by Timothy Young
My latest picture book, untitled, comes out on May 28th. You are probably asking yourself “Why would he not give his book a title?” I did give my book a title, I called it untitled. When I originally started thinking about this book it had a different title. I was calling it “Another Stupid Book by Timothy Young.” I liked that title a lot but when I told a school librarian the title she was confused and thought it was a sequel. I started to like that one less so I started thinking that it needed a new title.
The book is about two characters, Carlos and Ignatz, who are waiting for me to tell their story. They are getting frustrated and begin making suggestions about what they could be doing and complain about being stuck in my book. Some of my placeholder titles while I was working on it were That Weird Book or The Ridiculous Book but I wasn’t really happy with those as I was with the original.

Some of my early character designs.
The way I work, while beginning the initial stages of writing a story I’m also designing the main characters. I knew I wanted one of them to be a coatimundi, a Central American relative of the raccoon. I had seen a family of them climbing in the mangrove trees on a trip to Mexico and I fell in love with them. The other guy went through some changes (which gets incorporated into the story). He began as a rabbit, but that was too common. He’s been a beaver, a porcupine and a capybara.
While working on the illustrations for a book I often have new ideas for the story. I will re-write as needed to make the book come together. Sometimes the illustrations compliment the words and sometimes they depict something totally different from what the characters are saying. At this point I thought about going to another extreme with the title. For a little while it was called The Incredibly Amazing Adventures of Carlos and Ignatz. I thought the contrast to what I was doing with the story was funny but I was still not completely satisfied.

The alternative titles; these appear on the back cover of untitled.
I started to think of it as untitled. I was thinking about how, if an artist does not give a piece a title it is labeled untitled which then becomes the title. What would happen if I specifically chose that as the title? I started to like it. It would be absurd to call a picture book untitled. I like the absurd. I checked, nobody else has been stupid enough to call a picture book untitled. I then thought of a couple of revisions in which the lack of a title becomes a part of the story. It worked.
Now I had to ask my publisher what they thought. They knew I had not settled on a final title and were being very patient. I approached them with some trepidation, I feared they would never agree to try to market a picture book called untitled. Happily, I was wrong and they loved it, they got it and they were on board with the idea.
So now we have to see what everybody else thinks. I’ve had copies of the book in my hands since April and I’ve read it to a number of schools that I’ve visited. I’m very pleased with their reaction. I keep having to go back to this spread after I’m finished reading because the students want a longer look at the book covers. I had a lot of fun drawing Carlos and Ignatz in the styles of the books I’m parodying.
Thanks, Tim, for sharing the backstory of untitled!
Leave a comment below to win a copy of untitled. Two winners will be randomly selected at the end of the month! (Shall we call this contest entitled?)
If you would like a second chance to win, you can visit Tim’s new blog where you can see the book trailer for untitled and leave a comment there.
Good luck!
114 comments
Comments feed for this article
May 14, 2019 at 8:56 am
betlw
Tim, what a crazy but creative title, a good way to get your book attention too. I would love to find out what the story is about. I can hardly wait to read it.
May 14, 2019 at 8:57 am
Brian Yanish
Great concept Tim. Well done!
May 14, 2019 at 8:58 am
hallee2012
Thanks for featuring this, Tara! I love the story behind Timothy Young’s title, “untitled”—That title, “untitled” is brilliant—leave it to Tim! Can’t wait for my Untitled book to arrive. P.S. it’s really fun to keep saying title and untitled.
May 14, 2019 at 9:00 am
Teresa Robeson
Sounds hilarious! Looking forward to reading this book!
May 14, 2019 at 9:01 am
Lucky Jo Boscarino
Fabulous idea for an inside-out picture book!
May 14, 2019 at 9:02 am
Stephanie Fitzpatrick
This is great! My 4-year old son “wrote” a book last night that he called “The Book Without a Title”. I can’t tell you my surprise when I saw this post…how exciting! I can’t wait to tell my son. 🙂
May 14, 2019 at 9:06 am
catherineannvelasco
I love how your characters are on all those well-loved books! Because everyone wants to see themselves in a book! Can’t wait to read it!
May 14, 2019 at 9:09 am
Amber Webb
How cute is that?!
May 14, 2019 at 9:11 am
Jemma Morriss
Love it already (and also I wish I’d thought of it first)
May 14, 2019 at 9:12 am
Lindsay Robinson
Love the spread with all the alternative book covers! Very clever! I’m excited to see how they relate to the rest of your picture book.
May 14, 2019 at 9:15 am
Virginia E Neil
I am so in love with this idea. Can’t wait to see it.
May 14, 2019 at 9:17 am
Anitha Kuppuswamy
Looking forward to reading this book!
May 14, 2019 at 9:18 am
fspoesy
As a fellow Tim and fan of the absurd in picture books, I approve! This is going on my TBR list right now!
May 14, 2019 at 9:22 am
Suzanne Lewis
I’m already giggling and I haven’t even read the book–which, of course, I can’t wait to do! Thanks for featuring such an outside-of-the-box thinker, Tara!
May 14, 2019 at 9:26 am
Carlie Kilbourne Cornell
Rats. Now I’m going to have to change the name of all those half-finished stories in my files! Fun idea.
May 14, 2019 at 9:28 am
Juliana Lee
Uncommented to be entitled to untitled.
May 14, 2019 at 9:30 am
Gilhula Wendy
The Book Without a Title
May 14, 2019 at 9:32 am
Veronica Joslyn
so original. I think it’s brilliant. I hope we will get this book in Kenya
May 14, 2019 at 9:40 am
Sarah Tobias
This book sounds like subversive! To title something untitled is just lazy.
Hahahaha!
I hope it’s subversive and I love the title. I hope it sparks kids imaginations and the description makes me think it will.
I think reading this to classes starting with the title would spark discussion. And the page with all the book parodies . . . Wonderful!
May 14, 2019 at 9:40 am
Michele Helsel
I like it.
May 14, 2019 at 9:51 am
Jacqueline Adams
It’s always great to hear the story behind the story. The book sounds so fun!
May 14, 2019 at 9:55 am
Wendi Silvano
Looks like a lot of fun!
May 14, 2019 at 10:02 am
Carol Gwin Nelson
This is so much fun. I want to study the spread with the book covers, too!
May 14, 2019 at 10:14 am
Michelle O'Hara Levin
I love you work and I cannot wait to get this one! As you as you come up with a name for it, of course… 😉
May 14, 2019 at 10:15 am
Angie
Very clever! I love it! Congratulations!
May 14, 2019 at 10:19 am
June Sengpiehl
This is imaginative and very entertaining.
May 14, 2019 at 10:26 am
Krista Harrington
I love the titles. Anything to grab the eye of a reader is fantastic. Thanks for sharing!
May 14, 2019 at 10:34 am
florbela
What fun! I love the title, it’s clever. Thanks for sharing.
May 14, 2019 at 10:40 am
Joan Swanson
Very clever, love a good giggle.
May 14, 2019 at 10:43 am
Sylvia Grech
That is so creative! Love it!
May 14, 2019 at 10:49 am
Donna Gwinnell Lambo-Weidner
I ❤ the concept…and Ignatz is one of my favorite character's names 🙂
May 14, 2019 at 10:50 am
Danielle Dufayet
Sometimes great works of art are untitled! Can’t wait to read this!
May 14, 2019 at 10:51 am
rosecappelli
Sounds like a fun book!
May 14, 2019 at 10:51 am
Cinzia V.
Love the story of the title and can’t wait to read the book! I loved the image of them with the books!!
May 14, 2019 at 10:51 am
Carole Calladine
Untitled. What a promising title. Can’t wait to view the whole book
May 14, 2019 at 10:53 am
Gloria Amescua
This book sounds so intriguing. I love hearing about your process.
May 14, 2019 at 10:54 am
Sara Fajardo
What fun!
May 14, 2019 at 10:59 am
LeeAnn Rizzuti
Waiting impatiently with Carlos and Ignatz to see what kind of nameless story they got stuck in.😜
May 14, 2019 at 11:01 am
Debbie Meyer
Super clever. Congratulations. 😀
May 14, 2019 at 11:04 am
Nancy Ferguson
I enjoyed hearing how you think! Thanks.
May 14, 2019 at 11:05 am
nicolesalterbraun
LOL. Brilliant!
May 14, 2019 at 11:06 am
nicolesalterbraun
LOL. Brillliant!
May 14, 2019 at 11:20 am
Laurel Ranveig Abell
Very clever!!
May 14, 2019 at 11:27 am
Melanie Ellsworth
The world needs more coatis in books! Hooray!
May 14, 2019 at 11:58 am
Kassy Keppol
Sounds like fun.
May 14, 2019 at 12:04 pm
Bonnie Auslander
How en-dearing–en trying to think of lots of un puns for this cute little ‘un!
May 14, 2019 at 12:11 pm
bgonsar
Love the absurd. Congrats on getting the name through!
May 14, 2019 at 12:19 pm
Shelly Wilson
I can’t wait to read this to my story time kids!!
May 14, 2019 at 12:20 pm
Colleen Kelley
I love this. So much fun, and I can’t wait to see what the characters have to say about the writing process.
May 14, 2019 at 12:28 pm
Author A. R. Curry
It does sound confusing to see that title in a post or maybe hear it in conversation, but seeing it on the actual book cover is PERFECT! Good job. Also, I don’t let my kids so “stupid”, especially not the ones reading picture books, so I would have skipped over a book with that title and not even of given it a chance.
May 14, 2019 at 12:30 pm
Judy Sobanski (@jkspburg)
You certainly get a star for originality! I’m sure kids will adore this fun story! I can’t wait to read it, too!
May 14, 2019 at 1:00 pm
sandrabyrdlawson
This made me laugh. I LOVE it!
May 14, 2019 at 1:11 pm
kathydoherty1
UNTITLED works for me!
May 14, 2019 at 1:31 pm
Jenny Harp
Entitled…lol untitled or title-lated or wait for it the sequel F-untitled…. or title-less by Ruth or Ruthless ….I will stop now…
May 14, 2019 at 1:46 pm
Linda Bendor
Love hearing about your process! It sounds like a book that tickles the reader’s mind!
May 14, 2019 at 1:46 pm
writersideup
I tell ya…the creative process is a wondrous thing! Timothy, this is as about a fresh, clever idea for a book ever lol
May 14, 2019 at 1:52 pm
mariagianferrari
Cute cover, Tim! It looks like a very funny book–congrats!!
May 14, 2019 at 1:53 pm
Wendy Greenley
Great idea, Timothy! The characters look adorable too. (and Coatimundi in undies is LOL)
May 14, 2019 at 2:15 pm
Michelle Andersen
Thanks for the backstory! This sounds like my kind of book! Looking forward to it!
May 14, 2019 at 2:30 pm
Rinda Beach
Happy sales to you!
May 14, 2019 at 3:08 pm
teacherter
Can’t wait to read this. I love the creativity and fun of interacting with characters in innovative ways!
May 14, 2019 at 3:18 pm
Genevieve Petrillo
I think it’s pretty cool to have a story without a title. Mom usually has titles without stories.
Love and licks,
Cupcake
May 14, 2019 at 3:25 pm
Mary Warth
Thanks Tim! This book sounds like a lot of fun.
May 14, 2019 at 3:40 pm
Sarah Wolf
I’m intrigued. Hope I win! Thanks for the post.
May 14, 2019 at 4:01 pm
RaeMcDonald
Characters are lurking all around for their stories to be told, and I am ready for this one. Your humorous trailer got me, and I know that humor will shine through for readers come May 1.
May 14, 2019 at 4:07 pm
andreesantini
This looks like a very engaging and creative book, congrats!
May 14, 2019 at 4:45 pm
Michelle R.
My son loves If You Give The Puffin a Muffin. This looks equally as fun!
May 14, 2019 at 5:07 pm
Nancy Ramsey
I look forward to reading your book! Congratulations!!
May 14, 2019 at 5:51 pm
Ruth McNally Barshaw
What fun! Can’t wait to see it in print.
May 14, 2019 at 6:08 pm
RebeccaTheWriter
This sounds awesome! Can’t wait to read it!
May 14, 2019 at 6:39 pm
writeknit
All of your books look great – I am going to check them out for my grandkids!
May 14, 2019 at 7:12 pm
Cindy Williams Schrauben
I love the meta-ness of this. Can’t wait to read it
May 14, 2019 at 7:35 pm
Lisa Riddiough
So clever and fun. I love that you have a coatimundi in the book. I love those little guys.
May 14, 2019 at 7:46 pm
CeCeLibrarian
What a very clever idea. Untitled works well, especially with the subtitle or AKA the question from. The MCs: Wait…What? That’s what he’s calling this book? I will definitely read this book with my students!
May 14, 2019 at 8:14 pm
Melanie Trenfield
So outside the square and so good that you were able to sit on it and mull over the title. So much better for it!
May 14, 2019 at 9:17 pm
Linda Mitchell
Bwa ha ha ha ha! I love this “title” if that’s what you’re calling it. Bravo.
May 14, 2019 at 9:17 pm
marty
It’s funny right from the start! Love all the illustrations. Kudos to you and untitled!
May 14, 2019 at 9:21 pm
Melissa Mwai
I love meta books. I think my kiddo will get a kick out of this.
May 14, 2019 at 9:21 pm
marty
It’s funny right from the start. Love the illustrations. Kudos to you and untitled!
May 14, 2019 at 9:24 pm
seschipper
Now that’s creative…”Untitled”!!! Love it! Can’t wait to read it!! 🙂
May 14, 2019 at 9:36 pm
heavenlyhashformoms
So clever! I love how you capture our imagination and curiosity in one word!
May 14, 2019 at 10:04 pm
Lenora Biemans
I love this!! Can’t wait to read it. 🙂 Thanks for sharing so much of your process – it’s so helpful.
May 14, 2019 at 10:33 pm
Katie
Thanks for sharing the backstory! I would completely pick up a book just because of that title.
May 14, 2019 at 10:53 pm
Joanne
Great title. Look forward to reading your work with my grandchildren.
May 15, 2019 at 4:01 am
Kellie
I love books like this. Love the story behind it. Can’t wait to read it.
May 15, 2019 at 4:40 am
Dee Knabb
Sounds intriguing. Congratulations, Tim.
May 15, 2019 at 8:27 am
Lucretia
Thank you for sharing–I loved reading about your creative process for this PB, Timothy! Given its engaging back story, I can’t imagine how much fun the story itself is. I, too, enjoyed recognizing the images of all the “mentor” titles. Well done! Congratulations on untitled.
May 15, 2019 at 8:32 am
Lucretia
Thanks for sharing–I loved reading about your creative process, Timothy. Given its engaging back story, I can’t wait to read the story itself! I, too, enjoyed recognizing the images of the “mentor” texts on that spread. Well done. Congratulations on untitled!
May 15, 2019 at 9:46 am
Nancy Furstinger
What a wildly creative title! Can’t wait for it to be published. One of my dorm-mates @ Bard had a pet coatimundi–fascinating creatures who don’t often star in books:-)
May 15, 2019 at 10:57 am
Rebecca Van Slyke
untitled… It looks UNusual, UNending, and UNprecedented fun!
May 15, 2019 at 11:12 am
Dea Brayden
Such a clever idea! Thanks for this post.
May 15, 2019 at 12:05 pm
Susan Johnston
Congrats, Tim! I just added untitled to my TBR shelf on Goodreads.
May 15, 2019 at 12:57 pm
Darcee Freier
So funny! Congratulations on your new PB!
May 15, 2019 at 3:27 pm
sheri hoyte books
😂 love this!
May 16, 2019 at 10:13 am
Kathy Halsey
Tim, this is genius! I have a new books called “unwritten” which is also
“untitled.” LOL I want to win.
May 16, 2019 at 11:14 am
briangehrlein
Can’t wait to read this one! My kind of comedy. Thanks for sharing and for the giveaway opportunity!
May 16, 2019 at 5:55 pm
pollyrenner
I feel “entirely entitled” to win “untitled”…great idea for a new PB:>
May 16, 2019 at 6:45 pm
Nadya Abu-Rish
I love the unique characters and how the book interacts with the characters. I would love to share this book with my students!
May 16, 2019 at 10:25 pm
kaymarccharles6706
Brilliant! I need a clever title!
May 17, 2019 at 2:13 am
Linda
I enjoy metafiction books and books about books for my children.
May 17, 2019 at 8:58 am
Arlene Schenker
Congrats, Tim! Can’t wait to read “Untitiled”
May 17, 2019 at 11:23 am
Gregory E Bray
Sounds like a winner to me. =)
May 17, 2019 at 1:34 pm
Timothy Young
Thanks for all the great comments! Don’t forget, if you post a comment on my blog you can get a chance to win another copy of “untitled”
May 17, 2019 at 2:30 pm
Christine Pinto
I love stories about the process of writing! I can’t wait to see what you do with it.
May 17, 2019 at 11:29 pm
Sheri Radovich
When you read this book to classes in your presentations, do you ask them what they think it should be called or what suggestion they would have for the book and the ending? That would be a great way to get them thinking about a story to write.
May 18, 2019 at 9:56 am
Cindy Johnson
What fun! Another for the “I wish I’d thought of that!” list.
May 19, 2019 at 6:41 pm
Amy Harding
What a unique idea! Can’t wait to read it!
May 20, 2019 at 5:58 am
Lisa Maucione (@DrLMaucione)
I’m so intrigued!
May 23, 2019 at 10:47 pm
claireannette1
I want to spend time looking at that book shelf, too.
Can’t wait to read untitled.
May 24, 2019 at 12:20 am
Lisette
Awww looks super cute!
May 25, 2019 at 9:23 am
Michelle Selders
Absolutely love the illustrations – these characters look so lovable, yet ready for a bit of mischief!! And the title is brilliant & attention getting.
May 28, 2019 at 7:48 pm
Lauri Meyers
What a fun approach!
June 5, 2019 at 10:33 pm
Untitled | by Timothy Young – CeCeLibrarian’s Book Blog
[…] interviewed Timothy on her blog where he shared his creative process. You can read the interview here. I have since received our copy and have added it to out K-5 library collection. I can’t wait […]
July 1, 2019 at 11:24 am
Jefna
Super funny. I think kids will get a kick out of this!