“How did you get your start writing?”
“Just like Roald Dahl.” (Yes, I take advantage of any opportunity to compare myself to my favorite writer.)
But, I’m not kidding. When I began this whole crazy ride, I did so by writing short stories for adults, just like Dahl. Except my stories weren’t short stories. They were short, short, extra short stories—flash fiction.
I had found an online magazine called “Six Sentences” that published one flash fiction piece per day. The name of the site said it all—every story was only six sentences long (or six sentences short, chortle chuckle).
To some writers, this presents an enormous challenge, to examine character and emotion and conflict between six periods. Sure, you could exploit the semi-colon and em-dash and maybe stretch it to resemble eight-and-a-half sentences, but still. That’s not much space.
The uber-short format, however, is like prose-poetry. And it’s most definitely like a picture book because some things must be left unsaid, yet the silence remains part of the story’s experience.
Paper Cuts
by Tara Lazar
Her daughter was achingly beautiful, a delicate loveliness like a paper lantern, illuminated from within. The girl’s long hair separated into fine ringlets, cascading like curled Christmas ribbon down her back. She was the kind of child who made strangers smile and take pause—the kind of child who made other mothers envious. The mother was not so much shunned as politely excluded; excuses were made, apologies provided, but invitations were never extended. She exaggerated her own ordinary features—forgoing makeup, leaving her hair unwashed for days, wearing mismatched clothing—but none of her efforts to elicit pity served to lessen the jealousy; her daughter’s radiance only shone brighter, her extraordinary hair the source of more disdain. The mother closed her eyes, grasped the scissors, and cut.
I’ve long held the belief that aspiring picture book writers would benefit from writing flash fiction, as it’s good writing practice in another format. No pictures are necessary, but a mind for visuals is. Can you imagine the scene above?
Writing these stories is fun as well as a challenge, so I was mighty intrigued when I saw Logitech announce their Very Short Story contest on Twitter.
So here’s your chance to strut your storytelling skills outside the usual medium. Logitech is giving away their new K380 Multi-Device Bluetooth Keyboard and a Blurb giftcard for the best short story written in 8 tweets or less. Just use #LogiVSS to tell your tiny tale. Get all the details here—http://blog.logitech.com/2016/02/18/k380veryshortstorychallenge—but hurry! The contest ends at the close of this week.
And guess what? Logitech is also giving away one of their new keyboards to one of my blog readers! If you hate typing on a phone or tablet’s screen, worry no longer. This keyboard is happy to help you out.
Just leave a comment below about short story writing and you’re entered to win. One lucky commenter will be picked randomly in two weeks!
So go ahead and write on! (But don’t write on and on and on!)
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February 22, 2016 at 6:51 pm
jennifer mook-sang
i love that you need to cut to the chase in a short story. makes it easier to leave out the parts that people don’t read 🙂
February 22, 2016 at 6:56 pm
Tara Lazar
That was really crucial for me as a writer, figuring out what parts in a story aren’t needed. It’s just as important as what goes on the page.
February 22, 2016 at 6:55 pm
Kaye Baillie
I think Paper Cuts is fabulous. Well done, Tara and thanks for sharing how it all began.
February 22, 2016 at 6:57 pm
Vicky Wirkkala
How fun!! I will definitely try my hand, or pen, if you will, at a short story. I think short story writing is a fabulous practice to get into.
February 22, 2016 at 6:59 pm
theresenagi
Tara thanks for sharing your earlier writing. I enjoyed reading it and felt your piece resonates so much with parents and children.
February 22, 2016 at 7:00 pm
viviankirkfield
Short is hard to do. Your Paper Cuts is over-the-top incredible. Thanks for sharing this…I’ll share also. 😉
February 22, 2016 at 7:02 pm
Andrea Mack
Writing short stories is fun because, like picture books, they often have a surprising twist!
February 22, 2016 at 7:03 pm
Jacqueline
Writing short stories with a word limit taught me the importance of cutting the slack. I couldn’t believe how much stronger the story was after I slashed all those words that I’d thought were so important. Now I look for things to cut even when the word count isn’t an issue.
February 22, 2016 at 7:05 pm
Rebecca E. Guzinski
I could totally visualize every word of Paper Cuts! You’re extraordinarily talented.
February 22, 2016 at 7:06 pm
Gregory E Bray
I’m still trying to figure out which parts of my stories to cut out. 🙂 Thanks as always Tara.
February 22, 2016 at 7:10 pm
Mary Hassell
Have always loved short stories, maybe because I remember my mother reading them and writing them when I was younger.
February 22, 2016 at 7:11 pm
Jennifer
I love doing this type of very short flash fiction. This will give me a new type of challenge to try. Thanks for the alert.
February 22, 2016 at 7:12 pm
Christine M. Irvin
I’m not sure I’m up for the challenge of such a short story….. Yikes! Although I must admit, it would be a good mental exercise for any writer.
February 22, 2016 at 7:14 pm
Michelle O'Hara Levin
This is a really exciting, interesting (and difficult) mission. Challenge accepted. 🙂
February 22, 2016 at 7:16 pm
jodelle55
That was an amazing story you wrote in just six sentences. I would still be setting the scene.
February 22, 2016 at 7:16 pm
Carol Jones
What a cool contest. Like the previous commenter, I’m not sure I’m up to the challenge, but for a picture book writer this would be an especially good exercise.
February 22, 2016 at 7:17 pm
Sussu Leclerc
This is very generous and so much fun. I love reading very short stories. Twitter here I come. And that’s really the dream keyboard. Thanks!
February 22, 2016 at 7:18 pm
Teresa Robeson
My first published piece was a short story in Ladybug magazine! I write short stories for adults still…literary and SF, and although I’ve not sold any yet, I’d gotten personal complimentary rejections, which is always encouraging. 🙂
February 22, 2016 at 7:22 pm
Erin Fennell
Tara, thanks for sharing your cool story!
February 22, 2016 at 7:22 pm
Santiago Casares
I’ve never been able to tell very long tales. Short stories (and Picture Books) suit my style just fine! 🙂
February 22, 2016 at 7:23 pm
rgstones
Fun! Maybe I’ll give it a shot. 🙂
February 22, 2016 at 7:37 pm
Chana Stiefel
So cool! I have a short story in my head but it’s more like 600 sentences. I’ll give the contest a try. It’ll be more like an elevator pitch.
February 22, 2016 at 7:40 pm
Myrna Foster
I loved writing short stories in college. Thanks!
February 22, 2016 at 7:40 pm
Lucky Jo Boscarino
I’ve never heard of flash fiction. It seems to be an excellent way to condense (maybe distill?) one’s thoughts, and hone our storytelling tools. Certainly VINE (an app to create 6-second videos) works on the same principle. Thanks, Tara. I’ll give it a try.
February 22, 2016 at 7:41 pm
Sandy Perlic
Thanks for including your beautiful piece as an example of writing short, short stories. Not sure I have the same talent, but it would be fun to try!
February 22, 2016 at 7:49 pm
Brenna Friesner
Thanks for sharing! It sounds like it’s not only a great exercise in character development, but there seems to be a lot of play with varying sentence structure as well. I’d love to give it a go.
February 22, 2016 at 7:52 pm
laura516
With no wiggle room for wordiness, short (short!) stories really make you cut to the chase. Thanks for sharing!
February 22, 2016 at 7:56 pm
Michael Vogel
I have always enjoyed reading short stories. Just recently I started dabbling in WRITING of the short stories. It is a very interesting genre to say the least…
February 22, 2016 at 8:02 pm
Maria Marshall
Wonderful short story, Tara. Lots of details and images compacted into six sentences. Definitely a challenge and a high bar to follow. 🙂
February 22, 2016 at 8:04 pm
Tony Williams
Sounds like fun! Gotta go I’ve got some writing too do!
February 22, 2016 at 8:08 pm
Darlene
Love your short story Tara. Now I have to get writing.
February 22, 2016 at 8:10 pm
Pat
Writing a short story using only six sentences is quickly stating the point, but your example is so rich. That requires much effort and finesse.
February 22, 2016 at 8:11 pm
Veronica
Very cool giveaway! And short stories are just that… short but ever so sweet. Good luck to those who are entering that contest! 😄👍
February 22, 2016 at 8:11 pm
Beth Gallagher
Gosh, Tara, what a wonderful chance at this cool keyboard! Not only that, but it’s a fabulous opportunity to read your absolutely beautiful piece too! I was tempted at the flash fiction contest, but guess I’m much too long winded. 😀
February 22, 2016 at 8:18 pm
Sheila
Love writing short prose and definitely good practice for picture book writing. Your story is amazing, and thanks for the chance of a keyboard giveaway. 🙂
February 22, 2016 at 8:20 pm
mariaordish
This is a much better idea than doing an outline! I like it! Thanks for sharing, Tara. I’m not going to tweet but I will try my own at home!
February 22, 2016 at 8:22 pm
Jen
I agree that writing short stories is an excellent skill for writers to practice.
February 22, 2016 at 8:24 pm
Jennifer Rumberger
What an interesting concept, to write a short story in tweets! I think short stories definitely use a different mindset than longer ones.
February 22, 2016 at 8:24 pm
Jeanine Potter
Your Paper Cuts is Amazing . Thank you for sharing it and your message about short, short short! A great exercise .
February 22, 2016 at 8:27 pm
angeladegroot8
What a fun contest!
February 22, 2016 at 8:29 pm
Angela Turner
I love reading very short stories. I’m not sure how I’ll be at writing them but I may have to give it a go. Thanks for the inspiration Tara.
February 22, 2016 at 8:34 pm
Susanne
This is a fantastic idea, Tara! Thanks for sharing!
February 22, 2016 at 8:38 pm
Sheila Welch
Thanks for sharing your example of Flash Fiction. Even as a child, I loved short stories and have now written many for children. Often, editors request that I cut or tighten before publication. Good practice for picture books.
February 22, 2016 at 8:40 pm
kayt663
I’m intrigued. Why not give it a shot? Thanks, Tara!
February 22, 2016 at 8:45 pm
Shelly
The thought of using so few words sent the thinnest trickle of fear down my back. How? How could such tiny morsels of linguistic prose express large ideas or a picturesque history?
Frightening – but intriguing at the same time…
Thank you Tara! It sounds like – errmmm – fun!?!
February 22, 2016 at 8:51 pm
Sheri
This looks like fun. Cool prize! Thanks for the opportunity.
February 22, 2016 at 9:02 pm
danielle hammelef
Wow! I would call this contest lightning flash fiction! Thans for highlighting this contest for us–this is a difficult challenge for me, but really good for my writing brain!
February 22, 2016 at 9:02 pm
Rosi Hollinbeck
Very interesting idea. Thanks for the post.
February 22, 2016 at 9:06 pm
Gloria Amescua
I love your suggestion about writing short shorts for practice.
February 22, 2016 at 9:27 pm
Kathy Doherty
I love, love, love the challenge of writing short stories such as poems, rebuses, and picture books.
February 22, 2016 at 9:32 pm
Angie
Now that’s a challenge! Nothing like telling a writer what to do. 😉
February 22, 2016 at 9:42 pm
martymi6
This suggestion is one I need to take to heart and do repeatedly. Thanks for proposing this writing challenge!
February 22, 2016 at 9:43 pm
Doris Fisher
I won first place in a flash fiction contest sponsored by the Abilene Writers. 250 words or less. My story was Elvis in a Bottle. Hilarious!
February 22, 2016 at 9:44 pm
Robyn Campbell
Great contest. I might try it. Loved your short story, Tara. I had no idea you started by writing flash fiction. Fascinating. You’re right. FF and picture book writing have much in common.
February 22, 2016 at 9:45 pm
aliciaminor
After I’ve read Tall Enough by Gavin Kayner for Ladybug, I was able to write at least 3 flash fiction/short stories which need second set of eyes for critiques right now. I see this as a good opportunity if given the go to submit. Thanks Tara.
February 22, 2016 at 10:05 pm
Jim Chaize
Planning to give it a try. A good exercise at the very least. Thanks Tara
February 22, 2016 at 10:23 pm
betlw
Your short story, “Paper Cuts” ends at the cliff hanger, a perfect place to end if you plan on writing the next chapter. Love what this story could become, endless possibilities. This is my first foray into this website. Like it a lot.
February 22, 2016 at 10:28 pm
Teresa Daffern
Hmmm. What a great challenge. Thanks for sharing Tara, and I loved your piece.
February 22, 2016 at 10:54 pm
Elizabeth S
I love flash fiction! In the high school classroom, I found flash fiction to be one of the most fun activities for writing days. I look forward to entering the 8 tweets contest. thanks:)
February 22, 2016 at 11:07 pm
angiecal76
A great way to practice writing in a succinct way. Thanks for sharing this contest, Tara!
February 22, 2016 at 11:10 pm
waengel2002
Paper Cuts really sets a HIGH bar Tara. You are an amazing talent. You have inspired me to give the contest a try.
Thanks for sharing.
February 22, 2016 at 11:26 pm
fireurchin
Behind on learning how to use Twitter!
A poem I wrote recently under my poetry pen name [and used other times as well aka]…
brevity
brevity
holds
vibration
of
desire
2/9/16 fireUrchin
February 22, 2016 at 11:41 pm
MikelaPrevost
Love this idea – love this challenge!
February 22, 2016 at 11:49 pm
Mishka Jaeger
This is like listening between the notes in music. And the efficiency of line in art (something I’m also still working on!).
February 23, 2016 at 12:06 am
julie rowan zoch
Flash fiction or paragraphically challenged? Ha! Would love to try out such a keyboard!
February 23, 2016 at 12:07 am
Naila Moon
I love flash fiction too.
I have done 6 word and also fiction in 50.
Bring it on!
February 23, 2016 at 12:27 am
Lynn A. Davidson
I think when I begin working on some of my picture book ideas, I write a short story in my attempt to get the story down. Then I have to rework it into pb format. That’s why I wonder if short stories might be something I should learn more about, when I’m not busy working on my PiBoIdMo ideas. 🙂 Thanks, Tara, for the inspiration.
February 23, 2016 at 12:35 am
katiemillsgiorgio
Writing short is such a good skill to hone! Thanks for sharing
February 23, 2016 at 12:49 am
humekbrian
My first in-person critique partner, only met her once, really helped me out with cutting extraneous material from the beginning of my stories. I wrote her advice on my heart and I’m a better writer today because of her.
February 23, 2016 at 12:52 am
deborahholtwilliams
You are so generous to share this contest and your story with us! I loved doing a 214-word or less Valentine story for a contest, and I think this will be fun, too!
February 23, 2016 at 12:56 am
Sheri Dillard
Sounds fun, Tara! I’ll check it out! Thanks for sharing!
February 23, 2016 at 1:26 am
candicewolff
I recently found several of my short stories when I was cleaning out my office. Some I had not seen in so long, it was like encountering an old friend, one after another. All progress of cleaning came to a stand still while the story and I became reacquainted. I wasn’t worried about trying to impress anyone with my character development or my story arc. I simply wrote the stories within me that most wanted to be told.
February 23, 2016 at 1:41 am
Li'vee Rehfield
Love short stories…thanks…liked your story of the girl and her hair…
February 23, 2016 at 2:30 am
Matthew G. Miller
The greatest difficulty in writing the short-short is having a narrative arc. Most #vss tweets I read, and much flash fiction, is moreover poetry: a description of a poignant scene, rich in detail, but no movement.
I cherish the stories that travel Freytag’s arc — from setting, inciting incident, through conflict, rising action, to climax and denouement.
February 23, 2016 at 4:04 am
ritaborg
I sometimes worry that such brevity would create only a vignette, but,yes, short writing is good practice writing.
February 23, 2016 at 5:11 am
Jo Brown
I love short stories, they really make you think. Yours was a great story, made me gasp!
February 23, 2016 at 5:29 am
Helen Matthews
Super! Must try
February 23, 2016 at 6:19 am
Elaine
Loved your story and I’m a fan of the short story format. Flash fiction is particularly challenging as one tries to form a complete stand alone tale rather than a vignette. I must get back to writing flash fiction, it’s a great way to generate ideas.
February 23, 2016 at 7:42 am
Lotus Ivak
What a great idea to improve writing skills!
February 23, 2016 at 7:57 am
Sally Rowe
My family was been playing with the 6 word story last year. 6 sentences feels like both a challenge and a luxury!
February 23, 2016 at 8:16 am
lindamartinandersen
Tara, I enjoyed hearing the way you got your start in writing. Cool. Thanks for posting about this contest too.
February 23, 2016 at 8:54 am
Lisa Rogers
Fun idea and good practice, too. I’ve used Chris Van Allsburg’s “The Mysteries of Harris Burdick” as prompts for my own short stories, and my students’ too. Writing short is good discipline.
February 23, 2016 at 8:58 am
Sathya Achia Abraham
I always love your insight. .. and never knew about flash fiction. Will certainly give it a whirl!! Thanks Tara!!!
February 23, 2016 at 9:18 am
Donna L Martin
I really enjoy writing flash fiction. My FLASH FICTION FRIDAY series on my blog a couple of years ago was to feed my own live of this type of writing as well as sharing my stories with the world.
Thanks for sharing this opportunity with us, Tara. Great post!
February 23, 2016 at 9:25 am
Alice Fulgione
I had never head of Flash Fiction. What a great idea!
February 23, 2016 at 9:31 am
jessicaevans915
Sounds challenging! I might. Just. Try it!
February 23, 2016 at 10:20 am
jeanjames926
Reposted this on my blog. I thought Susanna Leonard Hill’s recent writing contest of 214 words was challenging, but flash fiction is taking it to a whole new level; looking forward to the challenge. Also, I really enjoyed Paper Cuts!!
February 23, 2016 at 10:28 am
Darcee Freier
What fun! I’ve tried flash fiction,and 6 word stories, but never 6 sentence stories.
February 23, 2016 at 10:34 am
Cinzia
What a great exercise! It’s hard (and I’ll stop there)
February 23, 2016 at 10:36 am
KASteed
Hi Tara. This is a good/hard challenge…I’m up for it. Have a great day!
February 23, 2016 at 10:44 am
Deborah Maier
Tara, you are such a marvelous font of ideas and humor. We are lucky to have your generous spirit sharing them. Your posts always make my day better.
February 23, 2016 at 10:53 am
Kimberly Marcus
Great post! I just wrote my first short story for adults. It’s a horror piece. Very freeing, very fun.
February 23, 2016 at 10:57 am
Mary Zychowicz
Well now, this is a challenge! Thanks for sharing the information.
February 23, 2016 at 10:59 am
Melanie Ellsworth
Thanks for posting about this contest, Tara. I like what you said about the spaces – they carry so much of the weight of the story.
February 23, 2016 at 11:38 am
Veronika Magali-Marosy
I love the flash fiction that most people attribute to Hemingway:
“For sale: baby shoes, never worn.”
It’s a great brain teaser to write with as little as possible, but fit in a whole story. It’s the first time that I thought about this practice being helpful in writing PB’s. Thank you Tara!
February 23, 2016 at 12:05 pm
Vicki Wilke
Short stories can be like a little shot of espresso – welcome jolt – thank you!
February 23, 2016 at 12:25 pm
tanyakonerman
How exciting! I love short, short stories. So much can be summed up in VERY few words!
February 23, 2016 at 12:35 pm
Shannon Bartoshewski
This IS going to be a challenge!
February 23, 2016 at 1:34 pm
Noel Csermak
What a post! Thank you for the introduction to such a challenging way to write. You have once again proven why you are one to follow.
February 23, 2016 at 1:58 pm
Marianne Knowles
When I completed a pre class survey for a Nobel revision workshop I noticed that while I do not write many short stories I do read a lot of them– and also that my novel attempts have been described as “episodic.” Does correlation equal causation? Not sure!
February 23, 2016 at 3:14 pm
Sheri Rad
EEEK six sentences only and a whole story, impossible. What a challenge and to use Twitter even more of a challenge.
February 23, 2016 at 3:23 pm
Jeena Bittenbender
Writing a short story is so much harder than a longer one, so great job!!! Having a physical keyboard would sure help. I know how difficult it is to comment on something let alone write a story….
February 23, 2016 at 4:00 pm
lisap
I love reading short stories as they are so cleverly crafted. I’d love to write them but they are really difficult as every word counts. A delicious twist at the end just adds to the piquancy and is a real must. I envy those who succeed! Love your Paper cuts- thanks for sharing.
February 23, 2016 at 4:03 pm
C.A. Simonson
Great tips for a hard-to-do challenge. Flash fiction is fun and rewarding and helps hone those writing skills!
February 23, 2016 at 4:11 pm
Shirley Ng-Benitez
Wow, this is a great opportunity to challenge my writing skills..thanks for the chance Tara and for informing all of us on this contest. Great concept for sure!
February 23, 2016 at 5:06 pm
Shari Schwarz
Cool challenge! I love your comment in the comments about learning what to cut out and what to keep on page.
February 23, 2016 at 5:46 pm
thduggie
That must be an older daughter. Our little tykes take their hair by their own hands.
February 23, 2016 at 6:32 pm
Bethany Mandich
This short story writing challenge is a timely catalyst for my current manuscript and storyboard! Bluetooth keyboard=genius.
February 23, 2016 at 7:33 pm
Deborah Amadei
I entered a short story contest once. It was based on an incident from my Dad’s boyhood in Boston.
February 23, 2016 at 9:48 pm
Brenda Harris
Yea! How exciting to try to write a short story in 8 tweets. Count me in. 🙂
February 23, 2016 at 11:40 pm
David Huyck
I’ve been failing at writing for a long time. My short stories in high school and college were full of well-crafted sentences that went nowhere. If I’m being honest, that has only recently begun to change. Writing picture books is a joyful and heady experience. Editing picture books is gut-wrenching – so much has to be said in no space at all. Now, back to the studio to write like crazy, and, in all seriousness, edit.
February 23, 2016 at 11:44 pm
Tara Lazar
Same here, David. It took me a long time to realize that a good sentence does not a story make. Good luck with your writing!
February 24, 2016 at 2:10 am
lillyarts
I wonder what the shortest story every told was, and… if it was good.
February 24, 2016 at 5:37 am
leprechaun5770
Six sentences seem a lot more difficult to write than eight tweets. I am practicing and hope to enter an enticing story for the contest.
February 24, 2016 at 3:12 pm
Sydney O'Neill
Sometimes a short challenge like this is just what is needed to start ideas flowing for longer works.
February 24, 2016 at 3:43 pm
kdveiten
Interesting–I’ve seen articles/challenges about flash fiction, but I never thought about joining in to help with my picture book writing skills. Thanks for connecting the dots!
February 24, 2016 at 7:24 pm
Jen G.
This has really inspired me to try flash fiction. It looks challenging and fun. Thanks for sharing your piece!
February 25, 2016 at 9:42 am
megcason1
What a fun idea!!
February 25, 2016 at 5:30 pm
Jenna W
My biggest challenge right now in short story and pb writing is creating well rounded characters.
February 25, 2016 at 11:16 pm
Joanne Roberts
Thanks for the heads up. You may have fallen in love with flash fic, but that’s how I feel about magazine stories. I confess that over half of my ideas from the past few PiBoIdMos have ended up as magazine shorts. I’m still plugging away at the pb manuscripts, but those crazy ideas just keep morphing into lovable magazine pieces. Thanks for the giveaway!
February 27, 2016 at 9:35 am
melissamiles1
I would find this incredibly challenging, but I think I will have to try it. I loved Paper Cuts. It was amazing how much you packed into a few sentences. Thank you for sharing the link. I’ve written short stories, but never anything THIS short. 🙂
February 27, 2016 at 11:19 am
writersideup
Wow, Tara, stunning writing in “Paper Cuts”! I LOVE your similies! Paper lantern…curling ribbon…just wonderful 😀
February 27, 2016 at 8:58 pm
ThisKidReviewsBooks
The thing I like about writing short stories is that they are a challenge to write. I like challenges. 🙂
Great post, and short story! 😀
February 29, 2016 at 2:32 am
mermaidrain
Wow!! A 6 sentence short. That’s a challenge! BUT I loved yours. What wonderful imagery: paper lanterns, curled Christmas ribbon, etc.
February 29, 2016 at 9:49 am
Susie
I love short writing challenges! It’s a great exercise in being succint and finding the best word choice – especially for picture book writers and poets.
February 29, 2016 at 10:17 am
Sylvia Grech
I LOVE similies and they pop in my head quite a bit but I wasn’t sure if they’re still used much these days. (Glad they are!) Thanks for sharing your short story!.
May 2, 2016 at 10:26 pm
Sue Morris @ KidLitReviews
So sorry I missed this. Looks like great fun. Terrific idea, Tara.