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30 picture book ideas in 30 days?
Are you CRAZY?
Oh wait. You’re a writer. OF COURSE you’re nuts! 🙂
And I’m a writer, too. Which means we’re both in the same boat.
Tara asked me to give you some words of advice as you hunker down for that final idea for Day 30 of the 2009 PiBoldMo–Picture Book Idea Month!
I thought I’d talk a bit about my “other” job to give you some ideal inspiration! In addition to my YA novels and picture books, I am also a TV writer. I’ve written for NBC’s The West Wing, FOX’s Tru Calling, and currently The SyFy Channel’s Eureka.
As a working TV writer in Hollywood, I have to come up with ideas every single day. In fact, I have to come up with DOZENS of ideas every single hour of every single day when I’m working on a TV show.
Here’s how most scripted TV shows work: several writers are hired to literally sit around in a room called “The Writers’ Room” all day long and come up with ideas for episodes. Each show is run differently, but the basic day usually involves the writing staff discussing what storylines should happen in each episode, along with in-depth dialogue about character development and themes. It’s a really fun job when you think about it–you’re getting paid to make up stuff!
At the same time, it’s also a really TOUGH job. You can get burned out very easily when trying to brainstorm episode storylines and figuring out which character does what and why. It’s often like solving a puzzle–there’s a ton of logic and plausibility that you have to consider when pitching ideas.
I’ve learned a lot from having worked in TV about how to brainstorm effectively when it comes to ideas. Of course the sky’s the limit when it comes to brainstorming–anything from a pebble on the beach to a squirrel running across the street to the cranky lady standing in front of you in line at the bank can lead to an amazing story idea for your picture book.
But a cool image, compelling character, or interesting conflict isn’t enough to create a fully-fleshed out idea. You have to combine all three areas–image, character, conflict–into one idea in order to have a viable story for a potential picture book.
As a TV writer, I was constantly told that story equals intention plus obstacle. Memorize this formula!
INTENTION + OBSTACLE = STORY
In other words, your main character has an INTENTION. But there is an OBSTACLE standing in your character’s way. This creates CONFLICT… which is another way of saying STORY! Ah ha! So STORY EQUALS CONFLICT! And how that character overcomes that obstacle reveals his or her journey towards that end goal.
As long as you can make this equation work, you’ve got yourself a viable story idea! It’s actually a fun formula to apply to published books, movies, and TV shows to break down a completed project to its very essence–the idea. Sometimes working backwards and analyzing published books and figuring out their basic idea can help you as you brainstorm your own ideas.
In other words, try this formula on published books or movies etc. as a “warm up” exercise before you begin your own brainstorming. For example…
In Mo Willem’s Knuffle Bunny, Trixie and her dad go to the laundromat. Trixie accidentally leaves her stuffed toy, Knuffle Bunny, behind. She is unable to speak in full words yet, so complications arise when her father has no idea what she’s talking about when she tries to convince him to take her back to the laundromat to rescue Knuffle Bunny.
So Trixie’s INTENTION is that she wants to return to the laundromat to get her toy!
The OBSTACLE is her inability to speak in words yet to communicate her thoughts!
INTENTION (Trixie wants Knuffle Bunny back) + OBSTACLE (can’t speak inwords yet) = STORY (Trixie must figure out how to communicate to her father that they must return to the laundromat to rescue Knuffle Bunny!)
And how Trixie overcomes this obstacle shows her delightfully feisty personality and inventiveness.
See how that works? Try seeing if you can simplify your favorite picture book down to this formula. It’s a lot of fun and a good warm up exercise to jump start your own imagination!
Then apply this formula to your own original ideas–if you can create a compelling character who has to overcome an obstacle to reach his or her goal, then you’ve got your 30th picture book idea for this year’s PiBoIdMo!
CONGRATULATIONS!!!!
And now that you have your 30 ideas, please join me this May 1-8, 2010 for the second annual NaPiboWriWee event sponsored by my website at http://paulayoo.com!
For more information on NaPiBoWriWee, check out this link:
http://paulayoo.com/content/natl-picture-book-writing-week-may-1-7-2009
NaPiBoWriWee is short for National Picture Book Writing Week where I challenge writers to write an entire picture book every day for a whole week–7 picture books in 7 days!
See, I told you we were crazy! 🙂
Best,
Paula Yoo
Paula Yoo is the author of the YA novel GOOD ENOUGH (HarperCollins ’08) and the children’s non-fiction picture books SHINING STAR: THE ANNA MAY WONG STORY (Lee & Low ’09) and IRA Notable SIXTEEN YEARS IN SIXTEEN SECONDS: THE SAMMY LEE STORY (Lee & Low ’08). She is also a TV writer, whose credits include THE WEST WING, TRU CALLING, and SIDE ORDER OF LIFE. She is currently a co-producer on The SyFy Channel’s series, EUREKA.
Tara’s Note:
Thanks, Paula! No one could have summed up PiBoIdMo better.
Everyone, stay tuned tomorrow for the PiBoIdMo pledge.
What’s the PiBoIdMo pledge? It’s your word that you have 30 ideas. I’ll ask you to leave a comment letting me know you’ve completed this month’s challenge. (Please note you do not have to submit your 30 ideas. Those are yours to keep!)
You’ll have until December 3rd to take the pledge, then on December 4th I’ll announce the randomly-selected PiBoIdMo prize winners.
Good luck!
















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November 30, 2009 at 10:05 am
Dana
I love this advice. An equation is worth a thousand words! Thanks, Paula. This will be very useful in thinking up new ideas & filling out the ideas already hatched. Okay, one more idea…
November 30, 2009 at 10:09 am
Bonnie Adamson
Thank you, Paula! Have transferred your handy-dandy equation to a sticky note for ongoing inspiration . . . and will DEFINITELY see you in May. In the meantime, am eagerly awaiting new episodes of Eureka!!! 🙂
November 30, 2009 at 10:25 am
Auntie Flamingo
Great advice, Paula. I will apply that formula to my stories and ideas and see what I get. Hmm, does 1+1=3? Sometimes but I think I still have some work to do. I will be there again for NaPiBoWriWee in May. Loved it last year!
Tara, thank you so much for hosting this challenge. I loved reading all the blog entries and I will continue to follow. Great job!
Best of luck everyone getting those ideas into manuscripts and getting them published.
Thanks.
November 30, 2009 at 11:04 am
Shannon O'Donnell
Fabulous post! Thank you Tara and Paula for such awesome and inspiring advice! I’m with Bonnie – transferred the info to my notebook as a constant reminder!
http://www.shannonkodonnell.blogspot.com
November 30, 2009 at 11:07 am
Jennifer
Fantastic advice, Paula! Thanks so much. You make it sound so simple, but of course, we all know it isn’t. But this will give me a plan to go by.
And many, many thanks to Tara for sponsoring PiBoIdMo. This has been the most fun, brain-stretching, exciting and yet sometimes frustrating month of my writing life. But I can’t wait to get started on fleshing out all of the wonderful ideas I have come up with.
Happy writing to all!
November 30, 2009 at 12:49 pm
Corey Schwartz
Great post, Paula. I’ll definitely be joining you in May!!!
November 30, 2009 at 1:27 pm
Laurie Young
This is the best way to end this wonderful journey. Thank you Paula for making it seem so simple! And thank you Tara for this amazing month of creativity. I can’t wait to see how many manuscripts I can pull out of my 30+ ideas. This has been so much fun!
November 30, 2009 at 1:32 pm
Jewel
Inspiring article Paula. I had to go to your blog and read the NaPiboWriWee posts. There I found great tips on story structure. I hope everyone takes the time to check it out.
I discovered I can create characters with obstacles and add conflict that propels the character to want his goal even more, but ovecoming the obstacles in an interesting/entertaining way is a challenge for me.
Thank you Tara for an inspiring and supportive month of gleaning ideas. The fun has only begun. Now I am off to finding the five ideas that have intention + obstacle to make a story.
Thank you Paula for taking the time out of your busy schedule to reach out and teach about one of your favorite things to do, writing for children.
November 30, 2009 at 1:50 pm
Debbie Austin
Thanks, Paula, for this great post and for injecting some fun into this last day of PiBoIdMo. Fun but also VERY practical. Thank you. I will definitely be checking out your blog and the NaPiboWriWee for May.
And I have to put this in…I am a Eureka fan and can’t wait for it to start up again! 🙂
Thanks, Tara, for a great month of inspiration. What a wonderful 30 day collection of advice and idea sparkers from so many talented people. I’ll be carrying these along with me for months to come.
~Debbie
November 30, 2009 at 3:27 pm
Southpaw
Thanks for the great post. I’ll see you in May, since I now have 30 ideas to choose from!
November 30, 2009 at 9:58 pm
Laura
Thank you Tara, and Paula for wrapping it up so nicely!
November 30, 2009 at 10:46 pm
tammi
Paula, you are not only crazy but brilliant. That’s a fab combination.
And, Tara…girl, thank you for giving me the idea-generating push I needed along with one really awesome support group.
December 1, 2009 at 9:33 am
Sheri Dillard
Thanks for the fun post, Paula. It was interesting to read how things work in a TV show’s brainstorming session. It made me think — What if Tara’s challenge had been like that? (Coming up with DOZENS of PB ideas every single hour of every single day?) Yikes! 🙂
And Tara, thank you so much for a wonderful month. I truly looked forward to reading your daily posts, and now I have all these new PB ideas to choose from. Yay! 🙂