by PJ Gardner
Calling all storytellers! Early middle grade needs you!
If you’re like me when I first started writing HORACE & BUNWINKLE, my debut novel, the term “early middle grade” is relatively unfamiliar. We’re much more aware of upper middle grade and the way it helps readers transition into the young adult sphere. But early middle grade is a real thing with a similar goal, only in its case the transition is from Chapter Books.
So What Is Early Middle Grade and How Is It Different From Chapter Books?
Let’s do a break down of the basics.
Chapter Books
- Age of reader: 5-10
- Word count: 5,000 – 10,000
- Subject matter: concentrate on the external events of the story, fewer characters, less character development, more straightforward story
Early Middle Grade Books
- Age of reader: 7-11 (8-9 year olds being the ideal age)
- Word count: 15,000-30,000
- Subject matter: Bigger cast, more complex characters, who have emotional arcs. Complex stories.
The Sky’s the Limit
Early Middle Grade is where we start to lose young readers, and I think that’s directly tied to the limited number of books aimed at them. And that’s where you come in.
Writing for this age group is full of possibilities. Series like JUDY MOODY, DOG MAN and GERONIMO STILTON prove that kids love a book with a healthy mix of the written word and images. Graphic novels are another format that kids are excited about, which is great news for author-illustrators.
Humor and adventure stories are always popular. However, books like A BOY CALLED BAT show that there is interest in deeper, real life topics as well. Also, there is growing need and desire for diverse characters.
Keys to Writing Early Middle Grade
There are two major keys to writing for this age group—create believable characters and craft dynamic plots.
Believable Characters
As writers for young readers we know children are people, too. They experience heartbreak and joy and everything in between as much as any adult. The difference is they don’t always have the language to identify or process those emotions. Books are an excellent way of giving them that vocabulary. I truly believe the early middle grade years are the most critical time to do that.
The best characters are born from a respect for the emotional life of the reader. So, whatever your character is experiencing—whether it’s funny or sad—keep it real. Dialogue and inner thoughts are especially important in creating that believability.
Dynamic Plots
By seven years of age a child has already consumed countless hours of TV and video games, where they have encountered a wide variety of stories. This means they won’t be satisfied by or invested in a book that isn’t interesting and compelling. The plot should have twists and turns, highs and lows, and real stakes. It may not be life or death, but it should feel that serious to the characters.
But Seriously You Should Consider Early Middle Grade
It may seem like a huge jump to go from picture books to early middle grade, but it’s actually a natural step. It calls for the same kind of creativity and skill set, as well as the enthusiasm for storytelling.
Early middle grade is the perfect place to branch out. First, it’s an under-tapped market, and it’s a fantastic market. Seven to eleven year olds are hungry for good books and they are absolutely devoted to their favorite authors. At present there simply aren’t enough books geared to the 7-9 year-old crowd.
Unfortunately, picture books are in lower demand right now. If you’re an illustrator as well, it can be time-consuming, which drastically limits the number of projects you can do at any given time. And, let’s be honest, they have smaller advances, too. These are the reasons why I recommend diversifying.
While no one can predict what will happen in publishing I’m convinced middle grade in general, and early middle grade specifically, is about to hit a boom.
Personally, I love writing for this age group. And I love getting pictures of kids reading my book independently. That’s a huge deal and I’m thrilled to be a part of it.
I hope you consider being a part of early middle grade as well, because there will never be a better time to share your stories with older readers.
When PJ Gardner was a little girl growing up in Colorado she dreamt of being an actress or a dental hygienist or even Mrs. John Travolta. It didn’t occur to her that she could be a writer until she was a grown up. Her debut middle grade novel, Horace & Bunwinkle, has been published by Balzer + Bray, an imprint of HarperCollins, and she’s thrilled. PJ lives in the scorching heat of the Arizona desert with her husband, sons, and Boston Terriers, Rosie and Rocky. She doesn’t own a pig because her husband says she’s not allowed to. Visit her online at pjgardnerswitzer.com.
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November 10, 2020 at 1:03 pm
proCARONation (@caronlevis)
Thanks for this, and I must find out more about Smith and Jones. Lovely.
November 10, 2020 at 2:52 pm
PJ Gardner
Smith and Jones are probably my favorite characters in the book. And the illustrator, Dave Mottram, did an amazing job bringing them to life.
November 10, 2020 at 1:16 pm
yangmommy
Thanks so much for sharing this information! And you’re so right–readers age 7-9 often don’t have that “just so” story available.
November 10, 2020 at 2:53 pm
PJ Gardner
Here’s to writing those “just so” stories for them!
November 10, 2020 at 1:31 pm
Christine Pinto
Great info! Thanks! This is a great help for me with a current project of mine for this age group.
November 10, 2020 at 2:54 pm
PJ Gardner
I’m so glad it was helpful and I’m thrilled you’re writing Early Middle Grade!
November 10, 2020 at 1:42 pm
ecappard
This is an area I’d definitely explore. Thanks for the encouragement and information.
November 10, 2020 at 2:58 pm
PJ Gardner
You are very welcome and I hope you do explore it. You won’t regret it!
November 10, 2020 at 2:01 pm
Lisa Riddiough
PJ, I am so glad to hear this!! My debut early middle-grade book comes out next fall. So your analysis is just what I needed to hear. And it inspires me even more to get going on book 2. Thank you!!!!
November 10, 2020 at 3:01 pm
PJ Gardner
Lisa, your book sounds delightful! I can’t wait to read it. And I know early middle grade can feel kind of lonely because there aren’t many of us writing it, but we’re going to change that. We’re going to build a solid community there!
November 10, 2020 at 2:07 pm
Jilanne Hoffmann
Love the cover for Horace & Bullwinkle! You’ve convinced me. Clearly, this needs to be a future area of focus. As soon as I’m done with the upper MG I’m writing…..I wish there were three of me, one for PBs, one for early MG, and one for upper MG….
November 10, 2020 at 3:02 pm
PJ Gardner
Jilanne, I feel the same way. So many projects, but only one me. Good luck with all your working on and I can’t wait to see what you do in early middle grade.
November 10, 2020 at 2:23 pm
kathalsey
I loved this age group when I taught and was a school librarian. I may stretch into this! TY, Tara, for your great insight!
November 10, 2020 at 3:05 pm
PJ Gardner
They’re so much fun and they are so curious. They’re really a fantastic audience. I hope you do stretch into it!
November 10, 2020 at 2:28 pm
Joanne Roberts
I’ve been working on several projects in this age range and find it is sorely overlooked. Thanks for the great article and the new book recommendation. Congratulations!
November 10, 2020 at 3:06 pm
PJ Gardner
Thank you! I’m so glad to hear you’re working on things for early middle grade.
November 10, 2020 at 2:35 pm
Becky Ross Michael
Very helpful article, full of several points new to me and also some reminders.
November 10, 2020 at 3:07 pm
PJ Gardner
Thank you for reading it. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
November 10, 2020 at 11:10 pm
Becky Ross Michael
I’m definitely saving this one for future reference.
November 10, 2020 at 2:58 pm
kathydoherty1
I’d like to introduce HORACE AND BUNWINKLE to a class of 4th graders.
November 10, 2020 at 3:09 pm
PJ Gardner
Oh, I hope you do! I do a free virtual book club if the whole class reads the book and I would love to visit with your class.
November 10, 2020 at 3:58 pm
Kim A Larson
Congratulations, PJ! Thanks for the helpful information. I’ve been toying with an idea to write an early MG, and you’ve encouraged me to start!
November 11, 2020 at 12:15 pm
PJ Gardner
Thank you, Kim! I’m glad the article hit home and I can’t wait to see what you write!
November 10, 2020 at 4:07 pm
Mary McClellan
So glad to learn about this category of books. I now have a new way of looking at one of my WIPs. I look forward to reading Horace and Bunwinkle!
November 11, 2020 at 12:17 pm
PJ Gardner
Truly, most people aren’t aware of early middle grade and I think a lot of projects get shelved because of that. I’m glad this gave you fresh eyes on your WIP. And I hope you enjoy H&B!
November 10, 2020 at 4:19 pm
Writer on the run
Thanks for giving me the courage to leap into early middle grade!
November 10, 2020 at 4:20 pm
Writer on the run
Thanks for giving me the courage to take the middle grade leap!
November 11, 2020 at 12:19 pm
PJ Garnder
You are very welcome. Good luck with your project!
November 10, 2020 at 4:28 pm
Laurel Ranveig Abell
I’m already working on an early mg book and this only spurs my enthusiasm!! LOVE the names of your characters!!
November 11, 2020 at 12:20 pm
PJ Gardner
Excellent! Can’t wait to see your project! I love the names too, but I can’t claim credit for them. My youngest son came up with them when he was 8 years old.
November 10, 2020 at 5:06 pm
chardixon47
Thank you, PJ! You’ve given such inspiration and tips to get my mind thinking about early middle grade. I’m going to read HORACE and BUNWINKLE–love the names 🙂
November 11, 2020 at 12:22 pm
PJ Gardner
Yay! I’m so happy the blog inspired you. It really is a wonderful age to create for. I hope you enjoy the book! (I love the names too, but I didn’t come up with them. My youngest son did.)
November 10, 2020 at 8:40 pm
Angie
Great information! Thank you, PJ!
November 10, 2020 at 9:10 pm
Sylvia Mary Grech
Thanks for your encouragement! I have a chapter book/early middle grade novel and 3 sequels already written and trying to get them out there. Gave up for a while but have renewed enthusiasm to go for it again.
November 11, 2020 at 12:26 pm
PJ Gardner
Horace & Bunwinkle sat on the shelf for a number of years because I wasn’t quite sure how to fix it and really where it fit in the world of children’s publishing. I’m glad you’re getting your stories back out there! Good luck!
November 10, 2020 at 9:13 pm
michele rietz
Early middle grade may be a good place for me! I have a hard time staying under 500 words for picture books! 🙂
Thanks for this post. Lots of good encouragement and information.
November 10, 2020 at 9:48 pm
Cedar Pruitt
I couldn’t agree more and just wrote one, but have heard (possibly from your interviewer 🙂 ) that these are less likely to be published… but I couldn’t help writing it and hope it finds some readers!
November 11, 2020 at 12:28 pm
PJ Gardner
Like I said in the blog, I think this is a great time to be writing for early middle grade. I really think we’re about to see a boom because those readers are out there.
November 10, 2020 at 10:38 pm
Lindsay Bonilla (@LindsayBonilla)
Thank you so much for this post. I love seeing how you’ve broken down the genre. It’s super-helpful. I’ve been working on something longer than my traditional picture books and I can’t tell if it wants to be a chapter book series or something else. Maybe I will try it as early middle grade! 🙂 Just wondering . . with early middle grade, are you expected to write a series in the same way you have to do with chapter books? Or can they stand alone as most upper MG do?
November 11, 2020 at 12:30 pm
PJ Gardner
I don’t think you have to write a series at all. I think kids like them because they like to binge read, but it’s not necessary. Write the story in your heart and the kids will respond.
November 10, 2020 at 10:55 pm
seschipper
Great post! Early middle grade teachers and students will love Horace and Bunwinkle I’m sure!!!
🙂
November 11, 2020 at 12:31 pm
PJ Gardner
Thank you so much! I hope everyone loves Horace & Bunwinkle. I had a wonderful time writing them!
November 11, 2020 at 12:11 am
Judy Sobanski
Horace and Bunwinkle looks perfect for the 7-9 group. Thank you for the info. on middle grade and early middle grade genres.
November 11, 2020 at 8:01 am
Sarah SarahH
I’d love a list of early middle grade books to puruse (Along with Horace and Bullwinkle, of course!) Any suggestions?
November 11, 2020 at 8:03 am
Sarah SarahH
Oops, so sorry Bunwinkle!
November 11, 2020 at 12:44 pm
PJ Gardner
This is by no means a comprehensive list it’s just what I could think of off the top of my head. Hope it helps.
JUDY MOODY
DOG MAN
GERONIMO STILTON
THE INVESTIGATORS
THE BAD GUYS
ARAMINTA SPOOKIE series
A BOY CALLED BAT
THE SECRET LAKE
November 11, 2020 at 9:26 am
Sue Thoms
What a great overview of early middle grade. Thank you! Kids that age really do love their favorite books and authors. It would be a joy to write for them.
November 11, 2020 at 10:12 am
faygie1
Hi PJ, thanks so much for this post and for sharing the importance of younger middle-grade books. I loved your breakdown of what is early middle grade! I write for a niche publisher and my books are definitely early middle grade. Still, I try and give my readers rich stories and characters. I want them to think and feel, just as they would any other middle-grade novel. As my editor once said to me, my “voice” is clearly third and fourth grade.
November 11, 2020 at 10:45 am
SuZan Klassen
Early Readers are also helpful for children who read above their age/grade level. Love the look of this book. Thank you for sharing it!
November 11, 2020 at 10:02 pm
Sheri Radovich
I can’t wait toseample one of this group of books so I can buy one for a family member and see what it is all about.
November 12, 2020 at 1:25 am
Chelle Martin
Thank you for the tips on middle grade. Looking forward to reading your book. Hopefully it will give me an idea of what the market is looking for.
November 13, 2020 at 2:05 pm
Kathleen Wilcox
Thank you for this insightful and encouraging post. Congratulations on
“Horace and Bunwinkle.” I look forward to reading it soon!
November 13, 2020 at 10:24 pm
betlw
Thanks for the great article about writing or early middle grade. I taught that age some time ago, and always had a soft spot for kids of that age. I’m going to try crafting something for them. Great post!
November 14, 2020 at 10:23 am
srkckass
Thank you for the encouragement. I actually have some Early Middle Grade ideas and this gives me a little extra desire to get it going!
November 14, 2020 at 4:48 pm
Nancy Ferguson
Thank you for this Tara. As I often need to cut back on word count…maybe my stories need to be early middle grade. I’ll explore this!
November 24, 2020 at 8:10 pm
Stephen S. Martin
Great Advise and something to try
January 24, 2021 at 10:46 pm
JillDanaBooks
Thank you for this insightful post!! 🙂 Jill Dana