by Dev Petty
I wrote a whole post for this very blog some time ago about NOT writing and just thinking. I wrote about getting to the heart of your story idea in your head before you ever write a word. I believe in that process…big time. But it’s not how I wrote I DON’T WANT TO BE A FROG. That’s a different story. That’s the story of how a sort of basic story idea turned into one with legs…frog legs! In fact, it was the writing of FROG that taught me to slow down and think, to find the story thread before I started writing.
I knew I wanted to write a story all in dialogue. I wanted it to be funny. And I wanted it to be about a frog. I like frogs, it was that simple. Not much to go on, eh? Believe me, my first efforts on frog reflected just how thin the idea was. Frog went from animal to animal saying “I want to be like you…because…you’re furry (or you can fly or you can hop).” It was repetitive and a little hollow and NOTHING REALLY AT ALL HAPPENED. These are the sort of problems I usually suss out when I’m just thinking instead of writing, so I don’t usually have this situation. But there was something about the first draft I liked enough to keep at it.
This is when I stopped and realized I needed to answer my own critical, favorite story writing question.
“What is this about?”
The answer, as written, was “A frog who wants to be a rabbit or a cat or an owl.” And after a ton of rewrites and rearranging, it wasn’t getting any better on the page. So I stopped revising. I stopped writing. As I closed the laptop and started thinking, I realized it was a little deeper. The answer really was, “This is a story about a frog who doesn’t want to be a frog.” It’s about wanting to be something other than what you are. Now THAT’S a little more interesting. When I started thinking about it that way, the story opened up and it wasn’t anymore about cats or owls, it was about nature, it was about accepting your nature.
That answer allowed me to start thinking about the frog, the good parts, the bad parts, the way we all sometimes envy things about others that we can never, and probably should never have. The story was getting deeper, but still…nothing really happened. The frog went from animal to animal saying he wanted to be them and then the book ended. You’re a frog. Get over it.
Confession. I’ve tried to write novels. A bunch of em. I am a Viking at writing three awesome chapters and then running out of steam, throwing the laptop across the room and eating ice cream for a while. But I do it often enough that I’ve learned a few things. Newsflash Dev, your story has to have a PLOT and not just be a rambling treatise on frog existentialism. So I decided to bring a new character in…a wolf…who would act as a bit of a therapist, a reality checker who would point out the good parts of being a frog through his own nature. Once something happened, the wolf, my story had a turn and a direction and something, albeit small, happened. I hope kids will read frog and realize that everyone has things they want to change about themselves, and that’s a totally okay, natural thing to explore. But you also sort of have to accept who you are, find the bright parts about who you are and work with what you have.
I guess the truth is, I sort of violated most of my own rules of picture book writing in the writing of the one picture book I have out there. I kind of teased a good story out of a pretty mediocre one. But that’s ok too, it taught me a lot about finding that thread. It helped me develop a process…find the thread FIRST! Remember to TELL a story and not just muse.
Since we’re talking story threads, I thought I’d put down a few tools I use to try to figure out what I’m getting at when I’m developing a story idea in my head, before I start writing.
- I write a poem. It’s not the kind of poem anyone would ever, ever, ever want to read. But the lack of rules in poetry allow me to explore an idea without limitations. I usually write pretty long, stream of consciousness poems about my story idea and most of it will be total garbage. But usually, when I read it through, somewhere in there is a thread I can hold onto and start crafting a story around.
- Imagine your story as a trailer. I’d never thought of this one until I started watching a lot of picture book trailers and working on my own, for Frog. But when you have to introduce your character, a story problem, a plot twist and a possible solution- you’ve covered a lot of story elements and it’s pretty easy to find where you need to go a little deeper.
- Ask yourself what your story is about. Sounds obvious, I know, but I forget to do it ALL THE TIME. And, while you’re busy talking to yourself, why not have a whole conversation?
“Dev, what is this story about?”
“Well, it’s about a frog who wants to be a cat or an owl or something else.”
“Gosh, Dev, that’s not very interesting.”
“It’s not? Crap. OK, it’s about not wanting to be a frog.”
“Getting there.”
“You’re bossy. Fine. It’s about not wanting to be what you are.”
“That’s sad.”
“Okee…it’s about accepting who you are.”
“Bingo!”
“I don’t like you.”
“I don’t like you either.”
Finally, Never throw anything away. Whether you save one giant list of picture books in Scrivener or text files or email drafts (I’m partial to that one), never give up on a story. Put it aside, let it steep, even put it in total cold storage, but don’t throw anything away. SO many of my stories come from little breadcrumbs of ideas I left myself along the way.
Dev Petty is the author of I DON’T WANT TO BE A FROG (Doubleday 2015, Illustrated by Mike Boldt) and CLAYMATES (Little Brown, 2017). A former film effects artist, she lives in Albany, California and writes funny books for kids and immature adults. Visit her at DevPetty.com.
Do you want to be a frog? No? Do you want to own a frog? Not really? How about own a SIGNED COPY of Dev’s I DON’T WANT TO BE A FROG? Plus bookmarks? Yes? OK then, leave one comment below and a winner will be randomly selected in two weeks! Good luck!
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February 20, 2015 at 12:59 pm
Claire Lordon (@ClaireLordon)
I can’t wait to read this book! The dialogue and illustrations are incredible. Wonderful interview as well.
February 20, 2015 at 12:59 pm
Michele Blood
I *love* the idea of “imagining your story as a trailer!”
February 20, 2015 at 12:59 pm
Michelle R. Eastman
I toadally love the bread crumb analogy. Thanks for this fun glimpse into your world!
February 20, 2015 at 1:00 pm
Pj McIlvaine
I want to be one hundred pounds. Never gonna happen.
February 20, 2015 at 1:00 pm
mariletarobinson
What an excellent post! Thanks for letting us in on your process.
February 20, 2015 at 1:00 pm
rgstones
I love this book. And this post is exactly what I needed to hear today. Thanks!
February 20, 2015 at 1:01 pm
Stacy S. Jensen
I would love a signed copy. If I won, I could donate the copy I bought last week after reading a review! Thank you so much for the tips and very glad you figured it all out. We love frog at our house.
February 20, 2015 at 1:02 pm
mona861
This is a great post. Write a poem. I like that! Thanks
February 20, 2015 at 1:05 pm
Janny J Johnson
Love seeing your creative mind at work!
February 20, 2015 at 1:05 pm
Corey Schwartz
I own TWO copies already. (due to itchy trigger finger on amazon’s pre-order page) but I want a signed copy too! This book makes the best gift!!!
February 20, 2015 at 1:06 pm
Nancy Colle
A nifty way to work through my all too common “story block”. Thank you.
February 20, 2015 at 1:06 pm
winemama
Looking forward to this book! Thanks for the post!
February 20, 2015 at 1:08 pm
Jacqueline
Ask yourself what your story is about–great advice. It made me realize that’s the problem with the story I’ve been struggling with the past week. I just hope no one walks in the room while I’m talking to myself!
February 20, 2015 at 1:10 pm
kathydoherty1
Thank you for sharing your writing process.
February 20, 2015 at 1:10 pm
Ellen Pridmore
This was a great post. Thank you for sharing tools you use while developing your story idea. I can’t wait to read your book!
February 20, 2015 at 1:10 pm
Nancy Ramsey
Great post and the book looks fantastic! I love your method for developing a story idea- very helpful suggestions! I look forward to reading your books!
February 20, 2015 at 1:15 pm
carolegerber
Congratulations, Dev, on hanging in there and not giving up! It’s all part of the process and those who aren’t writers or artists and think it’s easy have no idea how much thought goes into creating a book.
February 20, 2015 at 1:15 pm
ajschildrensbooks
I relate to this post so much. Thank you for sharing your writing process. Great tips! I can’t wait to read I Don’t Want to Be a Frog with my kiddos!
February 20, 2015 at 1:16 pm
Jamie Deenihan
This was such an incredible post. Thank you for sharing!
February 20, 2015 at 1:19 pm
Lizzie Maxwell
What a great idea, especially told by a frog! Thanks for sharing. It’s an important story, Dev.
February 20, 2015 at 1:20 pm
Alice Fulgione
I agree that I really need to ask myself, “What is my story about.” Thanks for the great post!
February 20, 2015 at 1:21 pm
Valarie Giogas
I LOVE behind the scenes writing stuff. THANKS. Pretty timely, too, as I added this to my to-be-read pile the other day.
February 20, 2015 at 1:21 pm
YvonneJ
This sounds like it would be a wonderful read-aloud book for story-time….I think I’d pair it with It’s Not Easy Being a Bunny by Marilyn Sadler or I I Wish That I Had Duck Feet by Dr. Seuss. I love the sound track in the trailer….https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3vdHUr7TwH0. The song would be a great way to start or end the storytime.
February 20, 2015 at 1:24 pm
Anita Banks
Thank you for the wonderful post.
February 20, 2015 at 1:27 pm
Jenn Ali
On my hold list at the library. Congrats on the book!
February 20, 2015 at 1:29 pm
Mylisa Larsen
“Everyone says that until they eat garbage.” This dialogue is cracking me up.
February 20, 2015 at 1:29 pm
Rebecca E. Guzinski
Your journey seems so realistic and I appreciate your honesty. I look forward to reading your story.
February 20, 2015 at 1:30 pm
katrinamoorebooks
“WHat is my story about?” Is such an essential question that has sparked many AHA moments for me! Can’t wait to read this Dev. Thanks for sharing, Tara!
February 20, 2015 at 1:31 pm
rita antoinette borg
HI DEV AND TARA
I wouldn’t want to be a frog, but I sure would like a chance to win this book and learn how to write a good picture book like it.
February 20, 2015 at 1:31 pm
Debra Daugherty
What is my story about? I’ve asked myself that very question many times. You’ve done a great job explaining how to discover the answer.
February 20, 2015 at 1:32 pm
Sherri Jones
This is so helpful. A peek into your writing process. I have a frog website. Check it out. Mrfrog.net.
February 20, 2015 at 1:33 pm
Kay Winters
Some excellent pointers here!
February 20, 2015 at 1:33 pm
Jessie
This post was perfect for my situation. I’ve got all of these ideas about characters and backgrounds and details, but I’m having trouble narrowing down what my most recent story is about!
By the way, the mention of ice cream made me really want some. Even though the weather in Buffalo is -1* with a -22* windchill, I could really go for rocky road right now! 😀
Thank you for sharing your great ideas, and sorry for rambling!
February 20, 2015 at 1:35 pm
Heidi Grange
I love this kind of story, about how writers develop their books. Somehow it helps me develop a greater appreciation for the end product. The book sounds like a great read aloud.
February 20, 2015 at 1:35 pm
Pia Garneau
I love frogs too! This book looks funny. Thanks for sharing your process.
February 20, 2015 at 1:37 pm
sheilaklewis
Reblogged this on sheilaklewis and commented:
Dev Petty’s musings on picture book writing and turning a so so idea into a lively book with conflict, plot, and all that good stuff, is seriously, helpfully funny and useful. For grown up writing too! Thanks, Dev. Sheila (still thin on pic book writing ideas)
February 20, 2015 at 1:38 pm
Stephanie Geckle (@SPGeckle)
“Finding that thread.” Good advice. This is a very helpful post, Dev. Thank you!
February 20, 2015 at 1:38 pm
Michael Karg
Great stuff, Dev! Those are excellent questions to bring an idea to life.
February 20, 2015 at 1:39 pm
Aimee Reid
A fun post!
February 20, 2015 at 1:39 pm
Deborah Allmand
I thoroughly enjoyed your journey to find the thread of your picture book. Sharing your journey helps all of us realize it is not easy to write a picture book. But it also gives us hope.
February 20, 2015 at 1:39 pm
Jennette Mutolo
I totally don’t want to be a frog either! My students are going to love this book!!
February 20, 2015 at 1:39 pm
Tanya Finestone
It’s always so helpful to hear about the journey from nugget to story. Great post. Thanks!
February 20, 2015 at 1:45 pm
terrimurf
As an illustrator struggling to write, this post hit the mark. Thank you for the peek at your process. Frogs are hilarious from the get-go!
February 20, 2015 at 1:43 pm
jhayslett
I appreciate reading about how your book evolved. What kid (or adult!) doesn’t want to be what they are at one time of the other! Thanks!
February 20, 2015 at 1:46 pm
Rebecca C
Very useful tools and your book looks great!
February 20, 2015 at 1:46 pm
Donna Gwinnell Lambo-Weidner
Can’t wait to read it! I love frogs…the ones in book, that is.
February 20, 2015 at 1:50 pm
Sara Pistulka Weingartner
Dev, thanks for sharing your process. Helpful tips and reminders. Can’t wait to read your book too!
February 20, 2015 at 1:52 pm
Carleen M. Tjader
It was cool learning how your book evolved. And it sounds like a pretty funny story!
February 20, 2015 at 1:53 pm
Nadine Gamble
I don’t want to be a frog, but I want to eat frog legs! Tastes like chicken!
February 20, 2015 at 1:57 pm
jkappwrites
Sounds like a great book! Looking forward to reading it!
February 20, 2015 at 1:57 pm
Maria Oka
Just read this book the other day and I loved it! So fabulous and fun. Thanks for sharing your process! If I’ve learned anything about writing, it’s that it is messy.
February 20, 2015 at 1:59 pm
Natalie Lynn Tanner
Dev: Thank you for your insights, and sharing your own writing pitfalls and how you learn from them, thus allowing all of us lucky enough to read your post to learn from them as well. It’s all about the “breadcrumbs”!!! THANK YOU! And THANK YOU, Tara — I LOVE YOUR BLOG SO MUCH!!!!
February 20, 2015 at 2:00 pm
Tina Hoggatt
So helpful, Dev. It sounds so simple, doesn’t it? But it’s easy to forget what you know when you’re in the middle of a story and distill out the story you want. Thanks!
February 20, 2015 at 2:05 pm
Debby Call
Love when authors share their inspiration for writing. Looking forward to reading I Don’t Want to be a Frog.
February 20, 2015 at 2:06 pm
katiemillsgiorgio
What a fun story! Thanks for sharing!
February 20, 2015 at 2:06 pm
katmaz2012
This is such great advice and I needed it badly today. Thank you so much! I can’tt wait to read, I Don’t Want To Be a Frog!
February 20, 2015 at 2:06 pm
bevbaird
Loved your description of the process of writing this book. Can’t wait to read it . Great advice – thanks!
February 20, 2015 at 2:10 pm
Michelle Cusolito
I love frogs! I also love this post and your LGB podcast interview. Thanks!
February 20, 2015 at 2:14 pm
sheilaklewis
Dev, the Frog Princess of Plot, Action, and Character Conflict, reigns in your charming sounding book. I can’t wait to read it. Your description of process and ability to cringe at yourself and get over it, is so inspiring. Thanks for sharing your deep and funny thoughts – Sheila
February 20, 2015 at 2:24 pm
danielle hammelef
I must read this book. I have loved frogs my whole life and summer still isn’t summer without catching toads and frogs. I do own frogs–African aquatic frogs–and my office, bathroom, and bedroom have hundreds of frogs. I am trying to write a picture book, and your advice is perfect for me to try.
February 20, 2015 at 2:24 pm
Josh Funk
yo. i have the book. but who wouldn’t want, two?
February 20, 2015 at 2:26 pm
Dee Knabb
I would jump so high and catch a fly for this book. What a terrific insight about getting to the heart of a story.
February 20, 2015 at 2:27 pm
janelle
Super cute!!
February 20, 2015 at 2:28 pm
mariagianferrari
Thanks for sharing your process, Dev! Frog sounds like such a funny book, and a fun one to write too. Will try out some of your process ideas on a few I have steeping at the moment, all in dire need of revision.
February 20, 2015 at 2:28 pm
Lynne Marie
I really enjoyed this article, Dev. Hop On!
February 20, 2015 at 2:30 pm
Janna Matthies
Appreciated the sequence of stabs at defining “What’s this story about?” Will keep this in mind!
February 20, 2015 at 2:34 pm
amy
The cover alone of this book instantly makes me laugh, and I love the dialogue throughout. I can’t wait to share this book with my kids.
February 20, 2015 at 2:39 pm
Elizabeth
Can’t wait to share with my middle school students during our Identity unit! Always like to start a unit with an awesome picture book!
February 20, 2015 at 2:42 pm
Aimee Isaac
I can’t wait to read this. I think the theme will really resonate with little ones!
February 20, 2015 at 2:44 pm
Elizabeth Martin
I am stuck in the middle of nowhere on my manuscript. Your helpful and amusing blog has helped me not give up. Thank you.
February 20, 2015 at 2:51 pm
Andrea Allen
What a great post – this one will be hung on my cork board! Thank you and looking forward to reading Frog’s tale!
February 20, 2015 at 2:55 pm
Wendi Silvano
Great thoughts… and it looks like a fun book! Can’t wait to read it!
February 20, 2015 at 2:57 pm
Lauri Fortino
Can’t wait to read this one! I’m a big fan of frogs and this guy looks adorable!
February 20, 2015 at 2:59 pm
Frances Macaulay Forde
Reblogged this on Perth Words… exploring possibilities. and commented:
I can relate; I have to get the idea straight in my head then I write a poem – too!
February 20, 2015 at 3:00 pm
Margaret Greanias
Great post. I’m going to try Dev’s suggestions and go back to my 20+ drafts and see if I can’t find something valuable in there. I’ve heard so much about her new book and can’t wait to read it.
February 20, 2015 at 3:11 pm
marcia23
Wonderful post. I’m going to try your hints.
February 20, 2015 at 3:13 pm
Dana Murphy
This is great. What a wonderful, honest post. What’s your story about? So simple, yet powerful I guess.
February 20, 2015 at 3:17 pm
kmc
I would love to be a frog!
February 20, 2015 at 3:20 pm
Matt Tesoriero
I cant’ wait to read how the wolf helps the frog!
February 20, 2015 at 3:22 pm
rosemondcates
So proud of Dev! Can’t wait for Claymates!
February 20, 2015 at 3:33 pm
KatyD
I loved reading this post. So much truth. 🙂 The book looks awesome.
February 20, 2015 at 3:35 pm
Anne Bromley
This post was most helpful! A simple question like “what’s this story really about?” is the first step in the revision process. Many, many thanks!
February 20, 2015 at 3:36 pm
hdening
I have the book on hold at the library. Love your tips- so simple, so true, so helpful. Thank you!
February 20, 2015 at 3:37 pm
lindamartinandersen
Dev, thanks for sharing your journey and writing tips with us.
My husband loves frogs. I wonder if he would love being one.
February 20, 2015 at 3:39 pm
Heather Pierce Stigall
Yes, I would like to own a signed copy of I Don’t Want to Be a Frog! Well, I’d at least love to read it. It sounds like a great book. Thank you so much for sharing your process. I can really relate!
February 20, 2015 at 3:41 pm
June Smalls
Thanks for sharing your process. Its always nice to see how other authors work! Can’t wait to see I DON’T WANT TO BE A FROG.
February 20, 2015 at 3:42 pm
Sandy Perlic
I’d love this book, and I loved this post. Thanks!
February 20, 2015 at 3:44 pm
Judy Cox
Pretty similar to my process. Sometime during the first draft I ask myself, “What is this story REALLY about?”
February 20, 2015 at 3:44 pm
kdveiten
This book sounds adorable! And thank you so much for the blog post and advice. I think you’ve hit the nail on the head about what’s wrong with a current manuscript of mine. Thanks for the help!
February 20, 2015 at 3:55 pm
Catherine
I Don’t Want to be a Frog sounds great! I do want to read it!
February 20, 2015 at 4:20 pm
Mary Warth
Thanks Dev. The story of your process is very encouraging. I love the conversation with yourself! Best of luck with the new book.
February 20, 2015 at 4:25 pm
Lori Dubbin
I love your idea about writing a stream of consciousness poem first and finding a thread.
February 20, 2015 at 4:35 pm
Karl Jeffery
Thanks Dev, and Tara. What a fab blog post. Actually, more than fab – it’s inspirational. That question “What is this about?” is going on a sticky note on my laptop. Signed copy or not, I’m buying 2. One of my nephew, and the other for me!
February 20, 2015 at 4:58 pm
Heidi Yates
“I Don’t Want to Be a Frog!” sounds like such a cute story. I enjoyed reading about your process, and can’t wait to read the book. Thank you for sharing Dev. 🙂
February 20, 2015 at 5:24 pm
Rosi Hollinbeck
Thanks for a fun and interesting post. I have read I Don’t Want to Be a Frog, so please let someone else win.
February 20, 2015 at 5:27 pm
LovableLobo
I DO want to win this book! I do. I TOADally do. Thanks for sharing your creative process.
February 20, 2015 at 5:28 pm
Joanne Sher
This looks FABulous! Of COURSE I want a copy. LOVE your process!
February 20, 2015 at 5:52 pm
Maria J Cuesta
Funny!!! Looking forward to reading it!!
February 20, 2015 at 6:04 pm
Natasha
Dev, I’d love a signed copy of your book. I don’t want to be a frog either. Congratulations on both forthcoming titles!
February 20, 2015 at 6:25 pm
evelynchristensen
This book looks like it’s going to be such fun. And I loved hearing about your writing process. Thanks for sharing.
February 20, 2015 at 6:34 pm
Teresa Robeson
I love when authors talk to themselves and I love it even more when the dialogue is hilarious! Thanks for the great advice, Dev (I wouldn’t want to be a frog either, though; too many animals would consider me a delicacy)!
February 20, 2015 at 6:38 pm
Shirley Fadden
Sounds like a cute story and I loved reading about your process.
February 20, 2015 at 6:54 pm
Lori Alexander
I’ve been waiting for this one. Can’t wait to read it, Dev. Congrats!
February 20, 2015 at 7:15 pm
Carol Jones
When My kids used to watch Mr. Rogers, MY favorite thing was that he always said, “I like you just the way you are.”
February 20, 2015 at 7:40 pm
ikmercurio
This is such good advice. And also a good reminder that the story can come to us in so many different ways! Thanks for the post. 🙂
February 20, 2015 at 8:26 pm
DaNeil
The story looks adorable. Planning to add it to my library’s collection. Excellent advice about not discarding anything. Now I just need to remember to revisit a bit more. Thank you. 🙂
February 20, 2015 at 9:15 pm
Rick Starkey
Great post. Sometimes we forget to slow down and find the real story.
February 20, 2015 at 9:38 pm
megmillerwrites
Your book looks adorable Dev! Excellent writing advice. Renee LaTulippe taught us to write a poem to find the story in her Lyrical Language Lab and I had totally forgotten about that, an excellent exercise! Thank you Dev and Tara! 😀
February 20, 2015 at 9:42 pm
donnacangelosi
I can’t wait to read your book, Dev! Thank you for sharing your writing ideas!
February 20, 2015 at 10:19 pm
Laurie Theurer
I LOVE the concept of self-acceptance stories for kids who are growing up in a world of ever-increasing pressure to BE more and more. You have hit the nail on the head, Dev. Kids need to read (or be read) more books like this! Thank you. 🙂
February 20, 2015 at 10:29 pm
Sue Heavenrich
I love frogs! In fact – just posted about “frogs of winter” on my blog…. but I don’t think I’d want to BE a frog. Or a pig, for that matter. I do, though, want to read this book – and find out what makes frog tick. Or hop… great suggestions for getting our brains out of the fog and onto the writing track.
February 20, 2015 at 10:56 pm
jdewdropsofink
I want to be a frog, I mean I want a book about a frog, that book sounds perfect.
February 20, 2015 at 11:05 pm
Stacy Couch
I want that book. I have it, but I want a copy signed by Dev. And if I get it, maybe, just maybe, I’ll give the copy I have to the library or a child.
But don’t count on it.
February 20, 2015 at 11:32 pm
Tammi Sauer
RIBBIT!
February 21, 2015 at 12:05 am
Gloria Amescua
I really like hearing about your process and the advice never to throw anything away.
February 21, 2015 at 1:13 am
Angela Turner
Love the concept, the storyline and the illustrations. I can’t wait to read it.
February 21, 2015 at 1:55 am
hethfeth
Dev, I spent some time today despairing that I can’t get past chapter three in my current manuscript–or any manuscript I’ve tried to write in the past. Obviously I need to learn to plot. Thanks for this post. I think I’ll choose to take it as a sign that I shouldn’t throw in the towel on writing…not yet. I’m going to sit down with the list of questions you suggested, and try to wrestle out some answers.
February 21, 2015 at 5:45 am
The World Is My Cuttlefish
That little frog is so sweet and enthusiastic. Even without being drawn into the story itself I’d want to read about him/her. Also, the ‘think of a book-trailer’ idea is a great one. Thanks.
February 21, 2015 at 6:48 am
Ky Adams
Excellent post, very helpful! Your book looks terrific, I’ll watch for it in our local book store and do some re-arranging if necessary to put it front and center! 😉 Thanks!
February 21, 2015 at 7:39 am
Andrea Mack
Thanks for the great advice! I’m stuck on what will happen next in my story, and I’m going to take some time to think about what it’s really about.
February 21, 2015 at 8:00 am
Susan Halko
Thanks, Dev, for sharing your process. Can’t wait to read it!
February 21, 2015 at 8:16 am
patriciaalcaro
Such a clever story idea. Congratulations!
February 21, 2015 at 8:31 am
Cindy Greene
Love it. Good questions. Thanks
February 21, 2015 at 8:33 am
Cathy Breisacher
First of all, I can’t wait to read this book. It looks absolutely adorable and hilarious. Secondly, I can totally relate to your post. I often write without thinking about “what is the thread – the main point”. Once I get to that point, the story comes along a lot easier. So simple, but so easy to gloss over in our excitement to write, I guess. 🙂
February 21, 2015 at 8:54 am
pathaap
What a fantastic post!
February 21, 2015 at 9:13 am
Janet Smart
I’d love to win a copy of her book! thanks for the opportunity. In January I won a critique from Dev – and she did a great job! Thanks for all your great advice.
February 21, 2015 at 9:28 am
Laura Lee Malesh
Thank you for sharing! I got several take aways from it that will help me along my journey. Thank you!
February 21, 2015 at 10:22 am
Joanne Roberts
Thanks, Dev and Tara. “Remember to tell a story and not just muse.” I’m going to apply this to each of my ideas which didn’t pan out. I bet I find a few threads. Thanks!
February 21, 2015 at 10:33 am
Cathy Sledz
Lots of good stuff packed into this post — and your process. Many thanks for putting it in print. And Frog looks positively irrepressible!
February 21, 2015 at 10:38 am
Gretchen Brandenburg McLellan
RIBBIT!
February 21, 2015 at 10:58 am
Kirsten W. Larson
I wanna be a frog. Or a sloth. Or maybe a viking. Thanks for the giveaway. Good luck to all. Kirsten Larson
February 21, 2015 at 11:17 am
Tracey M. Cox
I love FROGGIES!!!
I love them so much I have a story of a family of frogs. 🙂
I also have a story about accepting your own nature too!!!!
Dev, We are book buddies! YEAH!
Thanks for the post Tara!
February 21, 2015 at 11:32 am
MickiGinsberg
Thank you! You are amazing! I love dialogue, and now I see how it can be illustrated even without action.
February 21, 2015 at 11:32 am
Liz Steffenson
I can relate to frog. I used to want to be a cow.
Now I have accepted myself. 😊 I love the question “what is this about?” And remember your tips well from your piboidmo post, which was my favorite! Congrats on your book!
February 21, 2015 at 11:57 am
Sheri Rad
Thanks Dev for showing me how to sit and let an idea steep until there is a story with more interesting details and a conflict and an ending that makes sense. Thank goodness for my critique partners, too. I hope I finally write something worth publishing or trying to sell to an agent or editor.
February 21, 2015 at 12:14 pm
Rebecca
Fun article. And I definitely want to be an I DON’T WANT TO BE A FROG owner!
February 21, 2015 at 12:29 pm
The Head Woozle
I don’t want to be a frog…I want to be a panda! Thanks for this great article.
February 21, 2015 at 12:35 pm
Joanne Toft
I love thinking of your story as a book trailer. It helps set up the story. I am always asking what is my writing about -such a great question. Thanks for sharing this was great to read and helpful.
February 21, 2015 at 12:47 pm
Natasha Wing
My first book was about frogs, too!
February 21, 2015 at 12:52 pm
Adrienne Brown
This was inspiring to me as a new picture book writer. The tools provided to help develop your story idea is just what I needed. Thanks.
February 21, 2015 at 2:06 pm
amievc
Thank you so much for sharing your insights. Tara, I really appreciate how you are bringing great picture-book-creating mini-lessons to your blog. This post with Dev is fantastic. I really enjoyed reading about her process (and suggestions) for going from idea to book!
February 21, 2015 at 2:08 pm
Dawnyelle
As always your posts keep my wheels turning! Thank you-when life gets busy I turn to you
February 21, 2015 at 2:21 pm
lgalaske
Thank you for more tools! I love the write-a-poem idea.
February 21, 2015 at 2:55 pm
Sandi Lawson
Thanks for the reminder to keep things. Sometimes a good idea just needs some time to grow.
February 21, 2015 at 3:43 pm
Elizabeth Metz
I like the idea of a combination of suggestions 1 and 3… a little free-form musing on what exactly the story is about. I’ve done this in my head before, but putting it down on paper could have a lot of value. Also LOVE this book!
February 21, 2015 at 3:48 pm
Debby Edwards
This was one of the most helpful blogs ever. I have been stuck and now I know why. Thank you for sharing your struggles, process and advice.
February 21, 2015 at 4:01 pm
Abigail hicks
What a great article. Entertaining, insightful and funny.
February 21, 2015 at 4:09 pm
Vicki Wilke
So much wisdom here Dev – love the three things you listed for doing before you start writing! Especially writing a poem! Looking forward to your book – frogs are so lovable, aren’t they???
February 21, 2015 at 4:18 pm
Cindy Williams Schrauben
Congrats, Dev. I’m so happy for you. Thanks for the great tips… it has helped me to figure out a new angle for my current MS, already. 🙂
February 21, 2015 at 4:22 pm
Juliana Lee
I don’t want to be a frog either! After all Kermit already told us it’s not easy being green. But I do want to read this book! 🙂
February 21, 2015 at 4:28 pm
Ellen Sirianni
Great post! I can’t wait to read the book.
February 21, 2015 at 4:41 pm
Wendy
Another great post on process! I like frogs, but I wouldn’t want to be one. 🙂
February 21, 2015 at 4:59 pm
Ariel Bernstein
Wonderful advice throughout, especially ‘never throw anything away.’ Thank you for sharing your process & thoughts!
February 21, 2015 at 5:05 pm
Linda E.H.
OMG. This book looks adorable. I love frogs.
February 21, 2015 at 5:39 pm
laura516
It’s so helpful to hear your strategies. I’m going to try them out as I revise to find what my story is about!
February 21, 2015 at 6:59 pm
readingwithrhythm
It was fun to hear what goes on in your brain. Thanks!!!
February 21, 2015 at 7:55 pm
Penny Parker Klostermann
I’ve been so looking forward to reading this book. I love the premise and I love the cover! Thanks for sharing about your writing journey with frog.
February 21, 2015 at 7:58 pm
Janine Johns
Thanks for sharing. I loved it and can totally relate! Can’t wait to read your book.
February 21, 2015 at 9:28 pm
Noel Csermak
You have boiled down your process to manageable, bite size pieces that we can chew on for some time. I’ll be writing a lot more poetry now. Thank you.
February 21, 2015 at 10:28 pm
writersideup
What a great post, Dev 🙂 And LOVE the book! Lucky you getting Mike Boldt 😀
February 21, 2015 at 10:33 pm
Jim Chaize
Great post. Your approach to writing came through, and I can see myself using some of the ideas. Thanks for the help and laughter, Dev.
February 21, 2015 at 11:20 pm
hmmmmm
I like the 3 tools — esp. #3 (regardless of how it can make you feel a little nuts).
February 21, 2015 at 11:38 pm
Sydney O'Neill
I enjoyed this post and hearing about your writing journey with I DON’T WANT TO BE A FROG.. Thanks!
February 22, 2015 at 12:17 am
Christie Wright Wild
Great tips for imagining how to handle what your’e writing. I loved hearing your story about FROG and what it’s about. I’d love to win a copy!
February 22, 2015 at 12:50 am
Karen Nordseth Roos
Oh yeah! A Plot. Thanks, I needed that. 😉
February 22, 2015 at 2:07 am
Carrie Charley Brown
Excellent post, Dev! Can’t wait to read Frog’s story!
February 22, 2015 at 4:45 am
tinamcho
Great post, Dev! I really like that tip of thinking of the story trailer. I’ll have to try that. Looking forward to reading your book!
February 22, 2015 at 9:32 am
Lori Mozdzierz
Dev, can’t thank you enough for this share of your process! It couldn’t have been more timely for me. “Aha!” moments are the best! Frog is on my to read list 😀
February 22, 2015 at 9:51 am
Diana Gibson
Ok Dev! You’ve sold me! I’m writing a story about a little girl who won’t go to sleep in her own bed…I thought it was fine until I read your analysis…back to the drawing board! Thanks for the hint!
February 22, 2015 at 11:15 am
viviankirkfield
Dev and Tara…I truly feel fortunate to be part of a community of such generous people who share their hard won knowledge so freely!
I will read this post over and over…because I believe that in it I will find what I have been missing in many of my stories…and I love your advice to never throw anything away because, “SO many of my stories come from little breadcrumbs of ideas I left myself along the way.”
Thank you!
And yes, I would LOVE to win a copy of the book. 🙂
February 22, 2015 at 12:11 pm
Shirley Menendez
Thanks for sharing your process. Wishing you much success with your frog book.
February 22, 2015 at 1:57 pm
Jennifer Mook - Sang
Thank you for the very helpful tips
February 22, 2015 at 2:43 pm
Meredith Pinkstone
Awesome — thanks!
February 22, 2015 at 3:05 pm
Stephen S. Martin
My Mantra for this year’s rewrites is “What is this about. Why do I or anyone else care”
February 22, 2015 at 3:11 pm
kpbock
I love frog! Great message and hilarious too!
February 22, 2015 at 6:23 pm
Sharon Dalgleish
I love this interview. I have a story that started life just like Frog. Now I know what I have to do to try and fix it! Thank you so much Dev and Tara.
February 22, 2015 at 11:51 pm
rdvanhorn
I loved hearing about your process in developing a picture boo!
February 22, 2015 at 11:55 pm
sardyhar
Your conversation with yourself made me laugh out loud. Thank you for giving us a glimpse into your process.
February 23, 2015 at 12:10 am
Darshana
Great post! Can’t wait for my library to get it. Thanks for the tips!
February 23, 2015 at 9:00 am
Michelle O'Hara Levin
I cannot WAIT to buy this book!!!! So exciting and thanks for sharing.
February 23, 2015 at 9:23 am
Erin O'Brien
Loved reading how this story came to be! Can’t wait to read the book!
February 23, 2015 at 9:57 am
Reena Balding
Writing is easy. Revising is hard. I enjoyed reading about how you worked through your idea to get to your book.
February 23, 2015 at 11:39 am
cathyso3
I love the thinking and creativity that went into making this book.
February 23, 2015 at 12:52 pm
Susie
Loved the post. I can’t wait to buy this book for my granddaughter.
February 23, 2015 at 2:25 pm
Carol Gordon Ekster
Dev, thanks for sharing your journey of this picture book. It is helpful and inspiring to all of us who write. Wishing you continued success.
February 23, 2015 at 5:50 pm
Marty McCormick
Dev, thanks for the encouraging, inspiring post. I have SO MANY ideas that never seem to quite work out. This makes me want to go back and work on them some more. Great advise!
February 24, 2015 at 2:41 am
Carol Gwin Nelson
This is just what I needed to move forward on one of my manuscripts. Thank you!
February 24, 2015 at 6:03 am
Alberto Martín "NinoCactus"
I want that frog. Thank you for the tips, really interesting ones.
February 24, 2015 at 12:08 pm
Dana Carey
Writing a poem while working on a PB is a very original idea. I’ll have to try it. Great post. Thanks!
February 24, 2015 at 3:51 pm
Aidan Cassie
wonderful, thanks. Off to go tease some threads out of my PiBoIdMo idea pile.
February 24, 2015 at 7:39 pm
Jpetroroy
Great post on the writing process. So helpful with my WIP.
February 25, 2015 at 6:04 pm
Carolyn Rohrbaugh
Your post is very informational and the story sounds so cute. Thanks for the help.
February 26, 2015 at 6:16 pm
aliciaminor
Any story has to start somewhere- how about frogs this time and Dev got one and congrats! Thanks for sharing.
March 2, 2015 at 6:00 am
Frances Brown
Dev, thank you for this funny post with masses of insight for us. I love how Frog came about. Can you do this again? More! More!
March 2, 2015 at 3:43 pm
Lauri Meyers
I enjoyed your book very much, but I really enjoyed hearing the journey you went on to get to the heart.
March 2, 2015 at 5:12 pm
Lisa Allen
Thanks for the advice about never throwing anything away!
March 4, 2015 at 9:37 am
Alexa Kaufhold
Great post! Thanks for the advice and a bit of humor today!
March 6, 2015 at 12:20 am
Jewanna C
This is me to the bone! I start writing without asking the crucial questions. Can’t wait to try the poem first idea, that might work for me.
March 10, 2015 at 9:34 am
cantsing1
I am weeks behind on reading the blogs! So glad I did read this one. Concrete, but creative. Good insights for me to take back to my own work! Thanks! v-