Generating ideas comes easily for me. I am participating in my own private PiBoIdMo every day of the year. I jot down ideas on napkins; I write them on my hand; I email them to myself; I leave myself idea voice mails. I’ve got no problem with ideas.
It’s getting those ideas out of my head and onto paper I struggle with.
You’ve probably met people who get an idea on Monday and by Wednesday, have a polished, publishable, picture book manuscript ready to send, right? I’m in a critique group with those people.
I am not one of them.
My process looks something like this.
- Get brilliant idea.
- Decide that I am a genius.
- Jot down a few notes.
- Let idea brew.
- Critique way too early in process.
- Decide that I am not a genius.
- Decide, in fact, that I suck.
- Stuff notes in deepest, darkest corner of drawer.
- Get sudden inspiration while washing dishes.
- Pull notes out of drawer.
- Reread notes.
- Decide that I am genius after all.
- Jot down new inspiration.
- Let brew.
- Make storyboard.
- Revise storyboard 42 times.
- Write first draft.
- Send to critique group.
- Wait for them to confirm genius.
- Get feedback from critique group.
- Decide that critique group doesn’t know what they’re talking about.
- Stew.
- Decide that critique group is genius after all.
- Revise.
- Send to agent.
- Wait for her to confirm genius.
I could probably trim a lot of self bashing and praising from my process, but the other parts, the brewing, story boarding, and revising are really important for me. I get an idea and actively brainstorm it for a bit, but then I need to put it away and let my subconscious work on it.
It gives my idea time to grow. It allows me to make connections I might not have otherwise made.
I used to think of this as a bad thing. I compared myself to the idea-on-Monday-polished-draft-on-Wednesday people and felt lesser, but then realized it’s just the way I work. The time I spend brewing my idea, they often spend looking for one.
The other part of my process that I’d be loath to lose is the storyboarding phase. I get a lot of the kinks worked out here before it ever goes to draft form. I number a piece of paper 1 through 15 to represent picture book spreads. I tentatively write the exposition on the first line and the resolution on line 14. I pace out the major plot points on lines 2 through 13 and the wrap up on line 15.
As I’m playing with the storyboard, I know I’ve got the half-title spread to steal if I really need an extra spread to complete my arc.
I find it so much easier to revise the storyboard than a draft, that I will try things here that I might not try if I went straight from notes to writing. There’s a lot less risk to trying something at this stage.
I congratulate you all for participating in PiBoIdMo, and whether it’s ready next Wednesday or three years from now, I look forward to adding your picture books to my collection!
Janee Trasler has illustrated 19 books and written/illustrated four of her own. Her latest book, CAVEMAN, A B.C. STORY (which by the way, sat in a drawer for six months “brewing”) was published August, 2011 by Sterling. You can catch the book trailer here:
and see Janee’s illustration portfolio on her website http://www.trasler.com.
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December 7, 2011 at 9:39 am
elizabethannewrites
Thanks, Janee! The storyboard idea seems interesting… I may add that to my repertoire, especially to see how the arc plays out over the pages, where the story sags, or needs some more conflict.
I’m a person whose first drafts often spill out in a splodge, but then they still need the brewing time, and the thoughtful revision phase, before they’re ready to go out in the world.
December 9, 2011 at 11:46 pm
janee
Thanks, Elizabeth! I hope you do try the storyboard to see if you like it as much as I do.
December 7, 2011 at 9:46 am
Laura
Tee! Hee! Hee! You are describing my process perfectly! Thanks for putting it down for us in word and picture in such a FUNNY way! Love it!
Laura
December 9, 2011 at 11:48 pm
janee
Thanks, Laura! I’m really glad you enjoyed the post.
December 7, 2011 at 9:49 am
Bonnie Adamson
This is what I LOVE about this community–I laughed out loud at the steps on your process list and felt that warm glow of recognition: there’s somebody out there like me. 😀
Thanks for the boost, Janee!
December 9, 2011 at 11:49 pm
janee
Thanks, Bonnie! I’m feeling that warm glow of recognition too. It seems as if there are a lot of us with a similar process. Who knew?!?
December 7, 2011 at 9:51 am
Diane Kress Hower
Your process is wonderful. I have a BIG smile on my face as much of it resonates with me! Thanks.
December 9, 2011 at 11:49 pm
janee
Thanks, Diane!
December 7, 2011 at 9:56 am
Cindy
Great to hear an illustrator/writer’s process and I loved the “Back to the Drawing Board” illustration!
December 9, 2011 at 11:51 pm
janee
Thank you, Cindy. I’m glad you liked the cartoon!
December 7, 2011 at 9:57 am
Diandra Mae
Oh man, this post could have been pulled out of my very own head! I too am a “brewer” and have just now learned to embrace that part of me. (It’s amazing how much gets worked out in the subconscious!) Funny post, Jannie. Thanks for the reminder that we are who we are and as long as we are working, that’s all that matters. 🙂
Love that trailer! Can’t wait to add that book to our growing collection. 😀
December 9, 2011 at 11:52 pm
janee
Thanks, Diandra! That is so true about working being all that matters. As long as you’re moving forward and enjoying the process.
December 7, 2011 at 10:01 am
Jennifer Rumberger
LOVED your post and hearing your process. Thanks!
December 9, 2011 at 11:52 pm
janee
Thanks Jennifer!
December 7, 2011 at 10:01 am
Tammi Sauer
Okay. That “get an idea on Monday and by Wednesday, have a polished, publishable, picture book manuscript ready to send” happened to me one time. ONE TIME!!!! 🙂
I love your post! And I love being a part of the highly esteemed PBJeebies.
December 7, 2011 at 3:57 pm
Janee Trasler
Hahaha! At one point, I actually had:
“I’m in a critique group with these people (cough: Tammie Sauer)…”
It’s good you recognize and own up to your irritating habits. 😛
December 7, 2011 at 10:12 am
Betsy Devany
Loved this post! It made me smile and laugh, while inspiring me as well. Thanks!
December 9, 2011 at 11:54 pm
janee
Thanks, Betsy! Wish I could make it to Whispering Pines again this year, I had a blast meeting all you guys last year.
December 7, 2011 at 10:14 am
Jennifer DuBose
Haha, this is a brilliant post. I LOVE these suggestions, will totally try them, and also love the affirmation of all of us brewers out there! I’ve always called it ‘percolating.’ 🙂
December 9, 2011 at 11:55 pm
janee
Thanks, Jennifer!
Yup, I call it percolating too. You’d think with all the brewing and percolating, I’d be a big coffee drinker instead of a die hard tea lover.
December 7, 2011 at 10:14 am
laurasalas
Love this! And Caveman looks too funny. Off to hunt for it!
December 9, 2011 at 11:56 pm
janee
Thanks, Laura! I hope you enjoy Caveman!
December 7, 2011 at 10:23 am
Patrick Guindon (@123patrickg)
It is so refreshing to hear that this kind of a process is OK! It seems more natural and appropriate than so many I’ve heard about. I thought I was alone in this! Maybe we need an online critique group for folks like us – since there aren’t any in my area at all, and if there was one, I’m sure I’d be standing on an island in my process!!!!! Thank you 🙂
December 9, 2011 at 11:58 pm
janee
Thanks, Patrick! Hey, if you can’t find a critique group that suits, start one. I’m in a super group because I knew exactly what I was looking for in a critique group and went out and found people looking for exactly the same thing.
December 7, 2011 at 10:24 am
Linda Lodding
No doubt about it. You ARE a genius!
December 9, 2011 at 11:58 pm
janee
Ha! Well thank you kindly, Linda.
December 7, 2011 at 10:35 am
Andi Butler
Janee!! Loved your post, and your genius process! : )
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December 9, 2011 at 11:58 pm
janee
Thanks pal!
December 7, 2011 at 10:51 am
Lynn
It is very interesting that there are so many ways to get to the same place in writing picture books. Love it. I just thought I am slow, but I am a brewer!
Thank you for affirming me.
December 9, 2011 at 11:59 pm
janee
Thanks, Lynn. Brewers of the world unite!
December 7, 2011 at 10:52 am
Cathy C. Hall
Oh, I love your process, Janee–it’s suspiciously like my own. Except that I’m more of a “This is BRILLIANT!/ This totally STINKS” girl.
And that you are, in fact, genius!
December 10, 2011 at 12:00 am
janee
Thanks, Cathy! Ah, I like your method of tagging the work rather than yourself. Good move.
December 7, 2011 at 10:58 am
angelapenadahle
Lovely process you have there! Love that book trailer! It looks like a super fun read! I myself have a few ABC stories I am working on. I’m going to have to read Caveman A.B.C. Story now!
December 10, 2011 at 12:01 am
janee
Thanks, Angela. Good luck with your ABC stories! They’re great fun to work on, aren’t they?
December 7, 2011 at 11:27 am
Sue Heavenrich
I love it. Thanks!
December 10, 2011 at 12:02 am
janee
Thanks, Sue!
December 7, 2011 at 11:34 am
Dana Carey
Love seeing your comic strip of your process. Very funny. I think we all recognize ourselves in that numbered list– it’s a bumpy ride.
Thanks for a great post. Fun trailer too.
December 10, 2011 at 12:02 am
janee
Thanks, Dana! Bumpy ride indeed, but such a fun destination. 🙂
December 7, 2011 at 11:55 am
Wendy Greenley
Storyboarding has been intimidating to a non-illustrator like me, but I think I’m going to try it! Being able to “see” the pacing is a great idea.
December 10, 2011 at 12:04 am
janee
No need to illustrate, Wendy! At this stage in my process, I only write words — a sentence or even just a few words indicating what happens on each spread. It really does help you pace your work.
December 7, 2011 at 11:56 am
Corey Schwartz
Ha, ha, ha, ha….love this post! Amazing how fast we all go from geniuses to SUCK and back again.
December 10, 2011 at 12:05 am
janee
Thanks, Corey!
December 7, 2011 at 12:14 pm
Jarm Del Boccio
Thanks for being brutally honest, Janee! I’m learning to appreciate criticism for what it is…a chance to better my writing. I’m glad I’m not alone…
December 10, 2011 at 12:06 am
janee
And that’s exactly what it is, Jarm. Even in the harshest criticism, you can usually find a gem of truth to help you better your work.
December 7, 2011 at 12:37 pm
Sally Phillips
This was so funny and true! Thanks for my first laugh of the day. You had great ideas–like storyboarding before sending your story in for a critique. Although, since I’m not an illustrator, if anyone saw my pictures they’d think, “Why did she get a kid to do this?”
December 10, 2011 at 12:07 am
janee
Thanks, Sally! If I made you laugh, YOU made my day!
Don’t worry about drawing your storyboard, just write a sentence or a few words so you know what’s happening on each spread.
December 7, 2011 at 12:41 pm
Elizabeth McBride
Janee, thank you for the storyboard idea. I have never done the storyboarding (this is not a crime of some type, is it – subjecting the story to repeated revisions until it ‘speaks’?) until I have completed my first draft. What a great way to make the process more efficient! Thank you!
Confessed-story-torturer,
Elizabeth McBride
Grand Ledge
December 10, 2011 at 12:08 am
janee
Thanks, Elizabeth. Yes, try the storyboarding and see if it doesn’t speed up your story-torturing process. 😉
December 7, 2011 at 12:53 pm
Storybooky
Your process sounds vaguely familiar….
December 10, 2011 at 12:09 am
janee
Hee, Robyn. Maybe it’s how we all work in Texas.
December 7, 2011 at 12:58 pm
sabrina
So funny and recognizable 🙂 I think i’m the third type of person, fast to have an idea, fast to write it out, but then i takes ages radically revising, making my last version almost irrecognizable from the first version. Sometimes all that’s left of version one, is a name or a sentence 🙂
December 10, 2011 at 12:10 am
janee
Thanks, Sabrina. I have friends who share your process.
December 7, 2011 at 2:03 pm
Stephanie Shaw
Janee,
Thanks for addressing one of the loneliest places in the universe: Planet Picture Book Writer’s Mind. I feel so much better having read your blog. You write so well about how we struggle with our work. And our genius.
December 10, 2011 at 12:11 am
janee
Thanks, Stephanie!
December 7, 2011 at 2:56 pm
Loni Edwards
Janee, Great post! I loved your steps of process. The book trailer was great too. Thanks for a fun read!
December 10, 2011 at 12:12 am
janee
Thanks, Loni!
December 7, 2011 at 3:51 pm
Janee Trasler
Thanks, guys! It’s nice to know my fellow “brewers” are out there letting their ideas percolate.
Just FYI about the storyboarding. At this stage in the process, it’s all still just words. Usually one sentence per line. No need to be an illustrator to storyboard – just a great tool to test structure and pacing.
I get everything critiqued and revised long before I do any sketching.
December 7, 2011 at 4:36 pm
johnnez
Golly… I mostly just wait for faces to appear out of towels and patterns on the linoleum. Sometimes, when I’m lucky, I’ll wake up and have an entire story appear out of nowhere. I guess that’s ‘brewing’.
My problem is for every story I finish I have 20 that remain half-done. And usually even the finished ones never get looked at by anyone. That’s why I thought maybe ebook apps might finally let me be my own publisher.
What a life, eh?
:0)
December 10, 2011 at 12:13 am
janee
John, I’ve never had a face appear out of a towel, but there is a mad scientist on the rocks in my back yard!
Good luck with the apps. I look forward to downloading them!
December 7, 2011 at 6:26 pm
kevanjatt
So helpful, Janee! Thanks!
your fan,
kevan
December 10, 2011 at 12:13 am
janee
Thanks, Kevan.
Hey, wait. I’m YOUR fan!
December 7, 2011 at 8:33 pm
Ramona
A great post – your process is very familiar to me – thanks for sharing your way with us!
December 10, 2011 at 12:14 am
janee
Thanks, Ramona!
December 7, 2011 at 11:44 pm
Denise M. Bruce (@DeniseBruce22)
LOL I love 21, 22, 23, and 24 ! Perfect ! I literally laughed out loud to it 🙂
Great post, janee 🙂
Love,
Denise of ingleside
December 10, 2011 at 12:15 am
janee
Thanks, Denise! Oh yeah, I’ll bet a few of us have visited numbers 21 – 24. 😉
December 8, 2011 at 12:59 am
Marcy P.
This is so great! I love to hear that I’m normal! LOVE IT! Thanks for validating “stew” time and critique time and genius! lol 🙂 I’ve done book dummies but I think I’ll mess around with an upcoming book idea and go storyboard (even though I’m NOT also an illustrator) – I can see where that would be helpful!
December 10, 2011 at 12:16 am
janee
Thanks, Marcy. I hope you do try the storyboard. Let me know how it works for you.
December 8, 2011 at 2:37 am
tinamcho
I’m happy to hear your process even with illustrations! Very fun!
Congrats on your new book!
December 10, 2011 at 12:16 am
janee
Thanks, Tina!
December 8, 2011 at 8:29 am
Penny Klostermann
Have you been looking in my windows??? I felt like you were writing about me. Well, except for the part about sending to an agent. I’m not that far down the list yet. But, I can’t tell you how encouraging it was to see read your “process list”, then go to your website and see your success. It makes me believe I can get to the end of the list and actually send something to an agent. By the way, the Caveman A.B.C trailer was so cute! I definitely need to read it.
December 10, 2011 at 12:17 am
janee
Thanks, Penny! If you’ve been getting that far down the list, you’ll get to the end. No doubts.
December 8, 2011 at 8:54 am
Beth MacKinney
Loved your post, Janee. It made me laugh, because it reminded me of an interview I did with Jeff Mack. How true that all good ideas need to percolate inside of us before reaching their potential!
: )
December 10, 2011 at 12:18 am
janee
Thanks, Beth! Would love to read/see that interview. Do you have a link?
December 8, 2011 at 2:50 pm
sketched out
It’s good to know I’m in such good company with the whole, “I’m a genius/no, I suck” process. It was also very validating to hear that letting ideas percolate for a time and coming back to them later and all the endless tweaking, is not a form of OCD as some of my family and friends infer, hee hee!
Great post! And as a very visual person and illustrator, adored your brilliant little drawing!
December 9, 2011 at 7:52 am
thiskidreviewsbooks
Great post! I have trouble putting down my ideas, too! 😉 I also have to edit a lot!
December 10, 2011 at 12:22 am
janee
Thanks, Erik! Love your blog.
December 9, 2011 at 6:50 pm
Lori Grusin Degman
Thanks, Janee, for the awesome post! I love your illustrations too!
December 10, 2011 at 12:22 am
janee
Thanks, Lori!
December 9, 2011 at 8:21 pm
Lori Mozdzierz
ROFLOL!!! Love this post 😀
December 10, 2011 at 12:23 am
janee
Thanks, Lori! Hey, if you rolled on the floor and laughed, my work is done.
🙂
December 19, 2011 at 10:03 pm
Jessica Young
Janee, you are hilarious! Your process sounds a lot like mine, and it sure works for you! I’m not an idea-on-Monday-polished-draft-on-Wednesday kind of girl (although it sounds nice!). Love your books, and thank you for the inspiration!
December 22, 2011 at 1:01 am
janee
Thanks Jessica! You may not be an idea on Monday-polished-draft-on-Wednesday girl, but you’re a get-‘er-done gal!