by Lori Degman
Thanks, Tara, for letting me be a guest blogger for PiBoIdMo 2010! I was an avid follower last year and came away with more than thirty story ideas (some great, some not so great). It really jump-started my brain!
About a week ago, I sat down to write this post and drew a blank. I just couldnʼt come up with a good idea (pretty ironic, huh?). The next day, after the weather forecasters predicted record-breaking winds, I said to my husband, “That forecast sure was overblown.” When I stopped laughing (well after my husband), I realized I had found my topic—PUNS! Iʼm a sucker for a pun—good or bad—I just canʼt get enough of them!
Most puns just pop out of my mouth, without really thinking about them, but Iʼve learned how to purposely create puns, too—some of which have lead to funny, punny picture book stories! Though some puns go over childrenʼs heads, the adult readers catch them—and itʼs important to please your adult audience as well. After all, theyʼre the ones who will be reading your book again and again and again (hopefully)!
Here are some ways you can create puns—Iʼm sure there are tons more:
Put a twist on an idiom or slang phrase:
- Mrs. OʼLearyʼs cow kicked the bucket.
- Baking a pie is a piece of cake.
- Being a vampire really sucks! (Not for kids, but I thought it was funny.)
Think of animals and related traits:
- The cow was udderly delightful.
- The elephant packed his trunk for a trip.
- Having skunks for neighbors really stinks!
Make references to well-known fairy tale and nursery rhyme characters:
- Maryʼs in trouble and now sheʼs on the lamb.
- The Big Bad Wolf stomped off in a huff.
- Mother Goose hatched a plot.
Any of these puns might make a great starting point for a story. I hope this gets your imagination off and punning (sorry)!
Lori Degman is a teacher of deaf and hard of hearing students. She currently lives in Vernon Hills with her husband, John and two sons, Sean, 24 and Brian, 21. Her first picture book, 1 Zany Zoo, was the winner of the 2008 Spoonfuls of Stories Contest and was released July 2010 by Simon & Schuster. For more punny stuff, visit her at loridegman.blogspot.com.
















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November 6, 2010 at 11:32 am
Catherine Denton
I love puns!! And like you, I’m usually laughing by myself long after I’ve shared it.
November 6, 2010 at 4:03 pm
ldegman
That’s why you have to hang out with other punsters 🙂
November 6, 2010 at 11:33 am
Rachel
Thanks for the post, Lori. The ‘overblown forcast’ was my favorite. 🙂
November 6, 2010 at 4:04 pm
ldegman
That whole day, people kept mentioning the non-storm and I used that pun every time. It’s amazing I have any friends at all 🙂
November 6, 2010 at 11:48 am
Heather Kephart
I’m a sucker for puns too, Lori! Love “udderly delightful”.
Interesting point you make about inserting things that might go over kids’ heads into picture books because the adults reading them like to be amused as well. I tend to agree, although I’ve been dissuaded from doing so in the past. I think kids “get” more than we think they do, and if they don’t, they will eventually “get” the jokes and appreciate the book all the more! Plus, it allows an opportunity for the adult reader to explain the pun to the child, leading to a funny situation where the child either stares at the adult as though she has two heads, or loses herself in a fit of giggles.
November 6, 2010 at 4:07 pm
ldegman
I agree, smart picture books can be great teaching tools for kids! I’m curious – who dissuaded you from using humor aimed at adults?
November 6, 2010 at 12:08 pm
Beth MacKinney
Gem of a tip, Lori. Thanks for sharing!
November 6, 2010 at 4:07 pm
ldegman
You’re very welcome!
November 6, 2010 at 1:14 pm
Pam Jones
a pun is fun! hahaha…didja groan? 😀 okay, that’s more of a rhyme, but i’m workin’ on it. great, great post and you’ve given me the gift of a few ideas to work on today! thank you!
November 6, 2010 at 4:09 pm
ldegman
I did groan – just a little – but I smiled 🙂 I hope your ideas lead to great stories!
November 6, 2010 at 1:33 pm
Stephanie Shaw
Lori, I love puns! Thank you for the great tip. I am especially happy you mentioned the appeal to adults who will (hopefully) be reading the stories over and over again.
November 6, 2010 at 4:12 pm
ldegman
Some of my favorite stories I read to my sons were the ones with adult humor thrown in. We need a good laugh too!
November 6, 2010 at 1:41 pm
Irene
I love puns too. ‘Hatching a plot’-my favorite. Now I wish I could hatch a plot for today’s challenge. Thanks for your informative and creative article.
November 6, 2010 at 4:18 pm
ldegman
Irene – your mentioning “hatching a plot” just gave me the idea to use the line in a farm story I’ve written. It’s funny – I wrote the pun and read it several times in the editing process but, until you wrote it here, I didn’t think of using it! Thanks!
November 6, 2010 at 2:54 pm
Sheri Dillard
Thanks for the ZANY pun ideas, Lori! 😉
November 6, 2010 at 4:32 pm
ldegman
You’re welcome, Sheri – hope it sparks some good ideas!
November 6, 2010 at 3:16 pm
Diana Murray
Oh, I love me a good pun! Or a bad one for that matter. Thanks for the great post, Lori. I think you picked the write topic. Heh heh. 🙂
November 6, 2010 at 4:34 pm
ldegman
“the write topic” – good one 🙂
November 6, 2010 at 3:39 pm
Marcy Pusey
I am so glad that you are a guest blogger!!! Thanks for sharing your book with the world (my son definitely enjoys it… we got it from a cheerios box 🙂 and thank you for sharing another great way of looking at stories! I’m off to create! Blessings to you!
November 6, 2010 at 4:35 pm
ldegman
Marcy, I’m so glad your son likes my book! Happy writing!
November 6, 2010 at 5:15 pm
Christie Wild
I love puns, too. Just read a book of puns to my children last night, Mr. Putney’s Quacking Dog, by Jon Agee. Too funny. They loved it! And of course, so did I. Congratulations on your debut picture book!
November 6, 2010 at 6:47 pm
ldegman
I’ll have to check out that book – maybe it’ll inspire me! Thanks for the congrats!
November 6, 2010 at 6:10 pm
Shannon O'Donnell
Fun, fun, fun! What wonderful ideas! 🙂
November 6, 2010 at 6:47 pm
ldegman
Thanks – hope they help!
November 6, 2010 at 8:16 pm
Martina
Can’t wait to check out 1 Zany Zoo for my preschoolers. I enjoyed reading your post.
November 8, 2010 at 8:24 pm
Lori
Thanks, Martina – I hope your preschoolers like it!
November 6, 2010 at 9:16 pm
David LaRochelle
When it comes to puns, it sounds like you’ve got the write stuff, Lori. (Sorry about that, but it was too hard to resist). And a huge congratulations on winning the “Spoonfuls of Stories” contest! Go, Cheerioes!
November 8, 2010 at 6:55 pm
Lori
I know – they are so hard to resist! Thanks for the congrats – I feel very lucky to have won!!
November 6, 2010 at 11:48 pm
Connie Mustang
Lori,
Fun topic! I’m expecting to deliver great ideas, now that I’ve got a pun in the oven.
Thank you. 🙂
November 8, 2010 at 6:56 pm
Lori
Connie, I forgot how funny you are! How are things going?
November 7, 2010 at 12:03 am
Michelle Dennis Evans
oh Yay! puns are fun!!!great post – thanks 😀
November 8, 2010 at 6:57 pm
Lori
It’s great how many punsters there are out there!!
November 7, 2010 at 1:34 am
katswhiskers
Oh yes! Puns and twisted clichés. Now that I do love. Thanks for the fun post. 😀 You make me think that writing a PB is ‘too easy for words’… (I can almost picture it. :P)
Congrats on your new PB. I bet you’re still grinning. And so you should be!
November 8, 2010 at 6:58 pm
Lori
This post has sparked so many great punny comments! Thanks for the congrats – I am still grinning!
November 7, 2010 at 12:58 pm
Pam Zollman
What a punny article! Loved it! I think that’s one reason some of the old cartoons (like Bugs Bunny) were so popular — they appealed to both adults and kids. Same thing with Rocky and Bullwinkle. I laughed at those when I was a child, and enjoy them even more as an adult. Thanks for the great ideas.
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November 8, 2010 at 6:59 pm
Lori
It’s funny how you notice adult jokes in cartoons that completely went over your head as a kid! I agree with you – I love that!
November 7, 2010 at 9:46 pm
Jessica Stanford
Great article! Keep the puns coming!
November 8, 2010 at 7:01 pm
Lori
Thanks Jessica!
November 7, 2010 at 11:29 pm
ccgevry
I love puns too. Not so great at making them up, but I love to see them used. Thanks for the great article.
Cheryl
November 8, 2010 at 7:19 pm
Lori
You’re welcome, Cheryl!
November 8, 2010 at 8:38 am
M. G. King
Kids love to play, and giving them an opportunity to play with words is no exception. Stories with great puns (think of Helen Lester’s Sand Witch) have helped my kids become more aware of vocabulary and how language works. Thanks for the post — a great reminder that writing doesn’t always need to take itself too seriously.
November 8, 2010 at 7:22 pm
Lori
I agree – using clever language not only entertains kids but it also stretches their imaginations and improves their language skills. I try not to take myself too seriously too 🙂
November 8, 2010 at 11:48 am
Catherine Johnson
It is nice to see atrend towards entertaining the adults a bit too, after all we have to read the books over and over again. There have been a lot of children’s films out in the last few years with a lot of adult humour, not necessarily risque either: Space Chimps, Hoodwinked, Antz.
November 8, 2010 at 7:25 pm
Lori
I’m a firm believer that writing for children and adults are not mutually exclusive!
November 9, 2010 at 7:43 pm
Lynne Marie
Waving hello to one of the punniest people I know. And you know how I love puns! Can’t wait to get my hands on that book. Thanks for sharing such wonderful ideas for punny writing. Hugs!
November 10, 2010 at 8:25 pm
Lori
Thanks, Lynne!! Any plans to head to the midwest anytime soon? It’d be great to see you!
November 10, 2010 at 12:45 pm
Kelly H-Y
What a fun post! Great information! Loved your ‘forecast was overblown’ pun! 🙂
November 10, 2010 at 8:57 pm
Lori
Thanks, Kelly! I think, even when they’re not the greatest, puns are good for a laugh!
November 10, 2010 at 10:31 pm
Ishta Mercurio-Wentworth
This post brought such a smile to my face – we’re always making corny puns in my house. I’ll have to start writing them down – maybe one of them will spark an idea. Thanks for the suggestion!