A typical day as a newbie writer: sit down at the computer, start writing.
At least, that’s what I did two years ago. I got an idea and I didn’t stop to think: is this a good idea? Is it marketable? Has anyone written something like this before? Nope. I just wrote, motivated by my muse.
And perhaps this was good back then. I was honing my skills, finding the right words, crafting sentences, building stories.
But they were looooong stories. At an average 1,500 words my tales were neither picture books nor chapter books. I insisted I was writing picture storybooks, and I used Patricia Polacco’s body of work as an example of how my stories could be published, not realizing, c’mon, she’s PATRICIA POLACCO.
It took me a while to learn to THINK before I write.
An idea begins. I ponder it. I write down the initial concept. What is my topic—what is this story about on its surface? Bulldozers or ballet dancers or dragons? What is at its heart? Is it about friendship or fitting in or family? Who is my character and what does he want? What is my hook? Can I boil the concept down to one line?
Then I research. Is there anything similar already published? If so, I’ve got to change it up a bit. Or let it go.
I ask myself these important questions:
- Is this picture book marketable?
- Will someone pay $16 to buy it?
Granted, these are difficult questions to answer objectively. Of course you want to believe that everyone will buy your book! But as a mother of two picture book age kids, I know this isn’t the case. If we don’t love reading the book over and over again, I won’t buy it. I try to use my motherly instinct to answer these questions and I think of my other parent friends. (And then I stalk parents in the bookstore and ask them what they think. No, just kidding. But I’m tempted.)
If I can’t answer “yes,” the idea gets filed away for the future, when I can perhaps transform it into something more extraordinary.
If I do answer “yes,” (or even “maybe”) then I create a brief outline or I just write. And I keep the proper length in mind: 500 to 700 words.
Some writers may call this process stifling. But I call it smart. Because if you want to be published, you have to examine these elements before you write. Because although picture books are short, they don’t take a short time to write.
Sure, you may pump out a first draft in a few days, or even less, but picture book revisions could go on for weeks, months, even years until you get it right. You whittle down the length so every word packs a punch, while still presenting a compelling page-turner, full of illustrative potential. (Which means you have to leave some things unsaid.) With all that time invested in a product you want to sell, you’re playing Russian roulette if you haven’t researched the story’s potential first.
It took me a while to learn this, to realize this, so I’m just paying it forward. Many of you are probably nodding your head in agreement. And maybe some of you are waving a finger at me for being a creativity killer.
In any case, I’m eager to hear from both sides! Think or write? Or a hybrid of both?
















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February 18, 2010 at 11:30 am
patricia
For me, yes, think before writing. I’m in this to get published, and (horrors!) maybe even make a few bucks. As an illustrator in this biz, I learned pretty quickly about the marketing department, and how much power they have over editorial. I watch what’s being published, and I read commentary online by agents and editors. This all has an influence on what direction I go with my writing and story ideas.
If you only want to write for the joy of writing, and getting published isn’t a priority, then forget about this other stuff. But if you’re serious about this biz, well, I would say, take some time and think. I don’t think it stifles creativity. I think it’s just good business sense.
February 18, 2010 at 12:00 pm
Southpaw
I just write because I have to get it out. I figure if it isn’t the right time or right style, it was good practice. The further I progress I hope my ideas are all viable but only time will tell.
Great post.
February 19, 2010 at 10:34 am
tara
You are right! Every story you write is good practice and teaches you something about the craft.
February 18, 2010 at 9:05 pm
Katrina Germein
I love the re-drafting process so I’m happy to let an initial picture book idea spill onto the page in an 800 word frenzy. Then I go back and edit and edit and edit and trim, until it’s around the publishable 500 word mark. You’re right. It can take months or years but that’s the fun part.
February 18, 2010 at 9:11 pm
nanmarino
Of course, it would be nice to get a story published. But I think that my best stories are the ones I feel compelled to write.
February 19, 2010 at 10:33 am
tara
Nan, you have a good point. But I do have passion behind many of my ideas. I will often decide among the good ideas–which one do I like best–and write that one. So I still feel compelled to write even though I go through an elimination process.
February 18, 2010 at 9:17 pm
Corey Schwartz
Hmm, interesting debate. Not sure exactly where I fall.
February 18, 2010 at 10:16 pm
Boni Ashburn
You’re doing it exactly right 🙂
February 19, 2010 at 8:43 am
Barbara
I’m not waving a finger. You are right on. 🙂
You got it.
February 20, 2010 at 3:06 pm
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February 21, 2010 at 2:47 pm
Diana
Ooooh. This is soooo true. I used to write whatever popped in my head. Now I write down twenty or thirty ideas before picking the best one. I’m learning to be more analytical in my approach.
February 21, 2010 at 2:49 pm
Diana
Although let me add, I still write some things just for the sake of writing them, based on inspiration alone–for the fun of it.
February 22, 2010 at 3:35 pm
Kirk
Great thoughts, Tara. I am definitely the think and write guy. This has come through trial and error. In the “old” days, I used to just write and not worry about anything else. Those stories didn’t have life. It wasn’t until I began thinking AND writing that I have seen not only my writing improve but the stories themselves be filled with life.
February 22, 2010 at 5:50 pm
Kerrie @ How to Be an Author
Great post. This makes a lot of sense, and I’m glad I’m reading it now and not later. Thanks for sharing!
February 23, 2010 at 12:48 pm
Jenn C.
Your method may sound stifling to some, but it’s not. It’s actually smart on several levels and a huge time saver. Since you’ve done the research and thinking ahead of time, you’re saving the heartbreak of pushing something for years that’s not marketable. (As writers, we already have plenty of opportunities for rejection!) By doing research before investing the time to write, edit, submit for critique, and submit to agents/editors, you’re helping the entire industry.
There’s a certain delight sitting down with a fresh idea and just going with it. But, I’d definitely follow up that initial flurry with the research you mentioned.
February 26, 2010 at 2:13 pm
Jewel
Free flow wrting has it’s place and is fun to do; but I have found that it takes many edits before it is reader ready. Thinking, researching, outlining and writing are the steps I have gravitated toward. I am so glad to see others doing similar things.
Thanks everyone for the confirmation!