by Laura Murray
Kids love to laugh (don’t we all!) And what’s better than a LOL (laugh-out-loud), giggle-inducing picture book?
So where do you get those snicker and snort-worthy ideas for your own picture books?
- Be an eavesdropper: I absolutely love to listen to my own children or my kindergarten students as they imagine and pretend. Listen when they are in the back seat of the car joking with their friends and they somehow forget you are driving. Listen as you sit on a park bench at the playground or when you help out in the classroom. These places are loaded with funny kid conversations and picture book ideas.
- “Baby Bloopers”: On the last page of Parents magazine, there is a section called “Baby Bloopers” where parents write in about the super funny things kids of all ages do or say. When I received this magazine, I would tear out these pages and keep them in a file. (*Parenting magazine also had a back page called “How Embarrassing” that I collected too.)
- Google “Funny things that kids say”: You will not only provide yourself with many laugh-out-loud moments reading the hits that come up, but you will also fill your PiBoIdMo idea notebook!
The idea for The Gingerbread Man Loose in the School started as a funny line that came straight from my three-year old’s mouth one day as she dubbed herself “one smart cookie.” It reminded me of a school Gingerbread Man hunt we did in Kindergarten and …voila… several questions later, I had the makings of a Gingerbread Man story with a new twist.
What questions am I talking about?
The very same ones that Karma Wilson and Tammi Sauer mentioned in their earlier posts—
- What if? What if a class baked a Gingerbread Man, but he got loose in the school when they went to recess? What if he was really searching for them, instead of running away?
- What could go wrong? Oooh—maybe he could land in a lunch sack, or get stuck on a rolling volleyball…
But there was one more question that I pondered for this particular story—
- How can I raise the funny factor? (What mischief would kids identify with in this school setting?)
Hmm… sliding down handrails, spinning in the principal’s chair, cookie-related word play, (and absolutely not “being eaten” in the end)!
So, as you look for your own ideas, remember to—
- Listen to kids (or read about their escapades.)
- Write down what they say and do, especially if it tickles your funny bone.
- Take the idea you love the most and start asking questions – What if? What can go wrong?
- And if your idea lends itself to humor—then ask, “How can I amp up the kid-LOL factor?”
There is nothing quite like hearing a child’s chuckle as you read your story, so…
GO FOR THE GIGGLE!
Laura Murray is a children’s author, former teacher, and mom of three mischief makers. Her debut rhyming picture book, The Gingerbread Man Loose in the School (GP Putnam’s Sons, July 2011), was chosen as a Junior Library Guild Selection, received a starred ALA Booklist review, and has inspired a forthcoming sequel entitled—The Gingerbread Man Loose on the Fire Truck! She loves writing picture books with funny, mischievous characters, and middle grade adventure/mysteries. Please visit her online at www.LauraMurrayBooks.com.
Laura got the opportunity to meet Mike Lowery, the book’s awesome illustrator, and have him sign a few copies of The Gingerbread Man Loose in the School after its release. Please leave a comment to win a first edition (includes a poster) signed by both the author and the illustrator. A random winner will be drawn one week from today.
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November 23, 2011 at 12:24 am
katiemillsgiorgio
Thanks for sharing. I have to say that the majority of the ideas I’ve come up with this month have been inspired directly but something that has come out of my kids mouths!
November 23, 2011 at 4:40 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Great! I’m so glad you are writing them down :)!
November 23, 2011 at 12:26 am
donnashepherd
So many ideas in one post! Thank you!
Donna
November 23, 2011 at 4:41 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
You are more than welcome!
November 23, 2011 at 12:41 am
Marcy P.
It’s sooo true! Sometimes I catch myself giggling TRUE giggles at my 2 and 4 year olds. They just have no idea how funny they are sometimes! I need to be better about writing it down. Sometimes I do… but I know more of them have happened then I’ve recorded. And yes! Googling “funny things kids say.” I was CRYING I was laughing so hard the other day! Or even googling “funny news headliners.” Oh my goodness….
November 23, 2011 at 4:43 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Yes, I know… I was laughing so hard at some of the google hits for funny things kids say.
November 23, 2011 at 12:44 am
Sandi Hershenson
Thank you for sharing this. I love to eavesdrop on my kids! My only challenge is to not let them catch me giggling!
November 23, 2011 at 1:02 am
tinamcho
My son & I love your gingerbread book, Laura, and can’t wait for your upcoming book! How neat! I like your phrase, “Go for the Giggle!” I’m writing that down.
November 23, 2011 at 4:44 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Thank you – it is always so exciting to hear about kids and parents enjoying the book together! 🙂
November 23, 2011 at 1:17 am
Marcela S.
Laura,
You mentioned great things to keep in mind! My favorites: “Kids love to laugh.” and “What mischief would kids identify with?”
It is easy to remember the books that make my three year old daughter laugh and giggle. They are always the ones in which a pet or a child are doing mischief. Like in the simple and beautifully illustrated tale “Cookie’s Week” by Cindy Ward and Tomie dePaola. She thought it was so funny, that had learned the words by heart!
Looking forward to enjoying “The Ginger Bread Man Loose in the School”. Congratulations!
November 23, 2011 at 4:50 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Thanks so much! Yes, one of my daughter’s favorite mischief making characters is Chester (the cat.) The book’s title is “Chester.” One of my favorite funny authors is Jon Scieszka – check out “The Stinky Cheese Man and other fairly stupid tales” for a LOL funny book. I got a chance to meet Jon Scieszka at a SCBWI conference – he is as funny in person as his books are.
November 23, 2011 at 1:37 am
Stacy S. Jensen (@StacySJensen)
The playground is a fun place to listen to how kids talk and think about situations. I’m putting those questions on my computer screen.
November 23, 2011 at 4:53 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Yes, there are loads of funny comments flying around the playground! And I tape tips over my computer all the time – so glad to hear someone else does this too :).
November 23, 2011 at 1:50 am
Janeen Brian
Thanks Laura.
With a Gingerbread Man
and a crumb or two,
I’d search for a giggle
or a laugh with you!
kind regards
Janeen
November 23, 2011 at 1:52 am
Janeen Brian
Thanks Laura.
Hi again. The lines became separated in the posting. Try again.
With a Gingerbread Man
and a crumb or two,
I’d search for a giggle
or a laugh with you!
November 23, 2011 at 4:54 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Big smiles here for the fun verse answer!!!
November 23, 2011 at 2:05 am
Gary Masskin
Have to admit a number of my PiBoIdMo ideas have come from the mouth of my 4 yr old. Hadn’t thought about the other sources such as parenting mags though. Thanks for the tip.
November 23, 2011 at 4:55 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
You’re more than welcome 🙂 So glad you found them helpful.
November 23, 2011 at 2:06 am
Kelly Korenek
Laura, I cannot wait to order your book The Gingerbread Man Loose in the School for my school library! The kinder teachers will definitely want to use it for their gingerbread man unit! I teach K-5 students in the library every day, so I hear all sorts of cute and hilarious kid comments-I now keep a notepad with me at all times 🙂 By the way, I LOVE your website!
November 23, 2011 at 5:07 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Thank you so much for your sweet comments about the website. Being a former teacher, I really wanted to provide some added value for teachers/librarians/parents as far as activities, printouts, ideas, and teacher’s guides. I am so glad it has been helpful!
And I am thrilled you would like it get the book for your school – but tell the little kinders to “watch their GB men closely…the little guys always get loose!”
Last but definitely not least – thank YOU for being a school librarian and getting great books into the hands of our next generation!
I’m so glad you’re keeping that notebook handy for your ideas 🙂
November 23, 2011 at 5:16 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Thank you so much for your sweet comment about my website. As a former teacher, I really wanted to provide a little “added value” on the site with fun activities, printouts, coloring pages, teacher’s guides, etc. So, I am glad that you found it helpful.
I am thrilled that you would like to share the book with the K teachers and students at your school, just tell them to watch their GB men – because the always “get loose!”
Thank YOU for all that you do as a school librarian and for helping the next generation find great books!
And I am so glad you are keeping your notebook handy :).
November 23, 2011 at 7:06 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
School librarians rock! Thanks for all YOU do!
And thank you for sharing my book with the school’s K teachers and students, but tell them to keep an eye out on their Gb men – they tend to “get loose.”
I am thrilled that you found the website useful. Being a former teacher, I tried very hard to give the site some “added value” with coloring pages, printouts, ideas and teacher’s guide, etc.
And I am so glad you are keeping your notepad close by for all those ideas!
November 23, 2011 at 2:10 am
Rebecca C
My children are a constant inspiration. Am now going to stretch that net a bit wider and start clipping funny sayings from ‘baby blooper’ pages as you’ve done. Thanks for sharing your ideas!
November 23, 2011 at 2:50 am
Dana Carey
The funny factor!! Nothing feels better than making kids laugh–you’ve provided great tips. Thanks for a great post, Laura. And thanks for a fab giveaway!
November 23, 2011 at 5:33 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Rebecca and Dana,
Thanks for participating in PiBoIdMo, and I’m so glad the tips have been helpful!
November 23, 2011 at 7:07 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Rebecca and Dana – you are so welcome, I am thrilled that you found the ideas helpful!
November 23, 2011 at 4:48 am
Renee LaTulippe
Great post, Laura — and timely! Just yesterday on Facebook, I saw that a friend had posted a delightful video of her 3-year-old daughter doing something so imaginative and silly that it kind of blew my mind. And my first thought was…”Can I turn that into a picture book?” My twin boys are still pre-verbal, but have already given me so much material for my own blogging — once they start talking, I’ll be following them around with a notepad. Congrats on your book!
November 23, 2011 at 7:09 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Oh my goodness, I am sure your twin boys will providing you with plenty of ideas very soon! Thank you and I am glad that you are already writing those ideas down.
November 23, 2011 at 5:04 am
Tabatha
Good post! One bit made me think of a question:
[How can I raise the funny factor? (What mischief would kids identify with in this school setting?) Hmm… sliding down handrails, spinning in the principal’s chair, ]
Can we put info like “sliding down handrails, spinning in the principal’s chair” (stuff that isn’t the text itself) in the manuscript?
November 23, 2011 at 5:06 am
Tabatha
I haven’t read your book…maybe that is part of the text! Did I just answer my own question — you should incorporate it into the text?
November 23, 2011 at 10:07 am
Cathy Mealey
Yup – here’s my question too – how much goes into the manuscript and how much becomes an illustration suggestion?
I can’t wait to read about the fire turck adventure for Gingerbread Man!
November 23, 2011 at 6:38 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
These two references (sliding down handrails and spinning in the principal’s chair) are actually part of the story and the text in this case. I try very hard not to include art notes in my manuscripts – my goal is to “paint with my words” so the story can be visualized. But I don’t want to add in so much detail that there is no room for illustrations. That makes the text too long and doesn’t allow for the illustrator’s unique interpretation. But I have used short art notes before on occasion just to clarify things that are important to the story that may not be obvious within the text.
November 23, 2011 at 7:03 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
These two references (sliding down handrails and spinning in the principal’s chair) are actually part of the text in this case. I try very hard not to include art notes in my mansucripts – my goal is to “paint with my words” so the story can be visualized. But I don’t want to add in so much detail that there is no room for illustrations. That makes the text too long and doesn’t allow for the illustrator’s unique interpretation. I have used short art notes before on occasion just to clarify things that are important to the story that may not be obvious within the text. Thanks for the comment and question 🙂
November 23, 2011 at 5:04 am
delzey
some great ideas and reminders here, great post. eavesdropping (or sometimes just paying closer attention!) really goes a long way.
November 23, 2011 at 7:12 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Good comment! Sometimes just paying attention or “being in the moment” with them does the trick.
November 23, 2011 at 5:23 am
Mona Pease
Thank you. There’s always something in the baby bloopers or kids conversation. I just wrote one that I heard yesterday. It’s a story in my mind already!
November 23, 2011 at 5:27 am
Loni Edwards
Hi Laura, your book sounds great! Those are some great tips on generating ideas. Thank you!
November 23, 2011 at 5:46 am
jeannie brett
thank you for the inspiration!
November 23, 2011 at 6:01 am
Susan Halko
Thank you! I’m stuck on an idea right now, and your last question (how can I raise the funny factor?) will help me get going again! Very helpful tips!
November 23, 2011 at 7:16 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Mona, Loni, Jeannie, and Susan – thank you for the great comments! Good luck on the idea gathering and laughable moments this Thanksgiving!
November 23, 2011 at 7:23 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Hi Mona, Loni, Jeannie, and Susan – Thanks so much for the wonderful comments! Good luck gathering ideas and laughable moments this Thanksgiving!
November 23, 2011 at 8:09 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Hi Mona, Loni, Jeannie, and Susan – thanks so much for commenting! Here’s to hoping you have many laugh out loud moments this Thanksgiving!
November 24, 2011 at 12:10 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Hi Mona, Loni, Jeannie, and Susan – thanks for your comments and surely there are some “funnies” going around the Thanksgiving table today!
November 23, 2011 at 6:48 am
Kim Pfennigwerth (@kpfenni)
Thank you Laura for the two great reference sites in Parent and Parenting magazines along with the inspiration to find the funny things and how to make them funnier.
November 23, 2011 at 7:08 am
Lynn
I have often chuckled over the cute anecdotes shared by parents and grandparents in magazines I have read. Some I have imagined as more complete stories, so what a great idea to make those stories into picture books.
I also have the many clippings (saved by my mother years ago), from a newspaper – mostly hilarious (and true) one liners said by children. I’m sure many of them can serve as wonderful ingredients for picture books. Thank you for the clever idea. 🙂 I can’t wait to look through them all now!
November 23, 2011 at 7:13 am
Kimberly Lynn
Excellent tips, Laura.
I didn’t know Parents magazine had a section like that. I’ll have to check it out. Congrats again on your book. My grandbaby and I enjoy it so much! 🙂
November 24, 2011 at 12:12 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Hi Kim, Lynn, and Kimberly – I know that Parents magazine still has the section at the back of the mag, but when I recently checked on the Parenting mag, I couldn’t find it. So I am not sure if they just skipped it for that month, or they have stopped the “how embarrassing” page altogether. But it is something to keep an eye out for – loads of ideas :).
November 23, 2011 at 7:20 am
cravevsworld
Thank you for inspiring the comedian in each of us! Great post!
Cheers and catnip,
Crave Cravak
http://www.cravewriting.com
November 24, 2011 at 12:13 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
🙂
November 23, 2011 at 7:24 am
Lori Mozdzierz
Loads of creativity can spill from kids convos and even their actions.
Thanks for suggestion to google “Funny things that kids say” 😀
Grandparents.com is another great source for story ideas.
I know a few little ones that will gobble up THE GINGERBREAD MAN LOOSE IN THE SCHOOL!!!
November 24, 2011 at 12:14 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Love the grandparents.com tip – I’ll have to check that one out too. And thanks for sharing the book with the littel ones in your life!
November 23, 2011 at 7:33 am
julesmae
Great tips, thanks. I also keep a notebook of funny things my own kids say. I’ve collected a lot of hilarious stuff, and the kids love hearing me read their quips back to them from time to time.
November 24, 2011 at 12:15 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
I like the idea of reading the kids’ quips back to them at a later date! I hadn’t thought of that. But I do know that my daughter is very “proud” of the fact that her “smart cookie” comment went straight into The Gingerbread Man Loose in the School!
November 23, 2011 at 7:35 am
Teresa
My kids and I love funny picture books – the first time and the 50th time through. Thanks for the push in that direction.
November 23, 2011 at 7:37 am
M. G. King
My favorite books are the ones that make me laugh! Can’t wait to google some giggles. Loved this post!
November 23, 2011 at 7:50 am
Linda Andersen
Oh how I love the gingerbread boy. This sounds like a great way to redo the story. Kids would love to have a gingerbread boy loose in their school.
I’m glad a sequel is available too. Great idea!
November 24, 2011 at 12:17 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Thanks Teresa, M.G., and Linda! Yes, when a book makes me or my children LOL in the store – it is a must buy! And just a little note that The Gingerbread Man Loose on the Fire Truck isn’t out quite yet, but will be coming soon.
November 23, 2011 at 7:50 am
Cindy
Excellent advice, Laura. I have googled “stupid criminals” before, for a humorous mystery I was writing, but hadn’t thought about using google to generate picture book ideas. Thanks!
November 24, 2011 at 12:18 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Okay – just the thought of googling “stupid criminals” makes me laugh before I have even read any of the hits! Too funny! I am writing a middle grade mystery as well, and think that is a stellar idea that I will have to try out too! Thanks for YOUR tip!
November 23, 2011 at 7:57 am
Cindy
I wish I had written down every funny thing my kids said. I did manage to write down a few gems though. Another source is the show “Kids Say the Darndest Things” (I’m dating myself here lol) with either Bill Cosby or Art Linkletter. Your book looks like fun Laura and thanks for the tips!
November 24, 2011 at 12:37 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
I remember that show too – it would be a great source as well!
November 24, 2011 at 12:41 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
I remember that show too! Another good source!
November 24, 2011 at 3:58 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
I remember this show too – another great source!
November 23, 2011 at 8:09 am
DaveM
Awesome post :). I’ve taken notes while my 2-4 year old nieces are chatting and playing. They are so funny without even trying!
November 23, 2011 at 8:15 am
Tracy Warren (@socialTracyW)
Thanks for the the google tip.
November 23, 2011 at 8:31 am
Marcie Colleen
Giggling is the best! We should all do it daily! Thanks for the post!
November 24, 2011 at 4:04 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
I agree!
November 23, 2011 at 8:40 am
thiskidreviewsbooks
I LOVE picture books that make you LOL!!!!! I’m fairly good at eavesdropping already…
November 24, 2011 at 4:07 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Yes, some of my fav PBs are the funny ones too. And they always seem to be the ones my own children like as well. 🙂
November 23, 2011 at 8:42 am
Debbie Austin
I love the laughter of kids! Thanks for this post today to remind us all to laugh a little and “go for the giggle” in our writing.
November 23, 2011 at 8:46 am
Jan Milusich
I love your suggestion regarding extending the what if factor. I’m looking forward to trying it out and laughing. Thanks, Jan
November 23, 2011 at 8:47 am
Pat Miller
My first book also was based on something a kindergartner said. We have the Gingerbread Man Hunt at our school, but I totally missed out on thinking of it as an idea for a book. Great example for me to keep my writer eyes and ears more open. Thanks for such a great book that is a mainstay of the Gingerbread Unit now.
November 24, 2011 at 4:06 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Hi Debbie, Jan, and Pat – I really appreciate your comments – thanks!
November 23, 2011 at 8:51 am
Marina A
Laura, fun post. Thanks for sharing!
November 23, 2011 at 8:51 am
Diane Kress Hower
Thank you. Kids are one of the best places to get ideas, titles, or inspiration. I could not agree more!
November 23, 2011 at 8:57 am
Catherine Johnson
I love reading the bloopers at the back of magazines, never thought to keep them and googling is also a new one. Wonderful tips, thank you!
November 23, 2011 at 8:57 am
Deb Marshall
A how-to raise the giggle factor! Loved it, thanks.
And wowsers on the giveaway!! Thanks for that as well!
November 24, 2011 at 4:09 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Hi Diane, Catherine, and Deb – good luck and I hope you are finding the “funny” in the “everyday!”
November 23, 2011 at 9:32 am
Robyn Campbell
Funpost. Thanks for the super ideas. And the giveaway? Let me just say, ” Pick me, pick me!” *jumping up and down* 🙂
November 24, 2011 at 4:12 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Thanks for the excitement over the giveaway – I was pretty excited to have the chance to meet Mike – it is pretty rare that you acutally get to meet the illustrator of your picture books. He is a very funny guy himself!
November 23, 2011 at 9:50 am
Katy Duffield
I love the “upping the funny factor” question. Funny is always a good thing! 🙂
November 23, 2011 at 9:58 am
A Reid
What a funny story.
November 23, 2011 at 9:59 am
DianaM
Great ideas, Laura! Thanks. I went to my daughter’s 1st grade class for Thanksgiving feast yesterday. Now I’m trying to remember funny things I overheard.
November 24, 2011 at 4:25 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
And when you remember them, don’t forget to write them down. I always think I’ll remember, but I have learned to keep that notepad handy :).
November 23, 2011 at 10:03 am
Keri Collins Lewis (@redwriterhood)
Thanks for the reminder that children love mischief and the cleverness of characters who manage their mischief well.
November 24, 2011 at 4:14 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
I love the part of your comment about “characters who manage their mischief well.” Very true! 🙂
November 23, 2011 at 10:06 am
Janet O'Neil
Thanks for the great read, Laura. I’ll be spending time ‘Googling’ this weekend. 🙂
November 23, 2011 at 10:07 am
Claire Bartlett
I have always wanted to be a funny writer…and I am going to take your tips to heart and try again. And I work in a library, so there should be a ton of sillyness to overhear. Thanks Laura!
November 23, 2011 at 10:09 am
elizabethannewrites
Thank you, Laura! Kids are delightful, aren’t they? And what a great way to ramp up their sense of delight in all things than by making them giggle.
Loved reading the thought process that went into the “baking” of The Gingerbread Man Loose in the School!
November 24, 2011 at 9:07 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Thank you! And I love to hear other authors speak about the genesis of their books as well – sometimes that can jump start an idea too!
November 23, 2011 at 10:34 am
Becky Lees
Excellent post, Laura. I LOVE eavesdropping on my kids, even though they are teens now. Still get great ideas from them.
November 23, 2011 at 10:41 am
Tammi Sauer
Great post, Laura. 🙂
November 23, 2011 at 10:58 am
Jennifer Kirkeby
Great post, Laura! And so true! When I hear what kids say, I always think you just can’t make this up! Their fresh and innocent perspective is wonderful. I also love the “what if” question. Thanks!
November 23, 2011 at 11:36 am
Penny Volin
Laura, thanks for your insights and congratulations on your books. They look fun. It should spur me on to revisit some of my journals of my kids’
funny comments.
I guess you broke through my writers block too – this is the first time I’ve finally gotten around to making a comment this month.
Penny Volin
November 24, 2011 at 9:10 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Ugh – that writer’s block! We all have it at some point! Hang in there and I hope a trip into your journals will help!
November 23, 2011 at 11:40 am
Melissa Kelley
Laura, what a terrific way to give life and purpose to a bold, confident character! Amping up the funny is a great reminder – and out of the mouths of babes come all the ideas ever created. My niece had not one but several imaginary friends, and some of their conversations would go from lively to spite-filled to war-focussed… over nothing! Great stuff to remember when thinking “what if?” and “what could go wrong?” Thank you for this article, it was wonderful inspiration!
November 24, 2011 at 9:14 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Great comment – it is full of ideas – so run with those. It is always interesting how kids work things out through play that they might not be able to actually “do” in real life. Play can be a great problem solver and is a super important part of being a kid!
November 23, 2011 at 11:54 am
Stephanie Shaw
Thanks, Laura! What a great upbeat message. And kids are so much funnier than grown-ups!
November 23, 2011 at 12:00 pm
patientdreamer
Lovely informative post Laura, thankyou for the tips. Didn’t think of Googling or keeping clippings. Have started now.
Its true what the say…..”Kids say the darnest things, don’t they”
Thankyou.
November 23, 2011 at 12:03 pm
janelle mikulas
Great advice! Thanks!!
November 23, 2011 at 12:14 pm
beckylevine
I love the idea of making things more funny! The book looks wonderful–please enter me in the contest. 🙂
November 23, 2011 at 12:19 pm
Julie
Laura, my son’s Kindergarten class did a whole unit on your book! They had a gingerbread man “loose” in the school and they had to search all over for him. So nice to “meet” the author behind the story.
Love the advice of looking at kids’ bloopers. I suppose America’s Funniest Home videos or YouTube could be sources of inspiration too. Thanks for the great ideas!!
November 24, 2011 at 8:44 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
I’m so glad to hear that gingerbread men are still escaping their classrooms – it is so much fun!
November 23, 2011 at 12:27 pm
st brigid
run run as fast as you can to get a copy of this funny book. we all need to laugh and if anything can get us it is the quirky view points of a child. Anyone who writes for children writes for us all.
November 24, 2011 at 8:45 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Thank you, and yes – laughing is something that we don’t do enough. We can learn a lot from children when it comes to silliness and easy laughter!
November 23, 2011 at 1:00 pm
Shirley Menendez
Thanks for the fantastic tips and congrats on your gingerbread story.
November 23, 2011 at 1:06 pm
Lori Alexander
Funny PBs are our absolute favorite. Thanks for the post!
November 23, 2011 at 1:25 pm
Rebecca
LOVE the idea of collecting funny things kids say to get inspired! And I’m run-run-running as fast as I can to get a copy of THE GINGERBREAD MAN LOOSE IN THE SCHOOL for my second grade class!
November 24, 2011 at 8:46 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Thank you and enjoy the fun!
November 23, 2011 at 1:33 pm
Laura
I love hearing success stories about rhyming picture books! Thanks for sharing with us the journey of how you transformed the cute phrase your child said into fabulous, funny pb. Can’t wait to read it!
November 23, 2011 at 1:38 pm
Cathy F.
Funny is always good! This is a good time of year for gingerbread. 🙂
November 23, 2011 at 1:49 pm
Karen Cheesman
The funny PBs are my favorites! I’m definitely going to google “Funny things that kids say”. Thanks for tip.
November 23, 2011 at 1:53 pm
Sue Heavenrich
Gingerbread – easy to do. Being funny? Harder. I’m working on it, though. Today I managed a smile…. I hope to get up to a chuckle sometime next week.
Great post, thanks for inspiring. Gonna go put a latch on the oven door….
November 23, 2011 at 2:10 pm
Diandra Mae
This post is so timely. I have come up with FOUR ideas this week because of something my son has stated, mispronounced or I’ve misheard. Silly is a way of life in our house, so I love upping the goofy factor in stories. Great post with great suggestions, Laura!
November 24, 2011 at 9:17 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Wonderful – wouldn’t it be great is “silly” was a way of life in everyone’s house! Or maybe a little “silly” at least once a day 🙂
November 23, 2011 at 2:11 pm
Carrie F
Thanks for the inspiration. I find funny so hard to do and yet it’s what appeals to my kids the most. It’s a good reminder to keep trying.
November 23, 2011 at 8:18 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
It is “funny” that you commented on this Carrie :), because I don’t really consider myself very “funny” and find that trying to be that way doesn’t always come naturally to me. But kids are just naturally funny and half of the time, they are’t purposefully trying to be. I love to read to kids and really pay attention to what they laugh at -it is usually mischief that a character gets in to unintentionally. So thinking about what mischief your character could get into is likely to resonate with kids as well.
November 23, 2011 at 3:07 pm
Corinne
A great post! A reminder how important humor is! Thank you!
November 23, 2011 at 3:56 pm
KAthy Higgs-Coulthard
Such a perfect way to remind us that everyone loves a good laugh! Thanks for all the great ideas!
November 23, 2011 at 4:33 pm
Joyce Ray
Great ideas, Laura! I’m going to remember to eavesdrop more often and search for kids’ funny comments. These ideas may be just the boost my imagination needs. Thanks for sharing.
November 23, 2011 at 4:34 pm
Sarah C. Pilon
I love listening to my nephews when they play. Thay come up with the funniest, most imaginative things. Great advice. 🙂
November 23, 2011 at 4:53 pm
Samantha
Ohh, I love the What if? game. Thank you for adding What could go wrong to my list!
November 23, 2011 at 4:57 pm
Wendy Greenley
Thanks, Laura. I will try to channel all the giggles while we gobble up turkey tomorrow! Have a Happy Thanksgiving!
November 23, 2011 at 4:57 pm
angelapenadahle
I’m all for the LOL! I love it when my kids laugh during those moments in a book. Great times!
November 23, 2011 at 5:04 pm
Meghan
I loved the suggestion of listening to the kids in the back of rhe car. Thanks!
November 24, 2011 at 9:19 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Remember to put that notebook in the car too…
November 23, 2011 at 6:28 pm
LadyInRead
love the post! I always note down the quotable quotes out of my kids mouths..maybe I should read them now to get my ideas today..Thanks
November 23, 2011 at 7:01 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Thank you SO much for all your enthusiastic comments! I started to reply to the comments, but then something happened with the web and I wasn’t able to reply any more. I will try again tomorrow, but please know that I greatly appreciate all your thoughts, ideas, and comments! Happy writing, idea collecting, and laughing out loud!
November 23, 2011 at 7:14 pm
Jarm Del Boccio
Thanks, Laura…I was able to use those three questions on an idea that popped into my head today. Now I can go somewhere with the story!
November 23, 2011 at 7:17 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Yay! Awesome!
November 23, 2011 at 7:33 pm
Tina Zubak
Your book sounds like a lot of fun. Can’t wait to read it.
November 23, 2011 at 8:05 pm
Elizabeth McBride
Laura, what a great post! Our kindergarten students did a ‘gingerbread man on-the-loose’ hunt each year and I always had to pretend he had just run through the library and out the other side when they arrived to ask if I had seen him! What fun! Your book is adorable and fits so naturally into their lives and imaginations. Your advice is placed in good context, which is especially helpful. Happy Thanksgiving!
November 24, 2011 at 8:59 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
I’m so glad your school is keeping the GB hunt tradition going – and it is such a hoot to participate! Thank you for your thoughtful comments and for being one of those wonderful school librarians. Your job is so important to all those little ones out there!
November 23, 2011 at 9:19 pm
dkcavitt
Luv the book and the advice.
November 24, 2011 at 2:06 am
Romelle Guittap
Thank you Laura for sharing. I love to hear about how authors come up with their successful story idea.
November 24, 2011 at 9:55 am
Sheri Larsen
What a fantastic idea to Google about funny things kids say! Going to try that for inspiration. Thank you for sharing yourself with us, Laura!
November 24, 2011 at 3:21 pm
Lynn Almer
Laura,
I loved reading your post! How great to take three short words from your 3-year old daughter and turn it into a book. I volunteer with a class of kindergartners during math centers and I am going to start listening more closely to their words. The best ones I’ve heard so far that were said so seriously and really painted a picture for me were, “I was home puking.” Thank you for your inspirational words.
Lynn
November 24, 2011 at 9:20 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
funny!
November 24, 2011 at 8:54 pm
Beth Gallagher
My daughters have provided me with hours of hysterical laughter and a file of funny ideas. Thanks for the reminders, and for such a wonderful book! Thank you for the chance to win a signed copy too. 🙂
November 24, 2011 at 8:54 pm
Laura Lowman Murray
Hi everyone – I just wanted to thank you again for all for your thoughtful comments on this post and all the awesome posts during PiBoIdMo. I have learned so much myself from all the other posts and comments. Plus your enthusiasm is infectious! I tried to respond to as many comments as possible without the spam filter taking a bite out of them (thus the duplicate replies on some…), but if I didn’t get to respond to your comment specifically, please know that I read it and appreciated all your thoughts and ideas as well! Thank you Tara for hosting this wonderful blog and community. Your site rocks!
November 24, 2011 at 11:57 pm
Colleen Jensen
I need to learn to amp it up by going crazy and not so set in reality. What fun advice!
November 25, 2011 at 7:45 pm
Janet
Great ideas! I also have Art Linkletter’s book Kids Say the Darndest Things! I think I’ll give it a look through.
November 26, 2011 at 1:47 pm
Beth MacKinney
Really like the eavesdropping tip. My kids come up with the best stuff, even though they’re older now. I like to talk to them about what I’m writing, because they always amaze me with their ideas.
November 26, 2011 at 2:24 pm
Lori Grusin Degman
Thanks for the great advice, Laura! I love walking in a city or the school hallway during passing periods or a crowded mall and listen for snippets of conversations – I’ve heard some doozies – but not all for little ears 🙂
November 27, 2011 at 11:21 am
Penny Klostermann
The Gingerbread Man Loose in the School sounds as if it definitely raised the funny factor. I can’t wait to read it! I love your suggestion to Go for the Giggle! My favorite picture books are the ones that make me giggle and, so far, those are the kind I find myself writing. Thanks for words of inspiration that will make me a better writer.
November 27, 2011 at 1:46 pm
kathyellen
Thanks for the good advice, Laura! I find myself going back and revising and writing things like “need to be funnier here” all the time! I remember teaching first graders and we had to come up with a joke one day for our journal, and the things the kids came up with were so simple, yet so funny. It just takes something being out ordinary for them to laugh….one of my favorites was, “Why did the monkey eat the orange?” because he was all out of bananas! The kids absolutely cracked up! For me, it’s trying to be funny, and punny, but not trying too hard and just letting the humor come through. Can’t wait to get back into some of my stories and punch of the punchiness! Thanks again!
November 27, 2011 at 5:28 pm
sandy Carlson
Thanks for sharing, Laura. Love upping the funny factor.
November 27, 2011 at 6:26 pm
Jennifer Rumberger
Loved your ideas for finding the “funny” for picture books. Thanks!
November 27, 2011 at 10:10 pm
Cathy C. Hall
I’m always writing down the funny I see/hear…and someday, when I quit watching all those funny FB videos, I’ll use some of that stuff in a story! 🙂
November 28, 2011 at 5:38 am
Lynda Shoup
Enjoyed this post. I love Gingerbread Loose in the School! I will try to apply your ideas and see if I can amp up my funny factor.
November 28, 2011 at 7:26 am
Mary Meinking
Thanks for the Gingerbread inspired giggle factor idea boosts. It’s a great way to come up with ideas. Thanks for sharing!
November 28, 2011 at 9:03 am
Laura Lowman Murray
I have been having the best time reading your comments – thanks again for your enthusiasm and I know it will come through in your PB ideas as well! Good Luck!!!
November 28, 2011 at 12:19 pm
Brook Gideon
Laura,
Thanks so much for the inspiring post. My writing always tends to lean toward heavier subjects, which I find a little odd because I go around laughing to myself all of the time! I giggle so much, I’ve made people around me self-conscious when it was just something silly that I caught or ran through my head. Oops! 🙂
November 28, 2011 at 1:31 pm
Sherry Lykins
Thanks for the giveaway! My girls would love this book!
November 29, 2011 at 5:41 am
Juliet Clare Bell
Thanks for this. I steal ideas from my children all the time. They’re completely inspirational. Clare.
November 29, 2011 at 9:36 am
YvonneJ
I love this book!!!!
November 29, 2011 at 1:53 pm
Jennifer DuBose
Terrific tips in your post. I’m always listening for inspiration from my kids. Can’t wait to read your book!
November 30, 2011 at 12:44 pm
Betsy Wernert
The advice in this post is really helpful. I’m using it now as I work on my final PiBoIdMo ideas. Also love that book!
December 1, 2011 at 1:12 am
Lynn Anne Carol
What great idea’s Laura. I will be thinking of you when I make our gingerbread men cookies this Christmas.
Lynn Anne
December 1, 2011 at 11:17 am
Nicole Zoltack
I love this post. Those are some great tips for finding ways to make your story funny. And we all know that kids love funny. 🙂