Three is a magic number. Not only because it’s the age when tiny toy parts no longer pose a choking hazard to your toddler, but because the universe is full of threebies.
Three square meals a day.
Three strikes and you’re out.
Three ring circus. And three ring government. (Excellent analogy, Schoolhouse Rock.)
Then there’s the “rule of thirds” design principle for composing visual images with tension and interest.
Ever heard of the FOUR LITTLE PIGS? Of course not. There’s just three, like THREE BLIND MICE and THREE BILLY GOATS GRUFF. Heck, there’s even THREE STOOGES.
In picture books, you’ll often find the protagonist struggling to solve their problem three times before finally succeeding. This technique encourages the reader to become invested in the hero’s journey. If the character were to try once and triumph, what fun is that? There’s no time to root for her!
Likewise, you’ll often see groups of three drawings on one picture book page. Three offers a nice balance because two is too few and four is too many. Like Goldilocks and the THREE Bears know, three is “just right”.
So today I’m going to extend “The Rule of Three” to you, the aspiring author. How so? I encourage you to have THREE polished manuscripts ready before submitting to an agent or editor.
Three manuscripts means that you’ve been writing for a while. Not a month or two, but most likely a year or two…or yes, even three. You’ve taken the time to hone your craft. Three manuscripts also means you’ve got a body of work an agent can review. If they don’t like your first story, but they see potential, they will ask for some more. Wouldn’t it be a missed opportunity if you didn’t have more?
In fact, even if they LOVE your first story, they will ask to see more. Picture books are a difficult sell, so if the first manuscript doesn’t find a home, they’ll want something else to submit. Three stories lets the agent know that your body of work, your style, resonates with them. On the flip side, they may LOVE your first book but not see a market for your other stories, or personally dislike them. Their lack of enthusiasm means they are not the right agent for you. You want to know this BEFORE you sign with someone, not AFTER….’cause breaking up? It’s hard to do.
And listen, if you have three manuscripts ready, I’m going to go a bit further and suggest you get FIVE ready. Because five is shiny, like “five golden rings” or “The Jackson Five”.
Yeah, it’s easy as A B C, 1 2 THREE.
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September 2, 2012 at 2:36 pm
Jodi Moore
Love this post…I swear by the rule of “threes”. Love, hugs & thanks (x 3!) for sharing! 🙂
September 2, 2012 at 2:45 pm
Janet
I totally agree! I have a number of PB manuscripts which I have written. Now I just need to start searching for an agent. I’ve only got in touch with an agent one time and it was for a MG I had written. I need to stop writing and look for an agent, because they aren’t going to come to me. Thanks for the nudge.
September 2, 2012 at 2:46 pm
Antje
Very good advice! Thanks Tara.
September 2, 2012 at 2:49 pm
Julie Falatko
Perfect timing! 12×12 has given me a large number of first drafts, but only one completed one. I’m devoting the rest of the year to revising, so I can have THREE finished manuscripts!
September 2, 2012 at 3:53 pm
Bethany Telles
Amy Dixon DRILLS this into my head everytime she reads a story of mine!! She’s the RULE OF THREES Queen, I swear! 😉
Seriously, though, this is fantastic advice. I’ve often wondered what would happen if an agent asked to see more. I think I have one or two that’s polished, but that’s about it. This will get my lazy behing in gear! Thanks, Tara!
September 2, 2012 at 4:02 pm
orthodoxmom3
I haven’t looked at any of my manuscripts in so long….they are dusty… I really need to just get them out and work on polishing the ones I have. But in regards to your post….are you suggesting sending 3 manuscripts at once to the same publisher? Isn’t that frowned upon?
September 2, 2012 at 4:31 pm
Tara Lazar
You are correct, that is frowned upon. Only send one manuscript–your BEST manuscript. But have more ready in case you are asked for other work. Editors might not ask for something else, but agents always do.
September 2, 2012 at 4:02 pm
debmayhew
I met an agent at a conference last spring and she asked to me to revise my ms and send it back. I did and she loved it. But when she asked me what else I was working on, I (foolishly) wasn’t prepared for that question. I haven’t heard back from her since. I wish I’d read this post a year ago! But from now on, believe me, I’ll be ready.
September 2, 2012 at 4:27 pm
Tara Lazar
Don’t worry, Deb. If that agent was interested once, she’ll be interested again. I would query her again when you’re ready with more, and mention the previous connection you had with her!
September 2, 2012 at 4:05 pm
Julie Hedlund
Yes indeedy! Very true!
September 2, 2012 at 4:25 pm
Christie Wright Wild
Love it, love it, love it! The BEST post about threes. Loved all your wonderful examples. Thanks.
September 2, 2012 at 4:58 pm
heylookawriterfellow
You read my mind. I have been in “I gotta get an agent” mode all week. And, boy howdy, do I have plenty for them to look at if I get a nibble. Here’s hoping.
And on an entirely unrelated note, many thanks for the Stooges clips.
September 2, 2012 at 5:08 pm
Tara Lazar
So funny—I knew a man would be the first to comment on the Stooges. We women just don’t get them.
September 2, 2012 at 5:12 pm
heylookawriterfellow
And that is why I thanked you. I never expected to see the Stooges on a woman’s blog. What a pleasant surprise!
September 3, 2012 at 10:42 am
laurimeyers
I love the Three Stooges! Although I can’t remember if I really learned to like them on my own, or if I just started liking them when I was 14 so boys would think I was cool. I think there were three boys who thought I was cool as a result.
September 3, 2012 at 10:50 am
Tara Lazar
Lauri, it had to be for the boys! LOL
September 2, 2012 at 5:31 pm
carterhiggins
PREACH.
September 2, 2012 at 5:57 pm
Tara Lazar
Carter, I’d love for you to do a post on the “rule of thirds” on your blog. Really interested to learn more about it from a designer’s perspective.
September 2, 2012 at 6:40 pm
Mona Pease
3-3-3 and tripple 3!!! Love your expansion of 3.
Thanks Tara.
September 2, 2012 at 6:43 pm
Catherine Johnson
Thanks Tara. I’m sure I could manage that before submitting. Great advice!
September 2, 2012 at 6:58 pm
Cathy Ballou Mealey
Five senses.
Five fingers.
Five toes.
Five Great Lakes.
Five arms on a starfish.
Oh yeah, five polished Ms…back to work, butt in chair!
September 2, 2012 at 8:09 pm
LeslieG
Thanks, Tara! Three cheers for you and your blog!
September 2, 2012 at 9:32 pm
Louann Brown
Thanks Tara! Your post reassures me that holding out with a few submissions may be worth it.
September 3, 2012 at 2:47 am
Tina Cho
Great post! You truly made your point 🙂 I’ve been trying my hardest to have 3 critique-group approved ms!
September 3, 2012 at 7:07 am
lindamartinandersen
Tara,
This was so fun! I love the use of videos to make your points. Having three manuscripts or more ready to go when asked is a great idea. I’m rewriting some of mine at this time. I must be on the right path.
September 3, 2012 at 7:16 am
Jennifer DuBose
Wonderful post, Tara! Lots of great insights here. The beauty of your blog is that you imbue them with such a fun vibe, which really gets people excited about their work.Many thanks!
September 3, 2012 at 11:50 am
Penny Klostermann
Really great post, Tara. There is definitely magic in the number three.
September 3, 2012 at 12:20 pm
Joan Y. Edwards
Dear Tara,
Using the rule of three is powerful. I like the idea of setting a goal to get three manuscripts ready to send to a publisher or agent. Celebrate you!
Never Give Up
Joan Y. Edwards
September 4, 2012 at 9:49 pm
Hannah Holt
Three is prime (all the time).
September 16, 2012 at 5:43 pm
joanna
This is great advice, Tara! Now I’ve got to finish those revisions…
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