I learn so much by reading the backstory of a Picture Book Project. Thank you.
July 30, 2020 at 9:06 am
Marina Lathouraki
I loved hearing about how this wonderful original story evolved. I would be honoured if you were to critique one of mine. Currently I’m on the rollercoaster ride with rejections. I would appreciate any feedback you could give me.
July 30, 2020 at 9:08 am
Sherri Jones Rivers
I love your journey and how, in time, it all came together. What a timely book. I grew up near the beach, so this story is extra special.
July 30, 2020 at 9:20 am
Michelle Ramirez
Very inspiring and congratulations!
July 30, 2020 at 9:21 am
Angela De Groot
Congratulations Charlotte and Katie. Thank you for sharing how this story came about. StoryStorm rocks!
July 30, 2020 at 9:34 am
Chelle Martin
Such a good reminder on how our beaches are in need of cleaning, not to mention our parks, streets, etc. I never understood how people can litter or leave their trash behind. Hope your book educated people on how they’re affecting the environment and impacting not only the community, but also wildlife. Congratulations!
July 30, 2020 at 9:35 am
Laura
Always a family thing to do on the beach!
July 30, 2020 at 9:35 am
ranessadoucet
I can’t wait to read this book. I know my kids will love it!
July 30, 2020 at 9:36 am
carrines y clifton
I’m a newbie to the world of children’s picture books. It’s exciting and scary at the same time. I have a manuscript ready and another in the making.
Your blog has given me the extra boost to keep pushing when those words just won’t appear. But I’m determined, there are readers waiting.😊
July 30, 2020 at 9:38 am
Sarah Skolfield
I love how these seemingly separate ideas came together for you. A great example of the importance of writing down everything, even if it doesn’t seem to have a purpose yet.
July 30, 2020 at 9:40 am
Tracy Hora
Congratulations, Charlotte!! Thank you for sharing your ideas colliding story behind the story. AND thank you for the reminder to not get off the ride before you get your yes!
July 30, 2020 at 9:43 am
Laura Purdie Salas
Congratulations, Charlotte! I love the way 3 different thoughts came together for this book 🙂
July 30, 2020 at 9:58 am
Karin Larson
Congratulations! I loved reading your story. Colliding ideas are the best.
July 30, 2020 at 10:15 am
Angela Robertson
Charlotte,
Congratulations on your picture book! I love in a small beach community, and this topic comes up quite a bit with my own children. We see a lot of garbage on our beaches and frequently toss it away. We even chased a balloon that was making its way out to sea. I can’t wait to read them your story.
Best of luck
July 30, 2020 at 10:16 am
pathaap
Congratulations, Charlotte! A good reminder to always save those Storystorm ideas!
July 30, 2020 at 10:17 am
Sara Burnett
Thank you for sharing your process! I loved learning how these ideas “came to you” especially while caregiving for very young children!
July 30, 2020 at 10:18 am
Cathy Ballou Mealey
I love the concept AND the newly-revealed cover is fantastic! Congrats Charlotte and Katie!
July 30, 2020 at 10:24 am
rosecappelli
Congratulations, Charlotte! This looks like a great book.
July 30, 2020 at 10:31 am
jstremer
What a great idea to blend three ideas into one story. I can’t wait to read this book and see how you did the layering.
July 30, 2020 at 10:47 am
Danielle
I love this story idea and can’t wait to read it to my students!
July 30, 2020 at 11:02 am
Susan Johnston Taylor
Congrats, Charlotte! This is an important topic.
July 30, 2020 at 11:17 am
Melissa Stoller
Great interview Charlotte. I love how all the puzzle pieces came together for this story. I can’t wait to buy both your new books!! Double congratulations!
July 30, 2020 at 11:17 am
jennagrodzicki
Congratulations, Charlotte and Katie! The cover is beautiful!
July 30, 2020 at 11:23 am
Sandy
I love the story of how your book came together!
July 30, 2020 at 11:31 am
regm55
Congratulations Charlotte on a brilliant idea for a picture book. I look forward to reading it to my grandchildren.
July 30, 2020 at 11:37 am
Nadia Salomon
So happy for you Charlotte! Love how your story came to be and how you’ve made it a cause worth supporting by donating to Heal the Bay! Can’t wait to read this!
July 30, 2020 at 11:37 am
Mark Ceilley
I thought it was fascinating to hear about how your ideas all came together to create your story. I think the topic in your book is so relevant and kids will be able to connect with it. Congratulations!
July 30, 2020 at 11:45 am
David McMullin
A triple idea combo. That’s pretty great. Congratulations!
July 30, 2020 at 12:15 pm
rindabeach
I love the reincarnation of the sand castle story, with a new twist! Congratulations on all the success!
July 30, 2020 at 12:21 pm
danielledufayet
Congrats! This is a much needed and beautiful book- thanks for sharing your journey!
July 30, 2020 at 12:24 pm
Charles Trevino
3 possibilities = 1 beautiful story idea.
Thank you for sharing your journey.
(You got me reviewing my list from StoryStorm)
Wish you the best!
July 30, 2020 at 12:42 pm
phyllisharris50
Wahoo! So happy for you, Charlotte and I love the cover!!
July 30, 2020 at 1:04 pm
Cheryl Johnson
I always love hearing about a story’s journey! Thanks for sharing your three pieces of inspiration.
July 30, 2020 at 1:33 pm
Michelle Garcia Andersen
Congratulations, Charlotte! You’ve inspired me to go back through my Storystorm journal from years past and see if there’s anything there worth revisiting. Thanks for the idea and inspiration!
July 30, 2020 at 1:39 pm
Linda KulpTrout
I enjoyed learning about how you found your book topic. The cover is beautiful, and I look forward to reading it! Thank you!
July 30, 2020 at 1:42 pm
Kassy Keppol
Thank you for sharing.
July 30, 2020 at 1:49 pm
Janet Frenck Sheets
Wow! If this was on your 2019 Storystorm list, things are moving really fast for you! Congratulations on both of your upcoming books.
July 30, 2020 at 1:58 pm
Candace Spizzirri
Thank you for the great post, Tara. Congratulations, Charlotte!!!
July 30, 2020 at 2:23 pm
romontanaro
Congratulations on your book, Charlotte! I love hearing about your story’s evolution. So inspiring. Wish you continued success!
July 30, 2020 at 2:58 pm
mariagianferrari
Congrats, Charlotte & Katie & hooray for Storystorm success stories!
July 30, 2020 at 2:59 pm
kathydoherty1
Congratulations on such a great book!…I’ve worked with Christina Pulles, too. Lucky us!
July 30, 2020 at 3:05 pm
Susan Eyerman
Lovely post with a softly-sold lesson. Thank you and good luck with it.
July 30, 2020 at 3:14 pm
Mary Warth
What a Storystorm success! Congratulations!
July 30, 2020 at 3:30 pm
Elizabeth S Harris
OKAY, Charlotte, you talked me into staying on the rollercoaster. I’m in the top car, and my old body is hanging on for dear life. Can’t wait to read.
July 30, 2020 at 3:36 pm
Mary York
Charlotte, I loved your way of knitting together different experiences and former ideas into a terrific book! Don’t you just LOVE Storystorm?!!
July 30, 2020 at 4:36 pm
Debbie Lodato
Love environmental books. Its never to early to teach kids about this. Can’t wait to read your story. Thanks for sharing your journey.
July 30, 2020 at 5:21 pm
Paula
What a wonderful story to put into little hands (and out into the world). Thank you!
July 30, 2020 at 5:25 pm
Carole Calladine
Great story. I love story storm, too. Love how your ideas collided.
July 30, 2020 at 5:36 pm
Jilanne Hoffmann
As someone who’s participated in several beach clean-ups, this book hits the mark! Love the story behind the story. Congrats, Charlotte, on your debut!
July 30, 2020 at 6:40 pm
Lydia Lukidis
Ohhh this looks like a goodie, plus with such an important message. Great work!
July 30, 2020 at 7:48 pm
Judy Shemtob
Loved hearing about the way you process your ideas and include your children in your thoughts to creating important books for kids! Congratulations Charlotte!
July 30, 2020 at 9:01 pm
Marzieh Abbas
i simply loved how 3 ideas came together as one- excited to see this issue being taken up as well ❤
July 30, 2020 at 9:13 pm
marty
It’s always fun to read a Storystorm success story! And isn’t it amazing how little ones can spark an idea, too? Hooray for them and congrats, Charlotte 🙂
July 30, 2020 at 9:18 pm
Samantha Altmann
Love how you put together the Storystorm ideas to create the finished product.
July 30, 2020 at 10:16 pm
Sylvia Mary Grech
Congratulations Charlotte! Glad to see a Storystorm success story.
July 31, 2020 at 12:12 am
betlw Elizabeth Westra
The fact that you got your small children interested in cleaning up their environment shows that even small hands can help clean up the earth. Great idea, Charlotte! I’m eager to read your book.
July 31, 2020 at 1:44 am
Annie Lynn of AnnieBirdd Music, LLC🎶 (@AnnieLynn215)
Charlotte, This story had me mesmerized. I just realized I was smiling through most of it. First,I totally align with your organic experiences w/your children, and how those turned into a book. My experiences w/my son organically turned into songs. I hadn’t seen that coming! Anything of mine that has done really well, was the direct result of conversations with my kid, little cousins, students…. I also loved how you merged several ideas into one. This was my 1st yr doing Storystorm (The Musical Ed.🎶) I put my four notebooks (they were in different places) on a shelf, but hadn’t thought about combining a new story into a song for next year! I’m learning a lot from you all.
Next observation is that Storystorm has some kind of good karma, and lends its magic to others. Some of that is obviously Tara sprinkled in. I know the experience still resonates w/me, even for a first timer. And I have more discipline now too.
Finally, I don’t have a manuscript to look at…but I have environmental songs, some that need guidance. Also I need help organizing facts concisely without sounding robotic or run on….(me? run on?😊) I would like to be considered for the give away.
I can’t wait to read this book that will resonate with so many people. We have a heck of a lot of plastic to deal with as fallout from the pandemic. But THAT is another story and song,hopefully with a solution at the end
Peace, Annie🎶
July 31, 2020 at 6:36 am
Linda Mitchell
I never tire of hearing the story of the story…thank you. Many congratulations on your new book. We sure need it!
July 31, 2020 at 7:45 am
Lucky Jo Boscarino
More evidence (as if we needed more) that Storystorm WORKS. All the best to Charlotte!
July 31, 2020 at 10:01 am
Suzanne Lewis
Love, love, love this concept and your process from idea incubation to story collaboration. We need more books like this Charlotte! Thank you!
July 31, 2020 at 10:05 am
Rebecca Van Slyke
Congratulations, Charlotte! I love the three-idea combination to come up with a terrific story. Yay for Storystorm!
July 31, 2020 at 10:20 am
Maureen Egan
Look forward to it, Charlotte! Love the way the pieces fit together!
July 31, 2020 at 3:10 pm
LeeAnn Rizzuti
Hurrah for Storystorm success stories, Charlotte! Isn’t it marvelous how ideas can come together?
July 31, 2020 at 3:56 pm
Christine Pinto
Thank you for sharing how the three ideas came together!
July 31, 2020 at 5:58 pm
Mia Geiger
Thank you for sharing your debut picture-book journey! Genius putting your ideas together and creating something unique! Congratulations on this book. I’m sure it will inspire many kids (and adults)!
August 1, 2020 at 8:44 am
farmfolkfamily
What a great story behind your story!
August 1, 2020 at 8:52 am
Cathy L. Murphy
How wonderful it is to see your cover reveal and read about your pub journey, Charlotte!
August 1, 2020 at 2:47 pm
Nancy Ferguson
What a testimonial to Storystorm, perseverance and inquisitive children. Bravo for putting it all together and being true to your heart! thanks for the inspiration.
August 1, 2020 at 10:12 pm
dedradavis03
I’m so excited for you, and I love hearing your process of writing your debut!!👏🏼👏🏼
August 2, 2020 at 8:42 am
Laurel Ranveig Abell
Love hearing about your journey to discovery! I’m excited to read this!
August 2, 2020 at 11:07 am
Sheri Radovich
I love the idea and at this time of year you want to get people out to the beach with masks on of course but empowering others to help seems like a daunting task. I think the book would be a great gift for my CA girls.
August 3, 2020 at 11:15 am
Angie
I loved hearing a Storystorm success! And the marriage of 3 separate things is great. Can’t wait to read this book. Sounds great! Congrats!
August 3, 2020 at 11:34 am
Carol Gordon Ekster
Charlotte, what a beautiful cover and great story behind the story! Congratulations. Can’t wait to read your debut.
August 4, 2020 at 3:26 pm
jenniemacdonald
I’m excited to see how this your combination of brilliant elements came together. Such a crucial subject for our time!
August 5, 2020 at 12:42 pm
LenoraBiemans (@BiemansLenora)
Thanks for sharing your process. Congratulations!
August 5, 2020 at 3:56 pm
Christina Shawn
Oh! I love hearing how all of your stories came together at the right time to make something even better! Wonderful!
August 8, 2020 at 2:28 pm
BONNIE AUSLANDER
Yay, Charlotte! I can say I knew you back when…Excited to read your debut!
August 8, 2020 at 10:45 pm
seschipper
I always love to hear about a success story from a storystormer!!!
Looking forward to the read! 🙂
August 20, 2020 at 3:37 pm
Stephen S. Martin
I am staying on the roller coaster, BUT I am not letting the pigeon drive it!
August 28, 2020 at 3:53 pm
Lou Aamodt
I love the rollercoaster analogy. Thanks for the encouragement to stay on the ride.