Shhhh.
Now what did you hear when you read that word? Whose voice was it? Was it your mom’s voice? Was it your grandmother’s voice? Was it your own voice hushing your children? So much of our world operates in onomatopoeic sounds: the chirping of the morning birds, the beeping of the garbage truck, the roaring of a car engine, the screeching of the school bus as it comes to a stop…
As a professional storyteller, I actually become better at telling my stories by listening. It is through this simple auditory observation that I find inspiration for my tales. As a picture book author, I become better at writing by thinking of my story in terms of sound. How will this tale reverberate when it is read out loud?
The sound of a baby’s “Wah! Wah!” became a turning point in a recent story I revised. The sing-songy refrains that I have become known for in my books work better when they are released from the page through the read-aloud. In Denise Fleming’s picture book, In the Tall Tall Grass, you hear, “Crunch, munch. Caterpillars lunch.” The sounds become actions. The actions become story.
Watch little boys as they play with trucks and cars. They zoom and they vroom. Listen to preschoolers and kindergarteners make sound effects. Go the playground and take note. You’ll hear the clap clap clap of the girls’ hand games and the thump thump thump of a boys’ basketball game. Even the swingset makes a whooshing sound as the swings take flight.
Today, listen to the noise around you. Write down the sounds, even making them up if there is no known word for what you hear. The kerchink kerchink kerchink of the dryer could lead to a new picture book idea (but don’t you hate it when your family leaves stuff in their pockets?! LOL).
Even if you like to write in the quiet, today is the day to make some noise. Perhaps you will hum, echo, thud, crash, jingle, swish, or clatter your way into a new story.
Listen up. What do you hear?
Dianne is generously giving away a signed copy of Blue Frog: The Legend of Chocolate to a lucky commenter. A winner will be randomly selected one week from today!
Dianne de Las Casas is an award-winning author of 18 books, a professonal storyteller, and founder of the international literacy initiative, Picture Book Month. She tours worldwide presenting revved-up author visit/storytelling programs, lively educator/librarian training, fun workshops, and inspiring artist residencies. Her children’s books include The Cajun Cornbread Boy, Madame Poulet & Monsieur Roach, Mama’s Bayou, The Gigantic Sweet Potato, There’s a Dragon in the Library, The House That Witchy Built, and Blue Frog: The Legend of Chocolate. She is a founding member of November’s Picture Book Month. Visit her at www.storyconnection.net and follow all the storytelling fun on Twitter @storyconnection.
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November 10, 2011 at 8:54 am
tinamcho
Woo-hoo, Dianne! What a great goal for today…listening to sounds.
Thanks for this inspiration!
November 10, 2011 at 8:55 am
Sue Heavenrich
thanks for this excellent reminder to listen more, talk less.
November 10, 2011 at 8:57 am
Lynn
Thank you, Dianne! The most simple things seem to be the most inspirational — sounds, listening, watching, just simply paying attention.
You gave me a story idea this morning through your helpful post. I think this is my favourite one so far. 🙂
November 11, 2011 at 2:57 pm
Dianne De Las Casas
Awww, Lynn. Thank you so much! That is just sweet. 🙂 Can you hear me blowing kisses? smooch, smooch
November 10, 2011 at 9:05 am
julesmae
Fun!
November 10, 2011 at 9:05 am
Joanna
I am so going to listen out today. What cool advice!
November 10, 2011 at 9:07 am
M. G. King
Sounds like a great idea! Thanks Dianne!
November 10, 2011 at 9:18 am
Cathy Mealey
So true! And sometimes closing your eyes and challenging yourself to hear 4 or 5 different sounds at once can be very revealing!
November 10, 2011 at 9:19 am
elizabethannewrites
Shhhhh — the voice I heard surprised me. There may be a story idea there! Thank you, Dianne! I will be listening carefully today (and the next day, and the next.)
November 10, 2011 at 9:20 am
Wendy Greenley
Great reminder that our stories are not just for the eyes. I am back to reread all my drafts out loud. Thank you, Dianne!
November 10, 2011 at 9:50 am
Robyn Campbell
Printing this one out. I am a fan of onomatopoeic words. They are so much fun! Thanks for this, Dianne. Shhhhh
November 11, 2011 at 2:58 pm
Dianne De Las Casas
Clap, clap, clap!!!
November 10, 2011 at 9:55 am
Lori Alexander
Great post. Unfortunately, the sound I just heard was my 7-year old vomiting. Boo – stomach flu!
November 10, 2011 at 9:56 am
Cathy C. Hall
LOVE this–and just had a friend write a post for my blog on where her idea came from for her latest published picture book. Yep, it was a sound!
November 10, 2011 at 10:02 am
Julie
Great advice! I’m sure I don’t incorporate sound enough in my stories, and it’s such a powerful sense. Thanks Dianne!
November 10, 2011 at 10:06 am
Deb Marshall
Ooo, I love this and love sound, too. WIll for sure explore with this for todays ideas! Thank you.
November 10, 2011 at 10:22 am
Sheri Larsen
Listening is soooooooo important, not to mention fun. It’s amazing what we miss when we focus on the world around us solely with our eyes. Thanks for the fabulous reminder!
November 10, 2011 at 10:34 am
Dana Carey
I hear ya, Dianne! Sorry, I couldn’t resist.
You are so right. And I love the word ‘onomatopoeia’.
Thanks!
November 10, 2011 at 10:46 am
Tammi Sauer
Zip! Pow! Wham!
I love it. 🙂
November 10, 2011 at 11:44 am
Marcy P.
I love that. Even now, if I quiet my mind, I hear my oldest son singing a one tune from the movie Rio, the clinking of ice in a glass, the tap of a fork as it scrapes a plate of breakfast, the Rarr rarrr of my dog barking at the hum of the garbage truck a street over. VERY cool. I’m going to have fun with this one.
November 10, 2011 at 11:47 am
Stephanie Shaw
Thank you, Diane! I hope you can hear the applause! Clap! Clap! Clap!
November 11, 2011 at 2:59 pm
Dianne De Las Casas
I LOVE that sound, Stephanie!! 🙂
November 10, 2011 at 11:49 am
LadyInRead
Thank you! I love reading stories with sound effects to my kids and they enjoy those a lot too (one recent book I read with tons of sounds was ‘The Jazz Fly’ by Matthew Gollub – a fun read). I am going to listen up today! And onomatopoeia is one of my favorite words.
November 11, 2011 at 3:20 pm
Dianne De Las Casas
Matthew is so AH-AH-AMAZING! I love watching him perform and listening to him scat. His book rocks!
November 10, 2011 at 12:11 pm
cravevsworld
Pleasant post! I took your advice and went for a “walk of sounds.” Embarrassingly the sound of my own gas drowned out the surrounding nature. Thankfully, a neighbor’s dog became territorial and barked over my personal soundtrack.
Cheers,
Crave
http://www.cravewriting.com
November 11, 2011 at 3:20 pm
Dianne De Las Casas
ROFL!!!! Hear me laughing? Bwahahahahaha!
November 10, 2011 at 12:13 pm
beckylevine
I definitely need to do more listening. Thanks for the reminder!
November 10, 2011 at 12:30 pm
Donna Martin
Not only do I write children’s books, I spend 2 hours every week reading some of my favorite children’s stories to k-2 grades. I am always mindful of the inflections in my voice so that I can capture my listeners attention and draw them into the story with me. Such fun…my kids today were giggling when I sat there making sounds like a choo-choo train!
November 10, 2011 at 12:32 pm
patientdreamer
Great post, great advice Dianne, thankyou. I have in recent months become very aware that some of the best picture books use sounds to bring the story alive. Will be listening from now on…. thanks for that.
November 10, 2011 at 12:39 pm
Jarm Del Boccio
How often we forget to be still and listen..thanks for reminding us, Dianne, of this important writer’s habit. Now to translate the sounds into words…
November 10, 2011 at 12:50 pm
Catherine Johnson
Great advice, thanks Diane. Keeping my ear to the ground now 😉
November 10, 2011 at 1:20 pm
Mona Pease
Diane, Thanks for the reminder of that old saying Stop! Look! Listen!
It’s what we do as children’s writers.
Adding the LISTEN in bold letters to my notebook right now!
November 10, 2011 at 1:37 pm
Betsy Devany
Excellant post! I plan to do a lot more listening. Thanks!
November 10, 2011 at 1:40 pm
carterhiggins
Fun! I need a reminder every now and then to shut up a bit. I heard the big rigs on the freeway this morning instead of being annoyed by them slowing down my commute. !!
November 10, 2011 at 2:52 pm
Penny Klostermann
Thank you! What a great way to open yourself to ideas!
November 10, 2011 at 3:00 pm
Tracy Warren (@socialTracyW)
Thanks for the inspiration. It is important to remember that pictures books a made to be read aloud.
November 10, 2011 at 3:02 pm
Ramona Davey
Onomatopoiea is great fun. Yesterday I was helping in my daughters Kindy class and her group had to write down words ‘sounds’ words on their white boards. They loved it, especially when I got them to read the words back to me in the sound it makes. “Kaboom! Crash! Roar!” 🙂
November 10, 2011 at 3:16 pm
Bethany Telles
Fantastic! It’s a discipline that I will officially adopt… I always look, but rarely do I listen. Thank you!!
November 10, 2011 at 4:15 pm
Meagan Healy
Sounds! I love it, Dianne! And as usual, loved “The House That Witchy Built”!! I look forward to reading the Blue Frog! (you may know me as @minniemoonpress)
November 15, 2011 at 5:24 am
Dianne De Las Casas
Meagan, notice how The House That Witchy Built was “built” upon onomatopoeic sounds?! Creak. Creak.
November 10, 2011 at 4:18 pm
Jodi
Helping the reader to visit each of the five senses when reading a book helps it to come alive. I loved today’s post because sometimes it is difficult to include “sound” words in writing. I love to “people watch” when doing research, and this was a good reminder to inlcude the sounds I hear in my notes!
Thanks!
November 10, 2011 at 6:44 pm
Linda Andersen
There is even sound in writing. Thanks for the great post.
November 10, 2011 at 7:35 pm
sandy bixby
Today I listened to the noise and haste but also to the blessed moments of silence. It was deafening and, to my surprise, not silent at all. Thanks for the reminder.
November 10, 2011 at 8:24 pm
Lori Mozdzierz
Big fan of using onomatopoeia! When the word for a sound doesn’t POP for me, I listen to sound bits over and over and over again. Repeating aloud (over and over and over again) my interpetation of what I hear. This method has proven to be quite helpful for me. Okay, and it’s fun 😀
Thanks Dianne for a super post!!!
November 10, 2011 at 9:03 pm
Janet
I love using onomatopoeic sounds in my manuscripts! Loved your post.
November 11, 2011 at 5:50 am
Loni Edwards
Thanks Dianne! Great post!
November 11, 2011 at 6:38 am
Jennifer Rumberger
Great post! I will have to start listening even more!
November 11, 2011 at 7:26 am
thiskidreviewsbooks
Just as I was reading “Watch little boys as they play with trucks and cars. They zoom and they vroom.”, and I heard a cartoon with a boy going “VAROOOM! VAROOM!” (my sister is watching cartoons 🙂
I also hear my mom stirring her coffee. I never thought about listening for story ideas!
November 11, 2011 at 7:33 am
Yvette Burnham Couser
So true! When my son was born he immediately made different sounds than my daughters before him 😉 Great stuff to think about!
November 11, 2011 at 8:44 am
Kim Pfennigwerth (@kpfenni)
Really love the thought of just listening and creating a sound from what you hear. Great inspiration. @PiBoIdMo
November 11, 2011 at 10:28 am
Sarah C. Pilon
Listening for sounds is such a neat approach. I’ve never been the auditory type, more the visual, but I’ll definitely have to start listening for sounds.
What a wonderful idea! Thanks for sharing
November 11, 2011 at 10:40 am
aneducationinbooks
Inspiring post. Thanks.
November 11, 2011 at 11:02 am
Christine Poreba
Great idea. As a poet I concentrate so much on images and though I try to include all the senses, listening seems to come last, perhaps because of the way we so often hear that word as children as a command, “Pay Attention, Listen.” But what a joy to do it on one’s own, sit and try not even to think, only keeping one’s ears open.
November 11, 2011 at 3:17 pm
Dianne De Las Casas
Thank you for all of the kind words! I can hear everyone cheering, “Yay!” Happy Picture Book Month and Happy PiBoIdMo! Write on!
November 11, 2011 at 4:13 pm
Lisa L. Owens
You’re so right. Listening is key. Thanks for a great post. I’ve been keeping up with my PiBoIdMo ideas but haven’t been able to check out the daily posts until today. LOVE.
November 11, 2011 at 5:13 pm
sketched out
I’ve always wondered how some folks manage to get those wonderful sounds and rhythms in their books. You’ve just opened my eyes to yet another exercise to add to my morning ritual of ideas trolling. This morning I sat and listened and described everything I heard with onomatopoeic words. It was fun and opened up a side of my brain I was underusing.
Thanks for that! Very inspiring post!
November 12, 2011 at 7:20 am
sabrina
great idea to make an exercise out of it… am going to follow your example !!
November 11, 2011 at 7:24 pm
Lynda Shoup
Wonderful inspiration! My ears are perked up and listening. I feel like this post has helped me go deeper in my thinking about writing Picture Books. Thank you so much!
November 11, 2011 at 8:16 pm
carol
Your post reminded me to tuck some sounds into my book in progress. Thanks to you the newest revision is better than the last!
November 15, 2011 at 5:26 am
Dianne De Las Casas
Awww, Carol. That’s so wonderful to hear!! Pun intended. 🙂
November 11, 2011 at 8:52 pm
denise fleming
Thanks for the mention. Your essay was wonderful. At some big conference years back (where I got food poisoning) I was asked to talk about onomatopoeia, if only I had had your essay. I pretty much bombed. Next time I will consult you.
November 15, 2011 at 5:27 am
Dianne De Las Casas
Denise, somehow I doubt you “bombed.” But that’s a great sound… BOOM! KA-BOOM! Hugs!
November 11, 2011 at 10:51 pm
Beth MacKinney
Woo hoo! Thanks for the post, Dianne.
November 12, 2011 at 12:57 am
Lynn Anne Carol
What a nice touch to remind us to close our mouths and open our ears so our mouths can become more productive.
Thanks for the post,
Lynn
November 12, 2011 at 7:49 pm
Jessica Young
Love the idea of taking time to listen for inspiration! Thanks for the great post!
November 12, 2011 at 9:42 pm
Rachel Smoka-Richardson
Thank you so much for your interesting blog post! It’s always a good reminder that picture books are meant to be read out loud.
November 13, 2011 at 6:37 am
Helen Ross
Great post Dianne. There is just so much around us to inspire us in story writing. Thanks for sharing. Helen
November 13, 2011 at 9:34 pm
Tia C. M. Svardahl
Thank you for the wonderful post. Thinking sounds, sounds, sounds and hearing two little girls making up stories in the next room!
November 14, 2011 at 10:53 am
Melissa Freiley
Thank you for sharing this idea, Dianne. I often visualize ideas, but your post has inspired me to begin using ALL my senses, especially listening, when writing or coming up with ideas!
November 14, 2011 at 12:38 pm
Brook Gideon
Dianne,
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Sounds are probably second to smells in how they trigger emotions and memories. It is always important to sit quietly and listen and you will learn a lot!
November 14, 2011 at 4:35 pm
Christie Wild
Good idea – to think of sound. It’s fun to make up new words, too!
November 15, 2011 at 8:34 am
Juliet Clare Bell
Thanks -I’m already listening better as I write this. Easy to forget sounds… Best wishes, Clare.
November 15, 2011 at 10:44 am
Kerry Aradhya
Thanks for the inspiration, Dianne. I’ve always enjoyed picture books that are full of sounds, and I love the rhythm of a good read-aloud. I’ll try to keep my ears open today…and see what I can come up with!
November 15, 2011 at 5:33 pm
Cathy Cronin
Love this idea. Thanks for the tip.
November 16, 2011 at 12:01 am
Dorina Lazo Gilmore
I’m very inspired by the sounds of a setting. This post rang true for me. Thanks for reminding me to tune in to the bitty-brrrr-bop-slide bop-slide and to follow the music to the story.